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元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that, now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large product like wheel I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

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Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that Boot-Console is out of stock and it is impossible to buy it.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
I was thinking that I would like to order a big quantity of items or a larger size of items like wheels from now on.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

To confirm, can I understand that there is not Boot-Console in stock and its restocking is impossible?

Also, I'm interested in sea shipment.
I was thinking that I would request sea shipment if the quantity of shipping items is bigger or the size of shipping items are larger like wheels.
If you have any details about shipping cost and shipping method, could you kindly tell us about them?

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Thank you for your reply.

Just to confirm, is it true that there is no Boot-Console in stock and that its restocking is impossible?

Also, I'm interested in sea shipment.
I was thinking that I would request sea shipment if I order a big quantity of the items or the size of the items are too big like wheels.
If you have any details about shipping cost and shipping method, could you kindly tell us about them?

元の翻訳
I received watch. I am very satisfied, thank you.
The price of black watch is $4800 but, this is price for how many items?
I want buy 50 items of black one.
Total amount of 50 items of black one is 4250 USD, is it ok?
If it is Okay I will pay via paypal $4250

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I have received the watch. I am very satisfied with it, thank you.
You have mentioned that the price of black watches is $4800 but how many watches can I get on this price?
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the total price for 50 black watches $4250?
If it is, I will pay $4250 via Paypal.

元の翻訳
I received watch. I am satisfied with it. Thank you.
The price of black watch is 4,800 dollars.
How many watches are for this price?
I want to have 50 black watches.
Are 50 black watches 4,250 dollars?
If it is so, I will pay 4,250 dollars via Paypal.

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I have received the watch. I am satisfied with it. Thank you.
You have mentioned that the price of the black watches is 4,800 dollars.
How many watches are for this price?
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the price of 50 black watches 4,250 dollars?
If it is, I will pay 4,250 dollars via Paypal.

元の翻訳
I received the watches and am very satisfied with them. Thank you very much.
You mentioned $4800 for the black watches, but I wonder how many watches is this for.
I want 50 pieces of the black watch.
Is it correct to say $4250 for 50 of the black watches?
If yes, I will send you $4250 via PayPal.

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I received the watches and am very satisfied with them. Thank you very much.
You mentioned $4800 is the total price for the black watches, but I wonder how many watches I can get on the price of $4800.
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the price for 50 black watches $4250?
If yes, I will send you $4250 via PayPal.

元の翻訳
I will not return the SLR-3R. Instead I want to order the SLR-3 (blue).↵
Hope there is stock.

I expect that this time, I will receive the right product, if not, it will be the third time the wrong product is sent. Please be sure that the product you are packing is the same from the pictures, as well as the assessories.
Also, double check the　model number inside tha bag and in the barcode tag, making sure it is the same.
Plase respond ASAP.
As you check the stock and the itens above, I will close the order.

I need the product shiped ASAP.

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I will not return SLR-3R. Instead I want to order SLR-3 (blue). Do you still have it in stock?

I expect that this time I will receive the right product, if not, I can't trust your company anymore as it will be the third time a wrong product is sent. Please make sure that the product you are packing is as the same as the one in pictures and that no accessaries will be missing.
Also, please make sure that the barcode on the tag matches the model number inside the bag.
Please reply to me ASAP.
After all the confirmations, I would like to place the order.

Your prompt reply and delivery will be highly appreciated.

元の翻訳
We are considering to buy following goods.
URL:
Product name:
-We would like to consult with you about delic\very.
Is it possible to ship by using our FEDEX account?
The shipping address is in Japan.

-We would like to consult with you about price.
Is it possible for you to offer quantity discount?
We would buy about 20 pieces and buy it on a continuous basis.

Since we would like to buy immediately, could you give us your reply by return?

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We are considering to buy the following goods.
URL:
Product name:
-We would like to consult with you about the delivery.
Is it possible to ship by using our FEDEX account?
The shipping address is in Japan.

-We would like to consult with you about the price.
Is it possible for you to offer a quantity discount?
We would buy about 20 pieces and make another purchase on a continuous basis.

Since we would like to make the purchase as soon as possible, your prompt reply will be appreciated.

