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Thank you for your reply.
The aforementioned bolster has shown to be in stock at your website but I can't seem to make an order. If an order can't be made, I would like to cancel the item.

Thank you also for suggesting an alternative bolster but as of the present time, there isn't any need for the alternative product.

Thank you for making a back order. We are waiting for the bolster covers and will send them once it is produced.

I look forward to your favorable reply.

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Thank you for your reply.
The aforementioned pillow has shown to be in stock on your website so would we be able to make an order? If an order can't be made, we would like to cancel the item.

Thank you also for suggesting an alternative pillow. However, as of the present time, there isn't any need for an alternative product.

Thank you for making a back order. We are waiting for the quilt covers so please send them once they have been produced.

I look forward to your favorable reply.

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al78901

Mana is a charismatic figure in the Gothic-Lolita style that has attracted global attention.
So what is the story behind Mana who yearns to be a global Gothic-Lolita?

Malice Mizer was a Japanese band. They are generally known as a "visual-kei" band. They were formed in August 1992 and stopped producing music December 31, 2001. The band's name originated from the French translation of the Japanese words "akui" (ill will, malice) and "higeki" (disaster).

Even in the visual-kei world, Malice Mizer was an especially colorful presence.

Mana uses blue as her theme color from the Malice Mizer era.

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al78901

Mana is a charismatic figure in the Gothic-Lolita world who has attracted global attention.
So who is this Mana that gothic-lolitas all around the world look up to?

MALICE MIZER was a Japanese band. They are generally known as a "visual-kei" band. They were formed in August 1992 and went on hiatus on December 31, 2001. The band's name comes from the words "malice" and "misery" in French.

MALICE MIZER was a colorful presence even in the visual-kei scene.

Mana has used blue as his theme color ever since he was in MALICE MIZER.

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al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama.

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV.

About 180 maids are registered. Please pay admission fee 600 yen plus your order on menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

There might be new idles from there. ↵
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al101002

Their maid costume is designed by the world renowned designer Keita Maruyama!

The most famous maid cafe in Akihabara that you might have seen on TV!

About 180 maids work there. You pay an admission fee of 600 yen plus anything you order from the menu.

There is a seasonal menu.

A new idol might come from there.

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Coplanarity inspection device which can measure the floatation volume of the work from the glass surface relative to the glass surface without contact.
As the small size of the basic structure and and optimum inspection program based on inspection algorithms, you can have a coplanarity inspection in-line.

● High-speed shape measurement using the phase shift method
● Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time
● Quickly understand the glass ground point
● Different materials (resin, metal, etc.) in the view field can be measured at the same time
● 2D tests such as lead pitch test can be measured at the same time

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The coplanarity inspection device is a device that can measure the flotation volume of work from the glass surface based on the glass surface without contact.
Miniaturizing basic structures, the inspection algorithms also use optimum inspection programs, making it possible to conduct coplanarity inspection in-line.

● High-speed shape measurement using the phase shift method
● Swell and warp of the resin which could not be observed until now is measured at the same time
● Quick understanding the glass ground point
● Different materials (resin, metal, etc.) in the field of view can be measured at the same time
● 2D tests such as the lead pitch test can be conducted at the same time

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Different materials, such as resin, metal also are measured at the same time if the field of view.
Two-dimensional tests such as measurement between lead pitch are also checked at the same time.

Verifying the work from a variety of angles
A variety of analysis function by utilizing the surface measurement
By analyzing the data of the imaging timing , it is accurately grasped the deformation of not only the lead but also the resin.

No need of troublesome adjustment
The auto-correction to the work temperature in 3 easy steps

Possible profile acquisition of work temperature by the profile creation mode
Once you create it, as it correct automatically the ambient temperature so that the work temperature even without a thermocouple in the work, no need the hassles of adjustment after that.

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Different materials, such as resin or metal also are measured at the same time if in the field of view.
Two-dimensional tests such as measurement between lead pitch are also checked at the same time.

Verify work from a variety of angles
It features a variety of analysis functions by utilizing the surface measurement
By analyzing the data of each photographing timing, it accurately grasps deformation of not only the lead but also the resin.

No need for troublesome adjustment
Auto-correction to work temperature in 3 easy steps

Able to acquire a profile of the work temperature in profile creation mode
Once created, it will then automatically correct itself to the ambient temperature, even without a thermocouple, meaning no time is needed to adjust anything.

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This product is designed to use in Japan.
For some countries which a successful bidder uses, the conversion plug and transformer of an electric socket may be needed.
If an additional charge is got about a conversion plug and a transformer, it can send together.
If there is a question about a power supply, please give me an inquiry before a bid.

Moreover, the manual of this product is created in Japanese.
The manual operation button of the products are written in Japanese.
Please give me a bid after an understanding.

