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Random sampling method, where data are drawn by probability theory, is a right method in theory, but it is not easy in site to draw samples randomly from a pile of products in warehouses etc.
Also unfortunately it is impossible to prove later if the obtained samples are taken randomly. Therefore various ingenuity is exercised to solve these problems.
To perform it quickly, the first thing would be to become able to define the defective articles correctly after all.
Ambiguity means to leave the decision to workers.

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Random sampling method, where data are drawn by probability theory, is a right method in theory, but it is not easy in site to draw samples randomly from a pile of products in warehouses etc.
Also unfortunately it is impossible to prove later if the obtained samples are taken randomly. Therefore various ingenuity is exercised to solve these problems.
To perform it quickly, the first thing would be to become able to define the defective articles correctly after all.
Ambiguous expressions mean to leave the decision to workers.

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The random sampling method is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. which items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, it is made various kinds of efforts.
I think to become to define defectives properly with looking at limit samples well is the best thing to execute quickly.

Unclear expression causes leaving it to worker's estimation.

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The random sampling method is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. which items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples were picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, it is made various kinds of efforts.
I think to become to define defectives properly with looking at limit samples well is the best thing to execute quickly.

Unclear expression causes leaving it to worker's estimation.

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Initial failure was found in one of the A.
Front of the jib and the rear of the jib are not connected.
This is because the connecting portion of the front is deformed.
Initial failure was discovered after purchase of customers.
The product has a lot of flaws since it is forcibly connected and detached.
Along with items of this order, please send another A for free.
This photo is confusing a little, but I've attached just in case.

Does the product display of this Rug have 5 'x 8' size?
If this Rug is 7'6 "x 9'6" size, does its pattern stretch?
Or does its appearance get larger itself?

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Initial failure was found in one of the As.
Front jib and the rear jib are not connected.
This is because the connecting portion of the front is deformed.
Initial failure was discovered after purchase of customers.
The product has a lot of flaws since it is forcibly connected and detached.
Along with items of this order, please send another A for free.
This photo is confusing a little, but I've attached just in case.

Does the product display of this Rug have 5 'x 8' size?
If this Rug is 7'6 "x 9'6" size, does its pattern stretch?
Or does its appearance get larger itself?

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Dear John,

Good afternoon.

I apologize for the unclear mail sent previously.
Regarding HLCRIO151, do you think you can upload a promotion video to the Youtube ?
We would like to use the video for promotion if possible.
I have checked the image video which you sent before this, but i think it would be better with more description and explanation on it.

As for HLBKIO102, please let me know when it's ready to be shipped.
And as for other items, i hope for delivery as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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Dear John,

Good afternoon.

I apologize for the unclear e-mail sent previously.
Regarding HLCRIO151, do you think you can upload a promotion video to the Youtube ?
We would like to use the video for promotion if possible.
I have checked the image video which you sent before this, but i think it would be better with more description and explanation on it.

As for HLBKIO102, please let me know when it's ready to be shipped.
And as for other items, i hope for delivery as soon as possible.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
CD + DVD [AAA Jacket ver.]

Text 1
Special gift enclosed offer for first release: Trading card ( one of the all eight kinds of cards is randomly choose and enclosed

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CD + DVD [AAA Jacket ver.]

Text 1
Special gift enclosed for the first release: Trading card ( one of the all eight kinds of cards is randomly chosen and enclosed

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Thank you for delivering the product.
Could you send the invoice to me by email?

Right now as I'm typing this email, PK still has not closed down their account.
I will check once again with PK.

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Thank you for delivering the product.
Could you send the invoice to me by email?

Right now as I'm typing this email, PK still has not closed down their account.
I will check once again with PK.

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Thank you very much for sending the products.
Can I have you email the invoice to me?

As of the writing of this email, PK still hasn't closed their account.
I will try inquiring with PK one more time.

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Thank you very much for sending the products.
Can I have you email the invoice to me?

As of the writing of this email, PK still hasn't closed their account.
I will try to inquire with PK one more time.

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The shipping method becomes "SAL".SAL means free shipping using vacant space of airplane and reasonable. But it also means that the time of arrival changes significantly due to on presence or absence of vacant space. Fortunately last time it has arrived at you soon, but normally it is said to take 2-3 weeks. $13 additional charge makes us send by EMS. Then it will arrive at you in 4-5 days if it would passes the custom. This comes with tracking service and insurance. Please consider it.

