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The tracking number has been confirmed.
It seems like the products have been stopped due to the tariff trouble again.

i would like to refund everything, in case it would bring you more trouble.
I have no access to cancle it ,so please go to b to cancle it.

HOW TO CANCLE
1 go to account page-----long in----click the Kontaktieren Sie un button on the right bottom
2 put a NO to the order list which means you would like to cancle the order

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The tracking number has been confirmed.
It seems the products is still at the customhouse.

I would like to refund everything, in case it would bring you more trouble.
I have no access to cancel it ,so please go to b to cancel it.

HOW TO CANCEL
1 go to account page-----log in----click the Kontaktieren Sie un button on the right bottom
2 put a NO to the order list and apply to cancel the order

元の翻訳

When you go to the next screen, you see the PayPal site displayed. You can pay by a credit card without being a registered PayPal member.

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When you go to the next screen, you see the PayPal site displayed. You can pay by a credit card without registering as a PayPal member.

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My company is grateful for your support.
As I checked with the manufacturer about this product, I was told that the code was wrong, as I expected. It will take some time to obtain the correct authentication code.
I have a favor to ask. Could you take out this product from this package and proceed with customs clearance? I would like to destroy it or ship it back once you remove the item.
Thank you very much for your time and attention.

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We sincerely appriciate your support.
As I checked with the manufacturer about this product, I was told that the code was wrong, as I expected. It will take some time to obtain the correct authentication code.
I have a favor to ask. Could you take out this product from this package and proceed with customs clearance? I would like to forfeit it or ship it back once you remove the item.
Thank you very much for your time and attention.

元の翻訳
D Refund

This problem is very serious.
Please explain the clear reason why the refund of product was guaranteed to the buyer.

I notified the tracking number to your company.
As shown in the tracking number, the product was delivered to the buyer as of 2nd of January, 2014.
Why is the buy still guaranteed?

I would like to get the product back if the buyer could get a refund.
It is very difficult for me to understand why this has happened. It never happens in my country.

It would be appreciated if you could explain the reasonable reason to me and send the product back to me.

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D Refund

This problem is very serious.
Please explain the clear reason why the refund of product was guaranteed to the buyer.

I notified the tracking number to your company.
As shown in the tracking number, the product was delivered to the buyer as of 2nd of January, 2014.
Why is the buyer still guaranteed?

I would like to get the product back if the buyer could get a refund.
It is very difficult for me to understand why this has happened. It never happens in my country.

It would be appreciated if you could explain the reasonable reason to me and send the product back to me.

元の翻訳
Hi Christian,
Thank you for your email.
I look forward to receiving your photo.
I hope the model will be displayed for a long time.

Best,

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Starting from last month, an exhibition entitled "House" will be held for about 6 months in Laufen, Switzerland.
It's a large exhibition that attracts more than 8000 people from Switzerland and about 1000 people from all over the world annually.
If you have time, please visit it.

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Hi Christian,
Thank you for your email.
I look forward to receiving your photo.
I hope the model will be displayed as long as possible.

Best,

＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊

Starting from last month, an exhibition entitled "House" is being held for 6 months in Laufen, Switzerland.
It's a large exhibition that attracts more than 8000 people from Switzerland and about 1000 people from all over the world annually.
If you have time, please visit it.

元の翻訳
I think you have received the refund notification, but It is annoying to send only 5 piece among 30 pieces which I ordered without any response.
I want my money back.
I have already contacted you many times.
I would like you to deal with the issue with good faith.

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I think you have received the refund notification, but It is annoying to send only 5 piece among 30 pieces which I ordered without any response.
I want my money back.
I have already contacted you many times.
I would like you to deal with the issue sincerely.

元の翻訳
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting.
There is an outgoing email from the maker which should be received within 6 days. This is Mr. Yan's stuff.

Because an email concerning the registered goods will be sent out within six days, please go ahead and begin the purchase process.
A second email will be received in six days.

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I'm very sorry to keep you waiting.
There is an email about the shipping from the manufacturer which should be received on 6th. This is Mr. Yan's item.

We will register the item and send an email on 6th, and please make the purchase process.
We will send an email again on 6th.

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Was this item sold out?
If you still have it in stock, I'm considering buying it.
Could I buy it for 100 euro?

