Jasmine (jasmine_66) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I have just received the item.
However, most of the packages of beads are broken and the beads are spilled in the box.
The package box in your picture is not the one I have received.
Attached is the picture of the one I received. Please check whether the box you sent is correct.
I'm wondering whether the box has been swapped at some point during shipment.
Currently, different kinds of beads are mixed in the box, so they cannot be used any more.
I will send the picture of this later.
Additionally, the black beads which were missing in the previous shipment have not been included.
Please don't forget to send them next time.

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I have just received the item.
However, most of the packages of beads are broken and the beads are spilled in the box.
The package box in your picture is not the one I have received.
The attached picture is the one I received. Please check whether the box you sent is correct.
I'm wondering whether the box has been swapped at some point during its shipment.
Currently, different kinds of beads are mixed in the box, so they cannot be used any more.
I will send the picture of this later.
Additionally, the black beads which were missing in the previous shipment have not been included.
Please don't forget to send them next time.

元の翻訳
I am masa who has contact you from PAYPAL.
Once again, I would like to send to this e-mail address.
Last time, I purchased a water purifier.
But it does not water properly
Therefore, I ask for the return of goods
In addition, i want to purchase one more water purifier so could you ship 2 products at one postage?
If you refund to me this water purifier, i will order again another 2 water purifier.
Which solution do you want to do?
I want to return the product from Japan, so it is possible if you pay that postage?

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I am masa who has contacted you from PAYPAL.
I would like to send it to this e-mail address as well.
Last time, I purchased a water filter.
But it didn't work properly
Therefore, I would like to have a refund.
In addition, I want to purchase one more water filter so could you ship 2 products with the price of one product?
It is also alright if you refund me first and then I will order another 2 water filter.
Which solution do you prefer?
I want to return the product from Japan, so is it possible that you could cover the shipping cost?

元の翻訳
This is masa who sent a message through PayPal.

Let me send a message to this email address again.

I bought a water filter last time.

But this filter wouldn't supply water properly.

So, I would like to return this product.

I will buy one more water filter, so could you send me two products with the price of one product?

Or, I don't mind to get the pay back first, and I order two items after that.

Which is better for you?

I will return this from Japan, so could you cover the shipping expenses?

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This is masa who sent a message through PayPal.

Let me send a message to this email address again.

I bought a water filter last time.

But this filter wouldn't supply water properly.

So, I would like to return this product.

I will buy one more water filter, so could you send me two products with the price of one product?

Or, I don't mind to get the refund first, and then order two items after that.

Which is better for you?

I will return this from Japan, so could you cover the shipping expenses?

