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日本語

学生には20%OFFになる、
下記URLのアメリカンエクスプレスの
キャンペーンに申込みする様に伝えますが、

更に特別な割引を適用してもらえませんか？

私は全学生への転送料金35%OFFの適用を
希望しています。

もしあなたからの要望があれば聞かせて下さい。

あなたからの良い返事をお待ちしております。

ありがとう

英語

You told me that students can get a 20% discount if they sign up for the American Express campaign down below, but wouldn't it be possible to get a special discount on top of that?

I was hoping that I could get a 35% discount for all the students on the transfer fees.
If there is anything you want to request for that please let me know.

I'm looking forward to a pleasant reply from you.

Thank you.

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ashishjoshiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/12 23:25:40

元の翻訳
You told me that students can get a 20% discount if they sign up for the American Express campaign down below, but wouldn't it be possible to get a special discount on top of that?

I was hoping that I could get a 35% discount for all the students on the transfer fees.↵
If there is anything you want to request for that please let me know.

I'm looking forward to a pleasant reply from you.

Thank you.

修正後
Students can get a 20% discount if they sign up for the American Express campaign (below given URL). 　I will convey this to students but would it be possible to get some additional special discount?

I wish to get a 35% discount on the transfer fees for all the students.↵
Please let me know your expectation.

I'm looking forward to a favorable reply from you.

Thank you.

ご覧頂き、ご意見お願い致します。