Elmo Mama (kazue_ishikawa) — 付けたレビュー

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For 4 days only 7/3(TH)~7/6(SUN) in Yoyogi Park there will be a special movie playing called "LINE PLAY x Ayumi Hamasaki." Included in the seats will be a postcard sized coupon which if you put into the Ayumi Hamasaki room on LINE PLAY you'll get a special item!


=> Coupon validity period
7/3/2014 ~ 7/31/2014

I bet you're looking forward to getting an item!

"LINE PLAY"
http://play.line.naver.jp/

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For 4 days only 7/3(TH)~7/6(SUN) in Yoyogi Park there will be a special movie playing called "LINE PLAY x Ayumi Hamasaki." Included in the seats will be a postcard sized coupon with a serial number which if you put into the Ayumi Hamasaki room on LINE PLAY you'll get a special item!


=> Coupon validity period
7/3/2014 ~ 7/31/2014

I bet you're looking forward to getting an item!

"LINE PLAY"
http://play.line.naver.jp/

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Sep. 27th (Sun) 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014' Performers are desided!

We can experience bodily sensations of supreme 'sound' that is the pride of Japan and supreme ' food' that is the pride of AOMORI in large-sized open-air festival, 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014.
We disided DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will perform on Sep. 27th (Sun).
Please look at the official website concerning the information of preceding tickets or something.

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Sep. 27th (Sun) 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014' Performers are decided!

We can feel the supreme 'sound' that is the pride of Japan and the superb ' food' that is the pride of AOMORI in a large-sized open-air festival, 'AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014.
We decided DAICHI MIURA and BLUE TOKYO will perform on Sep. 27th (Sun).
Please look at the official website concerning the information about pre-order sale for tickets or something.

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May J will appear on Kayo Concert of Songs on NHK General Broadcast, Tuesday 8 July!!

Details on Kayo Concert of Songs on NHK General Broadcast
Date: Tuesday 8 July 2014
Time: 2000 to 2043
Website: http://www.nhk.or.jp/program/utacon/

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May J will appear on Kayo Concert on NHK General Broadcast, Tuesday 8 July!!

Details of Kayo Concert on NHK General Broadcast
Date: Tuesday 8 July 2014
Time: 2000 to 2043
Website: http://www.nhk.or.jp/program/utacon/

元の翻訳
Marinemesse Fukuoka

All reserve seats:7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

Sundome Fukui

All reserve seats: 7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

Kyodo Hokuriku
025-245-5100

12:00 ( plan)

Nagano Big Hat

All reserve seats: 7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

Kyodo Hokuriku
025-245-5100

12:00 (plan)

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Marine Messe Fukuoka

All reserve seats:7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

Sundome Fukui

All reserve seats: 7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

Kyodo Hokuriku
025-245-5100

12:00 as planned

Nagano Big Hat

All reserve seats: 7,800 yen
Family seats: 7,800 yen

Kyodo Hokuriku
025-245-5100

12:00 as planned

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明らかに最低のサービスです。海外から購入する時だけこのようなことが起きます。販売者からの返事もないですし、相談にも応じてくれません。
もし私がこのレンズの返金を求メルとして、次のことをどうやって知ることができますか。
1) あなたは商品を受け取ってから返金するつもりですか？
2) 私はあなたに£40をTax n Duty であなたからこの商品を購入するために支払いました。そして、今私はあなたのところに返品するための送料£40を損することに直面しています。どうして、自己都合ではない理由での返品で送料を負担しなければいけないのですか。あなたが行なっていることは販売者として最低です。
あなたはこのレンズが粗悪品あることをは十分知っていたんでしょうね。だから私が指摘してからあなたは何のコメントもなかった、つまりあなたは自分が間違ったことをしたことをわかっているからですね。

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明らかに最低のサービスです。海外から購入する時だけこのようなことが起きます。販売者からの返事もないですし、相談にも応じてくれません。
もし私がこのレンズの返金を求メルとして、次のことをどうやって知ることができますか。
1) あなたは商品を受け取ってから返金するつもりですか？
2) 私はあなたからこの商品を購入するために税込み£40を支払いました。そして、今私はあなたのところに返品するための送料£40を損することに直面しています。どうして、自己都合ではない理由での返品で送料を負担しなければいけないのですか。あなたが行なっていることは販売者として最低です。
あなたはこのレンズが粗悪品あることをは十分知っていたんでしょうね。だから私が指摘してからあなたは何のコメントもなかった、つまりあなたは自分が間違ったことをしたとわかっているからですね。

元の翻訳
Could you prepare the knob of the crown and send it to me?
Could you buy it from the manufacturer?
By the way, the Japanese manufacturer said that I cannot buy the knob.

