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I want to ask about EA_Special MM 2.4.To use fastened Lot I changed the setting but it seemed that it didn't function well.
I want to use it fastened with one Lot so please teach me all I need to change to setting.

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I have a question on EA_Special MM 2.4.I have changed the setting in order to use it on the fixed lot but it does not work well.
I want to use it fixed for one lot so please tell me all the items that I will need to change the settings for.

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The payment for translation works from June to August has been confirmed.
Thanks for the support.

Sincerely

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The payment for translation works for the period from June to August has been confirmed.
Thanks for the support.

Looking forward to working with you again.

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I have checked the payment of translation for June to August.
Thank you very much for your remittance.

Looking forward to next business.

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I have confirmed the payment of translation fee for June to August.
Thank you very much for your remittance.

Looking forward to working with you in the near future.

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I was with a baby and the staffs encountered in the street showed a lot of consideration for the children which made me feel happy.They guided me with great patience so that I could take the ride comfortably!!The Ebisuya left me a favorable impression!

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I was with a baby and the staff encountered on the street showed a lot of consideration for the children which made me feel happy.They guided me with great patience so that I could take the ride comfortably!!The Ebisuya-san has left me with a favorable impression!

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I was with my baby as well and I really appreciate that the staff I saw at street was nice to my kids. They talked to them respectively, that made us feel safe enough to ride on!!! I feel friendly about the whole Ebisuya-san!!

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I was with my baby as well and I really appreciated that the staff I saw at street was nice to my kids. They talked to them respectively, that made us feel safe enough to ride on!!! I've had favorable impression on Ebisuya-san overall!!

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It is very beatiful and impressive.
It is conveniently located near Sapporo,too.
I recommend you should go on the first day of your arrival in Sapporo.

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It is very beautiful and impressive.
One of the great things is that the great accessibility since It is conveniently located near Sapporo.
I recommend you visiting the place on the first day of your arrival in Sapporo.

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Hello,
I lost my order number.
Would you please inform me when my order item will be delivered to my addess?
Thank you.

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Hello,
I lost my order number.
Would you please inform me when the item that I have ordered will be delivered to my address?
Thank you.

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Hello.
I forgot the order number.
Could you tell me when will the goods I purchased be delivered ?
Thank you.

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Hello.
I forgot the order number.
Could you tell me when will the goods I purchased be delivered to my address?
Thank you.

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Hello.

I forgot the order number.
When will the item I ordered delivered to my address?
Thank you.

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Hello.

I forgot the order number.
When will the item I ordered be delivered to my address?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Japanese candles "Fragrance of Lights " (light)

The types with perfumes will remind you nature or plants, and another type is non-perfume. No matter which one, you can use it in the dining room because the fragrance is light.

Pillar / Ryukuro (large)

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Japanese candles "Honoka (Fragrance of Lights) " (light)

There are two scented types with perfumes that reminds you of the nature or plants, and unscented type available. No matter which one, you can use it in the dining room because the fragrance is subtle.

Pillar / Ryukuro (large)

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Japanese Candle " Honoka"

2 scented type which recall natural leaf and non-scented type. Low-key scent which does not disturb at the table.

Pillar / Ryukoku (big)

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Japanese Candle " Honoka"

We have two scented types each resembling the nature and plants, and unscented type. Scents from the scented types are so subtle that they do not disturb the aroma from the delicious meals served at table.

Pillar / Ryukoku (big)

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Please understand that we do note "gift, used lenses" on the package as we ship it out but for certain countries, the duty tax may be charged even though we make a note on the package.

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Please understand that we do note "gift, used lenses" on the package when we ship it out, but a certain amount of customs duties may be charged at some countries even though we make a note on the package.

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I purchased A and B from you.
Have you sent them all together or separately?
If you have sent it separately, please let me know the tracking number of another one.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased two items, A and B, from you.
Have you shipped them altogether or separately?
If you have shipped them separately, please let me know the tracking number for the second shipment.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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ズームが機能しません。リングを回すことができません。調節できるのは24-22の位置だけです。ズーム以外の他の部分に関してはちゃんと機能しています。

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ズームが機能しません。リングを回すことができません。調節できるのは24-22の位置だけです。ズーム以外の他の部分に関しては正しく機能しています。

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ZOOMが機能しません。リングを回せません。利用できる調整は、24-25の位置でのみです。
ズームを除いて、その他の全ては、良く機能しています。

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ZOOMが機能しません。リングを回せません。調整は、24-22の位置でのみ利用できます。
ズームを除いて、その他の全ては、良く機能しています。

元の翻訳
I can make payment since I have US address registered to the PayPal.
As I will inform you the shipping address after making the payment, could you change the shipping destination to Japan but not in US?

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I can make payment since I have US address registered with PayPal.
As I will inform you the shipping address after making the payment, could you change the shipping destination from the US to Japan?↵

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Hello.

It has been over 3 days since the order, but no email noticing of shipping has come.
Please tell me the state of delivery.

Best wishes.

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Hello.

It has been over 3 days since my order placement, but I still have not heard from you regarding the shipping notice.
Please tell me the state of delivery.

Best wishes.

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Hi there,
It has been three days since I ord but no shipment notice has sent to me at all.
Please kindly tell product shipments situation.

Look forward to hearing from you.

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Hi there,
It has been over three days since I have placed my order but no shipment notice has sent to me at all.
Please kindly update me with the shipment status.

Look forward to hearing from you.

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I am a Japanese buyer.
I sell apparel clothing, and so on at Japanese popular shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your company's items are so popular in Japan. I really hope to sell them and ask you to sell them wholesale.

I await for favorable reply.

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I am a Japanese buyer.
I sell apparel clothing, and so on at Japanese popular shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your company's items are so popular in Japan. and I really hope to sell them so may I ask you to sell them wholesale?

I await for favorable reply.

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I am a buyer in Japan.
I am selling import items (about 3million yen per month mainly apparels) for popuar shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your items are very popular in Japan. Because I would love to sale them, I would like to sell wholesale.
Please give me the wholesale prices and the terms of trade.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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I am a buyer in Japan.
I am selling import items (about 3million yen per month mainly apparels) through popular shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your items are very popular in Japan, and I would love to make them available for the consumers in Japan, I would like you to sell them wholesale.
Please give me the wholesale prices and the terms of trade.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
I checked your deposit, so we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we’ll send you its tracking number, so wait a moment.↵

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Thank you for your purchase.
We have confirmed your payment, and we are preparing for the shipment of your order.
Please allow us some time as we will be providing you with a tracking number for your shipment as soon as the shipment is completed.

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I have received 2 items↵
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items, and found out that the presentation box (the outer box) and instruction manual were not included with one of them.
Please ship the presentation box and the manual to me immediately.
If you don’t have the presentation box and the manual available, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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Hello.

Since I would like to know about the distribution status, please inform me about the delivery company and tracking number.
Thank you

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Hello.

Please inform me of the shipping company and the tracking number for the shipment as I would like to check on the shipment status.
Thank you

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Please click the button "INVENTORY" at the top of the screen, and paste ASIN which is copied, then search it.

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Click on "INVENTORY" button located at the top of the screen, and paste ASIN which is copied, then start searching.