元の翻訳
I am considering the purchase of the following item.
URL:
Item Name :
-Question is about shipping.
Would it be possible to have you use our FEDEX account for shipping?
Shipping address will be Japan.
-Question about pricing
Is there a volume discount?
We are considering purchasing about 20 pieces and plan on make more purchases in the future.
We would like to make the purchase soon so your prompt response is greatly appreciated.

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I am considering the purchase of the following item.
URL:
Item Name :
-Question about shipping.
Would it be possible to have you use our FEDEX account for shipping?
Shipping address will be Japan.
-Question about price
Is there a volume discount?
We are considering purchasing about 20 pieces and plan to make more purchases in the future.
We would like to make the purchase soon so your prompt response is greatly appreciated.

元の翻訳
I contact you about Sunday's lesson.
Can I change the place of lesson?
My mother uses half of our house as her office and she will be scurrying through the house doing her job.
Can we do a lesson in the cafe near the station this time?

Please come to the ticket gate at 13:50 as we planned.
I sent you a photo of me so you will be able to recognize me. Have you received it?

I am a beginner of English learning. It takes some time to understand the English grammar from learning with a textbook.
I hope I will learn it from conversation.
I look forward to your reply. Thank you.

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I am contacting you for Sunday's lesson.
Can we change the place of taking the lesson?
My mother uses half of our house as her office and she will be scurrying around the house doing her job.
Can we do the lesson in the cafe near the station this time?

Please come to the ticket gate at 13:50 as we planned.
Because this is the first time we meet, I have sent you a photo of myself, you will be able to recognize me. ↵
Have you received it?

I am a beginner of learning English. I have read some textbooks before but I still could not remember/ fully understand the grammar.
I hope I could pick up some grammar from English conversation.
I look forward to your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
About Sunday.
Could you change the study place?
A half of my house is my mother office.↵
On Sunday she works hard so could we change to the coffee shop near station?
Time is as schedule-13h50 at ticket barrier of station.
Because this is the first time we meet so I have sent you a picture so that you can recognize me, dose it arrive?
I am a English starter. Even though I read textbook but it could not remember grammar at all.
I hope that I can remember grammar when we have conversation.
I am looking forward to your reply

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It is about the lesson on Sunday.
Could we change the location?
My mother works at home and it won't be convenient for us to have a lesson in my house.↵
So could we change the place to the coffee shop near the station?
We still meet at 1:30pm as scheduled before at the ticket barrier of the station.
Because this is the first time we meet so I have sent you a picture of myself so that you can recognize me. ↵
Did you receive it?
I am a starter for learning English . Even though I read the textbook, I still could not understand the grammar at all.
I hope that I can pick up some grammar when we have English conversation.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home and our home will be busy on Sundays. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the station at 13:50? I have sent you a photo of myself so that you would recognize me when we meet there.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I have hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start out from speaking in English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be waiting to hear from you soon.

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This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home on Sundays and it is not that convenient for us. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the entrance/exit of the station at 13:50? Because this is the first time we will meet each other, I have sent a photo of myself for you to easily recognize me.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I had a hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start from speaking English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.

元の翻訳
We have just listed the guitar you requested on e-mall.

We provide guitars, including K guitars, to professional musicians not only in the U.S. but also all over the world.
We have confirmed that a KGP is now fortunately available in stock.

We can offer you a trade outside of e-mall, if you wish. In this case, we would be able to give you some discount, so please send me an e-mail if you wish.

This guitar will be accompanied by a special gig bag.
Also a hard case is available from the maker on a made-to-order basis, so please note that it should take about a month before you receive your order.

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We have just listed the guitar you requested on e-mall.

We provide guitars, including K guitars, to professional musicians not only in the U.S. but also all over the world.
We have confirmed that a KGP is now fortunately available in stock.

We can offer you a trade outside of e-mall, if you wish. In this case, we would be able to give you some discount, so please send me an e-mail if you would like to place an order.

This guitar will be accompanied by a special gig bag.
Also a hard case is available from the maker on a made-to-order basis, so please note that it should take about a month before you receive it.

元の翻訳
I made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked inventory, fortunately we currently have KGP available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside e mall.
In that case we can offer a bit of discount, so if you'd like please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
The hard case will be ordered at the manufacturer, so it will take around one month for delivery.

