Celeste Scott (fuyunoriviera) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I sent the good that I purchased from you to the address in Florida of my forwarding company.
But the company does not send it to Japan.
So I would like to ask you one thing. Please support me.
I would like to return the good first, and please send it the other address that I specify. Is it possible?
If not possible, I will raise a claim to PayPal and return it.
I will buy the goods next month again, please support me.

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I sent the goods that I purchased from you to the address of my forwarding company in Florida.
But the company will not send them to Japan.
So I would like to ask you to help me.
I would like to return the goods to you first. Then please send them to another address that I specify. Can you do that?
If this is not possible, I will raise a claim to PayPal and return it.
I will buy the goods again next month, so please help me.

元の翻訳
Hello, Mr. 〇,

Thank you very much for your response.

I'm especially interested in your product, 〇 and 〇.

I bought your item from ebay once, and found it very useful.

So, I'm an import trader here in Japan, and I'm sending this to request you to distribute the items.

I would like to make payment via paypal or credit card issued from Japan.
The shipping address for the storehouse is in Florida, which I already have a contract, so I appreciate it if you could send the items to there.

I wish you could take this as a consideration.

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Hello, Mr. 〇,

Thank you very much for your response.

I'm especially interested in your products, 〇 and 〇.

I bought an item of yours from ebay once before and found it very useful.

Therefore, as I am an import trader here in Japan, I am sending you this to request to distribute your items.

I would like to pay via paypal or credit card issued from Japan.
The shipping address is a warehouse in Florida, which I already have a contract with, so I would appreciate it if you could send the items there.

Thank you for your kind consideration.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your quick action as always.
I would like to ask you, do you no longer produce "a" or "b"?
As "a" and "b" are both highly valued items, we are sorry if you do not produce them.
If possible, we would appreciate if you keep producing the items.
We do hope you accept our request.

By the way, thank you for your action regarding "c".

We have done our payment via PayPal, so please confirm.

We look forward to receiving the items.

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Thank you for your quick action as always.
I would like to ask you, do you no longer produce "a" or "b"?
As "a" and "b" are both highly valued items, we **would be very disappointed* if you do not produce them.
If possible, we would appreciate if you keep producing the items.
We do hope you accept our request.

By the way, thank you for your action regarding "c".

We have **payed** via PayPal, so please confirm.

We look forward to receiving the items.

元の翻訳
In normal circumstances, I would call him and ask for explanation, but it seems impossible.

We're ready to provide you all the necessary information with regard to this matter.
If needed, we can send you translated emails from him.
You should be rid of business persons with no credibility to maintain your corporate and products' liability.
We hope to have business directly with you.

Please let us know your opinion.

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In normal circumstances, I would call him and ask for an explanation, but that seems impossible.

We're ready to provide you with all the necessary information with regard to this matter.
If needed, we can send you translated emails from him.
You should not use business persons with no credibility to maintain your corporate and products' good name.
We hope to do business directly with you.

Please let us know your opinion.