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Kinkakuji of the typical spot of sightseeing in Kyoto. It has been designated a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1994.
In fact,Incident that Kinkakuji burned down by arson in 1950 has occurred. This incident was given a great impact for all Japanese at the time,The japanese representative writer Yukio Mishima has announced the literary works on the theme of this incident.And,In the wake of this arson,It is said that fire extinguishing equipment has gradually trimmed in temples and shrines of many in Kyoto.

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A typical spot for sightseeing in Kyoto is Kinkakuji. It was designated a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1994.↵

In fact, Kinkakuji burned down by arson in 1950. This incident greatly impacted Japanese at that time. Writers representing Japan such as Yukio Mishima released literary works on the theme of this incident. And, in the wake of this arson, it is said that fire extinguishing equipment has been equipped in many temples and shrines in Kyoto.

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We understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the followings.

You might receive it very late(as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we might process refunding.
We will trade with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,
we processed in this way.
We request that you understand it.

We will check, and we appreciate your little patience.

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I understand.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the following:

- You might receive it very late (as it is returned to Japan)
-In that case, we might process a refund.
We will trade with you under the above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,
we processed in this way.
We ask for your understanding with this matter.

We will check, and we appreciate your patience.

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I understand well about "Push-Flat" since I owned it before.
I can't return it to you because I need to pay for the shipping fee.
Please refund $ 50 from Paypal.
I'm going to look for a cheap repair shop for it.
Thank you.

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I have a good understanding of "Push-Flat" since I owned it before.
I can't return it to you because I need to pay for the shipping fee in order to do so.
Please refund $ 50 from Paypal.
I'm going to look for a cheap repair shop for it.
Thank you.

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Thanks to the national policies like FIT (Feed in Tariff), the renewable energy is getting a great deal of attention in Japan.
1. What is the durable period of the products?
2. What is the manufacturer's warranty and how long is it valid for?
3. Is it OK to have only rice hulls for fuels?
4. How to remove the tar?
What is the concentration level of the tar in gas, as well?
5. Is the ash in the surplus soil reusable? (i.e. manure)
6. What is the cycle of the maintenance, what kind of maintenance should be done, and what is the target of the cost?
7. Are there other necessary things than biomass fuels, such as external electrical source or fossil fuels?

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Thanks to national policies like FIT (Feed in Tariff), renewable energy is getting a great deal of attention in Japan.
1. What is the service life of the products?
2. What is the manufacturer's warranty and how long is it valid for?
3. Is it OK to have only rice hulls for fuel?
4. How do you remove the tar?
What is the concentration level of the tar in gas, as well?
5. Is the ash in the surplus soil reusable? (i.e. manure)
6. What is the cycle of the maintenance, what kind of maintenance should be done, and what is an estimated cost?
7. Are there other necessary things besides biomass fuels, such as an external electrical source or fossil fuels?

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This guitar weighs * Kg. The body-back of this guitar is made from 2-piece mahogany.

The exact purchased price should be written on the document. However, many of our customers in the USA say they didn't need to pay the customs.
So please understand that customs are beyond our control.

This BLP series are made carefully and separately by the professional craftsmen in a factory in Nagano, Japan.
The produce ended already, so it has a good value, without any damages and has a good condition.

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This guitar weighs * Kg. The body-back of this guitar is made from 2-piece mahogany.

The exact purchased price should be written on the document. However, many of our customers in the USA say they didn't need to pay customs.
So please understand that customs are beyond our control.

This BLP series is made carefully and individually by professional craftsmen in a factory in Nagano, Japan.
Production has ended already so it's a good value, without any damages and in good condition.

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AAA Koujinshiro decided to perform in [Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival] on Oct./26(Sun.)!

* AAA Koujinshiro Talk Show
Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival

[Date] October 26th (Sunday)

[Venue] Kyoto Kacho University. Kacho College Auditorium (456-3 Hayashi Shita Cho Higashi Yama Ku Kyoto Shi)

[Admission/Curtain Up] 11:00/12:00

[Fee] General Jyen 1,000(tax inclusive/all seat designated)

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AAA Koujinshiro has decided to perform at [Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival] on Oct./26 (Sun.)!

