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■Thank you for contacting us. This item was sold out, but I will ask olimpus if they have a stock.
Today is a holiday; so I will contact you tomorrow.

■Hello. Have you checked the message I sent days ago?

OO I am selling is a new model.
I have a institutional use for thirty times.

Please contact me if you have an interest.

■This item expires on February 2015.
This item was finished being put out in Japan, and the one expiring on February 2015 is the last product.

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■Thank you for contacting me. This item was sold out, but I will ask olimpus if they have a stock.
Today is a holiday, so I will contact you tomorrow.

■Hello. Have you checked the message that I've sent days ago?

The OO I am selling is a new model.
I have a institutional use for thirty times.

Please contact me if you are interested.

■This item expires on February 2015.
This item is no longer produced in Japan, and the one expiring on February 2015 is the last one.

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Would you please tell me the size(length * width * height) of the box ? Use inch as a unit, please. I appreciate that you would tell me the weight of the box, if possible. Thank you for assisting me.

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Would you please tell me the size(length * width * height) of the box ? (Use inch as the unit), please. I appreciate if you can also tell me the weight of the box. Thank you for assisting me.

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What is the condition of the item?
Could tell me what made it unfunctional in detail?

Please tell the EMS delivery person that you refuse to reveice it.
The item will be returned without cost.

I have claimed to investigate Japanese EMS side as well as your country.

The fund will be; item$310, Shipping cost, $60 and the customs fee$60 of total of $430.
I will make the fund as soon as the item returns.

I sincerely apporogise for the trouble.

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What is the condition of the item?
Could you tell me the detailed reasons on why it did not function?

Please tell the EMS delivery person that you cannot receive it since it's broken.
The item will be returned without extra cost.

I have requested the EMS in Japan as well as the one in your country to investigate.

The amount will be $310 for the product, $60 doe the shipping cost, and $60 for the customs tax for a total of $430.
I will issue all the refunds as soon as the item has been return.

I sincerely apologize for the trouble.

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By the way, do you have plans to go to the Q&A concert? It is fortunate they are coming to Japan. I think the summer heat will be a little too much for me to stand, but I don't think I might get another chance, so I bought a ticket. At the last Summer Sonic I was pushed around so much it felt like I was thrown into a washing machine, its a bit of a bad memory for me. I don't know if my condition is up to it anymore (Ha ha!). Oh yes, your baby has arrived safely? Congratulations. Having more family is always a joyous thing. I can't wait to see his photographs.

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By the way, do you have plans to go to the Q&A concert? It is fortunate that they are also coming to Japan. I thought that the summer heat will be a little too much for me, but I don't think I might get another chance, so I bought a ticket. At the last Summer Sonic, I was pushed around so much it felt like I was thrown into a washing machine, it was tough for me. I don't know if I am up to it anymore (Ha ha!). Oh yes, your baby was born safely? Congratulations! Having more family is always a joyous thing. I can't wait to see his photographs.

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I gave the author of the script a one star rating.

The reason being was poor support. There was no response to my comment even after 20 days.
I think they should have regard for the users opinions.
At the very least, leaving a reply is good manners.
The script was extremely poor quality source code and I will not use it.

After leaving the one star rating, I received direct mail from them many times containing abuse.
For a poor quality script with bad support a one star rating is appropriate. Is that correct?
That is entirely up to the user's discretion.

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I gave the author of the script a one star rating.

The reason was due to the poor support. There was no response to my comment even after 20 days.
I think they so not listen to the users' opinions.
At the very least, it is considered as good manners to leave a response.
The script itself was extremely dirty and I will not use it for the source code.

After leaving the one star rating, I received a number of mails from them containing abusive language.
For a poor quality script coupled with bad support a one star rating is appropriate, isn't it?
That is entirely up to the user's discretion.

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With EMS, it takes 4 to 6 days to get from Japan to the destination in South America. With ePacket, it takes 6 to 8 days. Depending on the situation of postal service of your country of residence, the arrival of the package might delay. According to our experience, a delivery to capital areas is relatively on-time, but if the postal service situation is not so favorable, it may be faster if you could go to the post office to receive the package. Also, they always do customs inspection on EMS, and in many cases charge you customs duty.

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With EMS, it takes 4 to 6 days to get delivered from Japan to the destination in South America. With ePacket, it takes 6 to 8 days. Depending on the situation of postal service of your country of residence, there might be delays on the arrival of the package. According to our experience, a delivery to capital areas is relatively on-time, but if the postal service situation is not so favorable, it may be faster if you could go to the post office to receive the package. Also, they always do customs inspection on EMS, and in many cases charge you with customs duty.

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I am selling more than a million dollars of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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I am selling more than a million dollars worth of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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The spelling in the lower design is lacking a "C" in front of the "K"

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The spelling in the lower design is lacking a "C" in front of the "K".

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From unit sales and parts sales, a perfect lineup to find popular rubber crawler and construction machinery parts.

Handled products
Used Excavator
Used compressor
Used welding machine
Used forklifts

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From unit sales and parts sales, a perfect lineup of popular rubber crawler and construction machinery parts.

Handled products
Used Excavator
Used compressor
Used welding machine
Used forklifts

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Product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink are selling on the maker's homepage.

But, the list of wholesale only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the list of wholesale.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

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The product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink and is being sold on the maker's homepage.

But, the wholesale list only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the product with the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the wholesale list.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

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Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company B on the 000 of company C.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

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Thank you for your support. This is Yamada from Japan.
The product arrived the other day.
Thank you very much for your very quick turnaround.

I immediately tried operating the product, but the 000 of company A did not function at all.
I also look thoroughly through some conditions for the confirmation.
I would like to ask for your guidance moving forward.

I have a question on another item.
Will it be possible to use the 000 from company C on the 000 of company B.
I understand that this will be something done at my own risk.
I am thinking of purchasing one if the operation is possible.
It would be really appreciated if you can kindly answer regarding this.

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Thank you for the comprehensive explanation.

With regards to the Bill of Lading that is needed for the resolution,
would the following document be fine?

If this is not the case then where can I get hold of such document?

We are selling in Japan and the shipping address is not Ohio.
Your products are transported to Yamato (shipping company) in New Jersey and delivered to Japan.
But in that case, which state's resale certification is required?

Moreover, the recent order number is below.

Apologies for this, but please kindly confirm.

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Thank you for the comprehensive explanation.

With regards to the Bill of Lading that is needed for the resolution,
would the following document be fine?

If this is not the case then where can I get hold of such document?

We are selling in Japan and the shipping address is not in Ohio.
Your products are transported to Yamato (shipping company) in New Jersey and delivered to Japan.
But in that case, which state's resale certification is required?

Moreover, the recent order number is as follows.

Apologies for this, but please kindly confirm.