Celeste Scott (fuyunoriviera) — 付けたレビュー

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I think it would be best for this company to handle our matters.↵
This is because compared to us, they are more knowledgeable about the sales of these products as well as factories and power generation plants.

I stated rather firmly that I wanted to take a look at the price list and conducted a business discussion with the company that was interested in the products from your company last month.↵
The company personnel told me that without the price list, we could not sell products to our customers.
In Japan, it is our basic style to reveal the prices before engaging in negotiations. So I seek your understanding in regards to this cultural difference.
If we don't obtain the price list, we will not be able to let this company handle our products.

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I think it would be best for a trading company to handle our matters because they are more knowledgeable about factories and power generation plants (where these products will be sold) than us.

I stated rather firmly that I wanted the price list because when I conducted a business discussion last month with the trading company that is interested in your company's products, they told me that I would not be able to sell products to clients without a price list.
In Japan, it is our basic style to state prices before engaging in negotiations. So I seek your understanding in regards to this cultural difference.
If we don't obtain the price list, we will not be able to let the trading company handle our products.

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Thank you for your understanding.
It is hard to come by A and the price of it has been going up in Japan. However, from what I have heard, the production of A has not been discontinued, therefore, it will be on the market again sometime around next year.
It is too bad to hear that you cannot play your video game with a controller, however, please allow us to wish you a merry Christmas.
We have shipped the item(s) to you today. The new tracking number is A.
If you receive the item that was sent (from Kenji) the last time , please tell the delivery person to return it to sender.
If you already have received it, please let us know so we can give you the address to send it back to.

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Thank you for your understanding.
It is hard to come by A and its price has been going up in Japan. However, from what I have heard, the production of A has not been discontinued. Therefore, it will be on the market again sometime around next year.
I am sorry to hear that you cannot play your video game with a controller, however, please allow us to wish you a merry Christmas.
We shipped the item(s) to you today. The new tracking number is A.
If you receive the item that was sent (from Kenji) the last time, please tell the delivery person to return it to sender.
If you already have received it, please let us know so we can give you the address to send it back to.

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I'm glad to hear that you understand.
The price of A is increasing and it's difficult to get. But I heard that it will restart to sell in Japan from next year, not out of production.
I feel sorry that you can not play with controller but wish you to enjoy Christmas.
I resent the goods again today. The new tracking number is A.
If the same goods I sent last time ( from Kenji) is delivered, you can reject to accept it, just tell it to delivery person.
If you may accept it mistakenly, just let me know. I will inform you the address for sending back. ↵

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I'm glad to hear that you understand.
The price of A is increasing and it's difficult to get in Japan. But I heard that it will be sold again in Japan from next year, so it's not out of production.
I feel sorry that you cannot play with a controller on Christmas, but wish you a good holiday nevertheless.
I resent the goods today. The new tracking number is A.
If the same package we sent last time (from Kenji) arrives, you can reject the delivery, just tell the delivery person.
If you accept it mistakenly, just let me know. I will inform you of the address to send it back to me.

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Yesterday I received the products that I ordered on December 12th.
In the parcel there were a few missing products and some others that had been sent by mistake.
I ordered 10 pillow cases, but I only received 7.
I also received 3 cuddlers that I had not ordered.

When I received the wrong items 2 months ago, I was told that if I ever received wrong items again, I could send them back together.↵
(Please refer from emails from around November 13th.)
I will be returning the wrong items I received them and this time's together. Is this OK?

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Yesterday I received the products that I ordered on December 12th.
In the parcel there were a few missing products and some others that had been sent by mistake.
I ordered 10 pillow cases, but I only received 7.
I also received 3 cuddlers that I had not ordered.

When I received the wrong items 2 months ago, I was told at that time that if I ever received wrong items again, I could send them back together (please refer to emails from around November 13th).
I will be returning the wrong items together with the ones I received then. Is that OK?

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I received the items I ordered on December 12th yesterday.

There are some items that are not enough in number and others that are wrong.
We ordered 10 white pillow covers, we got only 7 though.
Instead, you sent us 3 cuddles, which we didn't order.

We received wrong items about two months ago. In our contact at that time (please check the emails around November 13th) you told us to send back the wrong items in case we receive wrong ones again. Is it okay for you to send back the wrong items altogether?

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We received the items we ordered on December 12th yesterday.

However, we did not receive enough of some items, and others were sent to us mistakenly.
We ordered 10 white pillow covers and only received 7.
You sent us 3 Cuddlers instead. We did not order those.

We received wrong items from you about two months ago. In our contact at the time (please check emails around November 13th), you told us to send them back to you together with any wrong items we should receive next time. Is it okay for us to send back the previous wrong items with the wrong ones we received this time?