* AAA Koujinshiro Talk Show
Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival

[Date] October 26th (Sunday)

[Venue] Kyoto Kacho University. Kacho College Auditorium (456-3 Hayashi Shita Cho Higashi Yama Ku Kyoto Shi)

[Admission/Curtain Up] 11:00/12:00

[Fee] General Jyen 1,000 (tax inclusive/all seat designated)

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 5th～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiry) Kyoto Kacho University and Junior College Steering committee of Kacho Festival
Telephone: 075-525-2939
As we are the students, we cannot anwer your call.
We appreciate that you understand it.

URL of Kyoto Kacho University: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
URL of Kacho Junior College: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 5th～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiry) Kyoto Kacho University and Junior College Steering committee of Kacho Festival
Telephone: 075-525-2939
As we are students, we cannot answer your calls at any time.
We appreciate your understanding.

URL of Kyoto Kacho University: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
URL of Kacho Junior College: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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[General sale] Oct 5 (SUN) 10:00-
e+ http://eplus.jp/

[Contact Information] Kyoto Kacho University/ Kacho Junior College Kacho Festival Executive Committee
Tel: 075-525-2939
☆ Please know in advance, since it is run by students, your phone inquiry may not be answered in a timely manner.
Kyoto Kacho University Homepage: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
Kacho Junior College Homepage: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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[General sale] Oct 5 (SUN) 10:00-
e+ http://eplus.jp/

[Contact Information] Kyoto Kacho University/ Kacho Junior College Kacho Festival Executive Committee
Tel: 075-525-2939
☆ Please be aware that, since it is run by students, your phone inquiry may not be answered in a timely manner.
Kyoto Kacho University Homepage: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
Kacho Junior College Homepage: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 12th(Sunday)～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(inquiry) Student support group at Machida Campus of Tokyo Kaseigakuin University
Telephone: 042-782-9818
Email:gakusei@kasei-gakuin.ac.jp
Event URL of Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University: http://www.kasei-gakuin.ac.jp/event/index.html

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 12th(Sunday)～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiries) Student support group at the Machida Campus of Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University
Telephone: 042-782-9818
Email: gakusei@kasei-gakuin.ac.jp
Event URL for Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University: http://www.kasei-gakuin.ac.jp/event/index.html

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I went to a post office and submitted a tracking request of your item there.
They say there are many problems with shipments to various European countries and yours at the post office in Japan.
Products which have been shipped to the US and some other countries get delivered to their destination without failure within one week.

I've shipped items to Spain and France for another deal, but they haven't arrived there.

They will talk to a post office in your country from the post office in Japan, but the time until they resolve the problem will depend on their work at the office in your country.

If the luggage has been lost, we will compensate for it by insurance.

We're sorry about causing you the trouble, but we hope you will wait for a reply from the post office in your country.
The problem will be resolved for sure, so no worries.

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I went to the post office and submitted a tracking request for your item there.
The post office in Japan says there are many problems with shipments to various European countries, and also yours.
Products which have been shipped to the US and some other countries get delivered to their destination without failure within one week.

I've shipped items to Spain and France for another deal, but they haven't arrived there.

The post office in Japan will talk to your country's post office, but the time until they resolve the problem will depend on your post office.

If the package has been lost, it will be compensated for with insurance.

We're sorry about causing you trouble, but we hope you will wait for a reply from the post office in your country.
The problem will be resolved for sure, so no worries.

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Most of Japanese takes very long holiday in mid-August.
As I heard, for example for 9 days or 14 days at longest.
Using that holiday, Japanese go back to their hometown all at once.
They visit also their own hometown or their wives’ hometown.
Every their grandfather or grandmother are overjoyed.

Because they go back or have travels simultaneously, Shinkansen or airplanes are always extremely packed. In highway, it’s jamming for several tens of kilometers, even disgustingly.
If foreigners come to Japan, they might be ought to avoid mid-August.

I see you study Japanese. I’ll study English too.

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Most Japanese take a very long holiday in mid-August.
From what I've heard, for example, they may take 9 days off, or 14 days at the longest.
Taking advantage of the holiday, Japanese go back to their hometowns all at once.
They visit also their own hometowns or their wives’ hometowns.
Their grandfathers and grandmothers are overjoyed by their return.

