chisai_28 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or became missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

修正後
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or has gone missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

元の翻訳
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or became missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

修正後
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or goes missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

元の翻訳
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or became missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

修正後
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, we will immediately confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Supposing that a product gets lost or goes missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two options.
i. Refund for full amount
ii. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

元の翻訳
Request for Sales Reinstatement

I have confirmed the problem so I am submitting a sales plan.
The problem points are the non arrival of products leading to claims and lowered customer satisfaction.
I am proposing the following improvement measures.

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Appeal for the Removal of Selling Privileges

I have identified the problems on my selling practice in the past, so I would like to submit a Plan of Action
The problems had been the non-delivery of products which had led to customers’ claims and lowered customers’ satisfaction.
I would like to propose the following Plan of Action for the improvement.↵

元の翻訳
Price
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This is the price of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

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Price
Insert a space
This is the rating of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
Price
Insert a space
This is the price of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

修正後
Price
Insert a space
This is the rating of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
Price
Insert a space
This is the price of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

修正後
Rating
Insert a space
This is the rating of the product.
The image size differs with each person so I do not think that this is my error.
Could you delete this evaluation?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

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Thank you for getting back to me. If you would wish to continue my work, then I will be happy to accept that.

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From this time, I will lend you the right to use paid search tool called Terapeak for searching items in eBay, but you should not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand if I am going to use it.

↵
Please research about the Terapeak until I will be able to provide its manual.

I put the template for the shipping charge into the drop box. Please make sure to use the one according to the weight of a product.

Please list the following products imported into the commerce using your PC.↵

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the correct template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the corresponding product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. If you want to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. Please do not use this tool when I am using it. I will let you know beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please study about Terapeak by my finishing making the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template witch fits the product weight.

Please get the following products up on eBay from your PC.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage right for the paid product search tool called Terapeak, which allows you to look for products at eBay from this time. This would be under the condition that you can not use this tool while I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I use this tool.

Please try to use Terapeak until I write up the manual.

I will place a shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use an appropriate template according to a product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

元の翻訳
To the person in charge.

Thank you for your usual support.
I am sending the merchant invoice for tracking number 961191307871261827053 and 420342389405509699938263320446.
Please set the packages to shipping status after confirming those.
Please let me know if there are any problems.
I will support in a prompt manner.

Thank you.

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To the person in charge.

Thank you for your usual support.
I am sending the merchant invoice for tracking number 961191307871261827053 and 420342389405509699938263320446.
Please set the packages to shipping status after confirming those.
Please let me know if there are any problems.
I will provide you support in a prompt manner.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought in eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.

修正後
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought from eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought in eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.

修正後
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit I bought on eBay and have it shipped together?

Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought in eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.

修正後
Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine them with the 1 unit I bought in eBay and ship them together?

Thank you and regards.