翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アメリカの仕入先メーカーへ、不良品に関する相談をしています。
できるだけ不良を減らしているという、こちらの努力を認めてもらいたいという事と、
不良の報告方法をできるだけ簡易にしてもらいたいと思っています。
宜しくお願い致します。

日本語

次に不良についてご相談があります。
以前、不良品をYOUTUBEの動画にアップして報告しましたが、
あれから販売量も増え、不良もたくさん見付かりました。
今年の8月までは、御社から送られてきた製品をそのままの状態で
お客様に販売していました。
しかしながら8月以降は当社で全数検査しています。
また、検査で見付かった不良品はできるだけ良品として販売できるよう、
対策作業をしております。

英語

Next, we would like to inform you of defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

レビュー ( 1 )

ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/17 15:19:07

元の翻訳
Next, we would like to inform you of defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

修正後
Next, we would like to inform you of the defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

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