Because they all go back or go traveling simultaneously, the shinkansen and airplanes are always extremely packed. On the highways, it’s obnoxiously jammed for several tens of kilometers.
If foreigners come to Japan, they probably should avoid mid-August.

I see you study Japanese. I study English too.

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You can even get a great view of Tokyo from the 52nd floor of the Tokyo City View, where there's no need to pay a fee.

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You can get a complete view of Tokyo from the 52nd floor of the Tokyo City View, where there's no need to pay an additional fee.

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Thank you for your message.
We could adjust the price range to a certain degree.
Thank you and best regards,

Thank you for your message.
We are glad to hear that you received the item.
We are sorry.
We do not have an English instruction manual since the item was made in Japan.
Will double-check, but please excuse us if not available.


Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but could you please email us the item cancellation notice?

We have acknowledged your request.
Kindly return the item upon arrival at your end.
Please refer to the return policy stated on our website.

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Thank you for your message.
We could adjust the price range to a certain degree.
Thank you and best regards,

Thank you for your message.
We are glad to hear that you received the item.
We are sorry.
We do not have an English instruction manual since the item was made in Japan.
We will double-check, but please excuse us if one is not available.


Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but could you please email us the item cancellation notice?

We have acknowledged your request.
Kindly return the item upon arrival at your end.
Please refer to the return policy stated on our website.

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As you requested, I will ship by Express (EMS). After this, I will send an invoice for the express charges through Paypal. As soon as you make a payment, we will ship out. So, will ○○ dollars be OK as the amount in the notification?

Have you received an invoice from Paypal? If not, please let us know. We will send it again.

Your product is fake. I can see many people are suffering damage in the feedbacks you got. Please, make a full refund. If you don't make a refund, I will complain to Paypal & ebay and provide your details to the manufacturer as well.

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As you requested, I will ship by Express (EMS). After this, I will send an invoice for the express charges through Paypal. As soon as you make a payment, we will ship out. So, will ○○ dollars be OK as the amount in the notification?

Have you received an invoice from Paypal? If not, please let us know. We will send it again.

Your product is fake. I can see many people are suffering damage in the feedbacks you got. Please, make a full refund. If you don't make a refund, I will complain to Paypal & eBay and provide your details to the manufacturer as well.

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We will send your package via EMS as you wish. Subsequently I will send you the invoice for the EMS via PayPal.
Shippment will be completed once your deposit is confirmed.

Have you received the PayPal invoice?
If you haven't, kindly let us know and we will resend it to you.

Your entire items are fake.
It's obvious just looking at your rating with so many victims.
I want a full refund.
Or I will submit a claim to PayPal and eBay.
Your information will be provided to the manufacturer, too.

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We will send your package via EMS as you wish. Subsequently I will send you the invoice for the EMS via PayPal.
The shipment will be completed once your deposit is confirmed.

Have you received the PayPal invoice?
If you haven't, kindly let us know and we will resend it to you.

All your items are fake.
It's obvious just looking at your rating with so many victims.
I want a full refund.
Or I will submit a claim to PayPal and eBay.
Your information will be provided to the manufacturer, too.

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This photo shows a machine which I can check the amount of electricity.

The number in the left hand side of 2nd low (In this picture, 839mAh) shows the total amount of electricity.

I recharged the powerbank after it completely discharged.
Next day, the LED indicator of the Powerbank shows it is fully charged.

But as the photo shows, I got only 839mAh electricity.
I could not charge 12,000mAh electricity with this item.

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This photo shows a machine that can check the amount of electricity.

The number on the left side of the 2nd stage (In this picture, 839mAh) shows the total amount of electricity.

I recharged the powerbank after it completely discharged.
The next day, the LED indicator of the Powerbank showed it is fully charged.

But, as the photo shows, I got only 839mAh electricity.
I could not charge 12,000mAh electricity with this item.

