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Happie nuts

7월17일(금)
Happie nuts 복간결정!
코다라이미가 표지 카버 걸이 된다!

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Happie nuts

7월17일(금)
Happie nuts 복간결정!
코다 쿠미가 표지 커버 걸이 된다!

元の翻訳
Thanks for your esteemed message.
As the commodity is to be shipped on June/13th, you can expect the arrival within June.

Please be assured you will avail of from August.
If it not delivered, please send the message again.

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Thanks for your message.
As the commodity was shipped on June/13th, you can expect the arrival within June.

Please be assured you will be able to use it for August.
If it is not delivered, please send a message again.

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I'm pleased to write to your esteemed company.
I would like to purchase the commodity on your web shop.
I have only found the home page for the input of the american address after selecting the item into the shopping cart and the paypal for the international order since i live in Japan.
Please teach me the way for you to send the item to Japan, for it's my most wanted one.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon

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I'm pleased to write to your esteemed company.
I would like to purchase the commodity on your web shop.
I have only found the homepage for the input [word choice] of an American address after selecting the item into the shopping cart and PayPal for the international order since I live in Japan [unclear].
Please tell me how to purchase this item and have it shipped to Japan, for it's my most wanted one [unnatural].
Looking forward to hearing from you soon

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1. You are required to check and confirm the damage of the parcel in the presentation of the post office or the delivery company of your own country.
2. You are to send me the damage report (confirmation of the damage) established by the delivery company of your own country.
3. I will submit the claim based on the damage report to Japanese Postal (Post Bureau).

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1. You are required to check and confirm the damage of the parcel in the presence of the post office or the delivery company of your own country.
2. You are to send me the damage report (confirmation of the damage) established by the delivery company of your own country.
3. I will submit the claim based on the damage report to Japanese Postal (Post Bureau).

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*입장료 일반 500엔. 학생 400엔(소학생 이하 무료)
AAA Party 회원 100엔 할인(입장시 회원증 제시)
*유료입장객에게는 전람회 오리지날 티케트(전 7종)를 무작위 추첨으로 선물합니다.
*고객 본인에 한정합니다. *복수 할인 서비스 병용은 불가합니다.
*혼잡시에는 입장이 제한되는 경우도 있을 수 있습니다.

*주 최: 로프트 바르코
*협 력: 에이백스 라이브 크리에이티브
* 기획 제작: 다블 칼쳐 파트너즈/산 보드

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*입장료 일반 500엔. 학생 400엔(소학생 이하 무료)
AAA Party 회원 100엔 할인(입장시 회원증 제시)
*유료입장객에게는 전람회 오리지날 티켓(전 7종)를 무작위 추첨으로 선물합니다.
*고객 본인에 한정합니다. *복수 할인 서비스 병용은 불가합니다.
*혼잡시에는 입장이 제한되는 경우도 있을 수 있습니다.

*주 최: 로프트 파르코
*협 력: 에이백스 라이브 크리에이티브
* 기획 제작: 더블 컬쳐 파트너즈/산 보드

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*인기를 모았던 팝콘 PALOMITAS부터, 멤버가 실제로 먹어 보고 추천했던 여러 군것질 거리를 판매합니다!
*각 7종 540엔 내지 432엔(맛에 따라 가격이 다릅니다)

*기격에는 전부 세금이 포함되어 있습니다.
*전국의 We Love AAA전에서 판매하는 상품과 같은 내용이 되겠습니다.

그 외, 이미 호평리에 판매되고 있는 AAA 상품도 전시장에서 판매할 예정이오니 꼭 이용해 주시기 바랍니다!

*기타 AAA 상품
에 반다 키세카에 키트 1028엔

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*인기를 모았던 팝콘 PALOMITAS부터, 멤버가 실제로 먹어 보고 추천했던 여러 군것질 거리를 판매합니다!
*각 7종 540엔 내지 432엔(맛에 따라 가격이 다릅니다)

*기격에는 전부 세금이 포함되어 있습니다.
*전국의 We Love AAA전에서 판매하는 상품과 같은 내용이 되겠습니다.

