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Limited offer: Free $5 (Canadian Dollars) Amazon gift card!

Were satisfied with our service and products?
If you were satisfied please review our product.

If you give me a good review within the next 24 hours I will reward you with a $5 (Canadian Dollars) Amazon gift card.

Pleasure doing business with you.

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Limited offer: Free $5 (Canadian Dollars) Amazon gift card!

Were you satisfied with our service and products?
If you were, please rate our product.

If you give us a good review within the next 24 hours, I will reward you with a $5 (Canadian Dollars) Amazon gift card.

Pleasure doing business with you.

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Thank you for the good news.

By the way, since the "street price" you've mentioned is ambiguous, then I want to request for a specific estimate. Please also include the shipping charge for the following cases:

10 sets of Item A
20 sets of item A
30 sets of item A

Thank you.

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Thank you for the good news.

By the way, since the "street price" you've mentioned is unclear, I would like to request for a specific estimate. Please also include the shipping charge for the following cases:

10 sets of Item A
20 sets of item A
30 sets of item A

Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I looked into My jobs of AGITO but cannot confirm the video.

It might have been considered as a normal task and declined. Could you therefore confirm it again?

I appreciate,

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Thank you for your reply.
I looked into My jobs of AGITO but cannot confirm the video.

It might have been considered as a normal task and declined. Could you therefore confirm it again?

Thank you for your kind assistance.

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Thank you for the present! Of course, I love it!
I'm worried if I made you feel like you have to do something for me because I sent you some items. There might be more things I would like to give you in the future. Please don't feel any pressure to receive it.
I know how long it takes and how much effort you take to make such things. I'm moved to receive such pretty thing. I can't express well in my words.

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Thank you for the present! Of course, I love it!
I'm worried if I made you feel like you have to do something for me because I sent you some items. There might be more things I would like to give you in the future. Please don't feel any pressure to receive it.
I know how long it takes and how much effort you put to make such things. I'm moved to receive such a pretty gift. I just can't put into words.

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You can return the item if you do not like its color. However, in that case, you have to pay for the shipping charge of the item. You are only responsible for the shipping charge when returning if you return the item and all the attachments. However, if the returned item and attachment are missing, have already used or damaged, we might request the payment for compensation of the damage.

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You can return the item if you do not like its color. However, in that case, you have to pay for the shipping charge of the item. You are only responsible for the shipping charge when returning the item and all the accessories. However, if the returned item and attachment are missing, have already used or damaged, we might request the compensation for the damage.

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Regarding your inquiry, there was no price difference between yahoo shop and rakuten shop.
So the estimate is exactly the same as the previous estimate from rakuten shop: 63239 yen.

The rod is longer than the DESTROYER phase 3 CASTING F5-76X so the shipping will cost a little more. Also, it may be a little cheaper to ship two rods at once If this is the case I can refund the difference in shipping costs to you. Please understand that I have arranged to ship the rods using a delivery service, which is not guaranteed to give a discount.

What shall we do about the order?

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Regarding your inquiry, there was no price difference between yahoo shop and rakuten shop.
So the estimate is exactly the same as the previous estimate from rakuten shop: 63239 yen.

The rod is longer than the DESTROYER phase 3 CASTING F5-76X so the shipping will cost a little more. Also, it may be a little cheaper to ship two rods at once. If this is the case I can refund the difference in shipping costs to you. Please understand that I have arranged to ship the rods using a delivery service, which is not guaranteed to give a discount.

What shall we do about the order?

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Thank you for your inquiry. I apologize for my late response.

The page you inquired about was deleted on January 5th (Monday) at 1:40PM(JST).

If you have any other problems do not hesitate to ask.

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Thank you for your inquiry. I apologize for my late response.

The page you inquired about was deleted on January 5th (Monday) at 1:40PM (JST).

If you have any other problems, do not hesitate to ask.

