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元の翻訳
[The First Version Limited] "Initial (Initial) D THE MOVIE" Theatrical Preview Movie
Challenge to Giant Jenga (Sept., 2005 OA)
AAA The Way to Budokan The Latter Part (Sept. 2006 OA)
AAA The Way to Budokan The First Part (Sept. 2006 OA)
Romantica From Lips Daimao, Showa Elect Roman MIX Remixed by Kosaka Daimao
Predebut Tea The Spot
[Special Bonus Movie] AAA No. 1 Finals Game Championship!!

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[The First Version Limited] "Initial (Initial) D THE MOVIE" Preview Movie for Theaters
Challenge to Giant Jenga (Sept., 2005 OA)
AAA Road to Budokan The Latter Part (Sept. 2006 OA)
AAA Road to Budokan The First Part (Sept. 2006 OA)
Romantica From Lips Daimao, Showa Elect Roman MIX Remixed by Kosaka Daimao
Predebut Preview Spot
[Special Bonus Movie] AAA No. 1 Finals Game Championship!!

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Documentary image ［New Discovery in Hawaii］
New record original song
AAA TOUR 2013 Eighth Wonder LIVE sound source（ Performance at Saitama Super Arena）
Non stop mix sound source
Back stage・Making image
AAA Party report annals special edition（36P）

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Documentary movie ［New Discovery in Hawaii］
Newly recorded original song
Recorded from AAA TOUR 2013 Eighth Wonder LIVE (Performance at Saitama Super Arena)
Non stop mix sound
Back stage・Making image
AAA Party fanzine special edition (36P)

元の翻訳
The 3rd single album entitled "BOKU NO YUTU TO FUKIGENNAKANOJO"
is going to be released on March 25th (Wednesday) 2015.

The release day of the 4th album and thereafter will be announced when we decide it.

The stores of Ito Yokado that sell the music card
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We ask you refrain from inquiring by telephone.

(Hokkaido)
Asahikawa
Hakodate
Kushiro
Eniwa
Kitami

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The 3rd single titled "BOKU NO YUTU TO FUKIGENNAKANOJO"
is going to be released on March 25th (Wednesday) 2015.

The release day of the 4th single and thereafter will be announced when we decide it.

The list of Ito Yokado stores that sell the music card
*Please kindly refrain from inquiring by telephone.

(Hokkaido)
Asahikawa
Hakodate
Kushiro
Eniwa
Kitami

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[Recommended Environment]
Smartphone OS : iOS6, Android2.2 or higher
PC OS : Windows Vista, Windows7, Macintosh10.4 or higher

*Here are applicable phone types.
http://sp-m.mu mo.net/pub/supportPhone/

[Download Method]
1. Access to the download site, http://mu-ca.net/ (By direct input or via 2D bar code).
2. Input PIN code described on the product.

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[System Requirements]
Smartphone OS : iOS6, Android2.2 or higher
PC OS : Windows Vista, Windows7, Macintosh10.4 or higher

*Here are applicable phone types.
http://sp-m.mu mo.net/pub/supportPhone/

[How to Download]
1. Access the download site, http://mu-ca.net/ (By direct input or via 2D bar code).
2. Enter PIN code written on the product.

元の翻訳
The music card is sold only in Ito Yokado.
As the number of the card is limited, we recommend that you make a reservation
as soon as possible.

Some stores do not sell the music card.
Please refer to the "stores that sell the music card" listed below.
We do not accept the reservation by telephone.
We hope that you understand it.
We will stop the sales by reservation when we sell out the stock
that we plan at each store.

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The music card is sold only at Ito Yokado.
As the number of the card is limited, we recommend that you make a reservation
as soon as possible.

Some stores do not sell the music card.
Please refer to the "stores that sell the music card" listed below.
We do not accept the reservation by telephone.
We hope that you understand it.
We will stop the sales by reservation when we sell out the stock
that we plan at each store.

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*In case the LIVE is cancelled, we will not be able to compensate for the travel expense etc. Furthermore, this LIVE will not be held at a postponed date.
*In case the LIVE is cancelled due to Force Majeure, we will send you some goods equal to the total ticket price (1,561JPY). Please be notified that we cannot give refunds.

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*In case the LIVE is cancelled, we will not be able to compensate for the travel expense etc. Furthermore, this LIVE will not be held at a postponed date.
*In case the LIVE is cancelled due to Force Majeure, we will send you some goods equal to the total ticket price (1,561JPY). Please be notified that we cannot give refunds.

元の翻訳
This paper is a report on the practice of the class that adopts "design thinking"; process of problem solving for innovation on principle of the humanism. This report confirmed that the way is efficient for improving problem solving abilities.

