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Hello,

My name is 〇〇, I have ordered (Order No: 3160152) on September 20th.

Have you received my order?
Have you had any problems authorizing or charging my credit card?
Could you please let me know when this order will be shipped?

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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Hello,

My name is 〇〇. I have placed an order (Order No: 3160152) on September 20th.

Have you received my order?
Have you had any problems authorizing or charging my credit card?
Could you please let me know when the item will be shipped?

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
Hello,

I am ○○ who placed the order on Sep. 20.
Order No. was 3160152

Have you received my order?
Was the verification of my credit card successful?
When will you ship the item?

I will be waiting for your reply.

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Hello,

I am ○○ who placed the order on Sep. 20.
Order No. is 3160152

Have you received my order?
Has my credit card been approved?
When will you ship the item?

I will be waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I'm OO who placed order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you accepted my order?
Was my credit card approved?
What date will you send the item?

I look forward for your reply.

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Hello,

I'm OO who placed an order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you received my order?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the item be delivered?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I am XXXX who placed an order on Sep, 20th.
Order No. 3160152

Was my order received?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the product be shipped?

I will be waiting for some contact

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Hello.

I am XXXX who placed an order on Sep, 20th.
Order No. 3160152

Was my order received?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the product be shipped?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I will make the payment by tomorrow.
Could you please make the invoice with a little lower price than the actual price and attach to the email?

Do you think you still have more items in stock?
I would like to order the following items.

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I will make the payment by tomorrow.
Could you please make the price a little bit lower than the tagged price and attach it to the invoice?

Do you still have more items in stock?
I would like to order the following items.

元の翻訳
I will make a payment by tomorrow.
Would it be ok with you to put lower value on invoice and attach it?

Do you have other products in stock?
I would like to purchase the products listed below.

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I will make a payment by tomorrow.
Would it be alright if you lower the price a little bit and attach it to the invoice?

Do you still have other products in stock?
I would like to purchase the products listed below.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your information regarding the lifting of suspension of my seller account.
I am really grateful that you could give me the opportunity to sell the items at eBay again.

I will abide the advices you have given and take this opportunity to carry on my successful business by giving the satisfaction to the customers and striving as for the lasting prosperity together with you/

I do hope you will give me further guidance and encouragement in the future

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Thank you for your contact and reactivating my account.
I am really grateful that you could give me the opportunity to sell my products on eBay again.

I will abide by the advice you have given me and take this opportunity to carry on my successful business by delivering high customer satisfaction and strive to continue the lasting prosperity together with your company

I do hope you will give me further guidance and encouragement in the future

元の翻訳
Thank you for reactivating the account and contacting me.
I am glad to get the opportunity to sell products on ebay again.

We would take your advice and try out best to satisfy the buyers to make our business successful.
We would like to continue to build a lasting prosperity together with your company.

Thank you for your continued business guidance and encouragement.

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Thank you for contacting me and reactivating my account.
I am glad to get the opportunity to sell products on eBay again.

I would take your advice and try my best to satisfy the buyers to make our business successful.
I would like to continue to build a lasting prosperity together with your company.

I will always appreciate your further business guidance and encouragement.↵
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Best Regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact and reactivating my account.
I am really glad that I can sell at ebay once again.

I'd like to make good use of this advice from you only to satisfy my buyers and make my business prosper as well as yours.

I will always appreciate your advice.

Regards,

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Thank you for your contact and reactivating my account.
I am really glad that I can sell my products on eBay again.

I would like to make good use of this piece of advice from you, strive to satisfy my buyers and prosper my business as well as yours.

I will always appreciate your advice and encouragement.

Best Regards,

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me and re-opening the account.
I am happy that I have the chance to sell my products on ebay again.

I will take into account the advice you have given me, and strive to succeed in my business by making my customers happy.I hope that we can continue with this successful relationship.

I hope that you can give me more advice to better myself.
Kind regards.

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Thank you for contacting me and reactivating my account.
I am happy that I have the chance to sell my products on ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice you have given me, and strive to succeed in my business by making my customers satisfied and continue to prosper business with your company.

