翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: マンUの香川真司選手についての文章です

日本語

日本人のファンとしては正直、マタの加入は香川のポジションが無くなってしまうので快く思っていませんでした
ただマタが加入したことで連携が取れるようになりマンUのサッカーも面白くなりましたね

ただフィジカルが強くないからコーナーキックの時は必ず後ろに下がっているのは残念だし
できれば得意な真ん中でプレーして欲しいです
またドルトムント時代のように輝いてほしい


香川のプレーは見ていて楽しいと言ってくれるマンUのサポーターがいてくれてとても嬉しいです
バイエルン戦はマタがいないから心配です

英語

As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

レビュー ( 3 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/04/06 18:17:01

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

修正後
As a Japanese fan, honestly I was not amused because the addition of Mata meant that Kagawa's position would disappear.
However, there will [tense confusion] be coordination with the addition of Mata, so Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However [repetitive] , they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when a corner kick occurs.
I want them to play in the middle, which they are good at.
In addition, I am hoping that they will shine as they did in the Dortmund era.

I am happy that some Man U supporters say that they enjoy watching Kagawa's play.
With Mata out, I'm a bit concerned about the Bayern game.

kapsiao_i3はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/06 22:41:43

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

修正後
As a fan of the Japanese, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for them to shine as they were during the Dortmund era.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

mr_santos_822はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/06 23:14:12

元の翻訳
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

修正後
As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for them to shine as they did during the Dortmund era.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
I'm a bit concerned for the Bayern game with Mata out.

Please avoid passive voice. As much as possible, retain the active voice. The final statement was a bit off.. although the point was there.

[chisai_28]

Thank you. yes I am usually confused on the subject.