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This product is designed for use in Japan.
A conversion plug and electrical transformer may be needed depending on which country the item will be used in.
If you are willing to pay an additional fee, I will send a conversion plug and transformer together with the item.
If you have any questions about power in regards to this product, please send me an inquiry before you bid.

Also, the manual of this product is written in Japanese.
The text of the buttons on the product is also in Japanese.
Please bid after careful consideration.

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I attached list of link.

1.Judge the quality of each link's translation result following the explanation of the level.
2. Enter the level.
3.Leave a message if you want.

As for levels, please refer to the explanation on the file.
Once you enter every levels, you finish your job.
If there is any trouble, please let me know.

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I have attached a list of links.

1. Judge the quality of each link's translation result on a 6 option scale in accordance with the explanation of the levels.
2. Enter the level.
3. Leave a comment if you like.

In regards to levels, please refer to the simple explanation in the file.
Once you have entered all levels, your job will be done.
Please let me know if you have any problems.

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Characteristics

1)User registration and selection of the other parties are not necessary.
To use location information, user registration and selection of other parties are not necessary to send/receive photos.

2)Able to download the original data
Usually sharing pictures on SNS, the pictures are downsized automatically, [KISS] is possible to receive the data by the original size.

3)Easy operation for easy usage for anyone
In the screen, you see only [Lists] and [pictures] and just 2 buttons of [Upload] and [Catch], you can send/receive by only the single action.

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Characteristics

1)User registration and selection of other parties are not necessary.
By using location information, user registration and selection of other parties are not necessary to send/receive photos.

2)Able to download original data
Pictures files are often automatically compressed when sharing pictures on SNS, however with [KISS] it is possible to receive data in its original size.

3)Easy operation for easy usage by anyone
In the screen, there is only [Lists] and [pictures] and just 2 buttons - [Upload] and [Catch]. You can send/receive with just a single click.

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I am lost the track. Please check the site map if you need to be rescued.

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I lost the track. Please check the site map if you need to be rescued.

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I'm a little confused.

I also want to FBA sell in Amazon France.
Is there a need to put it in France's warehouse if I decide to FBA sell in Amazon France.
I want to FBA sell in Amazon France though, so I processed the FBA delivery, but the delivery destination becomes Italy.

Will it be sent to Italy's warehouse?

Won't the shipment be delayed if it will be sent to Italy's warehouse?

Can I only FBA sell in Italy?

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I'm a little confused.

I also want to FBA sell on Amazon France.
Is there a need to put products in a French warehouse if I decide to FBA sell on Amazon France?
However, I want to FBA sell on Amazon France so I processed the FBA delivery, but the delivery destination becomes Italy.

Will the products be sent from an Italian warehouse?

Won't the shipment be delayed if they are sent from an Italian warehouse?

Can I only FBA sell in Italy?

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Display Stand Assembling Instructions

Pats : 1 Display Stand, 8 Holders

1. Tiered platform Assembly
Remove the paper liner from double-faced tape, then stick A, B, C

2. Sticking the Back Panel
Stick back panel and tiered platform together

3. Insert Holders
Fold holders ①~⑧
Insert holders along the order

4. Finishing
Insert Products in ①~⑥ and ⑧, catalogue in ⑦, it's done.

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Display Stand Assembly Instructions

Parts : 1 Display Stand, 8 Holders

1. Tiered Platform Assembly
Remove the paper liner from the double-sided tape, then stick it to A, B, C

2. Sticking the Back Panel
Stick back panel and tiered platform together

3. Insert Holders
Fold holders ①~⑧
Insert holders in numerical order

4. Finishing
Insert Products into ①~⑥ and ⑧, and the catalogue into ⑦ and it's done.

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<Point>
・ Status epilepticus is often seen in the infants and eldery.
・ Its cause is various, and the prognosis normally depends on the primary disease. Since complicated factors concern, there is no definite method of treatment for it.
・ Longer convulsive seizure continues, more difficult it will be to stop status epilepticus, and will affect the subsequent growth of the brain.
・ It is a good news that the approval of the indication of intravenous phenobarbital （Nobelbar(R)） since Dec 2009 and fosphenytoin (Fostoin(R)) in December 2011. ↵

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<Point>
・ Status epilepticus is often seen in infants and the eldery.
・ It has various causes, and the prognosis normally depends on the primary disease. Since complicated factors are concerned, there is no definite method of treatment for it.
・ Status epilepticus is harder to stop the longer the convulsive seizures continue and it affects the subsequent growth of the brain.
・ The approval of the indication of intravenous phenobarbital (Nobelbar(R)) from Dec 2009 and fosphenytoin (Fostoin(R)) in December 2011 is good news.

