スージー (sujiko) Received Reviews

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Almost 11 years ago
Japan
Japanese (Native) English
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mechamami rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
19 Oct 2017 at 03:03
Comment
所々やや自然さに欠けるところがありますが、全体的に良い訳だと思います。
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
15 Oct 2017 at 23:22
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
16 Oct 2017 at 22:01
ttatsumi rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
11 Oct 2017 at 10:43
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notedは、「理由を知っていました」より「理由を書き留めた」の方が自然かと思います。
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
12 Oct 2017 at 12:24
karekora rated this translation result as Japanese → English
06 Oct 2017 at 22:38
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
04 Oct 2017 at 19:45
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
03 Oct 2017 at 19:51
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
24 Sep 2017 at 08:24
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
15 Sep 2017 at 22:32
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
15 Sep 2017 at 22:31
n071279 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
15 Sep 2017 at 09:25
Comment
大きな間違いはありません。 工夫すればもう少し自然な日本語になるかと思います。 頑張ってください。
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Sep 2017 at 21:44
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
11 Sep 2017 at 16:38
Comment
良い訳だと思います。少し硬い直訳になっているので、読み直して丁寧な日本語にするとなお良いですね。
ueharamasashi rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
04 Sep 2017 at 12:27
Comment
素晴らしいと思います。
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
04 Sep 2017 at 16:04
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
25 Aug 2017 at 22:41
Comment
正確ですね。自然な表現を選ぶとなお良いと思います。accept this offerはこの申し出を受け入れる、くらいが良いかもしれません。
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
25 Aug 2017 at 23:08
Comment
正確な訳ですが、工夫するともう一段読みやすくなると思います。
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
23 Aug 2017 at 20:59
Comment
完全な逐語訳になってしまっているので、日本語の自然さを意識するとさらに良いと思います。
planckdive rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
24 Aug 2017 at 21:49
Comment
全体的に不自然な表現が多いと思います。
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
23 Aug 2017 at 20:59
caira rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
26 Aug 2017 at 17:55
Comment
とてもわかりやすく訳されていると思います。
planopiloto rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
25 Aug 2017 at 01:43
Comment
demonstrateは、コミットメントを「示す」くらいの方が良いかもしれません。
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
23 Aug 2017 at 05:04
cotton0611 rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
23 Aug 2017 at 00:53