hitomi-kumai (hitomi-kumai) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
http://e-shop.shibuya109.jp/ladies/app/catalog/featured/init/L15FE10681
- There will be no purchasing of tickets for the meet-and-greet event on 109NET

-Chiaki's Extra Virgin Coconut Oil 130g
Price: ￥2,000 (excluding tax)

(Explanatory note)
In order to dilute the rich enzymes in the coconut, we did not apply intense heat but slowly took our time to take out the oil. [Using a cold press method (applying pressure in low temperatures)].

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http://e-shop.shibuya109.jp/ladies/app/catalog/featured/init/L15FE10681
- Ticket for the meet-and-greet event won't be provided when you purchase the item on 109NET.

-Chiaki's Extra Virgin Coconut Oil 130g
Price: ￥2,000 (excluding tax)

(Description)
We slowly extract oil without applying heat in order to keep enzymes contained rich in coconut.↵
This is called a cold press method (applying pressure in low temperatures).

元の翻訳
Of course it would be alright on the 28th.
However, if you would be able to set it to Saturday, then there is no need for that.
This is because my brother and his family are not coming this time.
My brother was not able to take a leave during the year-end.
I am sorry but I should have told you yesterday.
My parents, aunt Fusako and I can attend anytime.
Mitsuyasu can attend anytime except on Thursday.
So will you be setting this to Saturday on the 28th?

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Of course it would be alright on the 28th.
However, if you have other things to do on Saturday, we can change the date.
This is because my brother and his family are not coming this time.
My brother is not able to take a leave from work during the year-end.
I should have told you yesterday. I am sorry.
My parents, my aunt Fusako and I can attend anytime.
Mitsuyasu can attend anytime except on Thursday.
So shall we set this on another day or on Saturday 28th?

元の翻訳
Thank you for letting me know that the good has reached without any problems.
Was it to your taste?

I'm looking for the stock of A, B and C, but I haven't found yet.
D and the others could be purchased in the following URL.

This product is the same one you have purchased before.
Its stocks are low. When you order, there is a possibility that it's already sold out.

Please consider again. It would be nice if you could tell me all the products you want to purchase together. Then, same as the last order, I get back to you to propose a discount price.

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Thank you for letting me know that the good has reached without any problems.
Was it to your taste?

I'm looking for the stock of A, B and C, but I haven't found yet.
D and the others could be purchased in the following URL.

This product is the same one you have purchased before.
There are limited numbers of stock. ↵
Please note that we deliver this item on a first-come and first-serve basis.

Please consider again. It would be nice if you could tell me all the products you want to purchase together. Then, the same as the last order, I get back to you to propose a discount price.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact about the arrival of the commodity without any problems.
Would you like it?

Although we are looking for the stocks of A, B, and C, we have not found them yet.
You can buy D and others from the URL below.

The commodity is the same one you bought before.
The rest of it is very a few in stock.
There is a possibility that it is sold out when you order.

Please consider about that, and we will contact you discounted price if you tell us commodities you want to order at once with the same way as you did the last time.

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Thank you let us know that you have received the product without problems.
Do you like it? (Or I hope you are happy with it.)

Although we are looking for the stocks of A, B, and C, we have not found them yet.
You can buy D and others from the URL below.

The product is the same one you bought before.
There are limited numbers of stock.
Please note that we deliver this item on a first-come and first-serve basis.

Please consider that. We will let you know the discounted price if you tell us products you want to order as you did the last time.

元の翻訳
I inquired to Casio.

In general, most watches have manuals written in English, however, there is no English manual for the watch.

I did not know about that, so I would like to apologize to you for this.

Would you send me a return request ? Then I will give you a full refund.

Once you obtain the full refund, would you delete the negative feedback?

Not only I, but other shops are selling the watch.
I am afraid but I thought it was too much that you gave me the negative feedback like this.

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I inquired at Casio.

In general, most watches have manuals written in English, however, there is no English manual for the watch.

I did not know about that, so I would like to apologize to you for this.

Would you send me a return request ? Then I will give you a full refund.

Once you obtain the full refund, would you please delete the negative feedback?