그 외, 이미 호평리에 판매되고 있는 AAA 상품도 전시장에서 판매할 예정이오니 꼭 이용해 주시기 바랍니다!

*기타 AAA 상품
에~판다 옷갈아입히기 키트 1028엔

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메르세드-벤즈 뮤직 팩토리 크리스마스 파티 @메르세데스-벤즈 콘넥션
일시: 12월12일(금) 19:00 개장/19:30 공연 시작(22:30 종료 예정)
장소: 메르세데스-밴즈 콘넥션(록뽄기)
사회: 그로바
게스트: 크레바, 다치 미우라

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메르세데스-벤츠 뮤직 팩토리 크리스마스 파티 @메르세데스-벤츠 커넥션
일시: 12월 12일(금) 19:00 개장/19:30 공연 시작(22:30 종료 예정)
장소: 메르세데스-벤츠 커넥션(롯폰기)
사회: GROVER
게스트: KREVA, DAICHI MIURA

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You can experience the world first 360 degree virtual reality music video at [TOKYO DESINGERS WEEK 2014] held for 10 days from October 25th(Sat.) to November 3rd(Mon.Holiday) in Tokyo following London!

KUMI KODA announced he would make [Dance In The Rain], VR(virtual reality) music video on which you can feel the image world of 360 degree, with the foremost upgraded technology - [ocular slipt] that whirls the hot topics in all the relating line of the business.

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You can experience the world first 360 degree virtual reality music video at [TOKYO DESINGERS WEEK 2014] held for 10 days from October 25th(Sat.) to November 3rd(Mon.Holiday) in Tokyo following London!

KUMI KODA announced she would make [Dance In The Rain], VR(virtual reality) music video on which you can feel the image world of 360 degree, with the foremost upgraded technology - [ocular slipt] that is much talked about in all business field.

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19:00 ~ [QuizDoremifadon! ~ Hit melodies 300 best selected by 10,000 people who recommend them as the most moving ~](Urada)

Program HP: http://www.fujitv.co.jp/b_hp/doremifadon/
*Broadcasting date and time may differ depending on the region.

Fuji TV

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19:00 ~ [QuizDoremifadon! ~ Hit melodies 300 best songs selected by 10,000 people who recommend them as the most moving ~] (Urata)

Program HP: http://www.fujitv.co.jp/b_hp/doremifadon/
*Broadcasting date and time may differ depending on the region.

Fuji TV

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[Cheeky Parade NY TOUR Exploration & Report@Amestar] decided on air!

The special program of Amestar for the commemoration of Cheeky Parade's last tour performance at New York is decided on air!
WagaIe San is invited as the MC!

Contents full of the amazement and awesome for 30 minutes, where [The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival], the last tour performance will be introduced and the interview with the members about the mindset just before the start and the expectation e.t.c. will be shown!

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"Cheeky Parade NY TOUR Exploration & Report @AmebaStudio" will be on air!

The special program of AmebaStudio for the commemoration of Cheeky Parade's last tour performance at New York is decided on air!
Wagaya is invited as the MC!

Contents full of the amazement and awesome for 30 minutes, where "The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival", the last tour performance will be introduced and the members interview about the mental state and enthusiasm prior to departure!

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AAA Koujinshiro decided to perform in [Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival] on Oct./26(Sun.)!

* AAA Koujinshiro Talk Show
Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival

[Date] October 26th (Sunday)

[Venue] Kyoto Kacho University. Kacho College Auditorium (456-3 Hayashi Shita Cho Higashi Yama Ku Kyoto Shi)

[Admission/Curtain Up] 11:00/12:00

[Fee] General Jyen 1,000(tax inclusive/all seat designated)

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AAA Koujinshiro has decided to perform at [Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival] on Oct./26 (Sun.)!

* AAA Koujinshiro Talk Show
Kyoto Kacho Univ. Kacho College Kacho Festival

[Date] October 26th (Sunday)

[Venue] Kyoto Kacho University. Kacho College Auditorium (456-3 Hayashi Shita Cho Higashi Yama Ku Kyoto Shi)

[Admission/Curtain Up] 11:00/12:00

[Fee] General Jyen 1,000 (tax inclusive/all seat designated)

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Koda Raimi's New Single [HOTEL] Selling Out on Aug/6/2014! Premium of Color Body Up Poster & All the Recorded Contents Open & Start of Coupling Trial Hearing!