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Has this item been sold out?
If you still have it in stock, I'm considering buying it.
Could I buy it for 100 euro?

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We would like to order a lot of your product.

The budget is about $5000.

Would you sell your product with discounted price?
If you can sell your product with discounted price, we will continuously buy from you.

I will pay wither by Paypal or credit card.
The delivery place is Portland.

We are looking for your reply.

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We would like to order a lot of your product.

The budget is about $5000.

Would you sell your product with discounted price?
If you can sell your product with discounted price, we will continuously buy from you.

I will pay either by Paypal or credit card.
The shipping address is Portland.

We are looking for your reply.

元の翻訳
How to cancel your order
Log in from "Account Service" which you can find on the upper right of the B's website.
Than select "Purchase History" and choose the item you want to cancel from that page.
Now, your cancellation is completed.
Also, B will contact you about refund, in later days.

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How to cancel your order
Log in from "Account Service" which you can find on the upper right of the B's website.
Than select "Purchase History" and choose the item you want to cancel from that page.
Now, your cancellation application is completed.
Also, B will contact you about the refund at a later date.

元の翻訳
To Whom It May Concern.

I am playing your company's game "A" and "B".
I was using my Facebook account to play both of the games. However, game "A" and "B"'s data got synchronized, and the data of game "A" disappeared one day.
Are there any ways that you can fix it?↵
I played so much of game "A" .
Please reply me back.

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To Whom It May Concern.

I am playing your company's game "A" and "B".
I was playing both of the games through the same Facebook account. However, game "A" and "B"'s data got synchronized, and the data of game "A" disappeared one day.
Could you restore the disappeared data, since I played the game "A" so much .
Please reply me back.

元の翻訳
I'm relieved to learn that you have received the guitar with no issue.
As you can see, it's a very beautiful guitar of high quality.

As for your request, am I correct to understand that you want to change the gold hardware to the chrome /nickel hardware?
I have looked for it at several part shops in Japan without much success, so it will take time to find one that fits your guitar.
I will let you know as soon as something comes up.

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I'm relieved to learn that you have received the guitar safely.
As you can see, it's a very beautiful guitar of high quality.

As for your request, am I correct to understand that you want to change the gold hardware to the chrome /nickel hardware?
I have looked for it at several part shops in Japan, which is yet to be successful, so it will take time to find one that fits your guitar.
I will let you know as soon as something comes up.

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The BS-model is from the so-called "CLASSIC Series".
Production is currently terminated.
They have been carefully handmade by guitar builders one by one in the Matsumoto workshop
in Japan.
They are 100% made in Japan.

Since it is late at night in Japan right now, so I will contact you tomorrow
after I have confirmed whether the lacquer coating is nitrocellulose coating.

This model is difficult to find in Japan whether it is new or second-hand.
I think you are very lucky.
I will send it in safe packaging via a professional delivery service.
Please wait a short while.

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The BS-model is from the so-called "CLASSIC Series".
Production is currently terminated.
They have been carefully handmade by guitar builders one by one in the Matsumoto workshop
in Japan.
They are 100% made in Japan.

Since it is late at night in Japan right now, so I will contact you tomorrow
after I have confirmed whether the lacquer coating is nitrocellulose coating.

This model is difficult to find in Japan either it is new or second-hand.
I think you are very lucky.
I will send it in safe packaging via a professional delivery service.
Please wait a short while.

元の翻訳
ta43701
"Onabe" (hot pot dish) is an easy party food that has evolved independently in Japan.
In many parts of Japan, There are many kinds of "Onabe" with original seasonings and ingredients. I will introduce some hot pot dishes 　which may　be　　often　 eaten 　at　small gathering or family get　together.

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ta43701
"Onabe" (hot pot dish), an easy party food, evolved independently in Japan.
In many parts of Japan, there are many kinds of "Onabe" with original seasonings and ingredients. I will introduce some hot pot dishes which families often eat at small gathering or when they get together.

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Hatsu miku Live Stage Legend
It is a combining good of Hatsu miku and Family Mart.
The content is the same, but there will be about 10 type of sticker.
However, there are not for sale now.
The picture of package.
sticker

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Hatsu miku Live Stage Legend
It is a combining good of Hatsune miku and Family Mart.
The content is the same, but there will be about 10 types of stickers.
However, they are not for sale now.
The picture of package.
sticker

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ta44704
Hatsune Miku Live Stage legend
Collaboration product with FamilyMart and Hatsune Miku. Though　contents of the product is　one type,the seal of the　product　is about 10 kinds. The sale has be canceled now.
Photo package.
Seal.

