翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本人の多は8月中旬はとても長い休みを取ります。
聞いたところでは9日間とか長い人は14日間とか休みを取ります。
その休みを利用して日本人は一斉に自分の故郷に帰るんです。
自身の故郷や妻の故郷にも行きます。
子供が帰ってきた祖父や祖母はどこも大喜びです。

一斉に帰省したり旅行するので、いつも新幹線や飛行機は超満員です。高速道路は何十キロも
うんざりするほど渋滞です。もし外国の方が日本にくるなら8月中旬は避けた方が良いかもしれません。

日本語勉強されてるのですね。私も英語を勉強します。

英語

Most of Japanese takes very long holiday in mid-August.
As I heard, for example for 9 days or 14 days at longest.
Using that holiday, Japanese go back to their hometown all at once.
They visit also their own hometown or their wives’ hometown.
Every their grandfather or grandmother are overjoyed.

Because they go back or have travels simultaneously, Shinkansen or airplanes are always extremely packed. In highway, it’s jamming for several tens of kilometers, even disgustingly.
If foreigners come to Japan, they might be ought to avoid mid-August.

I see you study Japanese. I’ll study English too.

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katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/16 23:59:23

元の翻訳
Most of Japanese takes very long holiday in mid-August.
As I heard, for example for 9 days or 14 days at longest.
Using that holiday, Japanese go back to their hometown all at once.
They visit also their own hometown or their wives’ hometown.
Every their grandfather or grandmother are overjoyed.

Because they go back or have travels simultaneously, Shinkansen or airplanes are always extremely packed. In highway, it’s jamming for several tens of kilometers, even disgustingly.
If foreigners come to Japan, they might be ought to avoid mid-August.

I see you study Japanese. I’ll study English too.

修正後
Most Japanese take a very long holiday in mid-August.
From what I've heard, for example, they may take 9 days off, or 14 days at the longest.
Taking advantage of the holiday, Japanese go back to their hometowns all at once.
They visit also their own hometowns or their wives’ hometowns.
Their grandfathers and grandmothers are overjoyed by their return.

Because they all go back or go traveling simultaneously, the shinkansen and airplanes are always extremely packed. On the highways, it’s obnoxiously jammed for several tens of kilometers.
If foreigners come to Japan, they probably should avoid mid-August.

I see you study Japanese. I study English too.