Not only I, but other shops are selling the watch.
I am afraid to say that such a negative feedback is too much for me.

元の翻訳
Yes, I would like a new model product.
Please send me a coupon code as soon as possible.

It seems like you have received the sweets.
They are a famous sweets from Kyoto, which are also eaten by Japanese imperial family.
Please enjoy them with everybody.

I would like to have many transactions with you in the future.
I will be counting on you.

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Yes, I would like a new model of the product.
Please send me a coupon code as soon as possible.

It seems like you have received the sweets.
They are famous sweets of Kyoto, which are also served to the Japanese imperial family.
Please share them.

I would like to have more business with you in the future.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I have chatted with Valencia on this order yesterday as follows.

According to UPS, the two packages were lost.
They directed us to let the sender to call UPS.
Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS.

Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such direction.
Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th.

Concerning the two rugs which did not arrive, we would like to cancel the order.
Please kindly process those repayment.

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I have chatted with Valencia about this order yesterday as follows.

According to UPS, the two packages were lost.
They told us to let the sender to call UPS.
Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS.

Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such a direction.
Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th.

Concerning the two rugs which have not been arrived, we would like to cancel the order.
Please kindly process the repayment.

元の翻訳
Yesterday, I talked to Valencia about the order via live chat.
The following are what we talked about.

I asked the UPS about the two packages, but they said they lost.
They said the sender needs to contact UPS by phone.
Please ask your vendor to contact UPS.

I reorder the same rug as Order#60. (because I'm always asked to do by your company.)
Please explain the situation to your vendor and ask them to deliver my order by February 19.

I'd like to cancel the two rugs that weren't delivered.
Please process the refund.

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Yesterday, I talked to Valencia about this order via live chat.
The following are what we talked about.

I asked UPS about the two packages, but they said they lost.
They said the sender needs to contact UPS by phone.
Please ask your vendor to contact UPS.

I reordered the same rug as Order#60, (because you always asked me to do so).
Please explain the situation to your vendor and ask them to deliver my order by February 19.

I'd like to cancel the two rugs that weren't delivered.
Please process the refund.

元の翻訳
AAA March 15th(Sunday) Talk show will be held at Tokyo Rihga Royal Hotel!
AAA March 15th (Sunday)Talk show will be held at Tokyo Rihga Royal Hotel!

Date: March 15th (Sunday) in 2015
Hall: Rihga Royal Hotel 3F cosmos hall the third floor
2-4-1 hiraga tyou tiyoda ward in Tokyo

[part one]
Doors open :12:30
Talk show:14:00 ~15:15

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CHIAKI ITO on March 15th(Sunday) Talk show will be held at Thoshi Centre Hotel Tokyo!
CHIAKI ITO on March 15th (Sunday)Talk show will be held at Thoshi Centre Hotel Tokyo!

Date: March 15th (Sunday) in 2015
Venue: Thoshi Centre Hotel Tokyo 3F cosmos hall
2-4-1 Hirakawa-cho, Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo

[part one]
Doors open :12:30
Talk show:14:00 ~15:15

元の翻訳
I appreciate your arranging for the sample product.
I checked the price on invoice.
No matter how much money it is, we charge you 50 dollars for overseas remittance.
If possible, may I make a remittance with the cost of sample for the next time?
Thank you.

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I appreciate your arrangement for the sample product.
I checked the price on the invoice.
No matter how much money it is, we need to pay $50 fee for an overseas remittance.
If possible, may I make a remittance with the cost for the next sample?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Dear Amazon,
I contacted Payonia after receiving your email. I asked them to check if a payment was made to my credit card, and I was told that it wasn't. According to them, a payment is never made unless the account number is registered correctly. Where has my money from the sales gone? Could you advise me if it will be remitted to my correct account.

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Dear Amazon,
I contacted Payonia after receiving your email. I asked them to check if a payment was made to my credit card, and I was told that it wasn't. According to them, a payment is never made unless the account number is registered correctly. Where has my money from the sales gone? Could you advise me if it will be remitted to my correct account?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I was in time for the estimate.
Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
I appreciate you again.

