Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your information.
I am relieved that the parcel has been arrived safely.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

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Thank you for the information.
I am relieved that the parcel has arrived safely.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

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Thank you for your message.

I'm relieved to here the package has arrived.

If you have any question, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you for your message.

I'm relieved to here the package has arrived.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

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こんにちは、Fujirock66さん。質問があります。プロボクサーの高山勝成さんが使用しているサウナスーツ（サウナスーツ・アクティブ７）のスポーツウェアモデルを購入していただいてよろしいですか？サイズはスモールでおねがいします。もしその品目をご購入していただいて、さらにお値段をお知らせくださるとありがたいです。

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こんにちは、Fujirock66さん。質問があります。プロボクサーの高山勝成さんが使用しているサウナスーツ（サウナスーツ・アクティブ７）のスポーツウェアモデルを購入していただいくことはできますか？サイズはSでおねがいします。また購入が可能な場合、お値段もお知らせいただければ幸いです。

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Fujirock66様、質問があります。
プロボクサー、高山勝成氏が使っている「サウナスーツ・アクティブ7」のスポーツウェアモデルを
取り寄せることはできますか？
サイズはスモールでお願いします。
可能であれば、価格がいくらになるのか教えてください。

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Fujirock66様、質問があります。
プロボクサー、高山勝成氏が使っている「サウナスーツ・アクティブ7インチ」のスポーツウェアモデルを
取り寄せることはできますか？
サイズはSでお願いします。
また製品を入手できる場合、価格がいくらになるか教えていただけると助かります。

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I post photos of better quality on my home page.

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I posted photos of better quality on my home page.

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For questions regarding taxes, would you please ask an American tax office? I will leave it up to you.

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For questions regarding taxes, would you please ask the American tax office? Thank you.

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Can you kindly make an inquiry with the US customs office regarding customs matters? Thank you.

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Can you kindly make the inquiry with the US customs office regarding customs matters? Thank you.

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Thank you for supporting my daughter all the time. From February, she goes to your preschool twice a week. I am looking forward to how she is going to change. I hope that she can find a friend there. I tell her to speak in a big voice, but how is she speaking in the preschool?
I appreciate your continuous support from now.

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Thank you for supporting my daughter all the time. From February, she goes to your preschool twice a week. I look forward to watching her grow up. I hope she makes a lot of friends. I tell her to speak up, but how is she in the preschool?
I appreciate your continuous support.

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I always appreciate your help. My daughter is going to school twice a week from February and I'm looking forward to seeing how she changes. I hope she can get many friends. I'm telling her to speak with big voice but how is she like at school? I appreciate your continuous support.

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I always appreciate your help. My daughter is going to school twice a week from February and I look forward to watching her grow up. I hope she makes a lot of friends. I always tell her to speak up, but how is she at school? I appreciate your continuous support.

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Haven't you purchased a wrong item? This script is only a Javascript. If you have purchased wrongly, you can contact ABC and get a refund. After that, you can purchase Script which you can use for Wordpress. I'm sorry if it's my misunderstanding.

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Haven't you purchased the wrong item? This script is only a Javascript. If you have purchased wrongly, you can contact ABC and get a refund. After that, you can purchase a Script which you can use for Wordpress. I'm sorry if it's my misunderstanding.

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Did you make a wrong purchase? This script is just a JavaScript. If this was a wrong purchase, then please report it to ABC and proceed with the refund procedure. You can then purchase the script that you can use with WordPress. I am very sorry for the misunderstanding.

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Did you make a wrong purchase? This script is just a JavaScript. If this was a wrong purchase, then please report it to ABC and proceed with the refund procedure. You can then purchase the script that you can use with WordPress. Sorry if this is not the case.

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Didn’t you buy this by error? This script is just Javascript. If you purchased it by mistake, please report to ABC and ask for a refund. After that, you should buy a Script that can be used for WordPress. If I’m wrong, I’m sorry.

