Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Sankei sports

修正後
Sankei Sports

元の翻訳
After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

修正後
After checking the Amazon explanation, there was a mistake in the quantity.
We will return you the postal charge and product cost immediately. We will give you the goods which the quantity was wrong for free.
We are deeply sorry for not being able to deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping with us.

元の翻訳
We checked it and found that there was a mistake in the explanation by Amazon in its number.
We will return the cost of the products and the shipping immediately. Please keep the products which exceeded your order. We are very sorry for our mistake.
Thank you for shopping at our store.

修正後
We checked it and found out that there was a mistake in the explanation by Amazon in its number.
We will return the cost of the products and the shipping immediately. Please keep the products which exceeded your order. We are very sorry for our mistake.
Thank you for shopping at our store.

元の翻訳
I checked it and found that there was a mistake in the volume in the explanation of Amazon.
We will refund the shipping charge and price of the item.
You can keep the item where the volume of the item was explained by mistake.
We apologize that we cannot send it to you.
Thank you for using our store.

修正後
We checked it and found out that there was a mistake in the volume in the explanation of Amazon.
We will refund the shipping charge and price of the item asap.
You can keep the item which the volume of the item was wrong.
We apologize that we cannot send it to you.
Thank you for using our store.

元の翻訳
I seem to have received that the manager's e-mail address, but it doesn't seem to be displayed. Please confirm your e-mail history.

If you capture and send the e-mail address as an image to me, I should be able to check, too. So would please send it as an image to me?

修正後
I seem to have received the manager's e-mail address, but it seems like the system doesn't allow it to be displayed. Please confirm your e-mail history.

If you capture and send the e-mail address as an image to me, I should be able to check, too. So would please send it as an image to me?

元の翻訳
1. Does this product have a broach pin (metal) on the back? I want ones without metal to use for DIY. Could you sell ones without it?
2. The attached image shows an item released in the 90s, and the gold color was probably never sold.

修正後
1. Does this product have a broach pin (metal) on the back? I want ones without metals to use for DIY. Could you sell ones without it?
2. The attached image shows an item released in the 90s, and the gold color was probably never sold.

元の翻訳
1. Is brooch pin (metal fitting) attached inside the product? Because I want part using DIY without attaching metal fitting, can you sell the goods without metal fitting?

2. Because the attached picture sold in 90's, it seems they didn't sell the gold color.

修正後
1. Is a brooch pin (metal fitting) attached to this product? Because I want a part for DIY without a metal fitting, can you sell the goods without metal fittings?

2. The attached picture is of an item sold in the 90's, it seems like they didn't sell it in gold color.

元の翻訳
1. Does this product have a brooch attached to the back of it? I'm looking for the one without a brooch, that can be used as a part of DIY. Can use sell the one without a brooch please?
2. The attached picture is an item released in 90s. It seems the color gold of this item doesn't exist.

修正後
1. Does this product have a brooch pin attached to the back of it? I'm looking for one without a brooch, that can be used for DIY. Can you sell ones without brooches please?
2. The attached picture is an item released in the 90s. It seems like the gold color version of this item doesn't exist.

元の翻訳
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither ID nor PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

修正後
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in to the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither the ID nor the PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer to the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received emails at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard back.

元の翻訳
Since the beginning of November, I can't log into my seller's account on Amazon EU.
I changed neither my ID nor my password. Although I acknowledge that my seller's account is suspended, I have to respond to messages from buyers. The fund is been on hold as well.
However, I don't know what is going on as I haven't received any e-mails. I wonder how I can log in.
I contacted them but haven't received any response.

修正後
Since the beginning of November, I can't log into my seller's account on Amazon EU.
I changed neither my ID nor my password. Although I acknowledge that my seller's account is suspended, I have to respond to messages from buyers. The fund is on hold as well.
However, I don't know what is going on as I haven't received any e-mails. I wonder how I can log in.
I contacted them once but haven't received any response.

元の翻訳
Since November, I have not been able to log in Amazon EU Seller account.
I don't recall if I changed my ID or password. My seller account has been suspended, but I would still need to take care of the buyers inquiries. My fund has been put on hold, as well.
Nevertheless, I no longer receive a single e-mail and have no idea of the current status at all. How could I be able to log in again?
I sent an e-mail once, but no response.

修正後
Since November, I have not been able to log in to Amazon EU Seller account.
I don't recall changing my ID or password. My seller account has been suspended, but I would still need to take care of the buyer's inquiries. My fund has been put on hold, as well.
Nevertheless, I no longer receive a single e-mail and have no idea of the current status at all. How can I log in again?
I sent an e-mail once, but no response.

