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元の翻訳
使い方と効果が現れるまでの時間については全然見つかりません。お助けいただけないでしょうか。

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使い方と効果が現れるまでの時間が全然分かりません。お助けいただけないでしょうか。

元の翻訳
So, we would like to order 60 pieces.
Please send us a PayPal invoice.

Moreover, we would like to ship it directly to Japan if it is possible.
If so, we would like to request you to use our DHL account, so the shipping charge will be collect.

I am looking forward to you positive reply.

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So, we would like to order 60 pieces.
Please send us a PayPal invoice.

Moreover, we would like the items to be shipped directly to Japan if possible.
If so, you are to use our DHL account, so we will pay the shipping charge.

I am looking forward to your positive reply.

元の翻訳
Hello.

The item I ordered has not been delivered so far.
Do you know any status of this item?

Please let me know.

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Hello.

The item I ordered has not been delivered so far.
Do you know any status of this item?

Please let me know.↵
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Has the cashe function already implemented?
Where is a cache file stored? Let us know the storage space of a file.
Cashe file has not been created in the layered cashe folder below.

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Has the cache function already been implemented?
Where is a cache file stored? Let us know where the storage space of a file is.
Cache file has not been created in the layered cache folder below.

元の翻訳
This is my new order.
I want to place an order on three following items.

Please change A into two black rods front handlebars.

The order of B and C on March 19th hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped it?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
Only D got to me.

I'd like to know the tracking number of last time as well.

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This is my new order.
I want to place an order on following three items.

Please change the 2 rods front handlebars of A into black.

B and C I ordered on March 19th hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped them?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
I have received only D.

I'd like to know the tracking number for the order last time as well.

元の翻訳
■ The spare parts are not included with the item.

The manufacturer seems to run out of stock a while ago.
We have not schedule of obtaining the items yet.
I will get back to you once we obtain the items.

■ We can obtain standard SMB-02, but it is short of supply even in Japan, so a price is increasing.

The item price is $389.00 and the shipping charge is $8.00

We can still obtain it and we will be able to ship within two days once a payment is confirmed.

We are looking forward to your positive reply.

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■ The spare parts are not included with the item.

The manufacturer seems to run out of stock a while ago.
We have not confirmed the schedule of restocking the items yet.
I will let you know once we obtain the items.

■ We can obtain standard SMB-02, but it is short of supply even in Japan, so a price is increasing.

The item price is $389.00 and the shipping charge is $8.00

We can still obtain one and we will be able to ship within two days once a payment is confirmed.

We are looking forward to your positive reply.

元の翻訳
I created an invoice of PayPal and sent it to you.
Could you try if I can pay by PayPal again?

It might be much work for you, but I appreciate↵
your cooperation.

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I created an invoice of PayPal and sent it to you.
Could you try if you can pay by PayPal again?

Thank you for your cooperation and I apology for this nuisance.

元の翻訳
Recently, when I enter a shop, I look only at ceiling (laughs). I will remodel the new house especially focusing on floor and ceiling.

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Recently, when I enter the shop, I look only at ceiling (lol). I especially focus on the floor and the ceiling when remodeling the new house.

元の翻訳
am
az

まだ届いていなくて、連絡したら返金するとの約束だったのに、それも受け取ってません。どういうことでしょうか？よろしくお願いします。Ken

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am
az

まだ物も届いていなくて、連絡したら返金するとの約束だったのに、それも受け取ってません。どういうことでしょうか？よろしくお願いします。Ken

元の翻訳
There is no arrival record about my item that is ssupposed to arrive on 17th of March.
According to the tracking number, it says that you did receive my item on 17th of March.
Can you please check where my item is immediately?
Thank you.

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There is no arrival record about my item that is supposed to arrive on 17th March.
According to the tracking number, it says that you did receive my item on 17th March.
Can you please check where my item is immediately?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Have you already sent the sales receipt which I asked you before?
If you've already dispatched it, please let me know the tracking number and how you sent it out.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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Have you already sent the sales receipt which I asked you before?
If you have already shipped it, please let me know the tracking number and how you sent it out.

