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◇Yahoo!Ticket : http://tickets.yahoo.co.jp/tour/00001278/

【TEL】
0570-02-9999 ＜P code：306-736＞
※Make sure to enter P code.

(Convenience store)
Family Mart, Seven-Eleven, Lawson, Mini-stop, Circle K Thanks

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◇Yahoo!Ticket : http://tickets.yahoo.co.jp/tour/00001278/

【TEL】
0570-02-9999 ＜P code：306-736＞
※Make sure to enter P code.

(Convenience store)
Family Mart, Seven-Eleven, Lawson, Mini-stop, Circle K Sunkus

元の翻訳
Yahoo!Ticlet: http://tickets.yahoo.co.jp/tour/00001278/

(Telephone)
0570-02-9999<P code: 306-736>
*P code must be input.

(Convenience store)
Family Mart, Seven Eleven, Lawson, Mini-Stop, Circle k Sanxus

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Yahoo!Ticket: http://tickets.yahoo.co.jp/tour/00001278/

(Telephone)
0570-02-9999<P code: 306-736>
*P code must be input.

(Convenience store)
Family Mart, Seven Eleven, Lawson, Mini-Stop, Circle k Sanxus

元の翻訳
Is it possible to send directly PIERRE HARDY sneakers which are being sold on your company's online shop to Japan?
Example: PIERRE HARDY baskets montantes "Magic" which is being post on the page as below costs EUR 600 inclusive of VAT,
but, can you sell it without VAT?

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Is it possible to send directly PIERRE HARDY sneakers which are being sold on your company's online shop to Japan?
Example: PIERRE HARDY baskets montantes "Magic" which is being posted on the page as below costs EUR 600 inclusive of VAT,
but, can you sell it without VAT?

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Can you send me PIERRE HARDY sneakers sold in your online shop directly?
For example, May I buy PIERRE HARDY baskets montantes "Magic" by 600 € minus TVA?

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Can you send me PIERRE HARDY sneakers sold in your online shop directly?
For example, May I buy PIERRE HARDY baskets montantes "Magic" by 600 € minus TVA?↵
Could you sell it at the price excluding TVA?

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Thank you for your warm message. I'm relieved to hear that ○ is well after that. Our family will support him/her to keep this situation last. I'd like you to hear ○'s talk and believe him/her. I'm so tankful for your generous mind. I was supposed to have an interview with you, but I had the flu so I'm sorry that I will not be able to do so. I'm very sorry about that though you tried to make time for me. ◯ will be able to go to school from the afternoon of ◯th. ◯ recovered from his/her fever in one day, and now he/she is fine.

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Thank you for your warm message. I'm relieved to hear that ○ is well after that. Our family will support him/her to keep this situation last. I'd like you to hear ○'s talk and believe him/her. I'm so tankful for your generous mind. I was supposed to have an interview with you, but I also had the flu so I'm sorry that I will not be able to do so. I'm very sorry about that though you tried to make time for me. ◯ will be able to go to school from the afternoon of ◯th. ◯ recovered from his/her fever in one day, and now he/she is fine.

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Could you drop the complaint of Atoz?
I will make a full refund, although I have not received the item yet.
This is not to accept our fault but to keep our only income.
I would like you to give it a consideration.

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Could you drop the complaint of Atoz?
I will make a full refund if you do so, although I have not received the item yet.
This is not to accept our fault but to keep our only income.
I would like you to give it a consideration.

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This article, is an article with correct brand, model number, picture as well as explanation.
A complete genuine article was sent.
Since this is a high price article we do not accept return of the product or refund.
This is regulated and written in the shopping policy.
The return request on ebay is already off.
We thank you for your understanding and acceptance.

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This article, is the one with correct brand, model number, picture as well as explanation.
A complete genuine article was sent.
Since this is a high price article we do not accept return of the product or refund.
This is regulated and written in the shopping policy.
The return request on ebay is already off.
We thank you for your understanding and acceptance.

元の翻訳
WITH

Release of long-awaited new album compilation of 2014 from the hotly dashing TOHOSHINKI!!
▼Pre-order limited edition of Bigeast here
☆Bigeast Official Shop
[PC] http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html
[MB] http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html

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WITH

Release of a long-awaited new album compilation of 2014 from the hotly dashing TOHOSHINKI!!
▼Pre-order limited edition of Bigeast here
☆Bigeast Official Shop
[PC] http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html
[MB] http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/BGFC.html

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Bigeast FANCLUB EVENT 2014 THE MISSION III

Limited at Bigeast Official Shop!! Fan club event done on November 2014
Release of DVD "Bigeast FANCLUB EVENT 2014 THE MISSION III -Regain the lost coin!!- is confirmed!!

※Bigeast (Fan club) Limited items

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Bigeast FANCLUB EVENT 2014 THE MISSION III

Limited at Bigeast Official Shop!! Fan club event held on November 2014
Release of DVD "Bigeast FANCLUB EVENT 2014 THE MISSION III -Regain the lost coin!!- is decided!!

※Bigeast (Fan club) Limited items

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あなたの人形衣服に手掛けています。男子の衣服はすべて同じ人形のためですか？なら、防止と長靴をすべてのアウトフィットを組み合わせたら、ちょっと安くなります。複数であれば、長靴をそれぞれのアウトフィットに組み合わせます。女子の人形も同じこと。

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あなたの人形衣服を手掛けています。男子の衣服はすべて同じ人形のためですか？なら、帽子と長靴を作って衣服全体と組み合わせたら、ちょっと安くなります。複数であれば、長靴をそれぞれの衣服に組み合わせます。女子の人形も同じです。

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Heavy rotation will appear on Music video space-shower TV plus.
Music video of "Cry&Fight" will be released on space-shower TV plus from March 16th (Wed)-March 31st (Thurs) 's heavy rotation "Heavy-Rote!"!

http://www.spaceshowertvplus.com/

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Heavy rotation will appear on Music video space-shower TV plus.
Music video of "Cry&Fight" will be released on space-shower TV plus from March 16th (Wed)-March 31st (Thurs) as a heavy rotation "Heavy-Rote!"!

http://www.spaceshowertvplus.com/

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The latest live movie of KODA KUMI will be broadcasted in advance on dTV!