元の翻訳
我会发送文件，敬请确认

此外，此次也联系晚了，真是抱歉。

此次，想购买的清单，希望务必在11月11日之前完成购买。

也可以认为将追加发送购买预定清单

正如您所知的那样，淘宝将于11月11日进行大甩卖，所以这边将一次性进行11月和12月部分的采购。

海外汇款每次的汇款额已有规定，因为此次金额会变大，所以也许会分几次汇款

日本也是年底商战挣钱的好时候，让我们彼此不断赚钱吧！

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我会发送文件，敬请确认

此外，此次也联系晚了，真是抱歉。

此次，想购买的清单，希望务必在11月11日之前完成购买。

也可能发送追加购买预定清单

正如您所知的那样，淘宝将于11月11日进行大甩卖，所以这边将一次性进行11月和12月部分的采购。

海外汇款每次的汇款额已有规定，因为此次金额会变大，所以也许会分几次汇款

日本也是年底商战挣钱的好时候，让我们大赚一笔吧！

元の翻訳
请确认一下发送的文件。

另外，很抱歉这次又联系你晚了。

这次在11月11日这一天（之前）务必要把采购清单（里的货物）买好了。

还有可能会要追加发送进货的预定清单。

想必您也知道，淘宝网会在11月11日举行大甩卖活动，

所以就在这边把11月和12月的货一下子全进了吧。

海外汇款的每一次的汇款额都是有限额的，且这次的汇款金额很大，所以可能会分成几次汇给你的。

在日本也是年底的商战季，正是好赚的时候，所以一起多赚些吧。

修正後
请确认一下发送的文件。

另外，很抱歉这次又联系你晚了。

这次在11月11日这一天（之前）务必要把采购清单（里的货物）买好了。

还有可能会发送追加进货的预定清单。

想必您也知道，淘宝网会在11月11日举行大甩卖活动，

所以就在这边把11月和12月的货一下子全进了吧。

海外汇款的每一次的汇款额都是有限额的，且这次的汇款金额很大，所以可能会分成几次汇给你的。

在日本也是年底的商战季，正是好赚的时候，所以一起多赚些吧。

元の翻訳
很抱歉联络晚了
刚刚将资料传给您、请帮忙确认
这次希望你们采购的内容、请务必在11/11这天、全部都可以买完
也有可能会追加要请采购的清单
应该您也知道、我们汤包准备在11月11日这天进行大拍卖、所以11月还有12月份的
材料都一起采购近来
海外汇款的金额、虽然都一次性的决定价格、但是由于此次的金额比较大
有可能会分几次会给您也说不定
日本也到年末、商场的竞争激烈、刚好也是赚钱的机会
我们一起加油多挣点钱罗!!

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很抱歉联络晚了
刚刚将资料传给您，请麻烦确认
这次希望你们采购的内容、请务必在11/11这天，全部都可以买完
也有可能会追加要再采购的清单
应该您也知道，淘宝网准备在11月11日这天进行大拍卖，所以11月还有12月份的
材料都一起采购进来
海外汇款的金额，虽然一直都是一次性的汇完，但是由于此次的金额比较大
有可能会分几次汇给您也说不定
日本也到年末，商场的竞争激烈，正好也是赚钱的机会
我们一起加油多挣点钱!

元の翻訳
I have a few questions again.

1. What the breakdown of the amount of purchase should look like?

Is there any items required to be purchased?
We hope to select items we consider popular in Japan .
Can we pick up specific items to buy?

2. What is the price range the Japanese seller is buying from?

3. Do you provide warranties to your items?

If yes, what are the conditions for a return?

4. What shipping methods are expected?

Also, how much are the approximate shipping costs, if available, for both U.S. domestic and international to Japan?

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I have a few questions again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?

Is there any items required to be purchased?
We hope to select items which are popular in Japan .
Can we pick up specific items to buy?

2. What is the price range the Japanese seller can offer?

3. Do you provide your items with warranties?

If yes, what are the conditions for returning items?

4. What kind of shipping methods will be applied?

Also, if you know how much are the approximate shipping costs for both U.S. domestic and international to Japan, please inform me of it.

元の翻訳
Please let me confirm a few things again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?
Are there anything in particular that we must purchase?
We would like to pick up products that are popular in the Japanese market.
Are we allowed to choose them?

2. Could you tell me the price ranges of current Japanese sellers?

3. Do the products come with warranty?
If so, please give us the conditions for returning products.

4. How will the products be delivered?
Also, please inform us with the shipping costs if you know them.
We would like to know the shipping costs within the US as well as to Japan.

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Please let me confirm a few things again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?
Are there anything in particular that we must purchase?
We would like to pick up products that are popular in the Japanese market.
Are we allowed to choose them?

2. Could you tell me the price ranges that current Japanese sellers offer?

3. Do the products come with warranty?
If so, please give us the conditions for returning products.

4. How will the products be delivered?
Also, please inform us with the shipping costs if you know them.
We would like to know the shipping costs within the US as well as to Japan.

元の翻訳
我有件事情想要询问你。
我之前都是在淘宝上买东西，因为阿里巴巴上比较便宜，所以想说在阿里巴巴上买，阿里巴巴上的商品是不是经常没有货啊？还有，在阿里巴巴上的买了东西是不是不能马上发货啊？因为我做的买卖是有时间限制的，所以想要问问你在这点上，阿里巴巴和淘宝的区别是什么？
很抱歉给你添麻烦，还请多多赐教！

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我有件事情想要询问你。
我之前都是在淘宝上买东西，因为阿里巴巴上比较便宜，所以想说在阿里巴巴上买，阿里巴巴上的商品是不是经常没有货啊？还有，是不是不能马上发货啊？因为我做的买卖是有时间限制的，所以想要问问你阿里巴巴和淘宝的区别是什么？
很抱歉给你添麻烦，还请多多赐教！

