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元の翻訳
配送品に関する書類を提出するよう、税関から手紙が届きました。かれらは、その配送品は日本からのものだと言っています。その配送品は、あなたから送られたものの1つだと思います。税関に申告するための情報を教えていただけませんでしょうか。

修正後
配送品に関する書類を提出するよう、税関から手紙が届きました。かれらは、その配送品は日本からのものだと言っています。その配送品は、あなたの荷物の1つだと思います。税関に申告するための情報を教えていただけませんでしょうか。

元の翻訳
We are really sorry that there were issues with the product this time.
If you wish to exchange the product or to get fully reimbursed, we will handle it immediately so please let us know how you want us to settle this.

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We are really sorry that there were issues with the product this time.
If you wish to exchange the product or to get fully reimbursed, we will handle it immediately so please let us know how you'd like us to settle this.

元の翻訳
We have confirmed the returned goods.
We will reimburse you the total price of the goods, except delivery fees.
Please understand that this time the reason why you could not receive the goods is a mistake from USPS and was outside our control.

As shown on the picture, we have sent the goods according to the schedule.
This time, the problem occured because the customer was not at home and USPS forgot to leave the absentee notice, there is no mistake from us.
We will contact the customer and discuss this case.
We plan to reimburse the full price for the goods except delivery fees.

修正後
We have confirmed returned goods.
We will reimburse you the total price of the goods, except delivery fees.
Please understand that this time the reason why you could not receive the goods is a mistake from USPS and was beyond our control.

As shown on the picture, we have sent the goods as scheduled.
This time, the problem occured because the customer was not at home and USPS forgot to leave the absentee notice, there is no mistake from us.
We are contacting the customer and discussing this case.
We plan to reimburse the full price for the goods except delivery fees.

元の翻訳
いくつかきずがついているのが気になります。なんだか、へこみのようにも見えますが、ミュウツーの本体は光沢性があるのですが、艶消しがされていています。また、ミュウツーの取り外し可能な手が極めて簡単に外れるので、壊れやすく、ポーズを作ろうにも作れない場合があります。あまり良い本体ではないように思うので返品すると思います。

修正後
いくつかきずがついているのが気になります。なんだか、へこみのようにも見えますが、ミュウツーの本体は艶消しがされているはずなのに、光沢が出ています。また、ミュウツーの取り外し可能な手が極めて簡単に外れるので、壊れやすく、ポーズを作ろうにも作れない場合があります。あまり良い本体ではないように思うので返品すると思います。

元の翻訳
Good day!
Regarding ZEISS IKON SW that you made an inquiry, we checked it,
and found that "73,000 Japanese Yen" was listed in the filing form
of the customs and an invoice.
it is calculated to be 613 US dollars by today's exchange rate.
By considering the responsiblity of a buyer, we set the filing
amount that is a little lower than the bidding price.
We cannot make it lower extremely because it will be the maximum in guaranteeing if an accident occurs during its transportation.
For this reason, we decided this amount.
We are sure that 1,600 US dollars is not listed.

修正後
Good day!
Regarding ZEISS IKON SW that you made an inquiry, we checked it,
and found that "73,000 Japanese Yen" was listed in the filing form
of the customs and an invoice.
it is calculated to be 613 US dollars by today's exchange rate.
By considering the burden of a buyer, we set the filing
amount that is a little lower than the bidding price.
We cannot make it lower extremely because it will be the maximum in guaranteeing if an accident occurs during its transportation.
For this reason, we decided this amount.
We are sure that 1,600 US dollars is not listed.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the new price list.
After some consideration, I'll change the quantities to order, so please check them.

Item 1: xx units
Item 2: yy units

Also, I signed the terms & conditions, so please check it.

修正後
Thank you for sending the new price list.
After some consideration, I'll change the order quantities, so please check them.

Item 1: xx units
Item 2: yy units

Also, I signed the terms & conditions, so please check it.

元の翻訳
Dear, sir.

I appreciate your purchasing the reserved item.
Today we completed to prepare delivery label and packing box.
In addition, delivery registration number has been entered in My eBay.
It has been delivered on January 22, the date of sales.

When you cannot find any information regarding delivery more than 3 weeks from the date of receiving this e-mail, please contact to us (we will check the detailed situation and let you know).

And we will give a call on the date of delivery,

so we will ask for your patience.

Is there another products you want to purchase?
If so, it will be delivered together. In case of this, delivery fee will not be charged.

修正後
Dear, sir.

I appreciate your purchasing the reserved item.
Today we completed to prepare delivery labels and packing boxes.
In addition, delivery registration number has been entered in My eBay.
It has been delivered on January 22, the date of sales.

When you cannot find any information regarding delivery more than 3 weeks from the date of receiving this e-mail, please contact to us (we will check the detailed situation and let you know).

And we will give a call on the date of delivery,

so we will ask for your patience.

Is there another products you want to purchase?
If so, it will be delivered together. In case of this, delivery fee will not be charged.

元の翻訳
I was informed that you are new manager of this branch. Nice to meet you.

In general, we send invoice every Tuesday and Friday.
However, in case of holidays, it can be varied.

Upon receiving invoice, please let us know the expected devliery date.
It would be great to send ASAP.
When you deliver, then inform A and B of it.

At the end of every month, let us know the inventory of products.
Could you send product images and information delivered to C which are to be for sale?
From now on, for more information on products, please contact with C.

修正後
I was informed that you are the new manager of this branch. Nice to meet you.

We usually send invoices every Tuesday and Friday.
However, in case of holidays, it can be varied.

Upon receiving invoice, please let us know the expected devliery date.
It would be great to send ASAP.
When you deliver, then inform A and B of it.

At the beginning of every month, let us know the inventory of products.
Could you send product images and information delivered to C which are to be for sale?
From now on, for more information on products, please contact with C.

元の翻訳
Recently you have "Like" on the Facebook more and more rapidly.
Has something special happened to you?
I found that 00 was sold out on the website, and you are going to receive it at the end of February.
Why did it happen?
You do not receive the item even if I order now?
May I have an origina data of a moving picture of the KIckstar?
I am going to use it by correcting the logo of 00.
If you have a new plan you are going to develop this year, would please let me know?

Regarding the contract, as I would like to add some, may I send a topic of the additional sentences to you?

修正後
Recently you have "Like" on the Facebook more and more rapidly.
Has something special happened to you?
I found that 00 was sold out on the website, and you are going to receive it at the end of February.
Why did it happen?
You do not receive the item even if I order now?
May I have an origina data of a moving picture of the KIckstar?
I am going to use it by correcting the logo of 00.
If you have a new plan you are going to develop this year, would please let me know?

Regarding the contract, as I would like you to add some, may I send additional sentences to you?

元の翻訳
Happy New Year.
Thank you for using our store last year.
It's winter now in Japan.
The time of the year when it's the coldest.
Mt. Fuji and other place under the snow look beautiful.
My English is not very good, but
when you need to know something about Japanese products,
please do not hesitate to contact me.
I'm glad I got to know you through eBay.
Let's have another good year.

Thank you for using our store.
Have the goods arrived safely?
I'm doing business at Amazon wanting to deliver
Japanese products to people all over the world.

修正後
Happy New Year.
Thank you for using our store last year.
It's winter now in Japan.
The time of the year when it's the coldest.
Mt. Fuji under the snow looks beautiful.
My English is not very good, but
when you need to know something about Japanese products,
please do not hesitate to contact me.
I'm glad I got to know you through eBay.
Let's have another good year.

Thank you for using our store.
Have the goods arrived safely?
I'm doing business at Amazon wanting to deliver
Japanese products to people all over the world.