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元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
As for the panel of MX110, as it is made of acryl, I do not purchase this time.
I hate to ask you, but could you tell me the total by the following 2 panels again?
(1) MCD7000 135 dollars
(1)C34V 140 dollars

I am looking for the glass panel of the MCD7008. Please let me know when you receive it.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I completed the payment. I ask you to ship it after the checking.
As it is easy to be broken, I ask you to pack it with strict care.

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Thank you for contacting us.
As for the panel of MX110, as it is made of acryl, I do not purchase this time.
I hate to ask you, but could you tell me the total by the following 2 panels again?
(1) MCD7000 135 dollars
(1)C34V 140 dollars

I am looking for the glass panel of the MCD7008. Please let me know when you receive it.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I completed the payment. I ask you to ship it after checking.
As it is easy to be broken, I ask you to pack it with strict care.

元の翻訳
We prohibit that you stay overnight around the hall on the previous day of the event since it is a nuisance for those in the neighborhood.
We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

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We prohibit that you stay overnight around the hall from the previous day of the event since it is a nuisance for those in the neighborhood.
We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

元の翻訳
*During the handshake event, staffs may touch customers' shoulders or arms while leading the way. Only those who understand and accept this condition should be recommended to participate.
*Tickets will become invalid once any act of ticket scalping is found to be involved.
*Saving spots by putting bags or sit-in are not allowed in the premises or at the event site.
Taking photographs and recording are strongly prohibited during the event.
*Content of the event may subject to change due to members' situations. We appreciate your understanding.

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*During the handshake event, staffs may touch customers' shoulders or arms while leading the way. Only those who understand and accept this condition should be recommended to participate.
*Tickets will become invalid once any act of ticket scalping is found to be involved.
*Saving spots by putting bags or sit-in are not allowed in the premises or at the event site.
Taking photographs and recording are strongly prohibited during the event.
*Content of the event may be subject to change due to members' situations. We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
We are sorry for your trouble caused by our mistake which we sent wrong item to you.
We misunderstood it must be a cup although you sent us the picture of the broken lid.
To compensate this, we are going to send new tea pot.
Although we will arrange the delivery immediately, I am afraid that it takes 4 days for dispatch.
Is it all right to ship by EMS?
We are very sorry for your inconvenience.

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We are sorry for your trouble caused by our mistake which we sent wrong item to you.
We misunderstood it must be a cup although you sent us the picture of the broken lid.
To compensate for this, we are going to send new tea pot.
Although we will arrange the delivery immediately, I am afraid that it takes 4 days for dispatch.
Is it all right to ship by EMS?
We are very sorry for your inconvenience.↵
I apologize for you from the bottom of our heart.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
Today we received a reply from USPS. It is as follows.

According to their reply, the item is stored in the post office listed below.
Although there is an address to which it is sent, the number of the apartment, etc. might be missing.

Inquiring place(post office where the item is stored)
We hate to ask you, but could you please call the post office by yourself and tell them the number of the apartment?

We appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Today we received a reply from USPS. It is as follows.

According to their reply, the item is stored in the post office listed below.
Although there is an address to which it is sent, the room number of the apartment, etc. might be missing.

Contact Information (post office where the item is stored)
We hate to ask you, but could you please call the post office by yourself and tell them the room number of the apartment?

We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Next, we would like to inform you of defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

修正後
Next, we would like to inform you of the defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

元の翻訳
Before the show started, I tried the robot restaurant's boxed meal that I had ordered in advance for the occasion. It tasted pretty good! Considering the energy you will need to enjoy the show, I think it is a good idea to finish the meal beforehand.

All right with the preface. The show starts!

Finally came out the troop of female warriors! There was some fancy action going on, with some beating the drum along to the rhythmical music, and some fighting against warriors clad in armor. There were dance, music, and laughter in the show. Now that I think of it there was also a cute panda that appeared in it.

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Before the show starts, I tried the robot restaurant's boxed meal that I had ordered in advance for the occasion. It tasted so-so good! Considering the energy you will need to enjoy the show, I think it is a good idea to finish the meal beforehand.

All right with the preface. The show starts!

Finally came out the troop of female warriors! There was some fancy action going on, with some beating the drum along to the rhythmical music, and some fighting against warriors clad in armor. There were dance, music, and laughter in the show. Now that I think of it there was also a cute panda that appeared in it.

