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Evaluation IGI2712
Good day
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for the trouble.
I cannot give you any more trouble.
I have prepared the following action.
Can I request you to make a selection?
I will handle it immediately
Have a good day.

1. Full refund
After you log in to B, please select return, cancel from the order history.

2. I will arrange for the new product.
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レビュー ( 1 )

kapsiao_i3はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/11 09:16:25

元の翻訳
Evaluation IGI2712
Good day
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for the trouble.
I cannot give you any more trouble.
I have prepared the following action.
Can I request you to make a selection?
I will handle it immediately
Have a good day.

1. Full refund
After you log in to B, please select return, cancel from the order history.

2. I will arrange for the new product.
The shipping is free of charge.

修正後
Evaluation IGI2712
Good day
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for the trouble.
I cannot give you any more trouble.
I have prepared the following action.
Can I ask you to make a selection?
I will handle it immediately
Have a good day.

1. Full refund
After you log in to B, please select return, cancel from the order history.

2. I will arrange for the new product.
The shipping is free of charge.

ask sounds better than requests. "request" seems to formal-like