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Didn’t you buy this by mistake? This script is just Javascript. If you purchased it by mistake, please report to ABC and ask for a refund. After that, you should buy a Script that can be used for WordPress. If I’m wrong, I’m sorry.

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Wasn't it a mistake in purchase? The script of this one is just Javascript. If it was a mistake, please report it to ABC and we will proceed with the repayment. After that, it's better if you will purchase a script that can be use in Wordpress. We are very sorry for this misunderstanding.

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Is there a possibility you purchased the wrong item? This Script is just a Javascript. If you made the wrong purchase, please report it to ABC and proceed with the repayment. Then you can purchase a script that can be used in Wordpress. We are very sorry if this is not the case.

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Charms of Bach’s Lute Suite

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The charm of Bach’s Lute Suite

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The charm of Bach composition lute suite

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The charm of Lute Suite composed by Bach

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Is there anyone who can be an Japanese interpretor in Vũng Tàu, Vietnam?
If there is, please tell me the charge per day.
Is it holiday from the 8th of February in Vietnam?

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Is there any Japanese interpreter in Vũng Tàu, Vietnam?
If there is, please tell me the charge per day.
Is it a holiday from the 8th of February in Vietnam?

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Is there a Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If is there anyone who can do it, please tell us how much it costs.
Are the holidays going to start on February 8th?

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Is there any Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If there is, please tell us how much it costs per day.
Is it a holiday from February 8th in Vietnam?

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Is there a Japanese translator in Vung Tau, Viet Nam?
If there's anyone please let me know the fee for a day.
Is it going to be a holiday from February 8th in Viet Nam?

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Is there any Japanese translator in Vung Tau, Viet Nam?
If there is please let me know the fee per day.
Is it going to be a holiday from February 8th in Viet Nam?

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こんにちは。

私は、リストされているあなたのジャケットを購入したい。サイズ：M / L ;　胸のサイズ80〜104cm（31.5〜41in）; 長さ82cm（32.25in）。私は、今所有のジャケットを交換しています。

あなたが、あればもし肌着の半纏を開いて広めれば（すなわち折り畳まれていない）、幅はどのくらい成りますか？私はそれが持っているもと比べたい。

有難う。

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こんにちは。

私は、サイズ：M / L のリストにあるあなたのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲80〜104cm（31.5〜41in）; 長さ82cm（32.25in）。所有しているジャケットを新しいものに置き換えたいと考えています。

はんてんの裾を広げた場合 （すなわち折り畳まれていない状態では）、幅はどのくらいになりますか？所有しているものと比較したいと思います。

ありがとう。

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こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は0-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

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こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は80-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

袢纏の裾をを広げた場合、つまり折りたたんでいない状態では、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうかを知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

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AAA Mascot Keychain (all seven kinds + α) ¥ 700
· Thank You Letter Set ¥ 1,500
· ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!" T-shirt (Pink / S / M / L) each ¥ 4,800
· ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!" T-shirt (Blue / S / M / L) each ¥ 4,800

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AAA Mascot Keychain (all seven kinds and more) ¥ 700
· Thank You Letter Set ¥ 1,500
· ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!" T-shirt (Pink / S / M / L) ¥ 4,800 each
· ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!" T-shirt (Blue / S / M / L) ¥ 4,800 each

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* AAA mascot key ring (total 7 types + α) 700 yen
* Thank you letter set 1,500 yen
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Pink/S/M/L) 4,800 yen per each
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Blue/S/M/L)4,800 yen per each

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* AAA mascot key ring (total 7 types and more) 700 yen
* Thank you letter set 1,500 yen
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Pink/S/M/L) 4,800 yen each
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Blue/S/M/L) 4,800 yen each

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Character pin badge (all seven) ¥ 600
Brochure ¥ 2,500
Clear file ¥ 500
Photo Sports Towel ¥ 2,500
Muffler towel ¥ 2,100

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Character pin badge (all seven) ¥ 600
Brochure ¥ 2,500
Plastic folder ¥ 500
Photo sports towel ¥ 2,500
Muffler towel ¥ 2,100