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The shipping method is "SAL".SAL means low-price shipping using vacant space of airplane so we ship it free of charge. But it also means that the time of arrival changes significantly due to on presence or absence of vacant space. Fortunately last time it has arrived at you soon, but normally it is said to take 2-3 weeks. $13 additional charge enables us to send by EMS. Then it will arrive at you in 4-5 days if it passes the customs smoothly. This comes with tracking service and insurance. Please consider it.

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We are deeply sorry that the delivery of the product is delayed.

We have confirmed that there was a problem with our shipping arrangements and the product came back to us once. It has already been shipped out again.

We deeply apologize that this was not communicated to you.

We will pay you back the express delivery fee.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

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We are deeply sorry that the delivery of the product is delayed.

We have confirmed that there was a problem with our shipping arrangements and the product came back to us once. It has already been shipped out again.

We deeply apologize that this was not communicated to you.

We will pay you back the express delivery fee.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

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We apologize for delayed shippment.

After the investigation, our shipment process had the issue so the product was returned to our company and was re-shipped.

We apologize for not contacting to you immediately.

We will refund the priority shipment fee.

Thank you very much in advance.

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We apologize for delayed shipment.

After the investigation, our shipment process had the issue so the product was returned to our company and was re-shipped.

We apologize for not contacting to you immediately.

We will refund the priority shipment fee.

Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
In order to increase additional value...

Improve user evaluation
In order to sell products at a more expensive rate than other companies, in other words to sell with increased additional value, users of the product or service must evaluate them highly.
If high evaluation can be achieved, then you will be able to sell at a higher price that us equivalent to the reputation. In order to increase additional value, you need to have measures to improve user evaluation(customer satisfaction).

But if the user feels that the service exceeds the expectation, they would be satisfied and think "I'll ask the AS for help next time too." To receive orders consecutively, we always need to live up to the customers' expectations.

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In order to increase additional value...

Improve user evaluation
In order to sell products at a more expensive rate than other companies, in other words to sell with increased additional value, users of the product or service must evaluate them highly.
If high evaluation can be achieved, then you will be able to sell at a higher price that is equivalent to the reputation. In order to increase additional value, you need to have measures to improve user evaluation(customer satisfaction).

But if the user feels that the service exceeds the expectation, they would be satisfied and think "I'll ask the AS for help next time too." To receive orders consecutively, we always need to live up to the customers' expectations.

元の翻訳
To add value...

Raise user-evaluation.
To sell products or service at higher price than others, meaning to add high value, those products or service need to be evaluated highly by users.
High evaluation means that the products or service can be sold at high commensurate price.
To add value, you need to have plan to raise user-evaluation(satisfaction).

But when it surpasses customers' expectations, they will think that "I will ask AS again". To receive orders continuously, we need to meet customers' expectation.

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To add value...

Raise user-evaluation.
To sell products or service at higher price than others, meaning to add high value, those products or service need to be evaluated highly by users.
High evaluation means that the products or service can be sold at high commensurate price.
To add value, you need to have a plan to raise user-evaluation(satisfaction).

But when it surpasses customers' expectations, they will think that "I will ask AS again". To receive orders continuously, we always need to meet customers' expectation.

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When you send the product, we don't need the tracking number. Please send it as a regular mail. However, we will pay refundment once it is arrived at Japan. ※When we confirmed to AmazonUK, we received a guidance that we have to pay back of the products to be delivered.

Moreover, Air mail without a tracking number in Japan costs about￡3 even if its high, we pay you more ￡3. ※Please consider that we need pay for Japanese high custom duty when the product arrive.

Well, I'm waiting for the arrival.

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When you send the product, we don't need the tracking number. Please send it as a regular mail. However, we will pay refundment once it arrived in Japan. ※When we confirmed to AmazonUK, we received a guidance that we have to pay back of the products to be delivered.

Moreover, air mail without a tracking number in Japan costs about￡3 even if it's high, we pay you more ￡3. ※Please consider that we need pay for Japanese high custom duty when the product arrives.

Well, I'm waiting for the arrival.