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年々アメリカの子供は、ほかの何をする時間よりもテレビにはりついている時間が長くなっている―睡眠時間を除いてではあるが。テレビが一般的になった１９４０年代以降、人々はテレビの影響について心配してきた。何年もの間、アメリカ小児科学会やアメリカ医学協会などの保健団体がそれぞれの懸念を表明している。それらの団体は、過剰なテレビの視聴と食習慣の乱れや運動不足、肥満、暴力行動といった問題を結びつける研究を提示している。

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年々アメリカの子供は、ほかの何をする時間よりもテレビにはりついている時間が長くなっている―睡眠時間を除いてではあるが。テレビが一般的になった1940年代以降、人々はテレビの影響について心配してきた。何年もの間、アメリカ小児科学会やアメリカ医学協会などの保健団体がそれぞれの懸念を表明している。それらの団体は、過剰なテレビの視聴と食習慣の乱れや運動不足、肥満、暴力行動といった問題を結びつける研究を提示している。

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I have just received the Inner pad and the present from you.
Thank you so much for sending me such a tasty chocolate !!
I am extremely happy !!

I have shipped the package with tracking number 123456789 for your reference.
I will prepare the documents for the customs, please kindly wait for a few days.

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I have just received the Inner pad and the present from you.
Thank you so much for sending me such a tasty chocolate !!
I am extremely happy !!

I have shipped the package with tracking number 123456789 for your reference.
I will prepare the documents for the customs, so please wait for a few days.

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The inner pad and present have arrived! Thank you so much for the really tasty chocolate! I couldn't be happier!!!
The package (tracking number :123456789) is that I sent. I will arrange for the documents to submit customs. Please kindly wait that it arrives for a couple of days.

Sincerely,

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The inner pad and present have arrived! Thank you so much for the really tasty chocolate! I couldn't be happier!!!
The package (tracking number :123456789) is the parcel I sent. I will arrange for the documents to be submitted to the customs. Please wait for a couple of days.

Sincerely,

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You have not updated the script of ABC as I expected.
I am sure that there are a number of bugs at this script.

I found that the contents of the following page is different.
It must be due to the bug.

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You have not updated the script of ABC as I expected.
I am sure that there are a number of bugs in this script.

I found that the content of the following page is different.
It must be due to the bug.

元の翻訳
Information in this e-mail and attached files are confidential and may include information only intended for the recipient.
Please do not copy or transfer any part of this mail or attached file without permission from our company.
If you are not the intended recipient of this mail, please inform the sender.

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Information in this e-mail and attached files are confidential and may include information only intended for the recipient.
Please do not copy or transfer any part of this e-mail or attached file without permission from our company.
If you are not the intended recipient of this e-mail, please inform the sender.

元の翻訳
The content written in this e-mail is confidential and includes information limited to a recipient. Please not to copy, transfer any part of the content of this e-mail or the attached file without our authorization. In case a person other than a recipient received this e-mail for some reason, please contact the originator of this e-mail.

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The content written in this e-mail is confidential and includes information limited to a recipient. Please do not copy, transfer any part of the content of this e-mail or the attached file without our authorization. In case a person other than a recipient received this e-mail for some reason, please contact the originator of this e-mail.

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Yes. That is right.
It is wonderful.
Kim Ito is one of the most respectful artists to me.
I was a very happy to be asked to produce his flyer.

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Yes. That is right.
It is wonderful.
Kim Ito is one of the most respectful artists to me.
I was very happy to be asked to make a flyer for him.

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We would like to deliver the items of F from Japan.
May we deliver them to your company without using a
forwarding company at A?
Of course, we will pay the duties.

If you have some points we have to be careful about
when we deliver them, please let us know.
For example, do you have the following restrictions?
The size is 50x60x50, and even one of them is
allowed to exceed it.
The weight must be less than 30 kilograms.
If it is over 15 kilograms, we must list "overweight"
at the top and sides of the boxes.
The torn boxes are not allowed.
The boxes must not be packed by the bands.
The wet boxes are not allowed.
The cash on divery is not allowed.
The renovated boxes are not allowed.

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We would like to deliver the items of F from Japan.
May we deliver them to your company without using a
forwarding company at A?
Of course, we will pay the duties.