[Remarks]
*As the premium will be available on first come first serve base at multiple official shops, it will end at the exhaustion.
*The customers who will book at the official shops of Koda Kumi are expected to choose which of the above 2 kinds of the premium.
*Please book through the exclusive set carts of the fan club limited edition and the general sale one.

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Koda Raimi [spelling]'s New Single "HOTEL" Selling Out [mistranslation] on Aug/6/2014! Premium of Color Body Up Poster & All the Recorded Contents Open & Start of Coupling Trial Hearing!

[Remarks]
*As the premium will be available on a first-come first-serve basis at multiple official shops, it will end at the exhaustion [?].
*The customers who will book at the official shops of Koda Kumi are expected to choose which of the above 2 kinds of the premium.
*Please book through the exclusive set carts of the fan club limited edition and the general sale one.

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[Ganagawa] @JAM EXPO 2014

Date: Aug. 31st(Sun.)
Time: Admission 9:00/Curtain Up 10:00(planned)
Venue: Yokohama Arena

*Ticket
Standard ticket Standing ticket with CD 6,995 JYen
Standard ticket Designated seat ticket with CD 8,023 JYen
*The theme song of @JAM is recorded in C.D. The hand over will be realized at the times of the entrance of the venue. Please receive necessarily at the entrance.
trial ticket 2,571 JYen(limited quantity)

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[Kanagawa] @JAM EXPO 2014

Date: Aug. 31st(Sun.)
Time: Admission 9:00/Curtain Up 10:00(planned)
Venue: Yokohama Arena

*Ticket
Standard ticket Standing ticket with CD 6,995 JYen
Standard ticket Designated seat ticket with CD 8,023 JYen
*The theme song of @JAM is recorded in C.D. The hand over will be realized at the times of the entrance of the venue. Please receive necessarily at the entrance.
trial ticket 2,571 JYen(limited quantity)

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8/30(Sat.) a-nation stadium fes. powered by inZeri- Dongbangshingi Performance Decided!!

*Performance Information
Date & Time: Aug. 30(Sat.) 2014 Admission 14:00/Curtain Up 16:00
Place: Tokyo, Ajinomoto Stadium
Performers: Artist: Dongbangshingi, Every Little Thing, KREVA, May], Sonar Pocket and more
*Alphabetical order

Ticket charge
1. General Designated Seat(with glowing fan) 9,800 JYen Tax included
2. Sitting Designated Seat(with glowing fan) 9,800 JYen Tax included

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8/30 (Sat) a-nation stadium fes. powered by in gelly- TOHOSHINKI joins the performance!!

*Performance Information
Date & Time: Aug. 30, 2014 (Sat) Admission 14:00/Curtain Up 16:00
Place: Ajinomoto Stadium, Tokyo
Performing Artist: TOHOSHINKI, Every Little Thing, KREVA, May J, Sonar Pocket and more
*In alphabetical order

Ticket Price
1. General numbered ticket (incl. glowing fan) JPY 9,800, tax included
2. Seating ticket with a designated number (incl. glowing fan) JPY 9,800, tax included

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We have visited the bank in the afternoon of that day.
At first, the bank declined to accept the check in USD from the second hand vehicles to Uganda formally, by the reason that the odds of the fake exceeds 90%. However after and as the result of our some persuasion, they formally accept the collection of the check as of that day as the file attached. But they told us it took about 3 weeks↵
for them to confirm to the spot and Wells Fargo N.A and to transfer the cash to our company.
Please understand we couldn't prepare to ship until the confirmation on the transfer of the money.
In addition, when the check proves the scam, we will take the legal measures.

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We visited the bank this afternoon.
At first, the bank declined to accept the check in USD for the second hand vehicles to Uganda, for the reason that the odds of being a fake exceeds 90%. However, as the result of our some persuasion [word choice], they accept [tense confusion] the check today as you can see in the file attached. But they told us it took [tense confusion] about 3 weeks for them to confirm with Wells Fargo N.A to transfer the cash to our company.
Please understand we couldn't prepare to ship until the confirmation on the transfer of the money.
In addition, if the check proves to be scam, we will take legal measures.

