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元の翻訳
The razor you purchased is authentic for sure.

The brand name of Cross Arrow came from SUZUKI founded in 1930s.
The two arrows originated from the family emblem of the founder Suzuki.

Therefore, the razor you purchased has excellent value.

Actually, there is Cross Arrow made in China, but it imitated Japanese brand.

Under normal circumstances, it worth more than $1000, however some customer may think this is a Chinese product, so I sold it as bargain-basement without profit.

If you do not like it, you can return.

修正後
The razor you purchased is authentic for sure.

The brand name of Cross Arrow came from SUZUKI founded in the 1930s.
The two arrows originated from the family emblem of the founder Suzuki.

Therefore, the razor you purchased has excellent value.

Actually, there is Cross Arrow made in China, but it imitated Japanese brand.

Under normal circumstances, it worth more than $1000, however some customer may think this is a Chinese product, so I sold it as bargain-basement without profit.

If you do not like it, you can return.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the pictures.
I contacted ◯ earlier, and they offered that they would replace ☆ with a new one.
I have arranged that the new one be sent on ◇◇, you will need to switch it with ☆ that you have on hand.
I apologize for the inconvenience; however, please send ☆ back as a registered mail to us by ◇◇. We will make sure to return the shipping fee via PayPal if you show us the receipt.
Our return address is the following.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for sending me pictures.
I contacted ◯ earlier, and they offered that they would replace ☆ with a new one.
I have arranged that the new one be sent on ◇◇, you will need to switch it with ☆ that you have on hand.
I apologize for the inconvenience; however, please send ☆ back as a registered mail to us by ◇◇. We will make sure to return the shipping fee via PayPal if you show us the receipt.
Our return address is the following.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending us the pictures.
We have just contacted ○ and confirmed that they will replace ☆ with a new one.
The new one will be delivered to us on ◇/◇, and we need to return your ☆ to ○ on the same day.
Thus could you possibly ship ☆ to us with a tracking number and ensure that it reaches us by ◇/◇ please?
The shipping fee would be refunded via PayPal by presenting the receipt.
Our address is mentioned below. I would appreciate your kind understanding.
Best regards.

修正後
Thank you for sending us pictures.
We have just contacted ○ and confirmed that they would replace ☆ with a new one.
The new one will be delivered to us on ◇/◇, and we need to exchange your ☆ with ○ on the same day.
Thus could you possibly ship ☆ to us with a tracking number and ensure that it reaches us by ◇/◇ please?
The shipping fee would be refunded via PayPal by presenting the receipt.
Our address is mentioned below. I would appreciate your kind understanding.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
The Forest of Gold Coins
Get the Tickets
Watch movie for Get Tickets
10 Tickets
Long tap
Shoot take off your finger
Low costs
High power
Spend 5 coins

I don't know why but How Can I stop to play only shooting !
I made this game with the aim of such a game.
You can play with out frustration because of coins don't fall off beside.
You can play long term with many Speedruns.

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The Forest of Gold Coins
Get the Tickets
Watch movie for Get Tickets
10 Tickets
Long tap
Shoot take off your finger
Low costs
High power
Spend 5 coins

I don't know why but How Can I stop to play shooting !
I made this game with the aim of such a game.
You can play without frustration because coins don't fall off beside.
You can play for a long time with many Speedruns.

元の翻訳
ご存知の通り、この時計はプレゼント用でした。

受け取った時、時計を見て確認し、少し動作確認もしまし、彼氏に見つからないように隠しておきました。

先ほどクロノメーターを試してみたのですが、全く動きません。

どうすればいいですか？返品しますか？

カメラを８００ドルで、本体（ボディー）を６００ドル、送料を３５ドルでいかかでしょうか。

修正後
ご存知の通り、この時計はプレゼント用でした。

受け取った時、時計を見て確認し、少し動作確認もして、彼氏に見つからないように隠しておきました。

先ほどクロノメーターを試してみたのですが、全く動きません。

どうすればいいですか？返品しますか？

カメラを８００ドルで、本体（ボディー）を６００ドル、送料を３５ドルでいかかでしょうか。

元の翻訳
We apologize to you.
We made a mistake in setting the price due to the mistake
of registering the condition.
We do not have the new inventory for those items.
All the item you ordered are registered under the condition of
the used one.
We hate to ask you, but could you request the cancellation of the order at the Amazon?
You can cancel it subject to the following procedure.

修正後
We apologize to you.
We made a mistake in setting the price due to the mistake
of registering the condition.
We do not have the new inventory for those items.
All the item you ordered are registered under the condition of
the used one.
We hate to ask you, but could you request the cancellation of the order at the Amazon?
You can cancel it in accordance with the following procedure.

元の翻訳
At the translation of Job/1626934, I forgot to add a new term.
Would you add the following?

