takeshikm (takeshikm) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
ご返信ありがとうございます。何か進捗はありますか？未だ商品が発送されていないように見受けます。マーチャントレヴューには良いフィードバックを残させて頂きたいと考えているので、何卒迅速な処理をお願い致します。

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ご返信ありがとうございます。何か進捗はありますか？未だ商品が発送されていないように見受けます。取扱い業者のレビューには良いフィードバックを残させて頂きたいと考えているので、何卒迅速な処理をお願い致します。

元の翻訳
Sorry if my last correspondence was unclear.
What I wanted to write is as follows:
- I have one new and tagged product.
- I assume that this will be soon out of stock as it's some kind of hard-to-find product. You may consider to place an order as soon as possible, not to miss it.

Subject: about delivery status of FBA product.
Regarding the FBA product for Amazon from me, there is still a product that hasn't been received. It is the following. I would appreciate for your immediate investigation on its delivery status. Thank you.

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Sorry if my last correspondence was unclear.
What I wanted to communicate is as follows:
- I have one new and tagged product.
- As this is a hard-to-find product, stocks are expected to run out soon. Please consider placing an order as soon as possible.

Subject: Delivery status of FBA product
Regarding the FBA product for Amazon from me, there is still a product that hasn't been received. It is as follows. I would appreciate your immediate investigation into its delivery status. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Have you already shipped my order?

It's been a month already since I placed an order.

Please let me know the exact delivery date and time.

If it seems to take very long until you will have shipped it out,
I will cancel the order and ask you for an immediate refund.

Please make sure to respond to me within 24 hours.

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Have you already shipped my order?

It's been a month already since I placed an order.

Please let me know the exact delivery date and time.

If it takes very long until you ship it out,
I will cancel the order and ask you for an immediate refund.

Please make sure to respond to me within 24 hours.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I checked it.
For the product#1, I saw its colour on the web. May I buy it but coloured in ＊＊?↵
If I may, I would like to purchase 1 pc of this product.
Regarding the products#2 and #3, I actually wanted to buy 1 pc, of which the hardware's colour is ＊＊and cartridge colour is ＊＊. May I still make a change?
Besides that, I realized that the amount on the invoice is different from the amount said on the website as I checked by logging in. Which is true actually?
I would like to complete the payment as soon as I can.
Best regards↵

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I have checked it.
As for the product#1, I saw the product with ＊＊color on the website.↵
If it is alright, I would like to purchase 1 pc of this product.
Regarding the products#2 and #3, though I wanted to buy each pc of these two products with the ＊＊colored hardware and ＊＊colored cartridge, may I still make a change of my purchase?
Besides that, after I logged in the website, I found that the amount of the products on the invoice is different from the one shown on the website. Would you tell me which one is correct?
I would like to complete the payment as soon as possible.
Best regards

元の翻訳
お客様

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

恐れ入りますが、お客様がご注文なさった品は日本の荷受業者により発送人に返却されております。しかし、理由については開示されていません。

返却品は確かに受領しておりますので、返金につきましてはお客様のクレジット（またはデビット）カードに返金処理をしております。恐縮ですが、お客様の当該カード口座に反映されるまで、営業日で数日かかることをご了承ください。

オンラインで再度ご注文頂いてももちろん構いません。

その他にもご不明な点がございましたら、お気軽にご連絡ください。

宜しくお願い致します。

Jamie

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お客様

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

恐れ入りますが、お客様がご注文なさった品は日本の荷受業者により発送人に返却されております。しかし、理由については開示されていません。

返却品は確かに受領しておりますので、お客様のクレジット（またはデビット）カードへの返金処理をすすめております。恐縮ですが、お客様の当該カード口座に反映されるまで、営業日で数日かかることをご了承ください。

オンラインで再度ご注文頂いてももちろん構いません。

その他にもご不明な点がございましたら、お気軽にご連絡ください。

宜しくお願い致します。

Jamie

元の翻訳
Hi. It seems that DHL might take time for delivery.
Is there any other possible courier?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Hi. It seems that using DHL might take time for the delivery.
Are there any other possible couriers?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for a reply late.
I decided not to place an order for the bag, as I have not been sure of the market on this new item yet.
Let me therefore make the following order

Concerning the paypal address, here is followed and please send the invoice to this address.
My paypal address:

Thank you.

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I am sorry for my late reply.
I decided not to place an order for the bag, as I was not sure of the market on this new item yet.
Therefore, let me make the following order.

About the address, please send the invoice to the address below.
Paypal address:

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I will do shopping for you.
Let me know what product(s) you would like from Japan.
I can purchase that for you,
and will send you at the most reasonable delivery charge.
My service is easy to use.
Please write down what you want in the request form.
The price of product(s) including the delivery and service charges
will be sent to your e-mail per PayPal invoice.
If you agree with the price in the invoice, you can simply complete the payment through PayPal.
After your payment is confirmed, I will send you the product(s).
Even the subscription of magazines is also available.

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I will do shopping for you.
Let me know what product(s) you would like from Japan.
I can purchase that for you,
and will send you at the most reasonable delivery charge.
My service is easy to use.
Please write down what you want in the request form.
The PayPal invoice listing the price of product(s) including the delivery and service charges
will be sent to your e-mail address.
If you agree with the price in the invoice, you can simply complete the payment through PayPal.
After your payment is confirmed, I will send you the product(s).
Even the subscription of magazines is available.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your business

This is ○○.

I am contacting to you regarding the product of which the tracking number is 709572.

It seems that the transfer has stopped.
When the transfer will resume?

I need this product as soon as possible.
I would appreciate if you could expedite the transfer.

I am sorry for bothering you,
but I would appreciate for your reply at your earliest convenience.
○○

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Thank you for your business

This is ○○.

I am contacting you regarding the product of which the tracking number is 709572.

It seems that the process of transfer has stopped.
When will it resume?

I need this product as soon as possible.
I would appreciate if you could expedite it.

I am sorry for bothering you,
but I would appreciate for your reply at your earliest convenience.
○○