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I have made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we also provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked our inventory, we found that currently KGP is available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside of e mall.
In that case we can offer a small discount, so if you'd like to place an order, please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
Since the manufacturer will take the order and deliver the hard case directly, it will take around one month for delivery.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I'm contacting you in regard to the order you placed.

I'm afraid the merchandise is out of stock right now.
It will be available for shipping in 10 to 13 days.
Do you have any problem with the delay?

If this is not convenient with you, I will cancel the order.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Thank you.

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Hello,

I'm contacting you in regard to the order you have placed.

I'm afraid the merchandise is out of stock right now.
It will be available with shipping of 10 to 13 days.
Would it be alright for you?

If this is not convenient with you, I will cancel the order.
I will be looking forward to your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I'm contacting you to relate about the product that you ordered.

I am very sorry, but it is out of stock.
It will be possible to ship in 10 to 13 days, Is it Ok for you?

I will cancel the order if you want.
I will be waiting for your reply.

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Hello.

I'm contacting you for the order you have placed.

I am very sorry, but the product you have ordered is out of stock.
It will be possible to be shipped in 10 to 13 days. Would it be alright for you?

I will cancel the order if it it not convenient for you.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
因为我和我的客户间的交易是有交货期限的，
所以我在找可以立即发货给我的店铺。
请您具体的说明一下，您店铺里的所有商品，下订单后多久可以发送给我。
麻烦了，谢谢

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因为我和我的客户正在谈一笔有交货期限的交易，
所以我在找可以立即发货给我的店铺。
请您具体的说明一下，您店铺里的所有商品，下订单后多久可以发送给我。
麻烦了，谢谢↵
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元の翻訳
我做的是和客户明确交货期的生意，
所以在寻找能马上发货的店铺。
您商店里的各种商品在收到订单后到
发货需要多长时间？请具体明示。
谢谢

蜡烛提灯
提灯

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我正在和客户谈一笔要明确交货期的生意，
所以在寻找能马上发货的店铺。
您商店里的各种商品在收到订单后到
发货需要多长时间？请具体明示。
谢谢

蜡烛提灯
提灯

元の翻訳
我正和客人进行一个有交货期限的交易，
所以想找一个立即可以发货的店铺。
贵店的所有商品在订货后多久可以发送？请详细告知。
麻烦您了。

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我正和客人进行一个有交货期限的交易，
所以想找一个立即可以发货的店铺。
贵店的所有商品在订货后多久之后可以发送？请详细告知。
麻烦您了。

元の翻訳
由于我与客商正在进行有期限的某个交易，
所以我寻找立马能给我发货的货商。
请具体告诉我，您店里的所有商品，完了订货之后需要多长发货时间？
谢谢合作

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由于我与客商正在进行有期限的某个交易，
所以我在寻找立马能给我发货的货商。
请具体告诉我，您店里的所有商品，订完货之后需要多长发货时间？
谢谢合作

元の翻訳
Article 2: Definition
The meanings of the terms used in the present Terms and Conditions will be set forth in each of the following items.
1) "This app" is the smartphone app (iOS / Android) called as "A" we manage.
2) "This service" is all the services that are provided in this app.
3) "The User" is the person registered as a member for the purpose of using this app.
4) "Information" is the image which can be posted using this service.
5) "Posting" is the action in whch the user uploads the images to this app.

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Article 2: Definition
The meanings of the terms used in the present Terms and Conditions will be set forth in each of the following items.
1) "This app" is the smartphone app (iOS / Android) called as "A" we manage.
2) "This service" is all the services that are provided in this app.
3) "The User" is the person who registered as a member for the purpose of using this app.
4) "Information" is the image which can be posted using this service.
5) "Posting" is the action in whch the user uploads the images to this app.

元の翻訳
I run a shop sells imported shoes in Japan.

J CREW brand has very high demand here but they are hard to come by.

Can I buy different sizes and colors of this product?

If so, I would like to know the price.

I'm thinking of buying 5 for now.

I would do my best to make this business attractive to you, too.

Looking forward to your help!

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I run a shop sells imported shoes in Japan.

