翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 61 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2013/06/19 21:26:05

takeshikm
takeshikm 61 経歴(Career): 企業2社で合計約3年の社内通訳・翻訳の経験を積...
日本語

買い物代行を行います。
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雑誌の定期購読も可能です。

英語

I will do shopping for you.
Let me know what product(s) you would like from Japan.
I can purchase that for you,
and will send you at the most reasonable delivery charge.
My service is easy to use.
Please write down what you want in the request form.
The price of product(s) including the delivery and service charges
will be sent to your e-mail per PayPal invoice.
If you agree with the price in the invoice, you can simply complete the payment through PayPal.
After your payment is confirmed, I will send you the product(s).
Even the subscription of magazines is also available.

レビュー ( 1 )

misasa 59 翻訳スクールのリーガル翻訳特訓コースを修了後、フリーランスの産業翻訳家にな...
misasaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/20 23:56:21

元の翻訳
I will do shopping for you.
Let me know what product(s) you would like from Japan.
I can purchase that for you,
and will send you at the most reasonable delivery charge.
My service is easy to use.
Please write down what you want in the request form.
The price of product(s) including the delivery and service charges
will be sent to your e-mail per PayPal invoice.
If you agree with the price in the invoice, you can simply complete the payment through PayPal.
After your payment is confirmed, I will send you the product(s).
Even the subscription of magazines is also available.

修正後
I will do shopping for you.
Let me know what product(s) you would like from Japan.
I can purchase that for you,
and will send you at the most reasonable delivery charge.
My service is easy to use.
Please write down what you want in the request form.
The PayPal invoice listing the price of product(s) including the delivery and service charges
will be sent to your e-mail address.
If you agree with the price in the invoice, you can simply complete the payment through PayPal.
After your payment is confirmed, I will send you the product(s).
Even the subscription of magazines is available.

Very nice work, but I made a few corrections.

takeshikm takeshikm 2013/06/21 23:55:01

misasa san,
thank you so much for corrections! I fully understand that the corrections make my translation better.
I will take into consideration this for next translations.

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