元の翻訳
想跟您咨询一件事情
我一直在淘宝网站购买商品的， 可是阿里巴巴网站的商品稍微便宜一点 所以想在这里购买商品，
在阿里巴巴网站购买商品时，是不是经常缺货呢？
另外 能不能马上发货呢？
因为我做的买卖是有交货期的，所以请告诉以下跟淘宝网站的区别？
给您添麻烦了 请多多指教。

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想跟您咨询一件事情
我一直在淘宝网站购买商品， 可是阿里巴巴网站的商品稍微便宜一点 所以想在这里购买商品，
在阿里巴巴网站购买商品时，是不是经常缺货呢？
另外 能不能马上发货呢？
因为我做的买卖是有交货期的，所以请告诉我阿里巴巴跟淘宝网站的区别？
给您添麻烦了 请多多指教。

元の翻訳
我有件事想问你。
我至今一直在淘宝上购买，但因为阿里巴巴更便宜，
我想在阿里巴巴上购买，阿里巴巴的商品经常没有库存吗？
并且，会立即不能发送吗？
因为我一直在进行有交货期的交易，
所以希望你告诉我与淘宝的差异。
给您添麻烦了，十分抱歉，但请您告知为盼。

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我有件事想问你。
我至今一直在淘宝上购买，但因为阿里巴巴更便宜，
我想在阿里巴巴上购买，阿里巴巴的商品经常没有库存吗？
并且，不能立即发送吗？
因为我一直在进行有交货期的交易，
所以希望你告诉我与淘宝的差异。
给您添麻烦了，十分抱歉，但请您告知为盼。

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for coming up. I would like to explain how to play Fukuwarai.

Fist of all, each representative put on this blindfold.
Then, try to make a nice face when the mc give a cue.

(Place a sheet of paper with a face having no features)
This is a face, but doesn't have eyes, nose or mouth.

(Taking pieces of the face part with magnet attached, then place them in the place.
Mention "eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth each time you place them)

(Showing the complete face) Let's make a nice face like this.

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Thank you very much for coming and I would like to explain how to play Fukuwarai to you.

Fist of all, each representative puts on this blindfold.
Then, try to make a nice face when the mc gives a cue.

(Place a sheet of paper with a face having no features)
This is a face without eyes, nose or mouth.

(Taking pieces of the face parts with magnet attached, then place them on the face.
Mention "eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth each time you place them)

(Showing the completed face) Let's make a nice face like this.

元の翻訳
Thank you for coming up to the podium.
I would now like to explain how to play Fuku-warai game.

The leader of the group, please cover the eyes.

With the signal from the emcee, please start making the faces here.

(A plain drawing of a face is posted on the board)
This is a face. There are no eyes, noses or mouths.

(You would pick magnets in the shape of eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth from the bag and stick them on the drawing of the face posted. Every time you pick a magnet, you should say; eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth)

(Pointing at the completed face)
Let's make a good looking face like this.

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Thank you for coming up to the podium.
I would now like to explain how to play Fuku-warai game.

The leader of the group, please cover your eyes.

With the signal from the emcee, please start making the faces here.

(A plain drawing of a face is posted on the board)
This is a face. There are no eyes, noses or mouths.

(You would pick magnets in the shape of eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth from the bag and stick them on the drawing of the face posted. Every time you pick a magnet, you should say; eyebrow, eye, nose or mouth)

(Pointing at the completed face)
Let's make a good looking face like this.

元の翻訳
Firstly, We sorry to inform that ... group is not the most handsome.
Let try your best next time!!!
Secondly, ...Group is a little handsome.
Congratulation!!!
And the most handsome is ...group!!!
Congratulation!!!
And now is the second game.
In this second game,,,
And the 2 games are over. And now i am happy to announce the final ranking
" Determine ranking"
So We will announce the winner.

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Firstly, We are sorry to inform that ... group is the least handsome.
Let try your best next time!!!
Secondly, ...group is a little handsome.
Congratulation!!!
And the most handsome is ...group!!!
Congratulation!!!
And now is the second game.
In this second game,,,
Now the second game has finished and i am happy to announce the final ranking.
" Decide ranking"
So We will announce the winner.

元の翻訳
First, the least good looking, unfortunately, is the Group◯◯！
Let's look forward to the next challenge!!

Then comes the more or less good looking is the Group ◯◯！
Congratulations!!

And the most good looking is the Group ◯◯！
Congratulations!!!

Let's move on to the second challenge.
[The second game is going on...]

The second game is over now and I'm announcing the final result.