J CREW is a highly-demanded series here but it is always hard to get one.

Can I buy different sizes and colors of this product?

If so, I would like to know the price.

I'm thinking about buying 5 for now.

I would do my best to make this business attractive to you too.

Let's make a win-win business together!

元の翻訳
I might made mistake in reading the master craftsman’s name engraved on the chisel. (for craftsman’s name please refer to images.)
Unused chisel of master craftsman kept at his home.
It is unused, but please confirm the condition by the images.

If you would like to purchase my recommending items, would you be able to make payment when two or three of those are in my stock?
(Because I am listing the items at eBay, I would like to have the budget for purchasing the other items.)
We would like to request you to pay the shipping cost together with your final payment prior to the shipment.

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I might made a mistake in reading the master craftsman’s name engraved on the chisel. (for craftsman’s name please refer to images.)
Unused chisel for master craftsman is kept at his home.
It is unused, but please confirm the condition by the images.

If you would like to purchase my recommending items, would you be able to make payment when two or three of those are in my stock?
(Because I am listing the items at eBay, I would like to have the budget for purchasing the other items.)
We would like to request you to pay the shipping cost together with your final payment prior to the shipment.

元の翻訳
I may have mistaken how to read the signature sculptured in the chisel.(Signature is in the photo.)
I resharpend it simply and put camellia oil.But it has little damage because it is old chisel.Excuse it.

Chisel for professional Not used in keeping at home
Confirm the condition in the image,It's not used but has been in keeping long term.

I will buy the goods you selected.When are 2-3 goods saved,can you pay the price for me at that time?
(I sell the goods on ebay,so I want money for purchase other goods.)
Postage, you need to calculate at the last payment before shipping.

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I may have made a mistake of how to read the signature sculptured in the chisel.(Signature is in the photo.)
I resharpend it simply and put camellia oil on it. But please understand that it has some damage because it is an old chisel.

Chisel for professional is not used for keeping at home.
Though It's not used for a long time but has been kept in a good condition. You can confirm the condition of it in the image.

I will buy the goods you have selected. When there are 2 or 3 goods saved, can you pay me at that time?
( I sell the goods on eBay, so I want money for purchasing other goods.)
Please calculate the shipping costs at the last payment before shipping.

元の翻訳
Borns out from bamboo, quickly grows up as a beautiful girl, shakes suitors in turns, then leaves to the moon with the messenger who came to pick. The is the plot of The Tale Of Daketory (Bamboo-Cutter). The slogan, “Crime and punishment of the princess” gives us an unusual atmosphere. Why Kaguya Hime chose the earth from many stars? What did she thought in this planet? Why she had to leave? What was her crime? Then what was her punishment? The story approaches tightly to the truth of the ambiguous questions of the original story.

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She was born from a bamboo forest, quickly grew up to a beautiful girl, turned down all the suitors coming for her , then left to the moon with the messenger who came to pick her. The is the plot of The Tale Of Daketory (Bamboo-Cutter). The slogan, “Crime and punishment of the princess” leaves us doubtful. Why Kaguya Hime chose the earth rather than other stars? What did she think about this planet? Why she had to leave? What was her crime? Then what was her punishment? The story approaches tightly to the truth of the ambiguous questions of the original story.

元の翻訳
I have just called Fedex and informed that the box has been broken and the contents are out of the broken bags. Fedex told that they would call your company.
Fedex would make the payment, so please arrange all the items for this order I made.
In addition, heat adhesive used for the bags is not strong enough to stand the air pressure in the airplane, so the contents come out of the bags.
The bags may be broken if you arrange the same way as before, so please use the bags which can stand the air pressure.
Also, please don't forget to include A61.
The quality of PET was really good.
I attach the photo of this tragic situation.

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I have just called Fedex and informed that the box has broken and the contents are out of the broken bags. Fedex told me that they would call your company.
Fedex would make the payment, so please arrange all the items for this order I made.
In addition, heat adhesive used for the bags was not strong enough to stand the air pressure in the airplane, so the contents came out of the bags.
The bags may break if you use the same ones as before, so please use the bags which can stand the air pressure.
Also, please don't forget to include A61.
The quality of PET was really good.
I will attach a photo of this terrible incident.