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Thank you for your cooperation.

Were you able to receive the repayment?

If you confirmed the receipt I would be happy if you can change the value since I sent you a revalorization request.

I am sorry to have caused you any trouble.

I have learned various things with this matter.

I want to make better use of the eBay operation.

Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your cooperation.

Were you able to receive our refund?

I would appreciate if you could change your evaluation upon confirmation of the receipt since I have sent you a revalorization request.

I am sorry to have caused you a trouble.

I have learned various things from this experience.

I would like to make better use of the eBay operation.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
#will
I understood. In addition, please contact me if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

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#will
I understood. In addition, I will contact you when I have items I want.

#golf-xcess
I will show the price to Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to bother you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether it is the product which I can order.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
#will
I understood. In addition, please contact me if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

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#will
I understood. In addition to say I will contact you if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry for bothering you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
The product seems to be delivered at around your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

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According to the delivery status, the product seems to be in your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

元の翻訳
The product seems to be delivered at around your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

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As I checked the track, the product seems to have been delivered to your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days after it arrive.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation.

元の翻訳
Firstly I would like to thank you for purchasing the product which we had on sale.
However, I have disappointed you because the product was different from the impression the photograph gave you.
It is difficult to take a photograph of the clock face that represents the real item most closely, but please understand that I am not trying to make an excuse.
I want to do my best to prevent such problems as much as possible.
Thank you for pointing this out.

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At first, I would like to thank you for purchasing our product.
However, we have disappointed you because the product was different from the impression the photograph gave you.
It is difficult to take a photograph of the clock face that perfectly represents the color as the real item, but we understand that there is no excuse.
We'll do our best to prevent such problems as much as possible.
Thank you for pointing it out.

元の翻訳
"En réalité, Travers était une bisexuelle courageuse qui casse les stéréotypes -. Une mère célibataire a la quarantaine, qui a adopté un bébé , a étudié la méditation zen à Kyoto; et qui a publi érotisme de ses sous-vêtements soyeux, 10 ans avant Walt avait esquissé sa souris. Elle est un caractère plus digne pour l'écran, en lieu de ce stéréotype Colombie rigide determiné à voler la joie de les enfants de futures generations. Avec sa petite amie de longue date et son fils, étant adulte, effacé, Travers semble qu'elle ne peut pas même savoir comment on fait les bébés.

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"En réalité, Travers était une bisexuelle courageuse qui casse les stéréotypes -. Une mère célibataire dans sa quarantaine, qui a adopté un bébé , a étudié la méditation zen à Kyoto; et qui a publié l'érotisme de ses sous-vêtements soyeux, 10 ans avant que Walt avait esquissé sa souris. Et voilà, un caractère valable pour l'écran, en lieu de ce stéréotype britannique rigide determiné à voler la joie des enfants des générations futures. Avec sa petite amie de longue date et son fils, étant adulte, effacés, Travers semble peut-être ne même pas savoir comment on fait les bébés.

元の翻訳
①300 and more kinds of famous stamps
from special moves to popular characters.

②A bulletin board full of laughter! Aim for the interesting first place ranking

③Simple one-touch processing

④Share it and get your points

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①More than 300 kinds of popular stamps
from special moves to popular characters.

②A bulletin board full of laughter! Aim for the first place of interesting ranking

③Simple one-touch processing

④Share it and get your points

元の翻訳
Ma fille et moi sommes tous les deux très satisfaites que vous êtes devenu son professeur titulaire depuis Septembre.
C'est très utile pour moi aussi, parce que vous corrigez son cahier et ses documents de manière fiable.

Je parle de la livret scolaire de ma fille. Comme vous l'avez souligné, j'ai aussi remarqué moi-meme qu'elle avait quelques problèmes avec son français.
Au début, je la voudrais laisser faire les choses suivantes, mais qu'est-ce qu'en pensez-vous ?

Lire un livre pour enrichir son vocabulaire
Tenir un journal
S'habituer à faire des exercices

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Je serais très reconnaissante si vous pourriez aussi recommander un livre pour enfants.
Après cela, permettez-moi de vous informer un peu plus de nous, et le progrès que ma fille a fait jusqu'à présent.

