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藉由體驗親手製作"HOUTOU"（日文原文為餺飥）這種麵食並享用的過程,可以更加深刻的同時體驗到這個地區的歷史及文化

"HOUTOU"的起源有幾種說法,其一是在奈良平安時代,自大陸返回日本的遣唐使們所引進的.

另一說則是由戰國時代的武將"武田信玄"在戰場上用其珍貴的傳家寶刀親自將麵團切成細長的形狀以利作戰期間食用
而寶刀的日文發音則是"HOU-TOU",因此,此種麵食的名稱就這麼流傳至今了.

註:餺飥是一種外觀與寬麵接近的麵食.亦即是中國稱之為麵片湯的一道料理

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藉由體驗親手製作"HOUTOU"（日文原文為餺飥）麵食並享用的過程,可以深刻地體驗到這個地區的歷史及文化。

"HOUTOU"的起源有兩種說法, 其中之一是據說在奈良平安時代,由從大陸返回日本的遣唐使們所引進的。

另一個說法則是由戰國時代的武將"武田信玄"在戰場上用其珍貴的傳家寶刀親自將麵團切成細長的形狀以利作戰期間食用。
而寶刀的日文發音則是"HOU-TOU",因此,此種麵食的名稱就這麼流傳至今了.

註:餺飥是一種外觀與寬麵接近的麵食.亦即是中國稱為麵片湯的一道料理。

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The manufacturer will make the call once the repairs are done.
I will ask the manufacturer today how the repairs are going along.

When I asked the manufacturer about the repairs today, they said they will need seven days.

When I asked the manufacturer about the repairs today, they said they need more time.
I'm still confirming the estimated time the repairs will be completed.
Once I know the estimated time the repairs will be done, I will contact you.

Today, I have received the product the manufacturer has repaired. I will ship the repaired item to you tomorrow.↵

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The manufacturer will make a call once the repairs are done.
I will ask the manufacturer today about the process of the repairs.

I have confirmed about the repairs with the manufacturer today and they said they will need another seven days.

I have confirmed about the repairs with the manufacturer today and they said they need more time.
I'm still confirming the estimated time the repairs will be completed.
Once I know the estimated time the repairs will be done, I will contact you.

Today, I have received the product the manufacturer has repaired. I will ship the repaired item to you tomorrow.

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Thank you for your response, and I am almost now able to understand.
It may be technically difficult, but it would be good if you can add the function which you can log-in with Twitter account.

I have been waiting already for five days without having the reply. Is it really difficult to solve the bug?

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Thank you for your reply. I have come to understand the situation now.
It may be technically difficult, but it would be great if you could add the function for users to log in with their Twitter accounts.

I have been waiting for the reply for 5 days. Is it really difficult to solve the bug?

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As advised by eBay, I have made the motion to claim to be settled by Claim solution Center. Soon after, I called PayPal and told them that it is the incident occurred during eBay Global Shipping Program shipping, and was told that the claim will be settled by Paypal. For this, I believer we can settle the issue smoothly.

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As advised by eBay, I have made the motion to claim to be settled by Claim solution Center. And I have made a call to PayPal to tell them that it is the accident occurred by the shipping of eBay Global Shipping Program and I was told that the claim will be handled by Paypal. In this way, I believer we can handle the issue smoothly.

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Thank you very much for shopping with us.
It is regrettable to let you know that the item you have ordered is currently out of stock.
We have checked with other suppliers, but we are afraid we are not able to have them in our stock.
It is solely our mistake and is caused by the lack of our experience, and we sincerely apologize for causing inconvenience for you.
Under such circumstance, we would appreciate very much that you could cancel this order.
Should you able to accept the cancellation, we would like to offer Amazon gift card of $20 value.
I am looking forward to hear from you.

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Thank you very much for making a purchase in our store.
We are sorry to inform you that the item you have ordered is currently out of stock.
We have checked with other suppliers, but we are afraid we are not able to have the item in our stock.
We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused for you due to our lack of experiences.
Under this circumstances, we would appreciate that you could cancel this order.
If you could cancel this order, we would like to offer an Amazon gift card of $20 value as a compensation.
We look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you very much for purchasing from our store.

However, all the stock of this product has sold out and there is no stock of it right now.

We have contacted to our affiliates and asked if they have the inventory, but it is very difficult to obtain it.

We are truly sorry for the inconvenience caused by our lack of experience.

We are sorry to tell you this, but ↵
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I wonder if it would be possible to ask for cancellation of the order this time.

If you can cancel, we will send $20 Amazon gift as a sign of apology.
We are look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you very much for purchasing from our store.

However, all the stock of this product has sold out and there is no stock of it right now.

We have contacted our affiliates and asked if they have the inventory, but it is very difficult to obtain it.

We are truly sorry for the inconvenience caused by our lack of experience.