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Today we have received the reply from Post Office. They confirmed the postal matter had arrived at Kazakhstan.
As the track within Kazakhstan is impossible, we have currently asked Internal Post Office to confirm the whereabouts of the post in Kazakhstan.
We expect the result at an early date, but it might take one month if late.
Once upon the successive information, we will contact you. We are very sorry for the late process.

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Today we have received a response from the Post Office. They confirmed the postal matter had arrived at Kazakhstan.
As it is impossible to track the status within Kazakhstan, we have currently asked the Internal Post Office to confirm the whereabouts of the post in Kazakhstan.
We expect the result at an early date, but it might take one month if late.
Once we have more information, we will contact you. We are very sorry for the inconvenience this delay may have caused you.

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*The shining Uchiwa can be claimed on the spot of the hall on the performance date.
* Up to 8 Uchiwa is available per 1 person per 1 performance.
*Please understand the refund of the ticket charge due from the change of the performer is unavailable.
*There is the probability of the change of the times of the entrance/the curtain raise.

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*The shining Uchiwa can be claimed in the venue on the actual performance date.
*A person can order eight (8) Uchiwas per performance.
*Please understand the refund of the ticket charge from a change of performer is unavailable.
*There is the probability of a change of performer at the time of entrance or curtain raise.

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4. The solution of this issue is expected from Amazon.
2 shipments can not be done until the reply comes.
The response for the purchasers who don't reply
The response for the cases in which the returns occur
Can the damage from the refunds be recovered from Amazon?

5. The deterrence of the recurrence of the issue
For me to evade such a loss as this afterwards, I will confirm thoroughly.

6. In the last, I will do my best to solve this issue soon.
Even though the claim arises from this issue, as it dose not due to my mistake, I will respond not for me to be undermined.

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4. The solution of this issue is expected from Amazon.
2 shipments cannot be done until the reply comes.
The response for the purchasers who do not reply
The response for the cases in which the returns occur
Can the damage from the refunds be recovered from Amazon?

5. The deterrence of the recurrence of the issue
For me to evade such a loss as this afterwards, I will confirm thoroughly.

6. In the last, I will do my best to solve this issue soon.
Even though the claim arises from this issue, as it dose not due to my mistake, I will respond not for me to be undermined.

元の翻訳
We would like to add 5 same items.
The total is 6.
As a bothering inquiry, could you ship send them to Japan?
If available, please let us known the freight of 6 items to Japan.

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We would like to add 5 same items.
The total is 6.
By the way, would it be possible to send the items to Japan?
If possible, please let us know the shipping cost of 6 items to Japan.↵
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Thank you.

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Thanks for your esteemed message.

We are very sorry.
We are afraid there is the possibility of delivery failure from the error of the dispatch system, as for the lost of the commodity.
We will immediately refund.
Please let us known of, if the commodity arrive at you.

Thanks for your esteemed message.

We are very sorry. We are afraid there is the probability of the delivery error, if we check further.
As for the dispatch the commodity, it will be resent within 3 days.
Please accept our sincere apology.

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Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry.
We are afraid there may have been a delivery failure due to a dispatch system error--or perhaps the item has been lost.
We will immediately issue a refund.
Please let us know when the item arrives.

Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry. Our inquiry has revealed that there has likely been a delivery error.
We will resend the item within 3 days.
Please accept our sincere apology.

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[May]. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] Pre-Sale of T shirt and face towel from goods is decided!

National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo July 5th(Sat.) [May]. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~].
Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 kinds) and face towel (2 kinds) from the goods of this tour is decided!
Run Up of the items that enrich the tour of this year! You must check!

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[May J. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] T shirt and face towel from goods is on pre-sale!

National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo on July 5th(Sat.) [May J. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~].
Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 types) and face towel (2 types) from the goods of this tour is on pre-sale!
The items lined up to invigorate the tour this year! Check them out!