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ta44704
Hatsune Miku Live Stage legend
Collaboration product with FamilyMart and Hatsune Miku. The contents of the product come in one type and the stickers come in about 10 kinds. Currently the sale is discontunued.
Photo package.
Stickers.

元の翻訳
While wandering the town, Miss. Monochrome meets Maneo, a manager of a convenience store, and resumes trying to become an idol.

▼ I admire a super idol, "KIKUKO".
The hottest idol, KIKUKO.

▼ Discipline her spirit
Following KIKUKO, she starts to live in a four-and-a-half mat room with a precious family member, Lu-chan to discipline her spirit. By the way, Miss. Monochrome needs only one AA battery.

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While wandering the town, Miss. Monochrome meets Maneo, a manager of a convenience store, and resumes trying to become an idol.

▼ I admire a super idol, "KIKUKO".
The hottest idol, KIKUKO.

▼ Discipline her spirit in a four-mat room
Following KIKUKO, she starts to live in a four-and-a-half mat room with a precious family member, Lu-chan to discipline her spirit. By the way, Miss. Monochrome needs only one AA battery.

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ph37002

▼What is THE IDOLM@STER?
『THE IDOLM@STER』 is an Japanese Anime created by A-1 Pictures. This is an animated version of a computer game 『THE IDOLM@STER』 series which has the same title sold by Namco Bandai Games.

▼More grouping
Most of the Japanese idol groups that have large number of staff almost always tend to be grouped up as several new groups. Anime idol groups are also show themselves individuality by grouping.

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ph37002

▼What is THE IDOLM@STER?
『THE IDOLM@STER』 is an Japanese Anime created by A-1 Pictures. This is an animated version of a computer game 『THE IDOLM@STER』 series which has the same title sold by Namco Bandai Games.

▼More grouping
Most of the Japanese idol groups that have large number of members almost always tend to be grouped up as several new groups. Anime idol groups are also showing themselves individuality by grouping.

元の翻訳
"Gag manga Biyori" (A perfect day for gag strip) is one of my most favorite story anyway. It is a gag strip as the title says, and is easy to understand since each episode completes in one story. Most of the unique mastheads are written by the cartoonist, Mr. Masuda, but I heard that his mother and manager do the work sometimes.
Though characters of the story are often great people in history or cerebrities, I think the images you may have about them may be destroyed. Matsuo Basho and Shotoku Taishi are good examples. They are somewhat obsequious and have unique habitude, which is a typical pattern of this strip.

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"Gag manga Biyori" (A perfect day for gag strip) is one of my most favorite story anyway. It is a gag strip as the title says, and is easy to understand since each episode completes in one story. Most of the unique mastheads are written by the cartoonist, Mr. Masuda, but I heard that his mother and manager do the work sometimes.
Though the characters of the story are often great people in history or cerebrities, I think the images you may have about them may be destroyed. Matsuo Basho and Shotoku Taishi are the good examples. They are somewhat obsequious and have unique habitude, which is a typical pattern of this strip.

元の翻訳
SonyのPlayStation Now

- PlayStationのゲームをPS3、PS4、PlayStation Vita、テレビ、タブレット、スマホにストリーミング
- ベータ版は年頭に終了し、夏からは一般市場へ

SonyはさまざまなPlayStation製品をどのような端末装置からでも入手できるようにクラウドを利用している。つまりゲーム機本体がなくてもスマホを使えばThe Last Of USがプレーできるということだ。これは2014年度注目に値する。

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SonyのPlayStation Now

- PlayStationのゲームをPS3、PS4、PlayStation Vita、テレビ、タブレット、スマホにストリーミング
- ベータ版は年頭に終了し、夏からは一般市場へ

SonyはさまざまなPlayStation製品をほぼ全ての端末装置からでも入手できるようにクラウドを利用している。つまりゲーム機本体がなくてもスマホを使えばThe Last Of USがプレーできるということだ。これは2014年度注目に値する。

元の翻訳
The case is important.
I would like you to ship it with the case included.

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I need the case .
I would like you to ship it with the case included.