We are sorry to tell you that this order might have to be cancelled.

If you could cancel this order, we will send $20 Amazon gift card as a compensation.↵

We are look forward to hearing from you.↵
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能否做出新甜甜? 我被祇園的伯伯們這麼要求後 在於昭和初期誕生了名產的葛切 如同其他甜點只有送貨才有 可是因為受到好評 所以被要求在店鋪也品嚐看看 才做了喫茶室 為了送貨方便而開發的容器 在於已不送貨的現在仍然為持當年的樣子 第十二代主人 也跟人間國寶的黑田辰秋要好 也用過請他製作的螺鈿葛切用具

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能否做出新甜點? 在被祇園的伯伯們這麼要求後 於昭和初期，我發明了名產ー葛切 和其他甜點一樣只有提供送貨訂單 但在廣受好評之下 許多客人希望能在店鋪也品嚐的到 於是有了喫茶室 為了送貨方便而開發的容器 在已不送貨的現在仍然為持當年的樣子 第十二代的主人 和人間國寶的黑田辰秋很要好 也用過請他製作的螺鈿葛切用具

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Music Storm - 免費獲取＆試聽音樂

在Music Storm，您可以免費地欣賞網上公開的音樂。類型包括流行、搖滾和街舞等。可以將喜歡的音樂進行緩存（下載），即便沒有網絡也可再次播放！
可以隱藏到後台，方便您一邊聽音樂一邊查看其他軟件喲！
而且支持隨機播放盒重複播放！把喜歡的歌曲都放入列表中吧！

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Music Storm - 免費獲取＆試聽音樂

在Music Storm，您可以免費地欣賞網路上公開的音樂。類型包括流行、搖滾和街舞等。可以將喜歡的音樂進行下載，即使沒有網絡也可再次播放！
可以隱藏到後台，方便您一邊聽音樂一邊查看其他應用程式！
而且支持隨機播放盒重複播放！把喜歡的歌曲都放入列表中吧！

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Usually several people sit around a big pot, but sometimes a small pot is served for each person in a banquet or a refined Japanese dishes. Small pots for one person are also on market today, and you can use directly eat from the pot without dishing up into a bowl.
Warm and tender. Hot pot dishes.
This is the information about various kinds of pots presented by goo ranking. We introduce this year's popular hot pot dishes. Those who are tired of tomato-pot or curry-pot must check out the ranking.

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Usually a large pot is served when several people sit around and eat together, but sometimes it is a small pot that is served for each person in a banquet or a formal and traditional Japanese dishes. Small pots for one person's use are popular today for people can eat with the pot without putting the food into a bowl.
Check out the warm and extraordinary hot pots.
Information about various kinds of hot pots are provided by goo ranking. ↵
Goo ranking introduces you this year's popular hot pots and recommends good choices to those who are tired of tomato hot pots or curry hot pots.

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Usually nabe large enough to hold with both hands is used because several people eat together, but sometimes at drinking party or kaiseki(formal traditional Japanese cooking), it is served for each person with small nabe.

Recently nabe for 1 person is sold, and when it is used, people sometimes eat by taking directly from the nabe without dividing into rice bowl.

Hot and extraordinary nabes are all gathered.

Information about gathering of hot and extraordinary nabe that is provided at goo ranking.

Popular nabe cooking this year is introduced.↵
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The ranking recommended for those who are sick and tired of usual nabe such as tomato nabe and curry nabe.

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Usually a large pot with both side holders is used for several people eating together, but sometimes at drinking parties or kaiseki (formal traditional Japanese food), it is the small pot that is served for each person.

Recently, those small pots for 1 person use are popular and by using a small pot, people can eat with the pot instead of taking the food out of the pot and then putting it into a rice bowl.

Check out the hot and extraordinary pots.

Information about hot and extraordinary pots is provided at goo ranking.

Goo ranking introduces the most popular hot pots in this year and recommends good choices to those who are sick of usual hot pots such as tomato hot pots and curry hot pots.

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We are deeply sorry for inconvenience.

We made some mistakes though we shipped with careful check.

We refund all the prices of the products.

Could you return the products to us please?
We refund the money soon after you let us know shippment fee.

Again, we appologize for incovenience.↵

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We are deeply sorry for causing you inconvenience.

We made some mistakes while processing the shipment though we did a throughly careful check.

We will refund all your money to you.

Could you return the products to us first?
We will also cover the shipping charges when you return the products.

Again, we apologize for causing you inconvenience.