[The result is out]
I'm now happy to announce the winner.

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First, the least good looking, unfortunately, is the Group◯◯！
Let's look forward to the next challenge!!

Then comes the more or less good looking is the Group ◯◯！
Congratulations!!

And the most good looking is the Group ◯◯！
Congratulations!!!

Let's move on to the second challenge.
[The second game is going on...]

The second game is over now and I'm announcing the final result.

[The result has come out]
I'm now happy to announce the winner.

元の翻訳
After asking impressions, please towards to everybody
So which group's face is the most handsome, it depends on your votes
because if you think that is the most handsome please make a big applause for them.
Firstly, Who think A group face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Next, Who think B group face is the most handsome, please a make big applause for them
Last, Who think C group face is the most handsome, please a make big applause for them
Ranking depends on the volume of applause.
And now, here is the result

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After asking impressions, I will address to everyone.
So which group's face is the most handsome, it depends on your applause.
If you think that is the most handsome one, please make a big applause for it.
Firstly, if you think group A's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Next, if you think group B's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Last, if you think group C's face is the most handsome, please make a big applause for them
Ranking depends on the loudness of applause.
And now, here is the result

元の翻訳
(After asking the representatives, talk to the audience)

Now, we would like you to decide which group made a good face.

Please give a big handclap to the best looking one, OK?

Those who think Group A is the best, give a handclap.

Next, those who think Group B is the best, give a handclap.

Finally, those who think Group C is the best, give a handclap.

(Decide the ranking according to the loudness of the handclap)
Now, we have the winner.

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(After asking the representatives, I will talk to the audience)

Now, we would like you to decide which group made the best face.

Please give a big handclap to the best one, OK?

Those who think Group A is the best, give a handclap.

Next, those who think Group B is the best, give a handclap.

Finally, those who think Group C is the best, give a handclap.

(Decide the ranking according to the loudness of the handclap)
Now, we have the winner.

元の翻訳
After asking if they liked the faces, I address to everyone.

I would like you to decide which group has the best face.

Please give a big hand to the most good looking face.
Shall we?

Those who think Group A has the best face, please give a big hand.

Now, those who think Group B has the best face, please give a big hand.

Lastly, those who think Group C has the best face, please give a big hand.

(Decide the ranking by applaud)
The result is here.

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After asking if they like the faces, I will address to everyone.

I would like you to decide which group has the best face.

Please give a big hand to the most good-looking face.
Shall we?

Those who think Group A has the best face, please give a big hand.

Now, those who think Group B has the best face, please give a big hand.

Lastly, those who think Group C has the best face, please give a big hand.

(The one who gets the loudest applause will be the winner!)
The result is here.

元の翻訳
The winner is group ○○, they finished ○○ in the first match, ○○ in the second match. Congratulations!

Unfortunately, the group that landed in the last place is gourp ○○, finished ○○ in the first match, ○○ in the second match. I am so sorry, but here we have a nice gift for you.

[During a penalty game]
Thank you very much for your cooperation!

Thank you very much for your active participation. Now we would like to conclude Fukuwarai game. Thank you very much again!!

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The winner is group ○○, they finished ○○ in the first match and ○○ in the second match. Congratulations!

Unfortunately, the group that landed in the last place is gourp ○○, finished ○○ in the first match and ○○ in the second match. I am so sorry, but here we have a nice gift for you.

[During a penalty game]
Thank you very much for your participation!

Thank you very much for your active participation. Now we would like to conclude Fukuwarai game. Thank you very much again!!

元の翻訳
The most applauded group was ◯◯by winning ◯◯in the first game, ◯◯in the second game.
Congratulations!

Unfortunately the Group ◯◯ scored ◯◯in the first game and ◯◯in the second game. I'm sorry to announce that the Group ◯◯came in last. We have a nice gift for you all.

[Penalty game]
Thank you all for your participation.

Everyone, thank you for participating in the games. We are now closing the game.
Thank you very much.

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The most applauded group is ◯◯by winning ◯◯in the first game and ◯◯in the second game.
Congratulations!

Unfortunately the Group ◯◯ scored ◯◯in the first game and ◯◯in the second game. I'm sorry to announce that the Group ◯◯came in last. We have a nice gift for you all.

[Penalty game]
Thank you all for your participation.

