翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

お世話になっております。

ご注文いただきました商品に関しましてご連絡いたします。

大変申し訳ございませんが、この商品は現在在庫がありません。
10〜13日程度で発送が可能になりますが、よろしいですか？

もし都合が悪ければ注文をキャンセルさせていただきます。
ご連絡お待ちしております。

英語

Hello.

I'm contacting you to relate about the product that you ordered.

I am very sorry, but it is out of stock.
It will be possible to ship in 10 to 13 days, Is it Ok for you?

I will cancel the order if you want.
I will be waiting for your reply.

レビュー ( 2 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/12 20:59:45

元の翻訳
Hello.

I'm contacting you to relate about the product that you ordered.

I am very sorry, but it is out of stock.
It will be possible to ship in 10 to 13 days, Is it Ok for you?

I will cancel the order if you want.
I will be waiting for your reply.

修正後
Hello.

I'm contacting you about the product that you ordered.

I am very sorry, but it is out of stock.
It will be possible to ship in 10 to 13 days, Is it OK for you?

I will cancel the order if you want.
I will be waiting for your reply.

jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/09 16:33:03

元の翻訳
Hello.

I'm contacting you to relate about the product that you ordered.

I am very sorry, but it is out of stock.
It will be possible to ship in 10 to 13 days, Is it Ok for you?

I will cancel the order if you want.
I will be waiting for your reply.

修正後
Hello.

I'm contacting you for the order you have placed.

I am very sorry, but the product you have ordered is out of stock.
It will be possible to be shipped in 10 to 13 days. Would it be alright for you?

I will cancel the order if it it not convenient for you.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

[jasmine_66]

The 4th sentence should be: It will be possible to ship the product in 10 to 13 days.