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Ma fille et moi sommes tous les deux très satisfaites que vous êtes devenu son professeur titulaire depuis septembre.
C'est très utile pour moi aussi, parce que vous corrigez son cahier et ses documents de manière fiable.

Au sujet du livret scolaire de ma fille. J'ai aussi remarqué qu'elle avait quelques problèmes avec son Français, comme vous l'avez souligné.
Premièrement, je voudrais qu'elle fasse les suivantes taches, qu'en pensez-vous ?

Lire un livre pour enrichir son vocabulaire
Tenir un journal
S'habituer à faire des exercices

Je vous serais très reconnaissante si vous pouviez aussi recommander des livres pour enfants.
Ensuite, permettez-moi de vous informer un peu plus sur nous, et sur le progrès que ma fille a fait jusqu'à présent.

元の翻訳
I have sent back the product a few days ago.
However, I have not yet been refunded on PayPal.

According to the tracking service of the package, it should have arrived there on the 6th of December. Could you check out what happened?
The transportation company used Japanese postal EMS, not FedEx.

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I have sent back the product a few days ago.
However, I have not yet been refunded on PayPal.

According to the tracking service for the package, it should have arrived there on the 6th of December. Could you check what happened?
The transportation company used Japan post EMS, not FedEx.

元の翻訳
The standard shipping can take 3-4 weeks because of the Christmas season. I recommend Expedited shipping.

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The standard shipping can take 3-4 weeks because of the Christmas season. I recommend expedited shipping.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for being persistent.
I understand the following indication.
It is not a problem concerning the capacity or the cache of the image itself. I think there is a problem with the speed at which the program is read.

For example, it takes 0.8 seconds to confirm action when I delete part of the code mentioned below. It becomes considerably fast. Originally it takes more than two seconds.
I delete the following code↓



Actually, please try it. Or, please watch the following URL. The display should be fast.

I thought the problem was resolved by doing this, but it shows an error when the image uploads.

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I am sorry for being persistent.
I understand the following indication.
It is not a problem concerning the capacity or the cache of the image itself. I think there is a problem with the speed at which the program is read.

For example, it takes 0.8 seconds to confirm action when I delete part of the code mentioned below. It becomes considerably fast. Originally it takes more than two seconds.
I delete the following code↓



Actually, please try it. Or, please look at the following URL. The display should be fast.

I thought the problem was resolved by doing this, but it shows an error when the image uploads.

元の翻訳
まだです。予約モデル(カーボンブル)だからです。我々のウェブサイトの報告の通り、２週間後にこれらのコードを届けます。

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「carbon・bull」というのは予約注文なので、当分は入手不可でございますが。我が社の公式サイトで二週間で発送するような発表がございますが。

元の翻訳
関税手数料
こんばんは。
私は、パッケージをようやく受けました。
残念なことに、私は、21ユーロ料金を含む31ユーロの額を払わなければならない不愉快な思いもかけないことを催しました。
あなたの疑わしい専門職業意識を克服するために全額払戻しと強い善意のしるしを待っている間、あなたのイメージに壊滅的な広告を作るのを躊躇しない消費者協会との連絡を避けるために、心からの挨拶を受け入れてください。

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関税手数料
こんばんは。
私は、パッケージをようやく受けました。
残念なことに、私は、21ユーロ料金を含む31ユーロの額を払わなければならない思いもかけない不愉快な思いをしました。
あなたのプロ意識への疑いを克服するために全額払戻しと強い善意のしるしを待っています。貴店のイメージに壊滅的な広告を作るのを躊躇しない消費者協会との連絡を避けるためです。↵
心からの挨拶を受け入れてください。

元の翻訳
Once again, thank you for your order.
Because this product uses high-pressure gas and there's a posibility it can burn, I can not send it by air mail.
I am very sorry, but the order will have to be canceled.
I deeply apologize for my clumsiness.

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Once again, thank you for your order.
Because this product uses high-pressure gas and there's a possibility it can burn, I can not send it by air mail.
I am very sorry, but the order will have to be canceled.
I deeply apologize for my clumsiness.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、
税関申告で$40と贈り物として送ってくださいませんか。

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こんにちは、
税関申告で$40と記載して、贈り物として送ってくださいませんか。