I hope that you can give me more advice as well as encouragement.
Kind regards.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice I received in this opportunity from you and seek for the full satisfaction of the buyers, succeeding my business and developing a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for further orientations and colaboration.
Best Regards,

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Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice I have received from you and seek to deliver high customer satisfaction. Also I would like to succeed my business and develop a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for any further guidance and encouragement.
Best Regards,

元の翻訳
If the conditions gets , I would like to use the video as product, but how should I proceed with the right processing? As the licence company doesn't seem to be operating in Japan yet. could you indicate how I shouold apply? I would also like to know the cost for application. About the song A, is the arranger credited as the composer, and am I right to believe that it is A? After checking the rights, the video I'll be using this time is the following. How is the production going? Please let me know as I would like to schedule this within the year.

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If the conditions allows , I would like to use the video as a product, but how should I proceed with the right processing? As the licensed company doesn't seem to be operating in Japan yet. Could you indicate me that how I can apply for it? I would also like to know the cost for application. About the song A, is the arranger credited as the composer, and is there any problem referring to the recognition of A? After checking the rights, the video I'll be using this time is the following. How is the production going? Please let me know as I would like to make a schedule of next year.

元の翻訳
"Audio, Home Theater Exhibition 2013" will be held for 3 days from October 18 to 20 at Time 24 in Odaiba, Tokyo. The host is Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the exhibition of audio instrument and many seminars and trial listening, there is going to be various events such as experiencing the famous high resolution sound source, the demonstration of super high vision image(8k) by NHK, the show of new releases by CASIOPEA 3rd, the string quartet by women, workshop, trial listening for the combined component stereo, public recording of music bird etc.

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"Audio, Home Theater Exhibition 2013" will be held for 3 days from October 18th to 20th at Time 24 Building in Odaiba, Tokyo. It will be sponsored by Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the exhibition of audio components and many seminars and auditions, various events will also be held such as a free audition of the famous high-resolution sound source, the demonstration of super high vision image(8k) by NHK, the show of new releases by CASIOPEA 3rd, a female string quartet, music studios, an audition of combination component stereo, a public recording of music bird etc.

元の翻訳
Audio Home Theatre Expo will be held in Time↵
24, Odaiba, Tokyo from 18 to21 of October, held by the Japan Audio Organization.

In addition to showing the Audio machines and many seminars and listening experiences, many events are planned like people can enjoy the high resolution audio player which is highly rumored, the demonstration of supervision (8K) picture by NHK and new music introduction by Casiopea 3rd, a live music by female quartet group and handicrft class, and also the experience in the combination component, open recording of the music bird and so on.

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"Audio Home Theatre Expo 2013" sponsored by Japan Audio Organization will be held at Time 24 Building in Odaiba Tokyo, from 18th to 20th of October.

In addition to displaying audio components, seminars and auditions, many events are planned such as people can enjoy the high-resolution audio player, the demonstration of supervision (8K) picture by NHK and a new music introduction by Casiopea 3rd, live music by female quartet group, music studios, an audition of a combination component stereo, a public recording of the music bird and so on.

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“Audio-Home Theater Exhibition 2013” will be held for 3 days from Oct. 18 to 20 at Time 24 located in Odaiba, Tokyo as the venue. The sponsor will be the Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the display of audio equipments and a number of seminars/trial listening, the organizer provided various events including the hot-topic high resolution music experience and the NHK’s demonstration of super high definition (8K) image, presentation of the new release of CASIOPEA 3rd and performance of the string quartet by women group, the crafts construction course and others, and trial listening of combination component stereo and the public recording of the Music Bird and others.

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“Audio-Home Theater Exhibition 2013” will be held for 3 days from Oct. 18th to 20th at Time 24 Building in Odaiba, Tokyo. The sponsor will be Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the display of audio equipments and a number of seminars/trial listening, the organizer provides various events including the hot-topic high resolution music experience, NHK’s demonstration of super high definition (8K) image, presentation of the new release of CASIOPEA 3rd and performance of a female string quartet, music studios, and a trial listening of combination component stereo and a public recording of the Music Bird.

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The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component lstening association and music bird public recording among others,

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The exhibition of Audio Home Theatre 2013 will be held for three days from October 18th to 20th by Nippon Audio Company in the Time 24 Building of Odaiba Tokyo.