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This essay is a report on the practice of the clecture that adopts "design thinking"; process of problem solving for innovation on principle of the humanism. This report confirmed that the way is efficient for improving problem solving abilities.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

I checked your order and as you pointed out there was a shipment mistake.
We are deeply sorry.

We can either ship the missing products to you, or we can give you a refund for the missing products.
Which would you prefer?

I am sorry for the trouble, but please give me your reply.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

I checked your order and as you pointed out there was a shipment mistake.
We are deeply sorry.

We can either ship the missing products to you, or we can give you a refund for the missing products.
Which would you prefer?

I am sorry for the trouble, but please give me your reply.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for your response. I have ordered it. Please set up this product so that it will sound.

2. Thank you for your response. I would like a refund for the shipment fee only. Thank you for your support always.

3. The product was secondhand, so I would like to return the product and get a refund.
I will send it back to you.

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1. Thank you for your response. I have ordered it. Please set up this product so that it will sound.

2. Thank you for your response. I would like a refund for the shipment fee only. Thank you for your support always.

3. The product was secondhand, so I would like to return the product and get a refund.
I will send it back to you.

元の翻訳
We will refund 100% of the item price if we can have the unopened item returned.
Please pay the returning shipping fee by yourself.

We will begin refunding right after we received the returned item.

If the above contents are acceptable, we will send you the shipping address.

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We will refund 100% of the item price if we can have the unopened item returned.
Please pay the returning shipping fee by yourself.

We will begin the refund process right after we receive the returned item.

If the above is acceptable for you, we will send you the shipping address.

元の翻訳
In any case, since we basically add a "33%" profit to the cost, when we get up the instruments on eBay which are made in USA, many people ask us why they are so expensive. Anyway, what I want to make sure is if you tell your clients on the site that you have a business partnership with Bass Japan. According to your answer, when we get up the instruments on eBay, we have to match the profits with the instruments we offer you.

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In any case, since we basically add a "33%" profit to the price, when we get up the instruments on eBay which are made in USA, many people ask us why they are so expensive. Anyway, what I want to make sure is if you tell your clients on the site that you have a business partnership with Bass Japan. According to your answer, when we list the instruments on eBay, we have to match the profits with the instruments we offer you.

元の翻訳
これまで受け取った情報では、表記価格が2,000米ドルを超えない場合は、輸入税/関税はおそらくかからないようです。また、日本から購入した他のギターの請求は受けていません。

また、関税は通常、無作為選択で請求されるとの情報も得ました。

確認のためさらなる情報を求めています。まだとても購入に興味があります。この件ですぐに連絡とれますか。

私がebayから購入して、貴社がebay手数料を払って、利益を少なくしたくないですよね。

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これまで受け取った情報では、表記価格が2,000米ドルを超えない場合は、輸入税/関税はおそらくかからないようです。また、日本から購入した他のギターで関税の請求を受けた事はありません。

また、関税は通常、無作為に選ばれて請求されるとの情報も得ました。

確認のためさらなる情報を求めています。まだとても購入に興味があります。この件はまたすぐ連絡します。

私がebayから購入して、貴社がebay手数料を払って、利益が少なくてもいいのですね？

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申告価格が2,000USドルを越えない限り、私がこれまで得た情報はそれです。↵
関税はかからないかもしれません。さらに、私はギターを日本から購入して関税をかけられたことはありません。

関税は無作為に選ばれてかけられることがあるという情報も得ています。

決定するまでにまだ情報を集めようとしています。まだ購入に深い興味を持っています。これについてはまたすぐに連絡します。

それで、あなたはむしろ私にeBayを通して購入してもらい、あなたがeBayに手数料を払ってより少ない料金をもらった方がいいと言うことですか？

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私が得た情報によると、申告価格が2,000USドルを越えない限り、関税がかからない可能性が高いとの事です。↵
さらに、私はギターを日本から購入して今まで関税をかけられたことはありません。

関税は無作為に選ばれてかけられることがあるという情報も得ています。

決定するまでにまだ情報を集めようとしています。まだ購入に深い興味を持っています。またすぐに連絡します。

ところで、あなたはむしろ私にeBayを通して購入してもらい、あなたがeBayに手数料を払ってより少ない料金をもらった方がいいと言うことですか？

元の翻訳
私が知っている限りでは、申告額が２０００米ドルを超過しない場合、輸入、通関及び関税の支払いは請求されないそうです。再度、日本からの他のギターの購入においてこの類の請求はありませんでした。