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Thank you for your prompt reply.
I was in time for the deadline of the estimate.
Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
I appreciate your support again.

元の翻訳
Hi, I am sorry for make you bothered. It was a national holiday in Japan, so the bank was closed yesterday. The transfer should be reflected after tomorrow, so please check accordingly.

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Hi, I am sorry to bother you. It was a national holiday in Japan, so the bank was closed yesterday. The transfer should be reflected tomorrow or the next day, so please check it accordingly.

元の翻訳
#disneyparkslink

この人形の値段は私が決めさせていただくことをお伝えいたします。
他の購入者の方のために誤ってたくさんの人形をかってしまい、注文がキャンセルされました。
コストは$129.95 + 9% 税金 = $141.64　でした。
この価格は私のebay手数料と送料は含めません。
あなたにとっていい取引だと思います。
ご連絡ください。
ちなみに王子エリックとマレフィセントも扱ってます。

#Golf Xcess
すべて予定通りに進めば、木曜日に注文を受けるはずです。↵
21.5*は手に入らないと連絡を受けました。次に入荷された時のために発注をかけることができます。
ほかに必要なものがあればご連絡ください。

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#disneyparkslink

参考までに、私はこの人形の値段を仕入れ値以下で販売しています。
他の購入者の方のためにたくさんの人形を買ったのが間違いでした。彼らに注文をキャンセルされました。
コストは$129.95 + 9% 税金 = $141.64　でした。
この価格は私のebay手数料と送料は含みません。
あなたにとっていい取引だと思います。
ご連絡ください。
ちなみに王子エリックとマレフィセントも扱ってます。

#Golf Xcess
すべて予定通りに進めば、木曜日に注文品の納品となります。21.5*は手に入らないと連絡を受けました。入荷されれば、次回の発注に含めることができます。
ほかに必要なものがあればご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
#disneyparkslink

情報までにですが、この人形は私のコストで販売しています。

間違えて他のバイヤーのために沢山オーダーしたのですが、そのオーダーがキャンセルされたのです。

金額は$129.95+9%の税金=$141.64です。

私への金額はeBayの料金と送料は含みません。

とてもいい条件だと思いますが、いかがでしょうか。

ちなみにエリック王子とマレフィセントの人形もあります。

#Golf Xcess

スケジュール通りに行くと、オーダーが木曜に来ます。
21.5の物は入ってこないと言われました。次回それがある際にオーダーします。何か他に必要なものがあれば、ご連絡ください。

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#disneyparkslink

情報までにですが、この人形は私のコストを下回った価格で販売しています。

他のバイヤーのために沢山オーダーしたのが間違いでした、そのオーダーがキャンセルされたのです。

金額は$129.95+9%の税金=$141.64でした。

この金額はeBayの料金と送料は含みません。

とてもいい条件だと思いますが、いかがでしょうか。

ちなみにエリック王子とマレフィセントの人形もあります。

#Golf Xcess

スケジュール通りに行くと、注文品の納品は木曜になります。
21.5の物は入ってこないと言われました。在庫ができたら、次回の注文に入れます。何か他に必要なものがあれば、ご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
Would you be able to give a discount for this product?
I am hoping for $1,000, if that is possible.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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Would you be able to give a discount on this product?
I am hoping for $1,000, if that is possible.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
ご無沙汰しております。お元気でしょうか。

Lishinuのディストリビュートに関して、その後いかがでしょうか。
弊社はすでにヨーロッパではFutterhouseやFressnapf↵
といったペットリテイルで有名な企業とやり取りをしております。現在アメリカの最大ペットディストリビューターである、Animal Suupply Companyとも進めているところです。

あなたの国でも是非できればと思っております。ご意見いただけると幸いです。

では宜しくお願い致します。

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ご無沙汰しております。お元気でしょうか。

Lishinuの流通に関して、その後いかがでしょうか。ご連絡頂けると助かります。
弊社はすでにヨーロッパではFutterhouseやFressnapfといったペット小売業で有名な企業とやり取りをしております。現在アメリカの最大ペットの販売業者である、Animal Suupply Companyとも商売を進めているところです。

