翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2015/03/01 14:48:03

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

※お一人様チケット1枚につき握手会参加券は1枚のお渡しとなります。
※握手会参加券を紛失されますと握手会にご参加いただけませんので紛失されません様ご注意ください。
(握手会参加券は紛失/盗難/破損等、いかなる理由でも再発行はしませんので予めご了承ください。)
※握手会では直接本人へプレゼントや手紙をお渡しすることができません。
予め近くのスタッフまでお預けください。
※商品がなくなり次第握手会参加券の配布も終了となりますので予めご了承ください。

英語

※ We will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking for 1 ticket you have.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (We will not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason such as loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person in the hands shaking. Would you please hand it to the staff near you?
※ When we sell out the items, we will stop handing out the participation ticket. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

レビュー ( 1 )

kanon84 67
kanon84はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/03 02:13:54

元の翻訳
※ We will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking for 1 ticket you have.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (We will not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason such as loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person in the hands shaking. Would you please hand it to the staff near you?
When we sell out the items, we will stop handing out the participation ticket. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

修正後
※ We will hand 1 participation ticket for the hands shaking event in exchange for 1 ticket.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (The participation ticket for the hands shaking event will not be reissued under any circumstances, may them be loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person during the hands shaking event. Please hand it to a member of the staff near you.
We appreciate your understanding in advance that we will stop handing participation tickets for the hands shaking event when we run out of stock.

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