If you have some points we have to be careful about
when we deliver them, please let us know.
For example, do you have the following restrictions?
The size is 50x60x50, and even one of them is not
allowed to exceed it.
The weight must be less than 30 kilograms.
If it is over 15 kilograms, we must list "overweight"
at the top and sides of the boxes.
The torn boxes are not allowed.
The boxes must not be packed by the bands.
The wet boxes are not allowed.
The cash on delivery is not allowed.
The renovated boxes are not allowed.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message. I sincerely agree that it is important to have the best quality provided, therefore we will wait patiently. If possible, we will be very grateful if you can give us a head-ups if there should be any delay.

We will wait and please cheer up with CES.
We wish you all the success and prosperity.

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Thank you for your message. I sincerely agree that it is important to have the best quality provided, therefore we will wait patiently. If possible, we will be very grateful if you can give us a heads-up if there should be any delay.

We will wait. Please try your best on CES.
We wish you all the success and prosperity.

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ちょうどあなたがオークションに出していたソニーV×1000を見て気になったのですが、唯一故障しているのは再生機能のみという理解で正しいでしょうか。
私はV×1000と専用のカメラバッグを盗られてしまいましたが、映像の挿入と再生のための小型DVカムコーダーはまだ持っているので、再生機能のみの故障であれば問題ありません。

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ちょうどあなたがオークションに出していたソニーV×1000を見て気になったのですが、唯一故障しているのは再生機能のみという理解で正しいでしょうか。
私はV×1000と専用のカメラバッグを盗られてしまいましたが、映像の挿入と再生のための小型DVカムコーダーはまだ持っているので、再生機能のみの故障であれば問題ありません。

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Thank you for purchasing from us. We are very sorry, but it was already sold in our main store. We are sorry for the inconvenience and request for your kind understanding. Since you have already made the payment, we will immediately issue you a refund. We will be displaying the same kind of product moving forward so you can try to purchase from us again.

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Thank you for purchasing from us. We are very sorry, but it was already sold in our main store. We are sorry for the inconvenience and hope to have your kind understanding. Since you have already made the payment, we will immediately issue you a refund. We will be listing similar products in the future, so please come back again.

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I have sent your item. If you chose express delivery, it will arrive approximately in 1 or 2 weeks.

Economy shipping might delay a lot according to my experience.
Especially to Europe and to Africa, there were cases that items have arrived after 2 months or more.

If you don't receive the item within a month, please contact me.

If you receive the item safely, then please give me 5 stars and positive feedback.

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I have sent your item. If you chose express delivery, it will arrive approximately in 1 or 2 weeks.

Economy shipping might take a while based on my experience.
Especially to Europe and to Africa, there were cases that items have arrived after 2 months or more.

If you don't receive the item within a month, please contact me.

If you receive the item safely, then please give me 5 stars and positive feedback.

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A: Supposedly, if we meet the first time and think of an example for conversation,
you ask me "How are you?". How can I respond to you?
B: For example, you can say, "I'm sick".

A: I said "---" to your question earlier. Is this expression right? Please tell me if there is better expression.

A: I understood your question, but I do not have an idea how I should respond. Would you give me some examples?

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A: Supposedly, if we meet the first time and think of an example for conversation,
you ask me "How are you?". How can I respond to you?
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B: For example, you can say, "I'm fine" or "I'm sick".

A: I said "---" to your question earlier. Is this expression right? Please tell me if there is better expression.

A: I understood your question, but I do not have an idea how I should respond. Would you give me some examples?

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Thank you very much for sending the medela to me before the long holiday during the end of last year.

I want to make a new order of medela, but is it alright if I increase the order to 300 more from here onwards?

In addition to this, the shipping cost of air postage increased since September of last year. But with the prices of crude oil seen to go down considerably starting January of this year, will the shipping cost go down as well?

Recently, the depreciation of the yen is extremely severe and the price revision of the medela can't keep up with this so it would be helpful if you can kindly reconsider this point.

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Thank you very much for sending the medela to me before the long holiday during the end of last year.

I want to make a new order of medela, but is it alright if I increase the order to 300 more from here onwards?

In addition to this, the shipping cost of air postage increased since September of last year. But with the prices of crude oil seem to go down considerably starting January of this year, will the shipping cost go down as well?

Recently, the depreciation of the yen is extremely severe and the price revision of the medela can't keep up with this so it would be helpful if you could kindly reconsider this point.