翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは。今DHLは時間がかかりそうですが、
少し早い輸送手段はありますか？

今回1個注文しようと思っています。

返信待っています。

英語

Hi. It seems that DHL might take time for delivery.
Is there any other possible courier?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/08 09:02:39

元の翻訳
Hi. It seems that DHL might take time for delivery.
Is there any other possible courier?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

修正後
Hi. It seems that using DHL might take time for the delivery.
Are there any other possible couriers?

I am planning to place an order for one unit.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Not bad, a few mistakes but feels natural

[takeshikm]

Thank you for your review! :)