In commemoration of the release of LIVE DVD&Blu-ray「KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist」, special digest movie exclusively is broadcasted in advance on dTV from today!
Anyone who uses DoCoMo, of course, and users other than DoCoMo can watch and listen to it, too!

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The latest live movie of KODA KUMI will be broadcasted in advance on dTV!

In commemoration of the release of LIVE DVD&Blu-ray「KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist」, special digest movie is exclusively broadcasted in advance on dTV from today!
Anyone who uses DoCoMo, of course, and users other than DoCoMo can watch and listen to it, too!

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I got a complaint from a customer who bought "WRAP" yesterday. It is a complaint saying "the remote controller does not work". I have the item at hand and checked if it works, but both two remote controllers do not work. The item's invoice number is PO#010416. I have received complaints consecutively for two weeks. Inferior goods occur in every one in twentieth, or 5% of probability. It is the rate that can be accepted if it is made in China but not so if it is an American made. People do hate inferior goods in Japan. The trust of my shop has deteriorated drastically. You should try to manage production more firmly. I cannot accept inferior goods any more.

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I got a complaint from a customer who bought "WRAP" yesterday. It is a complaint saying "the remote controller does not work". I have the item at hand and checked if it works, but both two remote controllers do not work. The item's invoice number is PO#010416. I have received complaints consecutively for two weeks. Defective goods occur in every one in twentieth, or 5% of probability. It is the rate that can be accepted if it is made in China but not so if it is made in America. People do hate defective goods in Japan. The trust of my shop has deteriorated drastically. You should try to manage production more firmly. I cannot accept defective goods any more.

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Two days ago, I received a complains from a buyer of "Wrap." The complains was that remote controllers did not work. I have two of them with me now and they really do not work when I checked if they would be activated. They are items with PO#010416. I have receive the same complains during this two consecutive weeks. We have the defected products one in twenty that is with 5% of probability. If they were made in China it would be permissive but they are made in USA and this odd could not be let go. Japanese hate defected products. The credibility of my shop is going down significantly. You must do much better job on quality assurance. We will not take this kind of defect any more.

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Two days ago, I received complains from a buyer of "Wrap." The complains were that remote controllers did not work. I have two of them with me now and they really do not work when I checked if they would be activated. They are items with PO#010416. I have received the same complains during this two consecutive weeks. We have the defected products one in twenty that is with 5% of probability. If they were made in China it would be permissive but they are made in USA and this odds could not be let go. Japanese hate defected products. The credibility of my shop is going down significantly. You must do much better job on quality assurance. We will not take this kind of defect any more.

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The day before yesterday, A customer who bought "WRAP" sent us a claim. The customer said that the remote controller did not work. We have the products with us, so we tested them. Then we realized that both of the two remote controllers did not work. They are the items whose invoice number is PO#010416. So far, we are receiving claims from customers for consecutive two weeks. The probability of the fault is one twentieth, that is, 5%, If this products were made in China, then it might be allowed. But, this not acceptable because they are made in USA. In Japan, they all hate defective products. Our shop is losing trust dramatically. You guys should make efforts to manage the product quality much more. Please stop supplying defective products any more.

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The day before yesterday, the customer who bought "WRAP" sent us a claim. The customer said that the remote controller did not work. I have the products with me, so I tested them. Then we realized that both of the two remote controllers did not work. They are the items whose invoice number is PO#010416. So far, we are receiving claims from customers for consecutive two weeks. The probability of the fault is one twentieth, that is, 5%, If this products were made in China, then it might be allowed. But, this is not acceptable if they are made in USA. In Japan, they all hate defective products. Our shop is losing trust dramatically. You guys should make efforts to manage the product quality much more. Please stop supplying defective products any more.

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I heard about you from my boss, and I am sending email to you.
Can you please tell me some candidate dates in next week, or the week after next?
I will let a person in charge who fits your service attend with me,
I am planning to have the meeting in following place.
When you arrive there, please make a call to my cellular phone, xxx xxxx xxxx.
I am looking forward to seeing you.

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I heard about you from my boss, and I am sending email to you.
Can you please tell me some available dates in next week, or the week after next?
I will let a person in charge who fits your service attend with me,
I am planning to have the meeting in the following place.
When you arrive there, please make a call to my cellular phone, xxx xxxx xxxx.
I am looking forward to seeing you.

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Everybody highly expects the unique line up of the artists on the festival, where different generations and categories cross over.
As the last announcement about additional artists on show is scheduled, please visit the official HP for the details.

And, the first "Human crossroad 2015" held last year, and a lot of famous scenes were generated, will be featured and broadcasted on Space Shower TV, which is the most major music channel (again).
As the program contents are good for learning the atmosphere of the festival in advance, so please check it out.

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Everybody highly expects the unique line up of the artists on the festival, where different generations and categories cross over.
As the last announcement about additional artists on show is scheduled, please visit the official HP for the details.

And, the first "Human crossroad 2015" held last year, and a lot of famous scenes were generated, will be featured and broadcasted on Space Shower TV (again) , which is the most major music channel.
As the program contents are good for learning the atmosphere of the festival in advance, so please check it out.