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What is it Patlabor ? "Mobile Police Patlabor" (kidou Police Patlabor, Mobile Police PATLABOR) is, a media mix works of cartoon, animation and novel that is a stage a region centered on Tokyo in the near future for several years from after 10 years as the origin of the 1988. It is a pioneering works that have developed the rare media mix works at the time.
Work Description

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What is Patlabor ? "Mobile Police Patlabor" (kidou Police Patlabor, Mobile Police PATLABOR) is a media mix work of cartoon, animation and novel which are centered in Tokyo in the years of near future 10 years after 1988. It is a pioneering work that developed the rare media mix work at the time.
Work Description

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真正的羊皮大衣（西藏羊皮）

羊的皮毛易吸附空氣，有優良的空氣絕緣性能，適合在極端寒冷地區使用！罩衣領的周圍是用可愛捲曲的藏羊做成。此價格是直接廠家的協商價格﹗

質量= [衣體]羊皮革 [頭罩周圍，胸前]毛皮（西藏羊皮） 無〔襯裡〕 開前鉤 ２ 個 前口袋

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純羊皮大衣（含西藏羊毛）

易吸附空氣的羊皮，有優良的絕熱性能，其保暖性能讓您在極端寒冷地區都不用怕。衣領的周圍以藏羊毛來做可愛捲曲的設計。此價格是直接跟廠商進貨才有的價格﹗

材質= [表面]羊皮革 [帽子周圍，胸前]毛皮（西藏羊皮） 無〔內裏〕 打開前2 個釦子有２ 個 前口袋

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純羊皮大衣（含藏羊毛）

飽含空氣的羊毛皮具有優秀的隔熱性，保暖程度大到連極寒地區的居民也在使用！衣襟周圍使用具有可愛捲毛的藏羊毛。我們因與製造商合作才能以這個價格為客戶提供這個商品！

質地＝［整體］羊皮　［衣襟周圍及前方豎起部分］毛皮（藏羊毛）　［襯裡］無　前方開有拉鍊及兩個口袋

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純羊皮大衣（含藏羊毛）

飽含空氣的羊毛皮具有優良的隔熱性，其優良的保暖程度讓極寒地帶的居民也使用！衣襟周圍使用具有可愛捲毛的藏羊毛。我們因與製造商合作才能以這個價格為客戶提供這個商品！

材質＝［整體］羊皮　［衣襟周圍及前方豎起部分］毛皮（藏羊毛）　［襯裡］無　前方開有拉鍊及兩個口袋

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老鼠訓練師

用咬合的運動，可以訓練表情的肌肉。<br>如果您覺得faceline合適的話，是可以使因為咬合而老化的表情肌肉，而被充分的訓練。因為是非常有彈性的老鼠訓練師，放在下面的牙齒上，只是咬合而已，就可以充分的訓練口輪肌肉。

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嘴部肌肉訓練器

用咀嚼的方式來運動並訓練臉部表情及臉部肌肉。跟臉部皺紋說掰掰↵
<br>如果您介意臉部皺紋，多練習嘴部咀嚼運動，訓練日漸鬆弛的臉部肌肉。↵
因為這是有彈性的嘴部訓練器，將之放在牙齒後部，只需要做咀嚼的動作，就可以充分的訓練口部周圍的肌肉。

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嘴部訓練器

用咬的方式運動來訓練臉部表情。跟臉部的老化線說掰掰
<br>如果您介意臉部的Face line、多使用嘴部咀嚼運動、來讓日漸衰弱的臉部肌肉訓練起來。
因為這是有彈力的嘴部訓練器、將之放在牙齒後部、只需要咬的動作、就可以很實在的訓練嘴巴周圍的筋肉。↵

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嘴部肌肉訓練器

用咀嚼的方式來運動並訓練臉部表情及臉部肌肉。跟臉部皺紋說掰掰
<br>如果您介意臉部皺紋，多練習嘴部咀嚼運動，訓練日漸鬆弛的臉部肌肉。
因為這是有彈性的嘴部訓練器，將之放在牙齒後部，只需要做咀嚼的動作，就可以訓練嘴巴周圍的肌肉。

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内裡針織外套

豪爽的粗針織織法、豪邁又點不修邊幅的感覺、襯托出男子氣概！使用羊毛混紡的針織品素材，人體上感覺如同附著棉被的裡襯一樣溫暖。編織花樣的立體直線還有高領流暢顯現出來。

品質==[表面布料]丙烯70%.毛30%（針織衫 圖案針織 3針）
[棉花]100％ 聚酯纖維
[襯裡]有 ( 總裏 只有身體部分使用棉質布料)
內袋(無) 圖案可能略有差異。

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男版蘇格蘭式鋪棉內裏針織外套

粗針織織法，豪邁又點不修邊幅的感覺、襯托出男子氣概！使用羊毛混紡的針織品素材加上蘇格蘭式內裏鋪棉，保暖又有型。條紋式編法和高領設計讓人穿起來清爽有型。

材質==[表面布料]丙烯70%.毛30%（針織衫 圖案針織 3針）
[棉花]100％ 聚酯纖維
[襯裡]有 ( 總裏 只有身體部分使用棉質布料)
內袋(無) 圖案可能略有差異。

