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We sell Japanese goods. There are a lot of made ​​in Japan great products . Please feel free to contact us for inquiry. Things that can not be sold are food, deadly weapons,and the murder weapons. We can not sell the import items which are banned in your country as well. Please check the import ban items of your country in advance. There is duty charge to applies on the receipt of the product. Tariff is borne by the purchaser. Please check the tariff of your country in advance. Please confirm that those electrical appliances can be used at your country, as the plug shape and voltage could be different.

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We sell Japanese goods. There are a lot of great products made ​​in Japan. Please feel free to contact us for inquiry. Things that can not be sold are food, deadly weapons,and the things that could be weapons. We can not sell the imported items which are banned in your country as well. Please check the import regulation of your country about what kind of things are banned in advance. There is a duty charge to apply on the receipt of the product. The purchaser will be charged for tariff. Please check the tariff of your country in advance. Please confirm that those electrical appliances can be used at your country, as the plug shape and voltage could be different.

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要像這樣來拍攝。傳達東京美髮潮流的TOKYO COSME TREND其MC是模特兒的沙良小姐。
也正在拍攝專業美粧師給的美粧建議! 不論何時要美粧的時候，都能有來自專業美粧師的建議，這真是太好了。

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像這樣子的拍攝感覺。傳達東京美髮潮流的TOKYO COSME TREND是其廣告模特兒的沙良小姐。
也正在拍攝專業美粧師給的美粧建議! 不論何時要美粧的時候，都能有來自專業美粧師的建議，這真是太好了。

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就像這樣子的感覺拍攝。拍攝東京美容趨勢指標TOKYO COSME TREND廣告的模特兒是沙良喔！

利用專業彩妝師建議的彩妝技巧來拍攝！隨時隨地加上專業彩妝師的建議來上妝會變得很棒的喔！

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就像這樣子的感覺拍攝。拍攝東京美容趨勢指標TOKYO COSME TREND廣告的模特兒是沙良喔！

利用專業彩妝師建議的彩妝技巧來拍攝！隨時隨地採用專業彩妝師的建議來上妝會變得很棒的喔！

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1. I think both have strong points. To say about the ratchet model one, your legs might hurt when putting it for a long time. In that case, loosen the ratchet while running.

2. It's a nice picture! Was this taken by a professional photographer? By the way, I wish to wear a beard like yours, but it is impossible since I only have thin body hair. Too bad! lol

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1. I think both have good points. As for the ratchet model one, your feet might hurt after you wearing it for a long time. In that case, you can loosen the ratchet by running.

2. It's a nice picture! Was it taken by a professional photographer? By the way, I wish to grow a beard like yours, but it is impossible since my body hair is too thin. Too bad! lol

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1. I think there are some good points. As for the ratchet type, you may get sore feet after wearing for a long time. In this case, loosen the ratchet while running.

2. What a good photo! Is it taken by a professional? By the way, I want to try the beard, but I cannot have a beard like you with my thin body hair. It is a pity. Laugh

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1. I think both have some good points. As for the ratchet type, you may get pain in your feet after wearing it for a long time. In this case, you can loosen the ratchet by running.

2. What a good photo! Is it taken by a professional? By the way, I want to grow beards, but I cannot have a beard like yours with my thin body hair. What a pity. Laugh

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1. I think there is a good point either.The ratchet type, you may get sore feet when you wear it for a long time.If this is the case, loosen the ratchet while running.
2.It's a good photo!Did it take by professional? By the way, I want to try to grow a beard, but I can not be a beard like your hair is thin. What a pity. Lol

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1. I think both have good points. It may cause pain in your feet when you wear the ratchet type for a long time. In this case, you can loosen the ratchet by running.
2.It's a good photo! Was it take by a professional? By the way, I want to try to grow beard, but I can never have the beard type like yours as my hair is too thin. What a pity. Lol

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1.Both have good points. When you wear the ratchet type for a long time, it may cause you pain in your feet. In this case, you loosen the ratchet as you run.
2.It is a good picture! Is it taken by a proffessional? By the way, I wish I could have beard myself, but I can never have one like yours as I have thin skin hair. (laugh)