If you cannot buy the knob as a part, I just need you to refund a part of the amount paid.
Please remit the refund to my PAYPAL account.
I hope you will take good care of this.

The amount of the refund that I need is $30.
Please refund me.

Thank you four refunding me.
I confirmed the refund through my PAYPAL records.

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Could you prepare the knob of the crown and send it to me?
Could you buy it from the manufacturer?
By the way, the Japanese manufacturer said that I cannot buy the knob.

If you cannot buy the knob as a part, I just need you to refund a part of the amount paid.
Please remit the refund to my PAYPAL account.
I hope you will take good care of this.

The amount of the refund that I need is $30.
Please refund me.

Thank you for refunding me.
I confirmed the refund through my PAYPAL records.

元の翻訳
MBV Wholesaleのサイトで当店に注文されたことが分かりました。有難うございます。当店が注文をまとめ出荷する前に、支払を受取らなくてはなりません。お客様は銀行間送金を選択しました。226.46ドル（これは銀行間送金に絶対必要な手数料を含みます）を都合のよい早い時期に送金してください。また、送金した時期の連絡をしてください。お客様の支払を適切に識別するためには、リストされたきっちりの金額を送金してくれることが必須時効になります。当店でお客様の支払が確認され次第、商品のまとめる作業を開始するつもりです。

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MBV Wholesaleのサイトで当店に注文されたことが分かりました。有難うございます。当店が注文をまとめ出荷する前に、支払を受取らなくてはなりません。お客様は銀行間送金を選択しました。226.46ドル（これは銀行間送金に絶対必要な手数料を含みます）を都合のよい早い時期に送金してください。また、送金完了後に連絡をしてください。お客様の支払を適切に識別するためには、記載の金額を送金してくれることが必須時効になります。当店でお客様の支払が確認され次第、商品のまとめる作業を開始するつもりです。

元の翻訳
"Idol Corner Newspaper; May Issue"

* May 23rd (Friday), Idol Corner Newspaper May Issue

* Where you can buy:
At major convenience stores in Tokyo and other three prefectures (except certain convenience stores)
At Aru Aru City
At two stores of Idol Corner (Akihabara, Kansai TV)
At Animate Akihabara
At Shosen Grande, Shosen Booktower

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"Idol Corner Newspaper; May Issue"

* May 23rd (Friday), Idol Corner Newspaper May Issue

* Where you can buy:
At major convenience stores in Tokyo and Chiba, Kanagawa and Saitama prefectures (except some convenience stores)
At Aru Aru City
At two stores of Idol Corner (Akihabara, Kansai TV)
At Animate Akihabara
At Shosen Grande, Shosen Booktower

元の翻訳
Announcement on an upcoming program; Showroom presents "Cheeky Parade's Cheekiss Producing Meeting" vol.4

Showroom presents "Cheeky Parade's Cheekiss Producing Meeting"

The program will be held on June 4th (Wed) 7:00pm.
Here is the URL.
(Note: the URL is disabled until the on-air day)

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Announcement on an upcoming program; Showroom presents "Cheeky Parade's Cheekiss Production Meeting" vol.4

Showroom presents "Cheeky Parade's Cheekiss Production Meeting"

The program will be held on June 4th (Wed) 7:00pm.
Here is the URL.
(Note: the URL is disabled until the on-air day)

元の翻訳
We started application for 『Chikipa style school trip ~How is New York?~』from June 1st of 2014.

『Chikipa style school trip ~How is New York?~』

《Here is the recruitment site》
http://www.his-j.com/kanto/corp/group/event/cheekyparade/

《The deadline of recruitment》
June 30th(Monday) of 2014, by 23:59

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We started application for 『Chikipa style school trip ~How is New York?~』from June 1st, 2014.

