Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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”GOOD ROCKS!” March 18th issue includes interview article.

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”GOOD ROCKS!” March 18th issue includes interview articles.

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FLYING POSTMAN PRESS Fukuoka Version & Nagoya Version interview published on March 20.

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FLYING POSTMAN PRESS Fukuoka Version & Nagoya Version interview published on March 20 issue.

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"FLYING POSTMAN PRESS Fukuoka & Nagoya Edition" March 20th issue includes interview article.

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"FLYING POSTMAN PRESS Fukuoka & Nagoya Edition" March 20th issue includes the interview article.

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I will accept return.
Have you applied for compensation to the courier company?

In order to apply for compensation, please return cardboard box etc. in the condition you received.

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I accept returns.
Have you applied for compensation to the courier company?

In order to apply for compensation, please return it in the condition you received it in the original cardboard box.

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I accept the item return.
Have you already filed a claim for compensation?

In order to file your compensation claim, please return the item to us with cardboard box and the like exactly the way it was delivered to you.

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I accept returned items.
Have you already filed a claim for compensation?

In order to file your compensation claim, please return the item to us in the cardboard box and exactly the way it was delivered to you.

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I accept returned items.
Have you made a compensation request to your deliverer?

In order to make a compensation request, please resend the box just as when it first arrived.

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I accept returned items.
Have you made a compensation request to your deliverer?

In order to make a compensation request, please return the box in its original state.

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Dear Andrea,

Hello.
I checked the inventory you sent me the other day.
Unfortunately, I was unable to verify the most-selling items of our shop.

We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.

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Dear Andrea,

Hello.
I checked the inventory you sent me the other day.
Unfortunately, I was unable to verify the most-selling items from our shop.

We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.

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JELLY

3/17(Tue) Released
JELLY, the May issue

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JELLY

March 17(Tue) Released
JELLY, May issue

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二回に分けて発注したため、残りの150個も別便で配送中であることが分かりました。受け取り次第、全300個を発送いたします。
日本円で支払うメリットがあるかどうかを確認したいので、円で送金した場合の価格を教えて頂けますでしょうか。

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注文内容が二つに分割されたため、残りの150個も別便で配送中であることが分かりました。受け取り次第、全300個を発送いたします。
日本円で支払うメリットがあるかどうかを確認したいので、円で電信送金した際の価格を教えて頂けますでしょうか。

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その注文が二つに分けられていて、もう一方の１５０個は運送中だとつい先程知りました。受け取りましたら３００個全てを同時発送します。円建てでのお支払いがお得かどうかは、円建てのワイヤーの価格を確認してください。

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その注文が二つに分けられていて、もう一方の１５０個は運送中だとつい先程知りました。受け取りましたら３００個全てを同時発送します。円建てでのお支払いがお得かどうかを知りたいので、円建ての電信送金の価格を確認していただけますか。

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注文が二つに分かれ、途中で１５０になったと理解しました。↵
では３００を一度にお送りいたします。
ご確認いただいて、もし日本円払いの方が良ければ、お電話にて日本円価格をご連絡ください。

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注文内容が2つに分割されたため、追加で150個が輸送中であるとの情報をただ今入手しました。そちらを受領次第、３００個をまとめてお送りいたします。
日本円で支払った方が得かを知りたいので、電信送金の額が日本円でいくらだったかを調べていただけますか。

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Thank you for the message.
I'm sorry, but could you please tell me how I can get feedback when none of the products are still not sold.

My account is suspended in the condition which I even haven't started to sell the products.
Please let me know release the account suspension.　

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Thank you for the message.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you please tell me how I can get feedbacks when only one of the products is sold.

My account is suspended in the condition where I haven't even started to sell the products.
Please remove the suspension of my account.

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There are bits of dust on this lens, but it does not affect taking photos.

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There are bits of dust on this lens, but it does not affect the quality of the photos taken.

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A tiny dust is in this lense, but it doesn't affect to a quality of photo.

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There's a tiny dust particle in this lens, but it doesn't affect the quality of the photos taken.

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I'll be glad to send the lens to Chile.

If it is a D7000 camera the autofocus will work, and you will be able to take sports photos with no issue.

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I'll be glad to send the lens to Chile.

If you choose a D7000 camera the autofocus will work, and you will be able to take sports photos with no issue.

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We are willing to ship the lens to Chile.

D7000 camera supports auto focus, and is also available for sports photos.

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We are willing to ship the lens to Chile.

D7000 camera supports auto focus, and is fine to shoot sports photos too.

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FM yokohama "THE BREEZE"

3/18 (Wed) 9:00 to 12:00
Koda Kumi will appear on FM yokohama "THE BREEZE"!

■ program official site
https://www.fmyokohama.co.jp/pc/program/TheBreeze

※Please notice the broadcast content my be changed due to certain circumstances.

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FM yokohama "THE BREEZE"

March 18 (Wed) 9:00 to 12:00
Koda Kumi will appear on FM yokohama "THE BREEZE"!

■ program official site
https://www.fmyokohama.co.jp/pc/program/TheBreeze

※Please notice the broadcast content my be changed due to certain circumstances.

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FM Yokohama "THE BREEZE"

9:00 to 12:00 on March 18th (Wednesday)
KUMI KODA is going to perform in FM Yokohama "THE BREEZE".

■Website of the program
https://www.fmyokohama.co.jp/pc/program/TheBreeze

*The hour of the broadcasting is subject to change due to some reasons.
We appreciate your understanding in advance.l

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FM Yokohama "THE BREEZE"

9:00 to 12:00 on March 18th (Wednesday)
KUMI KODA is going to perform in FM Yokohama "THE BREEZE".

■Official website of the program
https://www.fmyokohama.co.jp/pc/program/TheBreeze

*The contents of the program are subject to change due to unforeseen circumstances.
We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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"WALK OF MY LIFE" is selected for FM OSAKA E∞Tracks!

"FM OSAKA E∞Tracks" are songs that FM OSAKA recommends every month for "Precious, Good music". "WALK OF MY LIFE" is selected for "FM OSAKA E∞Tracks" in MAR 2015!

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"WALK OF MY LIFE" is selected as FM OSAKA E∞Tracks!

"FM OSAKA E∞Tracks" are songs that FM OSAKA recommends every month as "Precious, Good music". "WALK OF MY LIFE" is selected as MAR 2015 "FM OSAKA E∞Tracks"!