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1.Both have good points. When you wear the ratchet type for a long time, it may cause you pain in your feet. In this case, you can loosen the ratchet as you run.
2. It is a good picture! Is it taken by a proffessional? By the way, I also want to grow beard myself, but I can never have the one like yours as my hair is too thin. (laugh)

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As soon as the product arrives, we'll let you know.
After we confirm the product, we're going to make a first order immediately.
And then we are thinking of having an additional order at anytime.
We hope that we could do business with you as a Japanese agency.
At the moment, we are preparing to make our web page and stuff.
We'll sell products as soon as and as many as possible then we'll make those famous in Japanese market.↵
In order to do so, we hope that you could help us.

Could I get a snapshot of the product?

Could I buy 1 when 1 is in stock?
Could you also tell me how much 1 will be in stock?
How many colors does 1 have?

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As soon as the product arrives, we'll let you know.
After we confirm the product, we're going to make the first order immediately.
We are thinking about making additional orders at anytime in the near future.
We hope that we could do business with you as you are the exclusive Japanese agency.
At the moment, we are preparing for making our own website and so on.
We plan to sell many products and make them popular in Japanese market as soon as possible.↵
Therefore, we hope that you could help us as well.

Could I get pictures of the products?

Could I buy product 1 if you have it in stock?
Could you also tell me how many product 1 you have in stock?
How many colors does 1 have?

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We will contact you as soon as the products arrive in Japan.
We will place an initial order after checking the products.
We are thinkng to order popular products additionally at any time.
We hope to work with you as your exclusive distributor in Japan. We are currently proceeding with the preparations creating a home page, etc. We will sell many products as soon as possible and distinguish them in Japanese market. ↵
Fot that, we would like to

So, we are also your support, I would like receive support from you.

Is it possible to give us image photos of your products?

Could we buy 1. if you have stock?
Please also let us know your stock plan.
How many colors does 1. have?

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We will contact you as soon as the products arrive in Japan.
We will place an initial order after checking the products.
We are thinking about ordering popular products additionally at any time.
We hope to work with you as you are an exclusive distributor in Japan. We are currently proceeding with the preparations for creating our home page, etc. We plan to sell many products and make them popular in Japanese market as soon as possible.

Therefore it would be our honor and pleasure if we could receive your support as well.

Is it possible to give us image photos of your products?

Could we buy 1. if you have it in stock?
Please also let us know how many you have it in stock.
How many colors does 1. have?

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Japan National Tourist Office and Tourism Agency are commissioned to "MICE Ambassadors" the eight having a network and transmission power to domestic and foreign in academia and industry.
We aim to attract MICE competitiveness of Japan and dig up potential demand for MICE as Japan's prestige per attractive and public relations activities.

※ Holding international conferences, etc. (MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract many excellent technology and investment to Japan based on [Japan re-emerging strategy] and [Action programs for tourism-oriented country achievement].

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Japan National Tourist Office and Tourism Agency entrusted "MICE Ambassadors" to 8 people who have connections to as well as influences on both academical and industrial fields in Japan and abroad.
As representatives of Japan, they aim to attract MICE to Japan and dig up potential demands for MICE by attractive and public relations activities.

※ Holding international conferences, etc. (MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract many excellent knowledges and investments to Japan based on the Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and “Action Program for Achieving a Tourism-Oriented Country”

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Japan Tourist Agency and Japan National Tourism Organisation entrusted "MICE Ambassador" to 8 persons who internationally and domestically have connections and influences to industrial and academical world.
They try to improve the ability enough to compete on inviting MICE to Japan by their publicity and attracting work to find out potential demands of MICE.

* Inviting and holding of international conventions etc. (MICE) is recognized as a important way that Japan acquires a lot of knowledge and investment on "The Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and " Action Program toward the Realization of Japan as a Tourism-oriented Country".

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Japan Tourist Agency and Japan National Tourism Organisation entrusted "MICE Ambassador" to 8 people who internationally and domestically have connections to and influences on industrial and academical fields.
As representatives of Japan, they try to improve the ability to compete on inviting MICE to Japan by public and attractive activities to find out potential demands of MICE.

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* Inviting and holding of international conventions etc. (MICE) is recognized as an important tool for Japan to acquire a lot of knowledge and investments on The Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and " Action Program toward the Realization of Japan as a Tourism-oriented Country".

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Ministry of Tourism and Japan Government Tourisim Agency entrusted 8 people who have authority to send message and network to Japan and abroad in industries and field of art as MICE ambassador.

As a representative of Japan, they find potential demand of MICE and reinforce competitive ability of invitation of MICE in Japan for advertisement and invitation.

※Invitation and holding international conference, etc.(MICE) is positioned as an important tool to invite a number of superior knowledge and investment to Japan in "strategy of revitalizing Japan" and "action program for realizing tourisim country".

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Ministry of Tourism and Japan Government Tourisim Agency entrusted 8 people who have authority to send messages and have the network access to industrial and art fields both in Japan and abroad as MICE ambassador.

As representatives of Japan, they find potential demand of MICE and reinforce competitive ability of invitation of MICE in Japan for advertisement and invitation.

※Invitation and holding international conference, etc.(MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract a number of superior knowledge and investments to Japan in "strategy of revitalizing Japan" and "action program for making Japan a tourisim-oriented country".

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No tracking number of USP is issued.
According to the guidance on the Amazon website, USP will come to pick up simply.
That's all regarding returning.

I will send labels needed for returning again, so please check it.
There no problem regarding a commission fee.
Please progress the process of returning.

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No tracking number of UPS has been issued.
According to the guidance on the Amazon website, UPS will come to pick it up simply.
That's all regarding returning an item.

I will send labels needed for returning the item again, so please check it.
There is no problem regarding a commission fee.
Please progress the process of returning.

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The tracking number of UPS will not be issued.
The guide in amazon only states that UPS will pick up the goods.
That is the only information about goods returning.

I have sent you the label for returning the product again, please check it.
There is no problem regarding the processing fee.
Please proceed with returning the item.

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The tracking number of UPS has not been issued.
The guide on Amazon website states that UPS will simply pick up the goods.
That is the only information about returning the goods.

I will send you the label for returning the product, please check it.
There is no problem regarding the processing fee.
Please proceed with the returning procedure.

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The UPS trucking number has not issued.
According to the guide on amazon's web site, it is said that UPS will simply come to pick it up.
That is the only information regarding the returned good.

Again, I will send the necessary label for the return so please confirm.
There is no problem regarding the fee.
Please process for the returned good.

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The UPS trucking number has not been issued.
According to the guide on amazon's website, it is said that UPS will simply come to pick it up.
That is the only information regarding returning a product.

Again, I will send the necessary label for the return so please confirm.
There is no problem regarding the fee.
Please continue the procedure of returning.

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I have understood about the commission issue; I want you to divide the package.
I will attach a label for turning back and a screen shot taken while purchasing, so please check.

Plus, I'd like only the game console(s) to be returned.
Although 3 pcs were purchased, it is alright if only 2 of them are returned.
In case you have any unclear point, please contact me.

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I have understood about the service fee; I want you to separate the package.
I will attach a label for returning and the purchase screenshot↵
Please confirm them.

In addition please only return the game console(s).
Although you have purchased 3 pcs , it is alright if only 2 of them are returned.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

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I have understood about the processing fee.
Please split the package.
I have attached the return label and the screenshot of checkout screen.
Please have a look.

Also, please only return the game console.
Although the quantity you have purchased is 3, it is okay if you only return 2 of them.
Please contact me again if you have any question.

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I have understood about the processing fee.
Please split the package.
I have attached the return label and the purchase screenshot.
Please have a look.

Also, please only return the game consoles.
Although the quantity of the consoles you have purchased is 3, it is okay if you only return 2 of them.
Please contact me again if you have any question.

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I understand about service fee.
Please split the package.
I will attach a screen shot of the purchase window as well as a return label.
Kindly confirm them.

Also, could you return only the game device?
The number you purchased is 3 items, but you can return them with 2 items.
Feel free to contact me for any unsure.

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I understand about the service fee.
Please split the package.
I will attach a purchase screenshot as well as a return label.
Please confirm them.