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Am I correct in understanding that the invoice for this month will be sent on December 27 (Friday)?

Also, please provide me with a status update on the Komplete Kontrol S49 that I confirmed with you the other day.
I would like to use the holidays to learn how to use the product, so I would much appreciate it if you could provide me with it before the end of the year.

I understand.
Understood.

I can handle this case if the deadline only if the deadline for the translation work is by 1:00PM on December 27.

Thank you for all of your help and cooperation this year.
I am looking forward to working with you again in the New Year.
Happy New Year and all the best for the holidays!

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Am I correct in understanding that the invoice for this month will be sent on December 27 (Friday)?

Also, please provide me with a status update on the Komplete Kontrol S49 that I confirmed with you the other day.
I would like to use the holidays to learn how to use the product, so I would much appreciate it if you could provide me with it before the end of the year.

I understand.
Understood.

I will be able to translate this if the deadline is 1:00PM on December 27.

Thank you for all of your help and cooperation this year.
I am looking forward to working with you again in the New Year.
Happy New Year and all the best for the holidays!

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We usually ask our customer to absorb the shipping cost if they change the purchased item into another size or color. However, we understand that it will takes substantial cost for the international shipping. As we are sorry to ask you to bear this round-trip shipping cost, we have decided to provide the item delivered to you as a gift, and also cancel the specific order.

If you could not wear it due to the size in large or small, please give it for your family or friend as a gift.
I would appreciate if you could place the new order in appropriate size or color.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We usually ask our customers to absorb the return shipping cost if they change their purchased item to another size or color. However, we understand that it return international shipping will cost quite a lot. We feel bad about asking you to bear this round-trip shipping cost, so we have decided to provide the item delivered to you as a gift, and also cancel your order.

If you cannot wear it due to it being too big or small, please give it to your family or friend as a gift.
Please place a new order in the appropriate size or color.

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Thank you for placing the bid.
I contact you because there is something important that you must know.
I have posted a wrong photo for this product by mistake and I am terribly sorry about that. The actual product, though is the same model from Company G, was manufactured one year earlier (i.e. 1977). The soft case and pickguard that come with the product are not original. I am going to attach the correct photo for you to confirm the details. Also, I shall offer you a $50 discount. I look forward to your reply after your consideration.↵

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Thank you for your bid.
I am contacting you because there is something important that you must know.
I am terribly sorry, but one of the photos I uploaded for the product you placed a bid on is incorrect. The actual product, despite being the same model from Company G, was manufactured one year earlier (1977). The soft case and pickguard that come with the product are not originals. I will upload the correct photo for you to confirm the details. Also, I shall offer you a $50 discount. I look forward to your reply after your consideration.

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Checking my credit card record, I noticed refund of $17.03(AUD) on Nov. 13th. I believe this is for return shipping fee for RA# xxxxx. However, I do not see any refund for the payment of merchandise. Will you please check it again. Thank you.

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Checking my credit card record, I noticed a refund of $17.03(AUD) on Nov. 13th. I believe this is the return shipping fee for RA# xxxxx. However, I have not received a refund for the product itself. Could you please check why that is? Thank you.

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You have promised to issue a refund on the product price and the return shipping fee due to the shipping miss on your end.
Please confirm the email sent to me coming from Sheridan last Nov 13.

I have received the return shipping charges in PayPal, but the product price have not been refunded yet.
Please refund the amount urgently via PayPal.

Thank you.

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You promised to issue me a refund for the product price and return shipping fee due to a shipping error on your end.
Please confirm the email Sheridan sent me on November 13.

I have received the return shipping fee through PayPal, but have not yet been refunded the product price.
Please refund that amount via PayPal as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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Truthfully, we won't get profits for anything below $840.
But we are going to accept your offer for $815 in the hopes of being able to do more transactions with you from now on.
We have relisted the Best Offer option, please make an offer from your side. Thank you.

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Truthfully, we won't profit from anything below $840.
But we are going to accept your offer of $815 in the hopes of being able to do more transactions with you in the future.
We have relisted the Best Offer option, so please make an offer. Thank you.

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＜About performance in detail＞
Title： KODA KUMI Xmas LIVE 2014 in UNIVERSAL STUDIOS JAPAN®
Date・time： 2014/11/15（Sat）　Open 9:00（open park）　Start 11:00 　
Place： UNIVERSAL STUDIOS JAPAN®　Gramercy Park special stage
Performer：Kumi Koda
Price：Same for adult・child 8,640yen(including tax)

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＜Performance Details＞
Title: KODA KUMI Xmas LIVE 2014 in UNIVERSAL STUDIOS JAPAN®
Date/Time: 2014/11/15（Sat）　Open 9:00（open park）　Start 11:00 　
Place: UNIVERSAL STUDIOS JAPAN®　Gramercy Park special stage
Performer: Kumi Koda
Price: Adult/Child 8,640 yen (including tax)

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Thank you for your reply.