Everyone, thank you for participating in the games. We are now closing the game.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
(Showing a blindfold), you have to put on this blindfod while you are making the face.

(Holding and moving one of the pieces in front of the board)
The other members of the group can help him or she, saying "Up! Up! Up!", "Down! Down! Down!", "Right! Right! Right!", "Left! Left! Left!", "No! No!", or "Good! Good!".

We would like to decide who's the winner by majority vote, which team put the pieces in place and how funny the face looks.

Ready?
(Put a blindfold on each representative)

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(Showing a blindfold), you have to put on this blindfod while you are making the face.

(Hold and move one of the pieces in front of the face on the board)
The other members of the group can help him or she by saying "Up! Up! Up!", "Down! Down! Down!", "Right! Right! Right!", "Left! Left! Left!", "No! No!", or "Good! Good!".

We will see which team put the pieces in the right places and which one is the funniest and then decide who is the winner by majority vote

Ready?
(Put a blindfold on each representative)

元の翻訳
(Showing the blindfold) Please cover your eyes with this boindfold.

(Holding a piece and try to move it over the face)
The group members can give him a hint by saying,

"up! up! up!" or "down! down! down!" or "right! right! right!" and,
"left! left! left!" or "no! no! no!" or "there! there! there!"

Who is able to place the right piece at the right place or
who makes a funniest face will be judged by the vote from the audience.
We'll then decide on the winners.

Ready?

[Put the blindfolds on the leaders]

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(Showing the blindfold) Please cover your eyes with this blindfold.

(Holding a piece and try to move it over the face)
The group members can give the person a hint by saying,

"up! up! up!" or "down! down! down!" or "right! right! right!" and,
"left! left! left!" or "no! no! no!" or "there! there! there!"

Who is able to place the right piece at the right place or
who makes the funniest face will be judged by the audience vote.
We'll then decide the winners.

Ready?

[Put the blindfolds on the contestants]

元の翻訳
◆在各種場合充分使用
和男朋友的紀念日約會⇒裝飾著繽紛可愛後存檔。
在女性聚會中歡樂喧鬧⇒用拍貼質感和大家一起裝飾
午餐發現好吃的餐廳⇒紀錄店家後和朋友分享
和寵物一同玩樂⇒用對話框表達寵物的心情
旅行的美好回憶⇒寫下結論後發文至Facebook

想要什麼樣的圖案，機能等意見或是需求
請和我們聯繫。

將中意的照片裝飾得繽紛可愛

完成後的照片迅速和朋友共享

發文至社群網站，也可透過LINE發送喲

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◆在各種場合充分使用
和男朋友的紀念日約會⇒可愛地裝飾後存檔。
在歡樂喧鬧的女性聚會中⇒用大頭貼質感和大家一起裝飾
午餐發現好吃的餐廳⇒記錄店家後和朋友分享
和寵物一同玩樂⇒用對話框表達寵物的心情
旅行的美好回憶⇒寫下感想後發文至Facebook

若您有其他想要的圖案，機能或是其他意見和需求時
請和我們聯繫。

將喜歡的照片可愛地裝飾

完成後的照片可以和朋友共享

發文至網站，也可透過LINE發送喲

元の翻訳
◆活用於各種場合
與他在紀念日約會→加上可愛的裝飾收藏。
熱鬧的女性派對→把大家用貼紙機的感覺裝飾。
發現美味的午餐→把店家記錄下來與朋友共享。
和寵物玩耍→設計對白把寵物的心情說出來。
旅行的記憶→加些感想貼在臉書上。

如果有像「我想要這樣的印章或功能」的意見或願望，請跟我們聯絡。

把喜歡的照片，裝飾得很可愛。

可以把完成的照片與朋友共享。

用簡訊、LINE都可以貼圖、傳送歐！

修正後
◆活用於各種場合
與他的紀念日約會→加上可愛的裝飾收藏。
熱鬧的女性派對→把大家用大頭貼的質感裝飾。
發現美味的午餐→把店家記錄下來與朋友共享。
和寵物玩耍→設計對白把寵物的心情說出來。
旅行的記憶→加些感想貼在臉書上。

如果有像「我想要這樣的印章或功能」的意見或願望，請跟我們聯絡。

把喜歡的照片，裝飾得很可愛。

可以把完成的照片與朋友共享。

用簡訊、LINE都可以貼圖、傳送歐！