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IGI3931

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the holding period has expired so the product seems to have been returned.
I prepared the following actions to avoid causing you any inconvenience.
I will be looking forward for your response.

1. Re-delivery of the product (Shipping will be free of charge)
2. Full refund
Refund procedures:
Please log in to B.
Select product cancellation, product return from the order history.
This completes the process.

Have a nice day.

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IGI3931

Thank you for contacting me.
I do not know the cause, but the holding period has expired so the product seems to have been returned.
I prepared the following actions to avoid causing you any inconvenience.
I will be looking forward to your response.

1. Re-delivery of the product (Shipping will be free of charge)
2. Full refund
Refund procedures:
Please log in to B.
Select product cancellation, product return from the order history.
This completes the process.

Have a nice day.

元の翻訳
I absolutely do not know what I need to do with regards to this product.
Just tell me why it cannot be shipped in the first place!

In addition, I purchased 5 camping knives in Amazon,
but I cannot return it since it's already more than 30 days.

Are you telling me to throw this product in a garbage can??

Plus, why can't you ship to the specified location?

This is the first time that I encountered someone that's not flexible such as you.

Anyway, do not leave it as it is. Provide an answer immediately!
If you want to throw it away then just throw it away.

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I absolutely do not know what I need to do with regards to this product.
Just tell me why it cannot be shipped in the first place!

In addition, I purchased 5 camping knives on Amazon,
but I cannot return them since it's already more than 30 days.

Are you telling me to throw this product in the garbage??

Plus, why can't you ship to the specified location?

This is the first time that I encountered someone such as you who's not flexible.

Anyway, do not leave it as it is. Provide an answer immediately!
If you want to throw it away then just throw it away.

元の翻訳
Sales proceeds
Total sales
Cost
Suppliers
Total cost
Gross profit
Personnel expenses
Wage allowance
Bonus
Legal welfare expenses
Welfare costs
Seconded employees burden share
Wage inflation rate
Total labor costs
General expenses
1 Travel and transportation expenses
2 packing fare
3 communications expenses
4 advertising expenses
5 entertainment expenses
6 meeting expenses
7 cost of utilities
8 consumables
9 rent
10 sales promotion expenses (DM, campaign expenses)
11 Fee and commission expense
12 office supplies expenses
13 outsourcing expenses
14 Consulting contracts (accounting services)

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Sales
Total sales
Cost
Suppliers
Total cost
Gross profit
Personnel expenses
Wage allowance
Bonus
Legal welfare expenses
Welfare costs
Seconded employees burden share
Wage increase rate
Total labor costs
General expenses
1 Travel and transportation expenses
2 packing fare
3 communications expenses
4 advertising expenses
5 entertainment expenses
6 meeting expenses
7 cost of utilities
8 consumables
9 rent
10 sales promotion expenses (DM, campaign expenses)
11 Fee and commission expense
12 office supplies expenses
13 outsourcing expenses
14 Consulting contracts (accounting services)

元の翻訳
Evaluation IGI2712
Good day
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for the trouble.
I cannot give you any more trouble.
I have prepared the following action.
Can I request you to make a selection?
I will handle it immediately
Have a good day.

1. Full refund
After you log in to B, please select return, cancel from the order history.

2. I will arrange for the new product.
The shipping is free of charge.

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Evaluation IGI2712
Good day
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for the trouble.
I cannot give you any more trouble.
I have prepared the following action.
Can I ask you to make a selection?
I will handle it immediately
Have a good day.

1. Full refund
After you log in to B, please select return, cancel from the order history.

2. I will arrange for the new product.
The shipping is free of charge.

元の翻訳
- 3. Shield
The shield appears on the top and bottom positions. It also blocks the enemy's magic.

- 4. Old Fashion
It has the strongest power. However you can only fire one shot on the screen.

- Wave
The Wave progresses once every 7.5 seconds. The enemies get stronger with the increasing of the Wave.

- Example progress
Reach Easy - Wave 10
Reach Wave 10 with the easy difficulty level
Reached Wave 10 with the easy difficulty level

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- 3. Shield
The shield appears on the top and bottom positions. It also blocks the enemy's magic.

- 4. Old Fashion
It has the strongest power. However you can only fire one shot on the screen.

- Wave
The Wave progresses once every 7.5 seconds. The enemies get stronger with the progressing of the Wave.

- Example progress
Reach Easy - Wave 10
Reach Wave 10 with the easy difficulty level
Reached Wave 10 with the easy difficulty level

元の翻訳
Thank you very much on doing business with us as always.

This time, I made an order as I want to buy more products than usual.
However, the price is higher than usual so I am currently troubled.

Can you provide it at a cheaper price?

I have been sending emails to A until now,
but there was no reply so I contacted you in this email address.

Thank you and regards.

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Thank you very much for doing business with us as always.

This time, I made an order as I want to buy more products than usual.
However, the price is higher than usual so I am currently troubled.

Can you provide it at a cheaper price?

I have been sending emails to A until now,
but there was no reply so I contacted you in this email address.

Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
When I thought of those things, I happen to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and run all over again from the starting point.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lenses in Japan.)

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When I thought of those things, I so happened to have seen your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it with me on my travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and ended up riding the bike from the starting point once again.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lanes in Japan.)

元の翻訳
Good day. Thank you very much fo reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

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Good day. Thank you very much for reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

元の翻訳
When I thought of those things, I happen to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and run all over again from the starting point.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lenses in Japan.)

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When I thought of those things, I happen to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it with me when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept on looking at the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and restart all over again from the starting point.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lanes in Japan.)

元の翻訳
Good day. Thank you very much fo reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

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Good day. Thank you very much for reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

元の翻訳
When I thought of those things, I happen to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and run all over again from the starting point.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lenses in Japan.)

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When I thought of those things, I happen [tense confusion] to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it [wrong verb] when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept [tense confusion] looking at the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went [tense confusion] the wrong way and run all over again from the starting point [?].

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize [part of speech confusion] bicycle lenses [noun confusion] in Japan.)

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

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As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for them to shine as they did during the Dortmund era.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
I'm a bit concerned for the Bayern game with Mata out.

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

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As a fan of the Japanese, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for them to shine as they were during the Dortmund era.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

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As a Japanese fan, honestly I was not amused because the addition of Mata meant that Kagawa's position would disappear.
However, there will [tense confusion] be coordination with the addition of Mata, so Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However [repetitive] , they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when a corner kick occurs.
I want them to play in the middle, which they are good at.
In addition, I am hoping that they will shine as they did in the Dortmund era.

I am happy that some Man U supporters say that they enjoy watching Kagawa's play.
With Mata out, I'm a bit concerned about the Bayern game.

元の翻訳
The road on the northern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park where people come to view the cherry blossoms.

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The road on the southern part of the condominium where I live is a "joint use area for Japanese civilian and US force". Cars lined up are for people coming to view the cherry blossoms in a forest park.

元の翻訳
The road on the northern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park where people come to view the cherry blossoms.

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The road on the south part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park that belongs to the people who come to the park to view the cherry blossoms.

元の翻訳
The road on the northern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park where people come to view the cherry blossoms.

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The road on the southern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park that belong to the people who come to view the cherry blossoms.

元の翻訳
The road on the northern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park where people come to view the cherry blossoms.

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The street south of my apartment house is a "Japan and US joint usage area." The cars lined up before the forest park belong to people who come to watch cherry blossoms.

元の翻訳
However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from us.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there also import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.

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However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from us.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there are also import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.

元の翻訳
However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from us.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there also import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.

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However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from our end.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there are import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.