『Chikipa style school trip ~How is New York?~』

《Here is the recruitment site》
http://www.his-j.com/kanto/corp/group/event/cheekyparade/

《The deadline of recruitment》
by 23:59 on Monday, June 30th, 2014

元の翻訳
Thank you!
Contacts about delivery destinations, etc. when the project ends, so please wait a moment.
All successfully finished?
We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'll be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!

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Thank you!
You will hear about delivery destinations, etc. after the project ends, so please wait a moment.
Did all successfully finished?
We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'd be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!

元の翻訳
* Choose any plan and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

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* Choose any plan you like and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters and has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

元の翻訳
People may already know, who reads Teku Teku, but we would like to introduce to you once again.

Smart sink is a mirror type information terminal, which was incorporated AndroidOS in its sink.
News, traffic information, weather forecast, and more information will be reflected in the mirror. Of course you can customize those reflected information by using application. It is a piece of cake to reflect movies or advertisements, because it incorporated AndroidOS.
To operate, shade the mirror with your hand. Because we can operate it without touching it, we don't have to worry about making the mirror dirty.

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People may already know, who reads Teku Teku, but we would like to introduce this to you once again.

Smart sink is a mirror type information terminal, which was incorporated AndroidOS in its sink.
News, traffic information, weather forecast, and more information will be reflected in the mirror. Of course you can customize those reflected information by using applications. It is a piece of cake to reflect movies or advertisements, because it incorporated AndroidOS.
To operate, shade the mirror with your hand. Because we can operate it without touching it, we don't have to worry about making the mirror dirty.

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Here is a question regarding to the product shipped internationaly via "eBay shipping".
Before I received the package, I had received a call from its Japanese carrier. They said that the product had been damaged when they opened the package. I have already informed this issue to the seller. I have no idea when the product got damaged, but will you advise what actions should I take on this issue? Thank you.

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Here is a question regarding to the product shipped internationaly via "eBay shipping".
Before I received the package, I had received a call from its Japanese carrier. They said that the product had been damaged when they opened the package. I have already informed this issue to the seller. I have no idea when the product got damaged, but will you advise what actions should I take on this issue as it is the first case to me? Thank you.

元の翻訳
An announcement for resume and rental in special event of SOLIDEMO. (After vol. 40)

(6/5 Thursday 16:00 refresh)

Thank you for coming to the live of SOLIDEMO.

We resumed and renewal the special event after the live of SOLIDEMO from vol.40.

Detail for the special event

-Present the signboard event
-Taking photo event (2 shot or 3 shot)
-Shaking hand event

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An announcement for resume and renewal of special event of SOLIDEMO. (After vol. 40)

(Thursday June 5th at 16:00 refreshed)

Thank you for continuing to come to the live of SOLIDEMO.

We will resume and renewal the special event after the live of SOLIDEMO from vol.40 onwards.

Details for the special event

- Presenting the autograph
- Taking photos (2 or 3 shots)
- Shaking the hand

元の翻訳
Opening Date: August 23th, 2014 (Sat)
Time: 13:00 ~ 17:00
Location: Katsuyama Civilian Hall (5-16, 1 Chomei, Maru Machi, Katsuyama City, Fukui Province)
[From direction of Osaka, Kyoto]
Express “ThunderBird” （Toyama Direction）at JR Osaka Station (About 1hour and 50 minutes)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;
[From direction of Nagoya, Yonehara]
Express “Shirasagi” （Toyama Direction）at JR Nagoya Station (About 2hours)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;

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Opening Date: Saturday, August 23rd, 2014
Time: 13:00 ~ 17:00
Location: Katsuyama Civic Hall (5-16, 1 Chomei, Maru Machi, Katsuyama City, Fukui Province)
[Direction from Osaka and Kyoto]
Express “ThunderBird” (toward Toyama) from JR Osaka Station (About 1hour and 50 minutes)→ Change at JR Fukui Station to "Eiheiji" line (toward Katsuyama, Eiheiji) of Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Katsuyama Station;
[From Nagoya and Yonehara]
Express “Shirasagi” (toward Toyama) from JR Nagoya Station (About 2hours)→ Change at JR Fukui Station and to "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) of the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Katsuyama Station;

元の翻訳
[Tokyo] TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE New Album 「Killing Me Softly」 Release Event "The Flower Friday"

Date: July 11th, 2014
Time of 1st event: starts from 18:00(gather by 17:30)
Time of 2nd event: starts from 20:00(gather by 19:30)
Place: Tower Record Shibuya B1F 「CUTUP STUDIO」
Event contents: mini live & talk

■About the Entry Ticket distribution

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[Tokyo] TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE New Album 「Killing Me Softly」 Release Event "HANA-No-KINYOBI (Thank God, it's Friday!)"