The address
support@dares.jp
is not used any more, so please send mails to
support@hammock-rest.com

Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply.

The address
support@dares.jp
is not used any more, so please send mail to
support@hammock-rest.com.

Thank you.

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■Sep. 13 & 14
Masashi Larry Ohiwa/ Hidetsugu Shibata(The Untouchables)

■Artists
【Sep. 13(Sat)】
<LIVE AREA: RAIJIN>
[ARTIST]
MIRIYA KATO/KUROYUME/SHIDO/T.M.Revolution/MINMI/May J/Momoiro Clover Z(Opening Act)
[PERFORMER]
Impulse/TKO/Fujisaki Market/Fruits Punch/Robert

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■Sep. 13 & 14
Masashi Larry Ohiwa/ Hidetsugu Shibata(The Untouchables)

■Artists
【Sep. 13(Sat)】
<LIVE AREA: RAIJIN>
[ARTISTS]
MIRIYA KATO/KUROYUME/SHIDO/T.M.Revolution/MINMI/May J/Momoiro Clover Z(Opening Act)
[PERFORMERS]
Impulse/TKO/Fujisaki Market/Fruits Punch/Robert

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"INAZUMA ROCK FESTIVAL 2014" <Additional Artists & Time Table!!>

"INAZUMA ROCK FESTIVAL 2014" will be held for 2 DAYS 13-14. September.2014 at the Karasuma Peninsula's Lawn Park (KUSATSU, SHIGA).
We announce the additional Artists & Time table on the Stage of RAIJIN, HUJIN and RYUJIN!!

Date: 2014. September. 13(Sat) and 14(Sun)
Place: Karasuma Peninsula's Lawn Park, Kusatsu, Shiga, Japan( Shiga Biwako Museum west side Multipurpose plaza)↵

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"INAZUMA ROCK FESTIVAL 2014" <Additional Artists & Time Table!!>

"INAZUMA ROCK FESTIVAL 2014" will be held for 2 DAYS on 13-14. September 2014 at the Karasuma Peninsula's Lawn Park (KUSATSU, SHIGA).
We have announced additional artists & the time table for the RAIJIN, HUJIN and RYUJIN Stages!!

Date: 2014. September. 13(Sat) and 14(Sun)
Place: Karasuma Peninsula's Lawn Park, Kusatsu, Shiga, Japan (West side of Shiga Biwako Museum, Multipurpose plaza)

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■Official HP：http://inazumarock.com/
■Official facebook：http://www.facebook.com/InazumaRock/
■Official Twitter：https://twitter.com/irf_official/
■Official YouTube Channel：https://www.youtube.com/user/irfofficialchannel

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■Official Website: //inazumarock.com/
■Official Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/InazumaRock/
■Official Twitter: https://twitter.com/irf_official/
■Official YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/irfofficialchannel

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This item is not mine.
Because its shipment label is Ste52-034, mine is Ste052-304.
This is your mistake, so please repay $2 which I paid for checking the product image.

Best regards.↵

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This item is not mine.
Its shipment label is Ste52-034, whereas mine is Ste052-304.
This is your mistake, so please send me $2 which was the cost I incurred to check the product image.

Thank you in advance.

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Please input at the price.
If you don't make profit at the lowest price, please change the price which you can make 20~30% profit and imput it.

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Please input the price.
If you don't make a profit at the lowest price, please change the price to one where you can make 20~30% profit and input it.

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As mentioned above, Japanese products has started being sold on the market.
If there is a price difference of more than 30% in the same category, please put the product up for sale.
If not, please find a category where you see a price different, then put it up for sale.
When you put it up for sale, you type the product information, then go back to the previous page.

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As mentioned above, Japanese products have started being sold on the market.
If there is a price difference of more than 30% in the same product category, please put the product up for sale.
If not, please find a category where you see a price difference, then put it up for sale.
When you put it up for sale, you type the product information, then go back to the previous page.

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This Facebook group is mainly focused on the following activities.

1. Posting articles about "A" (The moderator will choose which articles will be posted based on strict guidelines)
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4. Interaction among fellow Ambassadors.

We hope that all Ambassadors will help spread Japanese culture around the globe by sharing articles about "A" with friends and families.