元の翻訳
As I got a one day pass, I took two tours. One was the departure time 10:20 Marunouchi - Sky Tree and another was the 17:30 Marunouchi - Odaiba.
If you get a very front seat, it would be so excited such as like riding a roller coaster.
Even if you take a middle or back seat, you could have 360 degree view which amazed you very much!
I strongly recommend it to little kids. For matured person like myself, it was very enjoyable with a guide's full of knowledge.

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As I got a one day pass, I took two tours. One was the departure time 10:20 Marunouchi - Sky Tree and another was the 17:30 Marunouchi - Odaiba.
If you sit in the front row, it would be so excited in the corners like riding a roller coaster.
Even if you take a middle or back seat, you could have 360 degree view which amazed you very much!
I strongly recommend it to little kids. For matured person like myself, it was very enjoyable with a guide's full of knowledge.

元の翻訳
They arranged my hair simply and put 3 hair accessories on my hair! After putting Kimono on, it's time for a photo shoot! I was so excited about being shot and making many poses in Asakusa! Please have a look at pictures I attached! We had free time until 5 so had a stroll in Asakusa. However, tourists looked at us, they wanted take our pictures like paparazzi, so we were in many pictures with people from many countries for their souvenirs.
It was the best experience ever. I would love to do it with my friends again! You should try it at least once, as it is a rare opportunity to take pictures of you wearing Kimono at this price!

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They arranged my hair simply and put 3 hair accessories on my hair! After putting Kimono on, it's time for a photo shoot! I was so excited about being shot and making many poses in Asakusa! Please have a look at pictures I attached! We had free time until 5 so we had a stroll in Asakusa. However, tourists looked at us, they wanted take our pictures like paparazzi, so we were in many pictures with people from many countries for their souvenirs.
It was the best experience ever. I would love to do it with my friends again! You should try it at least once, as it is a rare opportunity to take pictures of you wearing Kimono at this price!

元の翻訳
As I was planning to leave at 4 o'clock by airplane, and I was looking for the tour where I can visit only in the morning and found this tour.
Although it was inexpensive, the contents of the tour was fully satisfying.
The building of the Park of White Lovers was European style and very beautiful.
The rose garden was so beautiful in this season, and I was satisfied with it very much.
As I had to purchase a number of souvenir, I purchased the White Lovers and sent it by Takuhai. In the market outside, the crabs and melons were sold at the reasonable price.

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As I was planning to leave at 4 o'clock by airplane, and I was looking for the tour where I can visit only in the morning and found this tour.
Although it was inexpensive, the contents of the tour was fully satisfying.
The building of the Park of White Lovers was European style and very beautiful.
The rose garden was so beautiful in this season, and I was satisfied with it very much.
As I had to purchase a number of souvenirs, I purchased the White Lovers and sent it by home delivery service. In the market outside, the crabs and melons were sold at the reasonable price.

元の翻訳
A big typhoon is coming closer to Japan. In Hiroshima, it will be in this evening when the typhoon gets closer.
I think it would be fine for your flight on the 15th as the typhoon will be away from Japan.

When you arrive in Japan and figure out the cell number, please give me a mail.
Miss. S, a woman in charge of translation, will call you. Then, please discuss about your schedule on the 18th and the 19th.

Psychederhythm is situated in Ebisu. They are very happy to have us there.

It is a long trip for you, but we hope you have a safe trip.

修正後
A big typhoon is coming closer to Japan. In Hiroshima, it will be in this evening when the typhoon gets closer.
I think it would be fine for your flight on the 15th as the typhoon will be away from Japan.

When you arrive in Japan and figure out the cell number, please give me a e-mail.
Miss. S, a woman in charge of interpretation, will call you. Then, please discuss about your schedule on the 18th and the 19th.

Psychederhythm is situated in Ebisu. They are very happy to have us there.

It is a long trip for you, but we hope you have a safe trip.

元の翻訳
At first we thought showing the broken item will make writing the damage report smoothly, but maybe it is better for you say it is not necessary to return the parcel to the sender at the post office.

・The price of the cup is around 40 dollars.
・Put a check as a gift before sending.
・Do you mean invoice with the word "bill"? Whatever your intention is, we understood we wouldn't put it in the package.

Thank you for cooperation.
I am not so good at English, so it will take time to read or write. Thank you for understanding.

修正後
At first we thought showing the broken item will make writing the damage report smoothly, but maybe it is better for you say it is not necessary to return the parcel to the sender at the post office.

・The price of the cup is around 40 dollars.
・Put a check on a gift and send it to you.
・Do you mean the invoice with the word "bill"? In either case, we understood we wouldn't put it in the package.

Thank you for your cooperation.
I am not so good at English, so it will take time to read or write. Thank you for your understanding.