How are you working on the payment of the invoice issued for December that
we contacted a few days ago?
As we settle our finance this month, we need to solve it as early as possible.
We hate to ask you while you are busy, but we appreciate your cooperation.
If we have to prepare something, please let us know.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
At the translation of Job/1626934, I forgot to add a new term.
Would you add the following?

How are you working on the payment of the invoice issued for October that
we contacted a few days ago?
As we settle our finance this month, we need to solve it as early as possible.
We hate to ask you while you are busy, but we appreciate your cooperation.
If we have to prepare something, please let us know.

We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
It is very convenient because the bus comes often.
The convenince is due to the fact that the bus arrives every five minutes.
Wifi is also availble, so you can see a map while you are on the bus.
The second floor was cold because it was winter. But everyone was using the seats on the second floor.

修正後
It is very convenient because the bus comes often.
Transportation is very convenient because buses arrive every five minutes.
Wifi is also availble, so you can see a map while you are on a bus.
The second floor was cold because it was winter. But everyone was using seats on the second floor.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing.
Regarding the item that we delivered this time,
it is the last one that we have had stored for a long time in our store.
Do you mind the scratch at outside of the box?
It is a new item where no one has touched the content in the box.
If you do not like it, you can return it.
We hope that you understand it.
As it is not sold by manufacturers, we cannot send the item
that replaces it.
We will pay back 10 dollars to you via Paypal if you use it.
You can contact us by positive feedback or e-mail.
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
Thank you for purchasing.
Regarding the item that we delivered this time,
it is the last one that we have had stored for a long time in our store.
Do you mind the scratch outside the box?
It is a new item where no one has touched the content in the box.
If you do not like it, you can return it.
We hope that you understand it.
As it is not sold by manufacturers, we cannot send the item
that replaces it.
We will pay back 10 dollars to you via Paypal if you use it.
You can contact us by positive feedback or e-mail.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Easy and comfortable

It is a tour in Italy on our honeymoon.
As the two places seemed not quite for visiting by train, we used this tour. The passing scenery seen from the train window was beautiful, and we could visit both in half a day and do shopping in the Mall leaving ｔhings we had bought in Prada we visited earlier; It made us feel easier that we did not need to get on a bus or train with packages of brand items in our arms, so I recommend this tour. We found Prada in the Mall, too, but after all the assortment of goods was different from SPACE. The lineup of products in SPACE was extensive and they were sold very cheap!

修正後
Easy and comfortable

It is a tour in Italy on our honeymoon.
As the two places seemed quite hard for visiting by train, we used this tour. The passing scenery seen from the train window was beautiful, and we could visit both in half a day and do shopping in the Mall, leaving things we had bought in Prada we visited earlier; It made us feel easier that we did not need to get on a bus or train with packages of brand items in our arms, so I recommend this tour. We found Prada in the Mall, too, but after all varieties of goods was not good enough as SPACE. The lineup of products in SPACE was extensive and they were sold very cheap!

元の翻訳
This product is very popular in Japan.
If you sell it cheaper, I will buy it 10 by 10 continuously on the long term.

修正後
This product is very popular in Japan.
If you sell it cheaper, I will buy it by 10 pieces continuously on the long term.

元の翻訳
制服のもう1つの利点は、いじめや競争を減らせることだ、とKaren Williams氏（Long BeachにあるLowell Bayside Academyの校長）は話す。学校全体で学生が同じものを身につけていれば、かっこ悪いスニーカーやジーンズをからかう者も出てこない。「着ているものを見せびらかしに学校に来ているのではありません。」とWilliam氏は言う。「シャツの裾をきちんとしまい、一日の準備ができた状態で来ているのです。」

修正後
制服のもう1つの利点は、いじめや競争を減らせることだ、とKaren Williams氏（Long BeachにあるLowell Bayside Academyの校長）は話す。学校全体で学生が同じものを身につけるように決められていれば、かっこ悪いブランドのスニーカーやジーンズを身につけているからといっていじめられる者も出てこない。「着ているものを見せびらかしに学校に来ているのではありません。」とWilliam氏は言う。「シャツの裾をきちんとしまい、一日の準備ができた状態で来ているのです。」

元の翻訳
国内最大の6学区で制服制度を採用します。フィラデルフィアが加わり、ニューヨーク市、ロサンジェルス、カリフォルニア、シカゴ、イリノイ、マイアミ、フロリダ、ヒューストン、テキサスです。制服と服装規定の導入は学生の安全性を高め、学習増進になることを期待されています。

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国内最大の6学区で制服制度を採用します。フィラデルフィアが、ニューヨーク市、ロサンジェルス、カリフォルニア、シカゴ、イリノイ、マイアミ、フロリダ、ヒューストン、テキサスに加わります。制服と服装規定の導入は学生の安全性を高め、学習増進になることを期待されています。