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元の翻訳
I understand that warranty of Vitamix is for only in the US.
So instead of me, can you ask Vitamix company for fix, because you are a trader who deals with Vitamix in the US?
These recalled goods are not what you sold, but could you please applicate?
I will pay you the necessary expenses and reward.
It would be not natural if private person ask fixing of multiple blenders, but I think it would be natural if it’s a merchant.

Would you please do me a favor?

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I understand that warranty of Vitamix is for only in the US.
So instead of me, could you ask Vitamix company for fix, because you are a trader who deals with Vitamix in the US?
These recalled goods are not what you sold, but could you please apply for fix instead of me?
I will pay you the necessary expenses and reward.
It would be not natural if private person ask fixing of multiple blenders, but I think it would be natural if it’s a merchant.

Would you please do me a favor?

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As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broaden my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

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As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broadening my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

元の翻訳
To improve the matter above, We would like to return the shipment system, so every products is going to be with a tracing code.
By doing this, the not-arrival rate will greatly decrease and the Order Defect Rate will also become less than 1%.

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To improve the matter above, We would like to return the shipment system to the previous one, so all the products are going to be with a tracing code.
By doing this, the not-arrival rate will greatly decrease and the Order Defect Rate will also become less than 1%.

元の翻訳
【About the performance】
a-nation island Performance secretary：０１８０－９９３－２２３（※Open 24 hours／PHS cell-phones unsupported／internet phones unsupported）

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【Inquiry about the performance】
a-nation island Performance office：０１８０－９９３－２２３（※ Automated voice service around the clock／PHS cell-phones unsupported／internet phones unsupported）

元の翻訳
We just started selling items on Amazon, but our priority is always our customer when we are selling items. We believe it will lead us to a better sales performance.
We would like to place emphasis on our customer in transactions while we purchase, sell, dispatch the items and provide a service after the item dispatch.

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We just started selling items on Amazon, but our priority is always our customer. We believe it will result in better sales performance.
We would like to place an emphasis on our customer in all the processes including purchase of stock, sale, dispatch and after-sales support.