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According to history of tracking at post office, it was delivered on September 1st.↵
However, no one was at home, so it was returned to the post office.
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I hate to ask you, but could you inquire to your nearest post office by using the tracking number?
As I cannot inquire from other country, i request that you inquire it by yourself.

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According to the tracking record at the post office, the shipment was delivered on September 1st, but it was returned to the post office due to your absence.
I hate to ask you, but could you make an inquiry to your nearest post office with the tracking number?
As I cannot inquire from other country, i request that you inquire it by yourself.

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Our new item arrival information is also sent via mail magazines so please subscribe.

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First, happy birthday! If the delibary method is EMS, it will take 2~4 days from Japan to France. So, I think it will reach by 15th in September. If you choose EMS, it will cost 15$.
Please take it consideration, thank you.

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First of all, let me say happy birthday to you! ↵
If the delivery method is EMS, it will take 2~4 days from Japan to France. So, we expect your order to be delivered by September 15th.If you choose shipment via EMS, it will cost $15.
Please take it into consideration, thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
]We wanna buy 20 everyday, and we wanna continue buying it for a long time.

How much money could you discount?
we wanna do bussiness with you. We will cooperate your good definitely from buying it every month.

Can you cooperate?
Sorry for my favor.
Best regards,

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Thank you for your reply.
We would like to purchase 20 units every month, and we are anticipating a long-term purchase from you.

We would like to know your best discount price you are willing to give us.
We would like to do business with you. We will promise you that we will contribute to your profit by purchasing your merchandise each month.

We hope you will cooperate with us.
We apologize for taking liberty in approaching you with our offer.↵

Best regards,

元の翻訳
If I ordered the product, will the pillow in the set of it？or only pillow cover?

I just want to know it can be used immediately or not.

And could you direct delivery it to Japan?
Please reply as soon as possible, thank you.

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If I ordered the product, will the pillow case come with the pillow?

I would like to confirm it the product will be delivered ready-to-use.

Also, I would like to know if the product can be shipped directly to Japan.
Please reply as soon as possible. Thank you.

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I would like to have the item A I ordered.
Make sure for not to ship the item B mistakenly in place of item A.
If you don't have the item A in your inventory, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would send me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I would like to have the item A that I ordered.
Make sure not to ship the item B in place of item A by mistake.
If you don't have the item A in your stock, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would ship me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have A in stock, I would like to cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I'd like to ask aquestion about size of Espadrille.
I'm looking for size 24.5 in Japan, is it corresponding to US9?
If it's possible, could you send me the measurement table for Espadrille between US size and cm size?
Please answer me as soon as possible.

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I'd like to ask a question regarding the size of Espadrilles.(靴なので複数になります）
I'm looking for size 24.5 in Japan, is it corresponding to US 9?
If it's possible, could you send me the shoe size conversion chart for Espadrilles between US sizes and cm sizes?
I will await your prompt reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
Yes, we have the product in stock.
As we will be shipping it overseas, it will take time.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
Yes, we have the product in stock.
As we will be shipping it overseas, it will take time.(please allow some time )
Thank you.

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Hello.

I stopped importing from U.S,
so I will cancel the contract.

Best regards

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Hello.

I stopped importing from the U.S,
so I will cancel the contract.

Best regards

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Hello.

I finished the import from America, so
I think we should cancel our contract.

Best wishes.

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Hello.

I completed importing from the US, so
I think we should cancel our contract.

Best wishes.

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Thank you for your massage.
I sent the article, but it returned in mid course because it was larger than that of stipulated size to France.
I approgize it and I will cancel it and refund you.

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Thank you for your massage.
I sent (shipped) the article, but it was returned to me somewhere in the middle as it has exceeded the maximum size allowed to be shipped to France.
I apologize for it, and I will cancel your order and issue you a full refund.

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Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the product, we have shipped, however it exceeded the size which can be sent to France, and it got returned to me in the middle of delivery.

We are very sorry but this time we will cancel your order and repay.

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Thank you for your message.
We have shipped the product to you, however it exceeded the maximum allowable size which can be sent to France, and it got returned to me in the middle of delivery.

We are very sorry but this time we will cancel your order and will issue you a full refund.

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I want the stick which appeared in this photograph, so could you sell it on eBay?

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I want the stick which appeared in this photograph, so could you list it on eBay?

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この14日という期限を超える返品要求を認めていただけますか？14日を超える返品延長に同意していただけるのなら、レンズを返品し返金していただきたいです。ご連絡お待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。
Amy G. Spry

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この14日という期限を超える返品依頼を認めていただけますか？14日を超える返品期間の延長に同意していただけるのなら、レンズを返品し返金していただきたいです。ご連絡お待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。
Amy G. Spry

元の翻訳
We are sorry for non delivery of the item yet.
Now it's passed 17:00 in Japan time. Although we have asked the postal office to investigate the delivery, we shall confirm them tomorrow again. If the trail of the item is inknown as it was in pervious circumstance, we shall accept your request of refund. Plase give us more time.
Again we are sorry for your inconvenience.

Kind regards.

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We are sorry that the item has not been delivered to you yet.
Now it's Sunday after 17:00 in Japan. Although we have asked the post office to investigate the delivery status, we shall check with them tomorrow again. If the tracking status of the item remains unknown as it was before, we shall accept your request of refund. Please give us some more time.
Again we are sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you.

Kind regards.

元の翻訳
It seems like I tried to pay with a credit card beyond the date when its validity ends, so it was impossible.
I will pay with a different card immediately, so please urgently send me an invoice.
I'm sorry I requested this many times.

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It seems that I failed to make payment with my credit card as it was expired.
I will pay with a different card immediately, so please urgently send me an invoice.
I'm sorry I requested this many times.

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It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

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It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt to pay with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

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The credit card was dclined because expiration date was expired.
I would like to pay on demand, please charge as soon as possible.
I'm sorry to ask you repeatedly.

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The credit card was declined as I was trying to pay through a card which was already expired.
I would like to pay with another card, so please send me a bill as soon as possible.
I'm sorry to ask you repeatedly.

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If I purchase today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within about a week, so I wonder if you could ship it as early as possible.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

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If I purchased the item today, when would I receive the item?
I would like to receive it within a week or so, so I wonder if you could ship it via express shipment option.
I would be happy to pay any additional fee for fast delivery.

Would I be able to receive the item within 4-7 days by EMS?

Thank you and best regards.

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If I ordered today, when would it be delivered?
I would like to receive it in a week or so, and could you expedite the shipment?
I am willing to pay for the shipping surcharge.

Would it work with EMS to get it delivered within 4 to 7 days?

Thank you in advance.

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If I ordered today, when would it be delivered?
I would like to receive it in a week or so, and could you expedite the shipment?
I am willing to pay for the additional shipping charge for express shipment.

Would it work with EMS to get it delivered within 4 to 7 days?

Thank you in advance.

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If I make an order today, when will it be delivered?
I want the goods to reach me within like a week, could you ship earlier?
I can pay additional fee.

Can it possibly be 4-7 days with EMS?

Best regards,

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If I placed an order today, when will it be delivered?
I want the goods to be delivered to me within a week or so. Do you have express shipping available?
I can pay additional fee.

With EMS, would it be able to deliver the item in 4-7 days?

Best regards,

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I have requested by a customer for the specification sheet of AC cable, so please send it to me.
I attach a sample specification sheet received from the customer for your reference.

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Please forward me a spec sheet for AC cable that has been ordered, based on the request from our customer.
I am attaching a sample specification sheet received from the customer for your reference.