あなたの国でも是非お取引できればと思っております。ご意見いただけると幸いです。

では宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
メールありがとうございます。残念ながら、オーダーが確定されたため、オーダーの変更はできないことになります。ご希望の場合、無料配送の新しいオーダーをさせていただきたいと思います。新しいオーダーのために（800）282-2200までお問い合わせください。以下のアドレスに追跡可能で保険加入済みの配送方法を通じて、不要なアイテムを返すことができます。他のサポートが必要になったり、他の質問がある場合、いつでもservice@urbanoutfitters.comにてご連絡してください。

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メールありがとうございます。残念ながら、一度発注された注文の変更はできないことになっています。ご希望の場合、無料配送での新しい注文を入れさせていただきます。新しい注文のために（800）282-2200までお電話ください。以下のアドレスで追跡可能で保険加入済みの配送方法による、不要なアイテムの返品を承っております。他のサポートが必要になったり、他の質問がある場合、いつでもservice@urbanoutfitters.comまでご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
e-mail どうもありがとうございます。しかし申し訳ないのですが、一度注文されてしまったものはこちらの方では変更することができません。もしお望みなら私たちはあなたの為に、サービスとして無料の配送で行われる注文をこちらの方で行うことができます。単に、skype (800)282-2２００のフリーコールにお電話をよろしくおねがいします。以下に書かれている住所に追跡可能なそして保険付きの配送方法によって、欲しくない商品を送り返すことができます。↵
もし、あなたがさらに援助、もしくは質問があるならば、ためらうことなく↵
service@urbanoutfitters.com↵
のメールアドレスに連絡を下さい。

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e-mail どうもありがとうございます。しかし申し訳ないのですが、一度注文されてしまったものはこちらの方では変更することができません。もしお望みなら、当方で新しい注文を無償のスタンダード配送の条件で入れさせて頂きます。発注には (800)282-2２００に、お電話ください。以下に書かれている住所に追跡可能且つ保険付きの配送方法によって、必要のない商品の返品を承っております。もし、追加の支援、もしくは質問がある場合は、いつでも、service@urbanoutfitters.comまで、ご連絡下さい。

元の翻訳
We have business with the company AAA in England, they sent us packages by "Airmail International Signed For Small Packet". The price is from about 12.49 GBP to 16.66 GBP. After arriving in Japan, you can check the tracking service. It takes about 10 days to arrive the package. It's a secured way of shipping. Please consider it.

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We have a business with the company AAA in England and they send us packages by "Airmail International Signed For Small Packet" of Royal Mail. The price is about from 12.49 GBP to 16.66 GBP. After arriving in Japan, you can use the tracking service. It takes about 10 days to receive the package. It's a secured way of shipping. Please consider it.

元の翻訳
あなたのオーダー6 #8341 Cookbooksを、＊＊Houseに発送する際の輸送費（見積もり送り状に同封できます）と、＊＊HouseがPleasant Prairie, Wisconsin USA倉庫で受け取る場合の輸送費、どちらの見積もりが必要であるかをお知らせください。

Focusは、Alice Houseへの輸送費見積もりをお取りになることをお勧めします。

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あなたのオーダー6 #8341 Cookbooksを、＊＊Houseに発送する際の輸送費（見積送り状に記載可能）の見積もり、または＊＊Houseが弊社Pleasant PrairieのWisconsin USA倉庫で受け取る場合の輸送費の見積もりの、どちらをFocusに渡すのかに関してもお知らせください。

FocusがAlice Houseへの輸送費見積もりを受け取る方をお勧めします。

元の翻訳
1.Hello
Thank you for many things. You are such a nice person but I'm busy and not good at asking you a task because of my lack of communication skills so can I please cancel the contract. Please send me back message as soon as possible.

2. Thanks a lot
When will you refund payment of this time?

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1.Hello
Thank you for many things. You are such a nice person but I'm busy and not able to explain well a task to you because of my lack of communication skills. So I would like to cancel the contract. Please send me back a message as soon as possible.

2. Thanks a lot
When will you refund the payment of this time?