元の翻訳
bloomingtronics から、日本からの#15924 SIGMA AF 17-50mm F2.8 EX DC HSM Excellentについて、なにか問題があったと私たちに連絡がありました。その結果、彼らは返金するため商品を返品することを要求しました。
次のステップ：
リクエストの詳細を確認し、2014年11月6日までに買い手に確実に返信するようにしてください。その日から、私たちは買い手に介入し、ケースを開封する事が可能です- これはあなたの出品者としてのレベルに影響します。
アイテムに何か問題があった場合は、あなたは出品者として返品費用を負担する責任がある点にご注意下さい。

修正後
bloomingtronics から、日本からの#15924 SIGMA AF 17-50mm F2.8 EX DC HSM Excellentについて、なにか問題があったと私たちに連絡がありました。その結果、彼らは商品の返品と代金の払い戻しを要求しています。
次のステップ：
リクエストの詳細を確認し、2014年11月6日までにお客様に確実に返信するようにしてください。その日以降は、私達はお客様の要求次第で介入し、ケースを開封して手を貸す事が可能になります- これはあなたの販売者としての評価に影響します。
商品に何か問題があった場合は、あなたは販売者として返品費用を負担する責任がある点にご注意下さい。

元の翻訳
It is the first Nayuta's exhibition after he entered his preschool♪.
He likes Thomas very much.
I can not wait to see what Olivia is gonna like!
Lisa, I know it is hard being working mom, but I believe Olivia gives you power for it.
Say hallo to Lisa's dad and mom.

修正後
It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he entered preschool♪.
He likes Thomas very much.
I can not wait to see what Olivia is gonna like!
Lisa, I know it is hard being a working mom, but I believe Olivia gives you the power for it.
Say hallo to your dad and mom.

元の翻訳
It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he/she started his/her kindergarten.
He/She loves Thomas.
I'm looking forward tosee what Olivia will be.
Lisa, you are very busy with your work and your family, but Olivia is a source of your energy. Lisa, please say hi to your mom and dad.

修正後
It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he/she started his/her kindergarten.
He/She loves Thomas.
I'm looking forward to see what Olivia is going to like when she grows up.
Lisa, you are very busy with your work and your family, but Olivia is the source of your energy. Lisa, please say hi to your mom and dad.

元の翻訳
親愛なる友へ
当店でのお買い物、有難うございます。
さて、DHL経由での送料無料サービスを提供できます。
インヴォイスを小包の外側に添えることができます。私の経験上、きっと貴方にとって役立つ情報ですが？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
宜しくお願いします。

修正後
親愛なるお客様
当店でのお買い物、有難うございます。
DHL経由での送料無料サービスはもちろんご提供できます。
また、インボイスを小包の外側に添えることもできます。インボイスに記載するご希望の申告額はいくらでしょうか。
ご連絡お待ちしております。
宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
親愛なる友人、
私たちの店をご利用いただき、大変ありがとうございます。
もちろんDHLで送料無料で出荷することができます 。
また、小包の外側に請求書を表示することができます。どのくらいの値段を請求書で申告したらいいですか？
お返事を待っています。
敬具

修正後
親愛なるお客様、
弊店をご利用いただき、誠にありがとうございます。
もちろんDHLで送料無料で出荷することができます 。
また、小包の外側に請求書を添付することもできます。どのくらいの値段を請求書で申告したらいいですか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
敬具

元の翻訳
お客様、
弊店にてご注文賜り大変ありがとうございます。
勿論DHL経由でお客様宛てに無料配送をお受けいたします。
小包の外面に請求書添付も対応可能です。請求書での申告金額はいくらに設定すればよろしいでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
敬具

修正後
お客様、
弊店にてご注文賜り誠にありがとうございます。
勿論DHL経由でお客様宛てに無料配送をお受けいたします。
小包の外面に請求書添付も対応可能です。請求書での申告金額はいくらに設定すればよろしいでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
敬具

元の翻訳
親愛なるお客様、
私たちの店でたくさん注文していただいてありがとうございます。
もちろん、DHL形式で送料無料でお届けいたします。
また、インボイスを荷物の外側につけるのも可能ですが、インボイスに商品数と合計金額をどう書けばよいかを教えていただけないでしょうか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。

修正後
親愛なるお客様、
私たちの店で注文していただいてありがとうございます。
もちろん、DHLで送料無料でお届けいたします。
また、インボイスを荷物の外側につけるのも可能ですが、インボイスに記載するご希望の申告額を教えていただけないでしょうか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
I've checked the EMS tracking number and it has arrivaled at your country.
It's now clearing by customs.

Please check by the URL:

修正後
Sorry for the late reply.
I've checked the EMS tracking number and it has arrived at your country.
It's being cleared by customs now.

You can check the status from below link: