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I suppose that the dish you mentioned as (A) in your previous mail would be (B). right? (B) is my favorite, too. There is a restaurant who serve us (B) close to my office and I visit them every several weeks.

Tomorrow is my 30th birthday. I am not be able to say I would be in my twenties any more. :) In reviewing my twenties, I remember not only a lots of happy memories, but also regrettable things. One that I regret is not having studied English hard. I would like to make a progress in speaking English even a bit in coming year.

What would like to have for your birthday gift?

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I suppose that the dish you mentioned as (A) in your previous mail would be (B). right? (B) is my favorite, too. There is a restaurant which serves us (B) close to my office and I visit them every several weeks.

Tomorrow is my 30th birthday. I am not be able to say I would be in my twenties any more. :) In reviewing my twenties, I remember not only a lots of happy memories, but also regrettable things. One thing that I regret is not having studied English hard. I would like to make a progress in speaking English even a bit in coming year.

What would like to have for your birthday gift?

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2014年も終わろうとしておりますが、弊社では現在中国の旧正月休日の間の調整をしておりまして、旧正月前後の出荷に対するPOの締切に関してご連絡いたします。
以下をお読みいただき、ご質問等ございましたら、お早目にご連絡いただきますよう、お願い申し上げます。

旧正月前の出荷分に対する全てのPOは11月15日までにご提出ください。
-11月15日までのご注文のETD（出荷時期）は1月9日ごろを予定しており、最も遅い場合2月6日でございます。
-ETDはご注文の商品や、1月から2月の生産分との兼ね合いで多少前後することがございます。
-旧正月前には必ず出荷いたします。

旧正月後の最初の出荷分に対するPOは12月15日までに送付ください。
-ETDは3月20日を予定しております。

注文の商品や時期に関するフォーキャスト（注文の予想）が毎週のように変動しており、少々荒くなっております。

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2014年も終わろうとしておりますが、弊社では現在中国の旧正月休日の間の調整をしておりまして、旧正月前後の出荷に対するPOの締切に関してご連絡いたします。
以下をお読みいただき、ご質問等ございましたら、お早目にご連絡いただきますよう、お願い申し上げます。

旧正月前の出荷分に対する全てのPOは11月15日までにご提出ください。
-11月15日までのご注文のETD（出荷時期）は1月9日ごろを予定しており、最も遅い場合2月6日でございます。
-ETDはご注文の商品や、1月から2月の生産分との兼ね合いで多少前後することがございます。
-旧正月前には必ず出荷いたします。

旧正月後の最初の出荷分に対するPOは12月15日までに送付ください。
-ETDは3月20日を予定しております。

注文の商品や時期に関するフォーキャスト（生産の予想）が毎週のように変動しており、少々荒くなっております。

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I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

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I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion with the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

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Please send an invoice by paypal.
You don't have to send an item.
I am going to pick it up at the account of my DHL.
Please be advised that the tracking number is 1 and pack them as
plural packages.
The address to which it is sent is Japan.
As we pay for the shipping charge, please list 123 as our account number on the label.
Then please draw up an invoice and hand it to DHL.
Please list ○○as buyer name at the consignee and buyer, which is similar to the
sample of the invoice attached.
You can use this invoice.

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Please send an invoice by paypal.
You don't have to send an item.
I am going to pick it up at my DHL account.
Please be advised that the tracking number is 1 and pack them as
plural packages.
The address to which it is sent is Japan.
As we pay for the shipping charge, please list 123 as our account number on the label.
Then please draw up an invoice and hand it to DHL.
Please list ○○as the buyer name at the consignee and buyer, which is similar to the
sample of the invoice attached.
You can use this invoice.

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Long time no see.
How are you?

In fact, I think you have already heard about that, I will quit my job on 7th November. And I will start to do what I want.

After quitting my job, I will return back to Kyoto and get off to a good start. Of course, I will still play music with SHUN. Although Kyoto maybe a bit faraway from OKinawa, just come and have fun together!

Until now, we had a lot of precious memories. Many thanks!! Hope SHUN can enjoy you life in Okinawa.

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Long time no see.
How are you?