Also, could you only return the game consoles?
The number of the consoles you have purchased is 3, but you can return only 2 of them.
Feel free to contact me for any questions.

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We agreed regarding the fee.
Please separate the package.
We attached the label for returning shipment and screenshot of purchased screen.
Please give us your confirmation.

Please return only game machines.
Quantities of your purchase was 3 though you may return 2 machines as it was.
Please ask anything unclear.

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We agreed regarding the fee.
Please separate the package.
We attached the label for returning shipment and the purchase screenshot to this email.
Please confirm them.

Please return only game consoles.
Though the quantity of the consoles you have purchased was 3, you may return just 2 of them.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact us.

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As I have been stating many times, the product is exactly as it is stated in the product information.
Please send it back if you're not happy with it, and don't worry about my circumstances.
You say that you don't have the time, but you keep sending me long emails day after day. I think there is plenty of time for you to send the products.
It is against the policy to demand refunds by threatening to give me bad feedbacks.
I have said that I will give you a refund, but you still want to give me a bad feedback when things don't go your way.
That is just childish.
You just want to steal $75 from me.

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As I have been stating many times, the product is exactly as it is stated in the product information.
Please send it back if you're not happy with it, and don't worry about my situation.
You said that you don't have time, but you kept sending me long emails everyday. I think there was plenty of time for you to send the products.
It is against the policy to demand a refund by threatening to leave bad feedbacks.
I have said that I will give you a refund, but you still want to give me a bad feedback when things don't go your way.
That is just childish.
You just want to get $75 from me.

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As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us to request for refund by saying us you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get $75 from me.

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As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you said you have no time, you have kept emailing me long messages every day. So I assume you should have had time to ship the item back to me. It's against the rule to request a refund by saying that you would leave me a bad feedback. I am asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if I don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you just only want to get $75 from me.

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2. There was mistake
Gateway is only for the zigbee.

3. It is to be considered that the electric equipments which are selling inside Japan shall be required to obtain approval of PSE.

As the O Module is supplied electric power directly, PSE approval is required, although it is still in the prototype state at this moment, PSE approval is not obtained yet.

4. We are adjusting the wifi type O Module to connect A cloud so far.
Please give us some more time.

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2. There was a mistake
Gateway is only for the zigbee version.

3. It is to be considered that the electric equipments which are sold in Japan shall be required to obtain approval of PSE.

As the O Module is supplied electric power directly, PSE approval is required, although it is still in the prototype state at this moment, PSE approval is not obtained yet.

4. We are adjusting the wifi type O Module to connect A cloud at the moment.
We appreciate your patience.

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There are 2 types of Wireless modules which are the zigbee and the wifi.
As you said, Gateway is necessary in case you use only zigbee.

In case using the wifi version, Gateway is not required and connect to the access point directly.
At this moment, it is necessary to set the password and SSID of the access point previously in the Module software.
Therefore, we apply method that install the previously paired wireless router.
We are considering much easier method such as WPS in the future.

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There are 2 versions of Wireless modules: zigbee and wifi.
As you said, Gateway is necessary only when you use the zigbee version.

When you use the wifi version, Gateway is not required and it can be connected to the access point directly.
At this moment, it is necessary to set the password and SSID of the access point beforehand in the Module software.
Therefore, we have applied the method of installing the paired wireless router beforehand.
We are considering about applying a much easier method such as WPS in the future.

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1.
The wireless modules have two versions of zigbee and wifi.
As you noted, you need Gateway only when you use the zigbee version.

You do not need Gateway when you use the wifi version, and you can directly connect to the access point. At this moment it is necessary to set the SSID and password of the access point to the module software in advance.
Therefore, we have picked up the method of setting with the pre-paired wireless rooter.
For the future models, we plan to use an easier way such as using WPS.

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1.
The wireless modules have two versions which are zigbee and wifi.
As you noted, you need Gateway only when you use the zigbee version.

You do not need Gateway when you use the wifi version, and you can directly connect it to the access point. At this moment it is required to set the SSID and password of the access point to the module software beforehand.
Therefore, we have applied the method of setting up the pre-paired wireless rooter.
For the future models, we are thinking about making a better product than WPS.