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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/11/03 09:58:04

日本語

幼稚園に入って初めてのナユタの作品展だったよ♪
トーマスがだいすきよ。
オリビアは何が好きになるかとっても楽しみ!
リサ、仕事と両立大変だけど愛するオリビアがパワーの源ね。リサのパパ、ママにもよろしくね

英語

It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he/she started his/her kindergarten.
He/She loves Thomas.
I'm looking forward tosee what Olivia will be.
Lisa, you are very busy with your work and your family, but Olivia is a source of your energy. Lisa, please say hi to your mom and dad.

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cielo_translation 61 2015年3月に英日翻訳でJTFほんやく検定3級を取得(翻訳士) 大学で...
cielo_translationはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/04 10:11:36

元の翻訳
It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he/she started his/her kindergarten.
He/She loves Thomas.
I'm looking forward tosee what Olivia will be.
Lisa, you are very busy with your work and your family, but Olivia is a source of your energy. Lisa, please say hi to your mom and dad.

修正後
It was Nayuta's first exhibition since he/she started his/her kindergarten.
He/She loves Thomas.
I'm looking forward to see what Olivia is going to like when she grows up.
Lisa, you are very busy with your work and your family, but Olivia is the source of your energy. Lisa, please say hi to your mom and dad.

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