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no77901
10 Selected Mountains you can view from the window on the road

There are many mountains in Japan you can see and enjoy the view from some points to other points.
Here are 10 selected popular mountains.

Youtei-mountain (Hokkaidou)
It represents Hokkaidou very well and the beautiful figure is called "Ezo-Maount.Fuji"

Iwaki-mountain (Aomori-prefecture, Tohoku area)
It always appears in your view when you are heading to Hirosaki from Aomori.
The posture can be seen from anywhere in Tsugaru plain.

Choukai-mountain (Yamagata-prefecture, Tohoku area)

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no77901
10 Selected Mountains you can view from the window on the road

There are many mountains in Japan you can see and enjoy the view from some points to other points.
Here are 10 selected popular mountains.

Youtei-mountain (Hokkaidou)
It represents Hokkaidou very well and the beautiful figure is called "Ezo-Mount. Fuji"

Iwaki-mountain (Aomori-prefecture, Tohoku area)
It always appears in your view when you are heading to Hirosaki from Aomori.
The posture can be seen from anywhere in Tsugaru plain.

Choukai-mountain (Yamagata-prefecture, Tohoku area)

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In Enoshima, I could see the shape on could sea at sundown, which is Mt. Fuji beyond the Sagami Bay.
The Sagami Bay has already covered by the veil of darkness. However, Mt. Fuji has been still shined by the late afternoon sun.

Mt. Fuji of the illumination on Enoshima↵
lookout and Mt. Fuji

Blinking up the illumination of Mt. Fuji on the lookout, you can see Mt. Fuji through the back of trees.

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In Enoshima, I could see the shape over cloud sea at sundown, which is Mt. Fuji beyond the Sagami Bay.
The Sagami Bay has already covered by the veil of darkness. However, Mt. Fuji has been still shining by the late afternoon sun from west.

Mt. Fuji with the illumination on the Enoshima lookout and Mt. Fuji

With illumination on the Enoshima lookout blinking up, I was looking at the illumination of Mt. Fuji, and found Mt. Fuji through the back of trees.

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I'm thinking of buying it.
Below are my requests:
I'd like you to make URL so that it can change into Article ID but not Title name.
It's no problem if you revise the PHP file by yourself.
If you use Japanese for permalink and then share on sites like Twitter, it will turn into a long URL like below.
It's a really big demerit that you can only type 140 words on Twitter.
I think there are not only problems with the Japanese language but maybe also with German, Turkish, Vietnamese, etc...
One more thing is that I would appreciate it if you can add the category name onto the title of the category page.

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I'm thinking of buying it.
Below are my requests:
I'd like you to make URL so that it can change into Article ID but not Title name.
There will be no problem if you revise the PHP file by yourself.
If you use Japanese for permalink and then share on sites like Twitter, it will turn into a long URL like below.
It's a really big demerit that you can only type 140 words on Twitter.
I think there are not only problems with the Japanese language but maybe also with German, Turkish, Vietnamese, etc...
One more thing is that I would appreciate it if you can add the category name onto the title of the category page.

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Previously, I send you two invoices and I contacted you .
Because you told me to purchase seven medals.
Have you received two invoices of eBay and paypal ?

The invoice from eBay is for five medals.
And the invoice that was sent from paypal is for two medals.
Content is the medal of 1.2.

If you want to buy seven medals, please complete the payment of two invoices.
If you want to buy only five medals, please complete payment only invoice of eBay.

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Previously, I sent you two invoices and I contacted you.
Tha't because you told me to purchase seven medals.
Have you received two invoices from eBay and paypal ?

The invoice from eBay is for the five medals.
And the invoice that was sent from paypal is for the two medals.
The content is for the medal of 1.2.

If you want to buy the seven medals, please complete the payment of the two invoices.
If you want to buy only the five medals, please complete payment only the invoice of eBay.

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Stay together even in dreams! A must-have for Otakus! The world of hug pillows.

Your life will turn colorful once you fall in love with 2D. The strong love of wanting to get hurt.. excuse me, to be together with Moe characters has now reached inside the bed. This time, we will introduce you the Dakimakura (hug pillow), which is an item that allows you have good sleep where you can be two-dimensioned whether you are awake or asleep, and is a must-have for Otakus. Which girl should I sleep with tonight?

▼What is a Dakimakura!
A Dakimakura(hug pillow) is a kind of bedclothes. Although it is defined to be a kind of pillows, it particularly refers to the bigger ones that you can hug, and often not lay under your head.

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Stay together even in dreams! A must-have for Otakus! The world of hug pillows.

Your life will turn colorful once you fall in love with 2D. The strong love of wanting to get hurt.. excuse me, to be together with Moe characters has now reached inside the bed. This time, we will introduce you the Dakimakura (hug pillow), which is an item that allows you have a good sleep where you can be two-dimensioned whether you are awake or asleep, and is a must-have for Otakus. Which girl should I sleep with tonight?

▼What is a Dakimakura!
A Dakimakura(hug pillow) is a kind of bedclothes. Although it is defined to be a kind of pillows, it particularly refers to the bigger ones that you can hug, and often not lay under your head.

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ph51322

There was the MS (Mobile Suit) named F91 which was under maintenance in the ship.

▼U.C.0153 (Zanskar War era)

Mobile Suit Victory Gundam

This Suit Victory Gundam is the last animation series during the Universal Century.
U.C.0153, since the Earth Federation Government lost their functions, the world was going into "Universal Warring Period" that hostilities had broken out everywhere. Zanskar empire founded in Side 2 hoisted Reign of Terror with the head guillotine and the Maraism based on support and sympathy. They rapidly got support from people and dispatched the Imperial Force called BESPA to the earth.

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ph51322

There was the MS (Mobile Suit) named F91 which was under maintenance in the ship.

▼U.C.0153 (Zanskar War era)

Mobile Suit Victory Gundam

This Suit Victory Gundam is the last animation series during the Universal Century.
U.C.0153, since the Earth Federation Government lost their functions, the world was going into "Universal Warring States Period" that hostilities had broken out everywhere. Zanskar empire founded in Side 2 hoisted Reign of Terror with the head guillotine and the Maraism based on support and sympathy. They rapidly got support from people and dispatched the Imperial Force called BESPA to the earth.

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It has been three years since the One Year War was over. The GANDUM Development Project was advocated under the reform project of the Earth Federal Force. Its prototype, GANDUM GP01 and GANDUM GP02 are going to be carried into Torrington Base in Australia. However, the Delaz Fleet leaded by Aiguille Delaz which is the group of Zeon forces left over from the One Year War has caught this information. They are making an attack to the base to pillage GANDUM GP02 which carries the atomic weapon in order to put a secret plan "Stardust" into motion.

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It has been three years since the One Year War was over. The GANDUM Development Project was advocated under a reform project of the Earth Federal Force. Its prototype, GANDUM GP01 and GANDUM GP02 are going to be carried into Torrington Base in Australia. However, the Delaz Fleet leaded by Aiguille Delaz which is the group of Zeon forces left over from the One Year War has caught this information. They are making an attack to the base to pillage GANDUM GP02 which carries the atomic weapon in order to put a secret plan "Stardust" into motion.

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Collaborate goods produced by AMO-chan and E hyphen world gallery has made big popularity!
On E hyphen world gallery NET, you can get variety of ladies items except for the items which E hyphen world gallery official website treats as pre-order sale.

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Collaborate goods produced by AMO-chan and E hyphen world gallery has made big popularity!
On E hyphen world gallery NET, you can get a variety of ladies items except for the items which E hyphen world gallery official fashion mail-order website treats as pre-order sale.

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al102403

The design is the footprints of the cat or something with stars,so it's so cute style with the full sense of fun that even the adult enjoy to wear.

You can wear chicly the one piece with the design of cat.

The purse's design is the cat's motif with a sense of fun.

The cat loved in all of the world.
The cat designed by each brands is so unique!
Which cat do you like?

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al102403

It has a design of cat footprint or something with stars, so it is such a cute style fully knowing how to have fun. It is so-called "adult-cute".

You can wear as a dress with a design of cat.

The purse's design is cat-motif with a sense of fun.

Cats are being loved all over the world.
Cats designed by each brands is so unique!
Which one do you like?

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al102401

Japanese remarkable fashion brands love cats!
Including Hello Kitty, cat characters are very popular. We introduce some fashion brands incorporating cat motif!

Muchacha ←→ Achuchum
Realistic cat characters! So cute!

Muchacha ←→ The cat bag, the free gift that comes with Achuchum mook, is all the rage!

Unique coordinating is a must with the realistic cat patterned dress!


Cat patterned down Jackets, too.
Surely eye-catching!
Achuchum ←→ Muchacha

Achuchum Muchacha's official webcite.

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al102401

Japanese remarkable fashion brands love cats!
Including Hello Kitty, cat characters are very popular. We introduce some fashion brands incorporating cat motif!

Muchacha ←→ Achachum
Realistic cat characters! So cute!

Muchacha ←→ The cat bag, the free gift that comes with Achachum mook, is all the rage!

Unique coordinating is a must with the realistic cat patterned dress!


Cat patterned down Jackets, too.
Surely eye-catching!
Achachum ←→ Muchacha

Achachum Muchacha's official website.

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al95001

Ageless beauty! Unbelievable body which was over 40 years old ! Ms. Risa Hirako is charming. It is natural to wish to look good with a bikini even over 40 years old. Check her approach such a natural matter !

Risa Hirako (February 14, 1971 - )
Japanese fashion model and talent.
She produces the fashion brand and the singer business.
She was called "Charismatic Model" and "Stars of the Around forty".

Her body doesn't look like 42 years old. So, Japanese women admire her body !

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al95001

Ageless beauty! Unbelievable body which is over 40 years old ! Ms. Risa Hirako is charming. It is natural for women to wish to look good in a bikini even over 40 years old. Check her who has achieved such a natural matter!

Risa Hirako (February 14, 1971 - )
Japanese fashion model and talent.
She produces the fashion brand and the singer business.
She was called "Charismatic Model" and "the Star of Around forties".

Her body doesn't look like 42 years old. So, Japanese women admire her body !

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al94901

This is a Japanese princess called "HIZAKI", as if just popping out from the Palace of Versailles. Let's see HIZAKI's top-level beauty among the other many visialized gilry characters.

She is more feminine than other genuine women.

She plays the gutar in the band called "Jupiter" which creats the fusion of
metal music sound and beautifully visualized appearance.

She has been in the nature of girl for a long time, like Marie Antoinette.
Even School uniforms do look good on her and
she remebers to hold rose flowers even in military clothes.

Sometimes fashion magazines feature on hizaki's makeup.

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al94901

This is a Japanese princess called "HIZAKI", just like a princess popping out from the Palace of Versailles. Let's see HIZAKI's top-level beauty among the other many visualized gilry characters.

She is more feminine than genuine women.

She plays the gutar in the band called "Jupiter" which creats the fusion of
metal music sound and beautifully visualized appearance.

She has been in the nature of girl for a long time, like Marie Antoinette.
Even School uniforms do look good on her and
she remebers to hold rose flowers even in military clothes.

Sometimes fashion magazines feature on hizaki's makeup.

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al94802

The points are pattern and shape of nails.

One nail has a real-looking pistol on it.
Lady GaGa's are good examples.

These artistic fashion nailｓ are produced by Aya Fukuda, Japanese Nail Artist. The fashion nail techniques born by Japanese sensitive fingers are almost the world of art.
You may try fashion nails when you visit Japan☆

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al94802

The points are the pattern and shape of nails.

One nail has a real-looking pistol on it.
World-famous Lady GaGa's are the good examples.

These artistic fashion nails of Lady GaGa are produced by Aya Fukuda, a Japanese Nail Artist. Fashion nail techniques created by Japanese sensitive fingers are almost a world of art.
Try the fashion nails when you visit Japan☆

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Shopping mall
We have not only laxury brands such as Louis Vuitton, Giorgio Armani,Bottega Veneta, Salvatore Ferragamo etc, also Zara for daily use.

Museum
Mori Art Museum which exhibits mainly contemporary arts.

Food mall
There are Japanese , French, Italian, Chinese　and German food restaurants and cafe & bar for a light meal.

Including all above, it is a fashionable commercial complex.

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Shopping mall
We have not only laxury brands such as Louis Vuitton, Giorgio Armani,Bottega Veneta, Salvatore Ferragamo etc, but also Zara for daily use.

Museum
Mori Art Museum which exhibits mainly contemporary arts.

Food mall
There are Japanese , French, Italian, Chinese and German food restaurants and cafe & bar for a light meal.

Including all above, it is a fashionable commercial complex.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>
We recognize that it become the fair wind for the manpower supply company that deregulation for the porpose of the fluidity of the employment advances.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>
We recognize that it will become a fair wind for the manpower supply industry that deregulation for the porpose of the fluidity of the employment advances.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong> Shipment representation service of the internet mail order
</strong><br></br> As you know, the growth of the Internet mail order business is remarkable.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong> Shipment representative service of the internet mail order
</strong><br></br> As you know, the growth of the Internet mail order business is remarkable.

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Be behind the wheel deeply on the seat which is set so extremely backward that to reach the rear wheel, and enjoy driving it with powerful and elegant.

This is the third generation popular model.
The car is one of open wheel cars which tires and wheel, cockpit are uncovered. The car is designed to cut an extra things extremely while keeping safety for function, and the two liter v8 engine is set in 600kg body weight. the cost per a car is several million dollars, and fuel efficiency is 1km/l. This is unordinary car.

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Sit deeply on the seat which is set extremely backward so that it can almost reach the rear wheel, and enjoy driving it with powerful and elegant.

This is the third generation popular model.
The car is one of open wheel cars which tires and wheel, cockpit are uncovered. The car is designed to cut an extra things extremely while keeping safety for function, and the two liter v8 engine is set in 600kg body weight. The cost per car is millions dollars, and fuel efficiency is 1km/l. This is a perfectly-unordinary car.