In fact, I think you have already heard about that, I will quit my job on 7th November. And I will start to do what I want.

After quitting my job, I will return back to Kyoto and get off to a good start. Of course, I will still want to play music with SHUN. Although Kyoto is maybe a bit faraway from OKinawa, just come and have fun together!

Until now, we had a lot of precious memories. Many thanks!! Hope SHUN can enjoy your life in Okinawa.

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In Japan, facsimile is not authorized. I checked it. B is necessary for A for business and if he cannot obtain B, he cannot go to C. As the customers are angry at the cancellation of the hotel, etc., I decided to apply in place of him.

Please send the original immediately by express mail, and please let me know when I receive it. I ask you to send after adding the followings.
"○○" at Dear
Name of event and detaile purd overview (time and day, place, size, purpose of event and the fact that D must attend it).

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In Japan, facsimile is not authorized. I checked it. B is necessary for A for business and if he cannot obtain B, he cannot go to C. As the customers are angry at the cancellation of the hotel, etc., I decided to apply in place of him.

Please send the original immediately by express mail, and please let me know when I receive it. I ask you to send after adding the followings.
"○○" at Dear
Name of the event and the detailed overview (time and day, place, size, purpose of event and the fact that D must attend it).

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Reports of products not recived have rapidly increased recently ONLY in United States.
Since United States have the best distribution systems, this usually cannot happen.
I feel that this kind of reports have increased after the Ebola virus struck US.
It may be because the Customs and the distribution agents have to use their resources for countermeasures against the Ebola virus and interfering their buisinesses.
For these reasons, it may take more time than usual 3-4 weeks.

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Reports of products not recived have rapidly increased recently ONLY in the United States.
Since the United States have the best distribution systems, this usually cannot happen.
I feel that this kind of reports have increased after the Ebola virus struck US.
It may be because the Customs and the distribution agents have to use their resources for countermeasures against the Ebola virus and that may interfere with their buisinesses.
For these reasons, it may take more time than usual 3-4 weeks.

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I will negotiate with the customer over the possibility to purchase back that guitar.
If we suceed, we will sell it to you.
However, please understand we cannot commit it since the customer may reject our offer.

We will surely inform you the results, so please allow us to take a couple of days for the negotiation.

By the way, this issue including your mails has been already reported to our counterparts in eBay and PayPal.

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I will negotiate with the customer over the possibility to purchase back that guitar.
If we suceed, we will resell it to you.
However, please understand we cannot commit it since the customer may reject our offer.

We will surely inform you of the results, so please allow us to take a couple of days for the negotiation.

By the way, this issue including your mails has been already reported to our counterparts in eBay and PayPal.

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Is this the product that you want?
Please let me know product size that you want just in case.
I made produnt's page.

I can preparate this product.
You purchased it before, so you have to pay only shipping charge especially.
But if you receive the product, please feedback to me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.

How many products do you need?

I will look for product that you want. Please give me a little time.
I'll contact you as soon as I can.

You don't need this ○○ anymore?

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Is this the product that you'd like?
Please let me know product size that you'd like just in case.
I made product's page.

I can preparate this product.
You purchased it before, so you have to pay only shipping charge especially.
But if you receive the product, please feedback to me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.

How many products do you need?

I will look for product that you want. Please give me a little time.
I'll contact you as soon as I can.

You don't need this ○○ anymore?

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Thank you for answering our questions politely.

We are so relieved that you are the agent of xx.

We appreciate your discounting xx, but the price is still not competitive enough for us to sustain our business with you.

We do business with several American manufacturers. While it varies with product, their wholesale price is lower than 50% of the listed price for most of the products.

I was wondering if you could sell this product at $170 per unit to us.
We will purchase more units of the products, and would also like to purchase xx.

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Thank you for answering our questions politely.

We are so relieved that you are the agent of xx.

We appreciate your discounting xx, but the price is still not competitive enough for us to sustain our business with you.

We do business with several American manufacturers. While it varies with products, their wholesale price is lower than 50% of the listed price for most of the products.

I was wondering if you could sell this product at $170 per unit to us.
We will purchase more units of the products, and would also like to purchase xx.