Date: Friday, July 11th, 2014
Time of 1st event: starts from 18:00(gather by 17:30)
Time of 2nd event: starts from 20:00(gather by 19:30)
Place: Tower Record Shibuya B1F 「CUTUP STUDIO」
Event contents: mini live & talk

■About the Entry Ticket distribution

元の翻訳
[Object]
Ayumi Hamasaki New Album [Title undecided]
【CD+DVD】AVCD-38965/B 3,800JPY(tax exclude)
【CD+Blu-ray】AVCD-38966/B 4,200JPY（tax exclude）
【CD】AVCD-38967 Price：¥3,000（tax exclude）

*Shipping expense would be charged with the price of the album if you were in Nagoya or Osaka Stage
*Special surprise will be blunded with the album for those who reserve in advance.
*We also remind you that goods in Tokyo Stage will be sold in sequence and will be stop saling by the time of sold out.

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[Object]
Ayumi Hamasaki New Album [Title undecided]
【CD+DVD】AVCD-38965/B 3,800JPY(tax exclude)
【CD+Blu-ray】AVCD-38966/B 4,200JPY（tax exclude）
【CD】AVCD-38967 Price：¥3,000（tax exclude）

*Shipping expense would be charged with the price of the album if you were in Nagoya or Osaka Stage
*Special benefit will be blunded with the album for those who reserve in advance.
*We also remind you that goods in Tokyo Stage will be sold in sequence and will be stop saling by the time of sold out.

元の翻訳
私たちは、オーダーしました。
リッケンバッカー360/12 C63だと思っていましたが、発送して頂いたギターのモデルは、リッケンバッカー360/12でした。ギターの尾の当たりが異なっており、 他のピックアップと異なるヘッドストックが、このギターに装着されています。

また、そのギターは、価格によって差異があるようです。360/12モデルは2939ドル、360/12 C63は3898ドルです。

我々は、3.224,00ドルを支払い、さらにドイツで500ユーロに近い関税をギターの為に支払いました。定価表では、およそ400ドルは安いはずです。

ギターを送り返す事でさらにかなり費用がかかることが想定されますので、私の父は、貴方の送ったギターを所有したいと考えております、。しかしながら、通常金額よりかなり高い金額を支払いましたし、関税も大変高額でした。以上の事を踏まえて、少し値下げをして頂けないでしょうか？

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私たちは、オーダーしました。
リッケンバッカー360/12 C63だと思っていましたが、発送して頂いたギターのモデルは、リッケンバッカー360/12でした。ギターの尾の当たりが異なっており、 他のピックアップと異なるヘッドストックが、このギターに装着されています。

また、そのギターは、価格によって差異があるようです。360/12モデルは2939ドル、360/12 C63は3898ドルです。

我々は、3.224,00ドルを支払い、さらにドイツで500ユーロに近い関税をギターの為に支払いました。定価表では、およそ400ドルは安いはずです。

私の父は、貴方の送ったギターを所有したいと考えておりますし、ギターを送り返す事でさらにかなり費用がかかることが想定されます。しかしながら、通常金額よりかなり高い金額を支払いましたし、関税も大変高額でした。以上の事を踏まえて、少し値下げをして頂けないでしょうか？

元の翻訳
I was born in Japan and am currently living in Tokyo.
There are many great products in Japan that we are proud of.
We want to deliver these wonderful products to you from Tokyo.
If you have any queries you want to ask about the products, please do not hesitate to contact us.
When sending lithium batteries from Japan, we are required to send them placed within the cameras. We will therefore only send batteries included in cameras.

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I was born in Japan and am currently living in Tokyo.
There are many world-class great products in Japan that we are proud of.
We want to deliver these wonderful products to you from Tokyo.
If you have any queries you want to ask about the products, please do not hesitate to contact us.
When sending lithium batteries from Japan, we are required to send them placed within the cameras. We will therefore only send batteries included in cameras.