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Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. He entitled it as "challenging the world". He explained that the vision of the group is to create devices and services with new work style, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Company-oriented IT Solution and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. Titled "Challenging the World," his address explained that the vision of the Group is to provide a new work style to create the company's devices and services, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Corporate-oriented IT solutions and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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Dear 〇〇,

We sincerely thank you for your purchase.

We will give you a refund for the VAT that you had paid.
Please take a photo or scan the documents you have for VAT, and send it to us via email. This is a necessary procedure for us to give you a refund.
We will process the refund after checking the documents.

Sincerely yours,


We have confirmed the documents.
We already sent you a refund for the 〇〇 euro that you paid for VAT, so please confirm that you have received it.
We thank you for your cooperation.

We look forward to your next purchase.

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Dear 〇〇,

We sincerely thank you for your purchase.

We will give you a refund for the VAT that you paid.
Please take a photo or scan the VAT documents you have and send it to us via email. This is a necessary procedure for us to give you a refund.
We will process the refund after checking the documents.

Sincerely yours,


We have confirmed the documents.
We have sent you a refund for the 〇〇 euro that you paid for VAT, so please confirm that you have received it.
We thank you for your cooperation.

We look forward to your next purchase.

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My order arrived today.

I sent this email because the product's quality is poor.
"Corsica Pants Black S"
- The cloth in the knees is stretched and it is worn out.
- There is a hole because of a frayed spot.
- There are strong traces of marks left by the hanger around the waist area.

I am wondering if this product is a leftover stock or intended for rental because of the logo on the hip area.

First, I want to have this item replaced immediately.
Then, I want to have an explanation as to why this item was sent, and what kind of inspection was done at the time of shipping?

This has a negative effect on your brand.

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My order arrived today.

I am sending you this email because the product I received is of poor quality.
"Corsica Pants Black S"
- The cloth in the knees is stretched and worn out.
- The fabric is frayed and there is a hole in it.
- There are strong traces of marks left by the hanger around the waist area.

Also, I am wondering if this product is leftover stock or intended for rental because of the logo on the hip area.

First, I want to have this item replaced immediately.
Then, I would like an explanation as to why this item was sent, and what kind of inspection was done at the time of shipping.

This has a negative effect on your brand.

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You have a phone call from Mr. Tanaka. Would you like me to put you through to him?
Go ahead, please.

I'm afraid he is not in the room.

Could I come over to your room?

Could I have your name?

Would you like breakfast at extra charge?

The elevator is over there.

For security reason, in the elevator, put your card in the slot on the left side, then take the card off to push the floor button.

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You have a phone call from Mr. Tanaka. Would you like me to put you through to him?
Go ahead, please.

I'm afraid he is not in the room.

Could I come over to your room?

Could I have your name?

Would you like breakfast at extra charge?

The elevator is over there.

For security reasons, please insert and remove your card in the slot on the left-hand side of the elevator before pressing the floor buttons.

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On July 3rd, the event production company Seresupo has founded "Sustainable Event Institute", a research institution conducting research and development in the field of sustainability realization.
Since the international standard of "Management System for the Sustainability of Events" had been issued and utilized in London Olympics in 2012, the consideration of sustainability around the international events has been strongly demanded.
For the ideas of the client, the event management in view of sustainability is proposed in the sustainable event Institute.

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On July 3rd, the event production company Seresupo will found the "Sustainable Event Institute", a research institution conducting research and development into sustainability realization in the field of events.
Since the international standard of "Management System for the Sustainability of Events" was issued and utilized at the 2012 London Olympics, the consideration of sustainability around the international events has been strongly demanded.
At the Sustainable Event Institute, event management you can experience, while looking at the client's ideas from the point of view of sustainability, will be proposed.

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I am sorry for the insufficient explanation.

The listed items are used and are $70.

New items are $120.

Sorry again for the inadequate explanation.

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I am sorry for not explaining things clearly enough.

The listed items are used and are $70.

New items are $120.

Sorry again for the inadequate explanation.

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I do not understand what you mean. Do you say that you do repairs?
I can not accept that request.
I will return it, so please refund it. Please refund the postage that I bear, too.
Do you remember that you said you could replace it?
And, I am sure you have the product, don't you. I know it because other guy have ordered and you shipped it.
Do not tell me a lie.

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I do not understand what you mean. Are you telling me to repair it?
I can not accept that request.
I will return it, so please refund it. Please refund the postage that I bear, too.
Do you remember that you said you could replace it?
And, I am sure you have the product, don't you. I know because another guy ordered it and you shipped it.
Do not lie to me.

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Thank you for your message. I have not received the item yet. Please tell me the track number.

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Thank you for your message. I have not received the item yet. Please tell me the tracking number.