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毛層棉花衣

粗編毛衣瀟灑套上 秀出男人味! 用混羊毛編織 貼身部位使用密綿非常保暖 有網狀直條與高領設計 看來很清爽

品質=[ 表層]丙烯70% 毛30%(三條花紋) [中綿]聚酯100% [裡層]只有全貼身部位使用密綿
內口袋(無) 花紋也會有與樣品有所差異 ↵

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男版蘇格蘭式鋪棉內裏針織外套

以粗針編織而成，穿起來較寬鬆，可以讓喜歡休閒隨性風格的人穿出男人味。混羊毛的衣料加上內裏鋪棉，穿起來有型又保暖。條紋式的編法和高領的設計讓人看起來清爽有型。

材質=[ 表層]丙烯70% 毛30%(三種花紋) [內裏鋪棉]聚酯100% [內裏]蘇格蘭式鋪棉
內口袋(無) 花紋也會有與樣品有所差異

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裏面蘇格蘭男用短裙的編織襯衫

編織密度較低，穿起來較鬆鬆大大的，推薦給想穿出男人隨興感覺的人。使用混羊毛的編織衣料，穿在身上有附蘇格蘭男用短裙，相當溫暖的感覺。可以看見編織模樣的縱線和高領。

品質＝［表面材質］壓克力７０％・毛３０％（編織衣料　柄編　３gauge）［裏面棉花］人造纖維１００％ ［裏面材質]有（總裏　裏面蘇格蘭男用短裙） 裏面口袋（無） 花樣的表現方式多少會有不同。↵

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男版蘇格蘭式鋪棉內裏針織外套

以粗針編織而成，穿起來較寬鬆，可以讓喜歡休閒隨性風格的人穿出男人味。混羊毛的衣料加上內裏鋪棉，穿起來有型又保暖。條紋式的編法和高領的設計讓人看起來清爽有型。

品質＝［表面材質］壓克力７０％・毛３０％（編織衣料　柄編　３尺寸規格）［內裏鋪棉］人造纖維１００％ ［內裏材質]有（總裏 蘇格蘭式鋪棉　） 裏面口袋（無） 花樣的表現方式多少會有不同。

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復古圖案項鍊

用有溫情的流行色彩，為穿著打扮增添異彩。懷舊的氛圍和有存在感的大小是其要領。讓我們與簡單的上裝配合，提升美感吧。

材質=鋼鐵·環氧樹脂·黃銅 全長：約72cm（包括約5cm的調整器）最大寬度：約6cm

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復古典雅式項鍊

以暖色係平衡復古感，除了好穿戴也好搭配，增添華麗感。其特點是其復古的質感讓人無法忽視其存在。↵
簡單與素色羊毛上衣搭配即可整體提升美感。

材質=鋼鐵·環氧樹脂·黃銅 全長：約72cm（包括約5cm的調整器）最大寬度：約6cm

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主題重新流行的項練
擁有溫暖的顏色，除了好穿戴之外，更添加些許華麗。強調重新流行的氣氛與存在感的大小。與細緻毛絨上衣搭配，可以相當提升整體的感覺。

材質＝鋼・環氧樹脂・銅黃 全長:約72cm（含調節器約５cm） 最大幅:約6cm

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復古典雅式項練
以暖色係來平衡典雅感，除了好穿戴之外，更添加些許華麗。其特點是其復古華麗的質感讓人無法忽視它的存在。與素色毛絨上衣搭配，可以相當提升整體的感覺。

材質＝鋼・環氧樹脂・銅黃 全長:約72cm（含調節器約５cm） 最大幅:約6cm

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已經確認匯款一事了

有一件是想要跟您商量

到目前為止、我們集中會員然後進行採購代理的這樣整個流程、日本這邊接近一年試圖招集會員、可是都沒有預期的招集到。
因為這樣的關係、我將會員網站關閉了。
不過、我還是想繼續個人從中國這邊進口產品、還希望這方面可以如同往常跟您這邊聯絡。

我也是因為要維持經營會員網站、已經花費不少。經營面也處於痛苦的處境。
為了能夠持續下去、今後我希望可以用一次訂單然後支付500元的方式、不知道這樣是否可行?

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已經確認匯款一事了

有一件事想要跟您商量

到目前為止，我們集中會員然後進行採購代理的這樣整個流程，日本這邊接近一年試圖招集會員，可是都沒有預期的招集到。
因為這樣的關係，我將會員網站關閉了。
不過，我還是想繼續個人從中國這邊進口產品，并希望能在這方面跟您做些交易上的变动。

我也是因為要維持經營會員網站，已經花費不少，經營面也處於痛苦的處境。
為了能夠持續下去，今後我希望可以用一次訂單然後支付500元的方式，不知道這樣是否可行?