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Please request directly from me if you wish for Japanese products.
And there are no worries since we're transacting using PayPal.

I have Facebook. Do you also do Facebook?
I would be happy to be able to receive a message from you through this.
This is my Facebook address. Please kindly make a request.

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Please request directly from me if you wish for Japanese products.
And there is no need for worries, since the transactions use PayPal.

I have Facebook. Do you also use Facebook?
I would be happy to receive a message from you through this.
This is my Facebook address. Please make a request.

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The responsible members are listed here, but we also received a lot of support from people other than the ones listed here.

Alliance Companies
We have received the cooperation of the following people.

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The responsible members are listed here, but we also received a lot of supports from people who are not listed here.

Alliance Companies
We have received the cooperation of the following people.

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I am thinking of handling your products through a sales on order format.

I will be making a single unit order, but how much would the wholesale price be cheaper compared to the list price?
I want you to tell me the Discount codes that can be used when purchasing on the B2B site.

Would the shipping be free of charge if I purchase from the B2B site?

Would it be cheaper than the selling price of this site?

The products this time are lesser compared to the previous time, but the shipping charge is more expensive.

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I am thinking of handling your products through a sales-by-order format.

I will be making a single unit order, but how much more would the wholesale price be cheaper compared to the list price?
I want you to tell me the Discount codes that can be used when purchasing on the B2B site.

Would the shipping be free of charge if I purchase from the B2B site?

Would it be cheaper than the selling price on this site?

The products this time are lesser compared to the previous time, but the shipping charge is more expensive.

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The peeling of the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the manufacturer. I sent the guitar in order to claim the manufacturer's repair warranty, but since I am not able to receive the warranty then there is no point. The guitar that was returned was far from being repaired nor improved with far worst symptoms so that's why I thought that it was doubtful that it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar next week so can you kindly issue a refund? I won't be requiring an exchange.

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The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect from the manufacturer. I sent the guitar in order to claim the manufacturer's repair warranty, but since I am not able to receive the warranty then there is no point. The guitar that was returned was far from being repaired nor improved with far worst symptoms so that's why I thought that it was doubtful that it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar next week so can you kindly issue a refund? I won't be requiring an exchange.

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A year 2000 model bass guitar.
A base with a retro look and a reprinted version of the 1960's Yamaha SG series.
Yamaha has stop manufacturing it recently and it is also hard to find in second had stores in Japan.
The controller is volume, volume, tone.
The pickup is bright and a solid character sound.
There are no repair histories nor parts replaced.
There are visible abrasions and bruises in some areas.
The neck remains straight, truss rod is also in good working condition and the fret has around 90% left.

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A bass made in the year 2000.
It is reprinted version of 1960's Yamaha SG series featured with nostalgic look.
Yamaha has discontinued its production now, and it is also hard to find in the second hand market in Japan.
The controller is provided with sound and tone volumes.
The (sound) pickup reproduces bright and firm characters of sound.
It has no history of neither repair nor part replacement.
There are several abrasion marks and dents..
The neck remains almost straight: truss rod is also in good working condition, and about 90% of frets are remained..↵

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Your company initially shipped using FedEx, but the package has not arrived to me for more than 10 days so I made an inquiry.
I received an email that the package has been returned but the reason was not explained.
And the package that was shipped via DHL this time was extremely damaged and not usable when I tried open the box.↵
In addition, despite taking one month for the package to arrive after making the request, I cannot accept an increased shipping fee that was charged to my card.
I request for an explanation of the whole matter from start to end.

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You initially shipped the package using FedEx, but I did not receive it even passing more than 10 days, so I made the inquiry.
After then, you emailed me telling it was returned to you, but you did not explain what caused the return was.
Again, you shipped the package using DHL, but when I received and opened it, it was severely damaged and not usable.↵
In addition, I cannot accept that you increased the shipping fee without my knowledge and charged the balance to my credit card in spite of the delivery took more than one month after my request of shipment.
Please explain to me whole the pictures for what happened to this shipment.↵