Besides the exhibition of audio machinery and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, music studios, a free stereo audition of digital audio player combination and a public recording of the music bird.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
As I do not own iPhone 5s myself, I cannot confirm if this phone case matches iPhone 5s.
It would be great if you could confirm whether this case is suitable for both iPhone5 and Phone5s or not, and let me know.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but I'll be looking forward to hearing back from you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
As I do not own iPhone 5s myself, I cannot confirm if this iphone case matches iPhone 5s.
It would be great if you could confirm and then tell me whether this case is suitable for both iPhone5 and iPhone5s or not.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but I'll be looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Battery: needed
Age: 0 ~ around 1 year and 6 months old
Safety: marked ST (given by Japanese Toy Association to those that are proven to be safe)

Develops the ability to think and create while playing.
The magnet allows you to make all kinds of shapes.

This is a gym for babies until they can stand up.
It can be used for the mobile period, playing period to their standing period.
The high quality music and the noises from the womb, plus the lamps for night time will help with diaper changing at night.

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Battery: needed
Age: 0 to around 1 year and half years old
Safety: ST mark ( a mark given by Japanese Toy Association which proves meeting the standard of safe toys.)

Thinking and creative abilities can be built while playing.
The magnet allows you to make all kinds of shapes.

This is a gym that provides long play opportunities for babies from the period of lying and sitting on the ground to the period of being able to stand on their own.
Merry, play gym and stand play gym can also be used for a long period.
The high quality music, the womb sounds and the lamps for night time will help diaper changing at night.

元の翻訳
Battery: Needed
Target Age: From 0 to 1 and a half years
Safety Standards: ST Mark (a mark given to toys that are acknowledged as meeting the basic standards of safety, as determined by the Japan Toy Association)

Through play, a child's thinking and building skills can be developed.
Many types of shapes can be formed through magnetism.

This is a gym suitable for babies that will provide long play opportunities from the period when they are just lying and sitting to the time when they're able to stand on their own.
Merry's Play and Stand Gym can be used for a long time.
It can also help with nighttime grumpiness and diaper changes thanks to high quality music, womb sounds, and the attached lamp.

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Battery: Needed
Target Age: From 0 to 1 and a half years
Safety Standards: ST Mark (a mark given to toys that are acknowledged as meeting the basic standards of safety by the Japan Toy Association)

Through playing, a child's thinking and building skills can be developed.
Many types of shapes can be formed through arranging the magnets.

This is a gym that provides long play opportunities for babies from the period when they are just lying and sitting on the ground to the period when they're able to stand on their own.
Merry's Play and Stand Gym can be used for a long time.
It can also help with nighttime grumpiness and diaper changes thanks to high quality music, womb sounds, and the attached lamp.

元の翻訳
Japan Tourism Association will organize the renewed <travel amusement park "Travel fair Japan 2013"> for three days from November 3rd to 10th at the exhibition hall in Sunshine City cultural hall. Last year 130 exhibitors, 270 communities, companies and groups participated in the exhibition and 93,099 people visited the event.

In the 18th event of this year, they set up seven theme areas and appeal the charm of domestic travel more than last year. The sightseeng resources of each regions will be appealed as a <travel amusument park> which enables to experience the joy of the travel in addition to 'look' and 'know' the things.

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Japan Tourism Promotion Association will organize the renewed <travel amusement park "Travel fair Japan 2013"> for three days from November 8th to 10th at the exhibition hall in Sunshine City cultural hall. Last year, 130 exhibitors including different regions, companies and groups at 270 exhibition booths participated in the fair and 93,099 people visited it.

This year, it is the 18th time of this fair. In order to attract tourists with domestic sightseeings more than before, seven theme areas were built for this fair. Besides making tourists see and know about the sightseeings, <Travel Amusement Park> enables tourists to experience the joy of the travel with the appeal of regional tourism resources.

元の翻訳
Japan Tourist Association will hold renewed "Travel Amusement Park [Travel Fair Japan 2013]" in the exhibition hall of Sunshine City Culture Center for three days from November 8 to 10. Last year it was held with 130 exhibitors incluring regions, companies and organizations and 270 exhibition stands and 93,099 people came.

