ctplers99 (ctplers99) — 付けたレビュー

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To person in charge

My name is T, F Ltd., in Japan.

I have a question about transformation cable of your company.
Is it possible for you to make card edge to 9pin cable of AERA FC-260 series?
If possible I want to know t"how much it costs.

I am waiting for your reply.

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To person in charge

My name is T, F Ltd., in Japan.

I have a question about transformation cable of your company.
Is it possible for you to make card edge to 9pin cable of AERA FC-260 series?
If possible I want to know how much it costs.

I am waiting for your reply.

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Have your family arrived Japan yet? They must be tired after long flight, so take a good rest.
Please let me know when you get a chance to meet us. Then I will tell aunt Fusako about it.
Do you intend to come to Omiya by train? I will pick you guys up at Omiya station.
You can reply in English.

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Have your family arrived Japan safely? They must be tired after long flight, so take a good rest.
Please let me know when you get a chance to meet us. Then I will tell aunt Fusako about it.
Do you intend to come to Omiya by train? I will pick you guys up at Omiya station.
You can reply in English.

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I made an inquiry to Casio.

Many clocks have an English manual each, but that one does not seem to have an English manual.

I did not know it. I'm sorry.

Could you send me a return request, please? I will refund the all cost.

Will you delete your negative feedback if you get it full refunded?

Not only I but also other shops sell that watch.
I is awful to write a negative feedback suddenly.

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I made an inquiry to Casio.

Many clocks have an English manual each, but that one does not seem to have an English manual.

I did not know it. I'm sorry.

Could you send me a return request, please? I will refund the all cost.

Will you delete your negative feedback if you get it full refunded?

Not only I but also other shops sell that watch.
It is awful to write a negative feedback suddenly.

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3 "Walk of My Life" - Release Commemoration : Line Live Cast has been suddenly decided! From the rehearsal studio, a raw performance of that song!

[Plans from here on]
A nationwide stadium tour will be held for the first time in approximately 2 years!
"Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 "Walk of My Life" - supported by Mercedes-Benz!
On the 4th of April 2015 (Saturday) at the Shizuoka Ekoba Arena!

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3 "Walk of My Life" - Release Commemoration : Line Live Cast has been suddenly decided! From the rehearsal studio, a raw dance performance of that song!

[Plans from here on]
A nationwide stadium tour will be held for the first time in approximately 2 years!
"Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 "Walk of My Life" - supported by Mercedes-Benz!
On the 4th of April 2015 (Saturday) at the Shizuoka Ekoba Arena!

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It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was be set in「4.It’s defective or doesn’t work.」, the auto-focus function couldn't available on some lenses is not caused by the defection or failure of product itself but the regular specification of converter.
Please change the reason to either「1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit」or「2.I don’t need it anymore」or「3.I found a better price elsewhere」.

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It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was be set in「4.It’s defective or doesn’t work.」, the auto-focus function couldn't be available on some lenses is not caused by the defection or failure of product itself but the regular specification of converter.
Please change the reason to either「1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit」or「2.I don’t need it anymore」or「3.I found a better price elsewhere」.

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We understand the return request.
However, you said that the reason is "4. It's defective or does not work" , but
it is neither a defect nor trouble of the item. The reason why the automatic focus does not work by the lens is due to the specification of the converter.

1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit. 2.I don’t need it anymore. 3.I found a better price elsewhere. Could you change it to any of the above?

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We understand the return request.
However, you said that the reason is "4. It's defective or does not work" , but
it is neither a defect nor trouble of the item. The reason why the automatic focus of the lens does not work is due to the specification of the converter.

1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit. 2.I don’t need it anymore. 3.I found a better price elsewhere. Could you change it to any of the above?

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「マイクロビット」はより広範囲の「メイク・イット・デジタル」というプログラムの一部であり、BBCが言うところの、英国における”深刻なスキル不足”に取り組むものである。英国では5年以内に140万人のデジタル技術専門家を必要としているが、現在の教育制度では適切な能力をもった人材を輩出できないとBBCは述べている。
そこで、ＢＢＣはバーミンガムで五千人の子供たちにデジタル技術の訓練プログラムも提供している。また、ＢＢＣはテレビ、ラジオとオンラインを通じた放送番組を製作して、子供たちのプログラミング技術習得を後押ししている。

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「マイクロビット」はより広範囲の「メイク・イット・デジタル」というプログラムの一部であり、BBCが言うところの、英国における”深刻なスキル不足”に取り組むものである。英国では5年以内に140万人のデジタル技術専門家を必要としているが、現在の教育制度では適切な能力をもった人材を輩出できないとBBCは述べている。
そこで、ＢＢＣはバーミンガムで五千人の子供たちにデジタル技術の訓練プログラムも提供する予定である。また、ＢＢＣはテレビ、ラジオとオンラインを通じた放送番組を製作して、子供たちのプログラミング技術習得を後押ししている。

元の翻訳
An inspection is conducted for the purchasers to decide whether or not  they should buy the products and for the suppliers whether or not they can deliver them.

Every kind of measuring technology has improved along with progress and establishment of a "compatible manufacturing system" and accurate measuring equipments have been made. In extremely many cases, ideas that originally existed in Europe has been put into practical use in the U.S. The first example was the vernier caliper.

To use measuring equipments free from anxiety keeping the traceability, it is required to conduct a reliable inspection (revision) regularly.

The points to predict a fault
Process planning

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An inspection is conducted for the purchasers to decide whether or not  they should buy the products and for the suppliers whether or not they can deliver them.

Every kind of measuring technology has improved along with progress and establishment of a "compatible manufacturing system" and accurate measuring equipments have been made. In extremely many cases, ideas that originally existed in Europe has been put into practical use in the U.S. The first example was the vernier caliper.

To use measuring equipments free from anxiety and keep the traceability, it is required to conduct a reliable inspection (revision) regularly.

The points to predict a fault
Process planning