Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Denim shirt (S size) ¥ 5,000
Denim shirt (L size) ¥ 5,000
Wire turban ¥ 1,500
Coin Necklace ¥ 3,000
Mini-Luc Keychain ¥ 2,500

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Denim shirt (size S) ¥ 5,000
Denim shirt (size L) ¥ 5,000
Wire turban ¥ 1,500
Coin Necklace ¥ 3,000
Mini Backpack Keychain ¥ 2,500

元の翻訳
* Denim shirt (size S) 5,000 yen
* Denim shirt (size L) 5,000 yen
* Wire turban 1,500 yen
* Coin necklace　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　3,000 yen
* Miniature key ring 2,500 yen

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* Denim shirt (size S) 5,000 yen
* Denim shirt (size L) 5,000 yen
* Wire turban 1,500 yen
* Coin necklace　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　3,000 yen
* Miniature backpack key ring 2,500 yen

元の翻訳
· T-shirt (S / M / L / XL) each ¥ 3,100 (tax included)
· Akeome Panda Netsuke 2015 ¥ 1,000 (tax included)

★ "We Love AAA Exhibition" original goods ★
· T-shirt (S / M / L) each ¥ 3,292
Sweat (Kids size) ¥ 3,909
Sweat (adult size) ¥ 5,657
· WeLove Eh panda Memorial stuffed ¥ 3,086

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· T-shirt (S / M / L / XL) ¥ 3,100 each (tax included)
· Akeome Panda Netsuke 2015 ¥ 1,000 (tax included)

★ "We Love AAA Exhibition" original goods ★
· T-shirt (S / M / L) ¥ 3,292 each
Sweatshirt (Kids size) ¥ 3,909
Sweatshirt (adult size) ¥ 5,657
· WeLove Eh panda Memorial stuffed toy ¥ 3,086

元の翻訳
- T Shirt (S/M/L/XL) 3100yen each (including tax)
- happy new year panda netsuki 2015 1000yen (including tax)

★「We Love AAA exhibition」original goods★
- T Shirt (S/M/L) 3292yen each
- Sweat(Kid size) 3909yen
- Sweat(Adult size) 5657yen
- WeLove e~panda memorial doll 3086yen

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- T Shirt (S/M/L/XL) 3100yen each (including tax)
- happy new year panda netsuke2015 1000yen (including tax)

★"We Love AAA exhibition" original goods★
- T Shirt (S/M/L) 3292yen each
- Sweatshirt (Kid size) 3909yen
- Sweatshirt (Adult size) 5657yen
- WeLove e~panda memorial doll 3086yen

元の翻訳
It arrived on 19th but one sheet was missing.
I will cancel one sheet, so please make sure of it when you issue its invoice.

Item with a sheet missing
Item no:
Size: M
Quantity: 1 sheet

Could you kindly confirm the information above and contact me?
I'm waiting for your reply.

Also, the items for PO#123 arrived, so please invoice me.
The items for PO#456 has not arrived yet, so I will contact you once it is confirmed.

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It arrived on the 19th but one sheet was missing.
I will cancel that one sheet, so please make sure of it when you issue the invoice.

Item with a sheet missing
Item no:
Size: M
Quantity: 1 sheet

Could you kindly confirm the information above and contact me?
I'm waiting for your reply.

Also, the items for PO#123 have arrived, so please invoice me.
The items for PO#456 have not arrived yet, so I will contact you once they are confirmed.

元の翻訳
They were arrive on 19, but one unit was missing.
I will cancel the one unit. Please take care when you create an invoice.

Missing Product
Part Number:
Size: M
Quantity: more than one

Please confirm above matter and contact us.
Looking forward to hearing from you.

In addition,
Please bill PO#123 which have arrived.
PO #456 has not arrived yet. So I will contact you as soon as I confirm it.

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They have arrived on the 19th, but one piece was missing.
I will cancel the one piece. Please take care when you create the invoice.

Missing Product
Part Number:
Size: M
Quantity: one piece

Please confirm the above matter and contact us.
Looking forward to hearing from you.

In addition,
Please bill PO#123 which has arrived.
PO #456 has not arrived yet. So I will contact you as soon as I confirm it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your continued business. I sent mails with PDF file 3 times to your Hotmail address. Have you received them?
If you haven't, they might be stored in spam mail folder since they have the attached file. Please kindly check it again.
If you could not receive it, please let me know the other mail address in order for me to send it.
Best regards,

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Thank you for your continued business. I sent an Email with the PDF file attached 3 times to your Hotmail address. You haven't r received them?
If you haven't, maybe they went to your spam mail folder since they had files attached. Please kindly check it.
If you have not receive them, please let me know a different Email address if you have one in order for me to re-send it.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
Hello, I have sent 3 times the pdf file to your hotmail address, didn't you receive it?
Maybe, since I attached a file it went to the spam folder. Could you check?
If you didn't receive it, if you have another mail address, tell me. I will send it again to that one.
I am waiting for your reply.

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Hello, I have sent 3 times the Email with the pdf file attached to your hotmail address, didn't you receive it?
Maybe, since I attached a file it went to the spam folder. Could you check?
If you didn't receive it, and if you have another Email address, please tell me. I will send it again to that one.
I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.

I think it is important to offer the best quality, so I will wait.
If it is possible, please let me know when you can not meet the delivery time.

Please take your time. Good luck at your CES.
I hope your success.

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Thank you for the message.

I think it is important to offer the best quality, so I will wait.
If it is possible, please let me know if you can not meet the delivery time.

Please take your time. Good luck with the CES.
I hope for your success.

元の翻訳
It's 10 PM in the evening in San Francisco.
It's hot when you're in the sun, but otherwise it's cold.

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It's 10 PM in San Francisco.
It's hot when you're in the sun, but otherwise it's cold.

元の翻訳
For details, check the website of Charming kiss↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

In twitter and application, we will distribute the diverse information. Check also here♪

Application
（ ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

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For details, check the website of Charming kiss↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

Through Twitter and our app, we will distribute diverse information. Check here also♪

Application
（ ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

元の翻訳
For details, please check the official website of Charming Kiss! ↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

Please also check here as we also public lot of news through twitter and our application♪

* Application
(ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

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For details, please check out the official website of Charming Kiss! ↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

Please also check here as we also put out information through twitter and our application♪

* Application
(ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

元の翻訳
Nikkei
On 30th October, Thursday, Nikkei

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NIKKEI ASIAN REVIEW
30th October, Thursday, NIKKEI ASIAN REVIEW