This time, as its 18th exhibition, there are 7 theme areas and attracts people more with national sightseeing than usual. It appeals peopel with sightseeing materials as "Trabel Amusement Park" where people can experience not only "seeing" and "knowing" but also "enjoying" the attraction of travels.

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Japan Tourist Association will hold renewed "Travel Amusement Park [Travel Fair Japan 2013]" in the exhibition hall of Sunshine City Culture Center for three days from November 8th to 10th. Last year there were 130 exhibitors from different regions, companies, organizations at 270 exhibition stands and 93,099 people came to take part in the fair.

This time, as its 18th exhibition, there are 7 theme areas which attract people more with domestic sightseeings than before. Not only "see" and "know" about the sightseeings, "Travel Amusement Park" offers people the opportunity of experiencing and enjoying the sightseeings.

元の翻訳
Japan Tourism Association will hold a renewal travel amusement park 'Travel Fair Japan 2013' in Sunshine city cultural exhibition hall for 3 days from 8th to 10th November. Last year, they had exhibitors from 130 areas, companies and groups and delivered 270 exhibition stands, and had 93,099 visitors.

It will be 18th this time, we will have 7 different areas for each themes, and we expect more inland tourists to visit than ever. Not only 'seeing' and 'knowing', we offer the experiment of enjoyment of travelling with 'Amusement park of travel' and make an appeal tourism resources of each areas.

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Japan Tourism Association will hold a renewal travel amusement park 'Travel Fair Japan 2013' in Sunshine city cultural exhibition hall for 3 days from 8th to 10th of November. Last year, we had exhibitors from 130 areas, companies and groups and exhibited 270 stands, and had 93,099 visitors.

It will be the 18th this time, we will have 7 different areas for each themes, and expect to attract more domestic tourists. Not only 'seeing' and 'knowing', we offer the experience of enjoyment of travelling with 'Amusement park of travel' and appeal more tourists with regional tourism resources.

元の翻訳
The newly attired "Travel Amusement Park: Travel Fair Japan 2013" will be held by Japan Tourism Promotion Association from November 8th to 10th in Sunshine City Cultural Exhibition Hall. There were 93,099 people participated last year, including exhibitors from 130 regions/companies/groups at 270 booths.

This year will be the 18th time of the exhibition. There will be 7 theme areas which display much more attractions of national tourism than previous years.
Not just "seeing" and "learning", but to experience the fun of many regional tourism resources is one of the aspects of the "Travel Amusement Park".

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The newly attired "Travel Amusement Park: Travel Fair Japan 2013" will be held by Japan Tourism Promotion Association from November 8th to 10th in Sunshine City Cultural Exhibition Hall. There were 93,099 people last year, including exhibitors from 130 regions/companies/groups at 270 booths.

This year will be the 18th time of the exhibition. There will be 7 theme areas which display much more attractions of national tourism than previous years.
Not just "seeing" and "learning", but to experience the fun of many regional tourism resources is one of the aspects of the "Travel Amusement Park".

元の翻訳
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關於『kawara』
『kawara』取得Google新聞的RSS feed並呈現

呈現的順序是依照取得新聞資訊時的順序來排列，並非依照新聞的時間來排列

文章是由Google新聞的RSS feed及報社網站等資訊來源所提供，本社不保證內容的正確性、安全性及使用結果。
"關於Google新聞

(以Safari開啟)

元の翻訳
關於「kawara」
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顯示的順序為取得文章訊息時，RSS feed的順序，不是依文章的時間來排序的。

文章是Google新聞的RSS feed以及報社網站等訊息提供來源所提供的，本公司並不保證其內容，正確性，安全性，使用後果等等。
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關於「kawara」
「kawara」是在取得Google新聞的RSS feed後才顯示出來。

顯示的順序依照取得文章訊息時RSS feed的順序而不是依文章的時間來排序。

文章是由Google新聞的RSS feed以及報社網站等訊息提供來源所提供的，本公司並不保證其內容，正確性，安全性，使用後果等等。
“關於Google新聞

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