I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
paypalなら、この110を96ドルで売りますが、いかがですか？

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paypalなら、この110を96ドルで売りますが、これについてもいかがですか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for the notification. I have just paid 24 dollars by PayPal. Please confirm it.
Please send it to the address in Oregon. I am looking forward to having the item.
Thank you.

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Thank you for the response. I have just paid 24 dollars by PayPal. Please confirm it.
Please send it to the address in Oregon. I am looking forward to the item delivered.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
これは、我々の参加の取り決めに違反しています。送料は固定されていることにご注意ください。取引が終了した後には、売主は追加の送料またはどのような料金も請求できません。商品を発送する際に、十分な送料を支払うことは売主の責任です。今回の状況において、残念ながらこれ以上の情報を提供できません。

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これは、我々の参加の取り決めに違反しています。送料は固定されていることにご注意ください。取引が終了した後には、販売者はいかなる追加の送料またはその他の料金も請求できません。商品を発送する際に、十分な送料を支払うことは販売者の責任です。今回の状況において、残念ながらこれ以上の情報を提供できません。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your remittance.
However, it seems that it has excess of JPY5000.
May I refuse to receive it?

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Thank you for your remittance.
However, it seems that it has excess of JPY5000.
May I refuse to receive it once?

元の翻訳
Good afternoon,

This article is an article not for sale that could be obtained within 5000 people in a lottery.
Therefore, I am obtaining money in this way.
Commonly, it is expected not to be for sale in stores.

Do you agree that it is not different from what you have seen?.
Additionally, I am the one who is selling at the lowest price according to eBay,
in fact, two people are buying it from me already.
(I am selling one article today)

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Good afternoon,

This item is not for sale that I obtained by winning the lottery limited to 5000 people.
Therefore, I sell this for that price.
Generally, it cannot be purchased in stores.

Is it different from what you saw?
Additionally, I am the one who is selling the item at the lowest price on eBay,
In fact, two people have already purchased ones from me.
(Also another one was sold today)

元の翻訳
Yesterday I caught a cold, and I cannot get rid of fever.
Therefore, I will send money for the first order in the beginning of next week.
I will send it to Mitsubishi-Tokyo UFJ Bank.

I contact a partern of DHL that we ask to deliver.

I created a sample of top page in Japanese.
I am going to change contents of each page a little.
The reason is that message I am going to tell to Japanese consumers is different.

I am going to manufacture each page from now, and I cannot publicize it now.
By maintaining original taste, I am sure that I can create a site that is almost similar to the original page.

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Yesterday I caught a cold, and my fever has not abated.
Therefore, I will send money for the first order in the beginning of next week.
I will remit to Mitsubishi-Tokyo UFJ Bank.

I contact a partner of DHL that we ask to deliver.

I created a sample of the top page in Japanese.
I am going to change contents of each page a little.
The reason is that message to be conveyed to the Japanese consumers is different.

I am going to create each site from now, and currently I cannot publicize them.
By maintaining original taste, I am sure that I can create a site that is almost similar to the original page.

元の翻訳
We have many times of experiences for export to the U.S. For now, we have no problems except for the need to pay customs duties in some cases.

However, we have a risk that it is difficult to return kitchen knives or knives if we bought them once by controls of the law.

Also, you are required to be forewarned that we assume no responsibility for after arrival of the goods.

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We have many times of experiences of exporting to the U.S. For now, we have no problems except for the need to pay customs duties in some cases.

However, we have a risk that it is difficult to return kitchen knives or knives once purchesed by the regulation of the law.

Also, you are required to be forewarned that we take no responsibility after arrival of the goods.

元の翻訳
I came up with a simple biography.What do you think of it?

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I came up with a simple biography.　What do you think of it?

元の翻訳
Hello,
I want to set up a new separate account.
Is it possible?
What should I prepare for that, if any?
Also, can you transfer our proceeds to the European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for you!

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Hello,
I want to set up another account newly.
Is it possible?
Is there anything that I should prepare for that?
Also, can you transfer our proceeds to the European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for you!