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The lovely Yoshida Porter bag in the greyish, matte-black known as Ink Black.
The weave is cotton, nylon used for the weft, and the densely weaved CORDURA Duck combine natural feeling cotton lines with the sharp look of Nylon, giving it a characteristic texture unlike any other current fabrics.
With long use cotton's unique characteristics begin to stand out, and you will enjoy your personal, original ambiance.
With hopelessly smart looks, the lining also uses the same raw materials and aforementioned fabrics for luxurious, robust, tailoring (To eliminate the need for accessories like a wallet) to become a long used favorite.↵

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A lovely Yoshida Porter bag in a greyish, matte-black known as Ink Black.
The weave is cotton, nylon used for the weft, and the densely weaved CORDURA Duck combines the natural-feeling cotton lines with the sharp look of Nylon, giving it a characteristic texture unlike any other current fabrics.
With long use cotton's unique characteristics begin to stand out, and you will enjoy your personal, original ambiance.
With hopelessly smart looks, the lining also uses the same raw materials and aforementioned fabrics for luxurious and robust tailoring (to eliminate the need for accessories like a wallet) to become a long-used favorite.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you confirmed you flight's arrival time.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going to stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Will you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you've confirmed your flight's arrival time.

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I sent the good to an American customer who purchased, but I sent it 3 days after the Expected Ship Date. I want to know if it is considered as a violation of the Amazon's user policy. If so, I want the evidence.
Also, if I violated the policy, do I have to pay all the money back and give up the good?

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I sent the product to an American customer who purchased it, but I sent it 3 days after the Expected Ship Date. I want to know if this is considered as a violation of Amazon's user policy. If so, I want the evidence.
Also, if I violated the policy, do I have to pay all the money back and give up the product?

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(mu-mo)

When you download earthier a song, truetone full version (R) or truetone(R) of “Cross-Movie (Ghost Stories in School- a cursed spirit of language)- Ver.” and enter, you might win a poster with autograph(B2 size) at Mu-mo.(total 5 people)

*picture of the poster will be “Cross-Movie (Ghost Stories in School- a cursed spirit of language)- Ver.”
Application period: 5/21st (Wed) to 5/27th (Tsu)
http://q.mu-mo.net/tgs_apf/

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(mu-mo)

When you download either the single, truetone full version (R) or truetone(R) of “Cross-Movie (Ghost Stories in School- a cursed spirit of language)- Ver.” and enter, you might win an autographed poster (B2 size) at Mu-mo.(total 5 people)

*picture of the poster will be “Cross-Movie (Ghost Stories in School- a cursed spirit of language)- Ver.”
↵
Application period: 5/21st (Wed) to 5/27th (Tues)
http://q.mu-mo.net/tgs_apf/

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※It's forbidden to take place by putting your belongings etc. and sit inside the facilities or in the meeting place. It's possible that you'll have to move somewhere else according to an instruction by a member of the staff, so please understand it in advance.
※We will not issue the "ticket to join the meeting for handshake" again in any case (like of it having been lost, stolen, etc.), so please understand it beforehand.
※The ticket can be used only at the time for the appointment on the day of the event.
※Acts like photographing, audio recording, video recording etc. are forbidden without exception while the artists are performing.
※We have only a limited number of CDs for sale and the tickets for handshake. The distribution of them will be finished when we've run out of them, so

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※It's forbidden to save a spot by putting your belongings down or sit inside the facilities or in the meeting place. It's possible that you'll have to move somewhere else according to the directions from a member of the staff, so please understand this in advance.
※We will not issue the "ticket to join the meeting for handshake" again for any reason (such as it having been lost, stolen, etc.), so please understand this beforehand.
※The ticket can be used only at the appointed time for the day of the event.
※Photography, audio recording, video recording etc. are forbidden without exception while the artists are performing.
※We have only a limited number of CDs for purchase and tickets for handshakes available. The distribution of them will be finished when we've run out of them, so

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2.

I have chosen a delivery service provided by Japan Post which takes longer but cheaper.
However, considering those bad reviews, I will move on to another delivery service that takes 10 days or so after shipped from Japan. Moreover, I am taking care of my customers’ satisfaction by performing quick investigations and refunds when requested.

These two problems has been already solved.
Please unsuspend my account as I have changed the delivery way already.

Please let me know if there is any other problem.

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2.

I have chosen a delivery service provided by Japan Post which takes longer but is cheaper.
However, considering these bad reviews, I will move on to another delivery service that takes 10 days or so after the item's shipped from Japan. Moreover, I am taking care of my customers’ satisfaction by performing quick investigations and refunds when requested.

These two problems have been already solved.
Please unsuspend my account as I have changed the delivery way already.

Please let me know if there is any other problem.