これらの請求が無作為に行われることがあることは知悉しております。

確認のため、詳細を追及中であり、購入意欲は衰えておりません。まもなく連絡します。

イーベイ経由で購入して欲しいのですね。そうすれば、貴方は手数料を支払うことになり、儲からなくなりますね。

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私が知っている限りでは、申告額が２０００米ドルを超過しない場合、輸入、通関及び関税の支払いは請求されないそうです。繰り返しになりますが、日本からの他のギターの購入においてこの類の請求はありませんでした。

これらの請求が無作為に行われることがあることは知悉しております。

確認のため、詳細を追及中であり、購入意欲は衰えておりません。まもなく連絡します。

イーベイ経由で購入して欲しいのですね。そうすれば、貴方は手数料を支払うことになり、入る金額も少なくなりますね。

元の翻訳
Through their leap year in 2014,
Toward the 10th anniversary in Sep 2015, the seven-month-serial release of singles will start, which will celebrate their 10th year!!
At mu-mo shop, the package with LIVE application ticket will be sold! (The quantity is limited.)
Those who purchase all 7 singles with LIVE application ticket will be able to join the 10th anniversary special LIVE event.

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Through their leap year in 2014,
Toward the 10th anniversary in Sep 2015, the seven-month-consecutive release of singles will start, to celebrate their 10th anniversary year!!
At mu-mo shop, the package with an application for a special live ticket will be sold! (The quantity is limited.)
Those who purchase all 7 singles with an application for a special live ticket will be able to join the 10th anniversary special LIVE event.

元の翻訳
AAA 10th Annicersary - Seven consecutive release of the single "TBD"

National arena tour was in success with about 200 thousands audiences.
The original album "GOLD SYMPHONY" received No.1 title in ORIKON weekly ranking with a record-sale.
Furthermore, AAA received Record Award in five consecutive years and played in Red and White Singing Contest.

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AAA 10th Anniversary - Seven consecutive release of the single "title TBC"

National arena tour was in success with about 200 thousands audiences.
The original album "GOLD SYMPHONY" received No.1 in ORICON weekly ranking with a record-sale.
Furthermore, AAA received Record Award in five consecutive years and played in Red and White Singing Contest.

元の翻訳
※ We will close the sales when we sell out the special bonus and the items.
※ The signature is printed out. We hope that you understand it in advance.

Please refer to here for the AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone)
（PC）http://shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272
（MB）http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272

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※ We will close the sales when we sell out the special bonus and the items.
※ The autograph is printed out. Please understand it in advance.

Please refer to here for the AAA Party official shop (for personal computer and mobile phone)
（PC）http://shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272
（MB）http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/avx/sv/list1?jsiteid=APY&categ_id=800272

元の翻訳
*mu-mo shop / E shop original bonus*
•original postcard booklet(7 postcards in one set)

*Advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪
(PC) http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX
(MB) http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1?artist_id=AAAXX

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*mu-mo shop / E shop original bonus*
•original postcard booklet (7 postcards in one set)

*Advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪
(PC) http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX
(MB) http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1?artist_id=AAAXX

元の翻訳
AAA members' portraits are not included. Please understand.

target merchandises ：AAA 41th single「Wake up!」offering for sale on 7/2
・CD+DVD（ONEPIECE edition） AVCD-83033/B ￥1,944(tax-included price) purchase here
・CD+DVD（AAA edition） AVCD-83034/B ￥1,944(tax-included price) purchase here
・CD only（ONEPIECE edition） AVCD-83035 ￥1,296(tax-included price) purchase here

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Please note AAA members' portraits are not included.

target merchandises ：AAA 41th single "Wake up!" offering for sale on 7/2
-CD+DVD (ONEPIECE edition) AVCD-83033/B 1,944 yen (tax-included) purchase here
-CD+DVD (AAA edition) AVCD-83034/B 1,944 yen (tax-included) purchase here
-CD only (ONEPIECE edition) AVCD-83035 1,296 yen (tax-included) purchase here

元の翻訳
The new piece "SHOWTIME" has new encounters, building bonds, and beginning as the theme and it's a dance upper tune song especially for people who are stepping into new stages of life. This is a must-see single that you can't miss, scheduled before the arena tour "AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" shifting into full swing from May.
In the newsletter special edition, in addition to this single's production scenes and member interviews, off shots from end of last year "NHK KOHAKU UTAGASSEN" and "KAKAYAKU!NIHONREKODOTAISYO" will be released!

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The new tune "SHOWTIME" has the themes of new encounters, building bonds, and beginning, and it's an upper dance tune especially for people who are stepping into new stages of life. This is a must-have single that you can't miss, before the arena tour "AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" shifting into a full swing from May.
In the newsletter special edition, in addition to this single's production scenes and member interviews, off shots from the end of last year's "NHK KOHAKU UTAGASSEN" and "KAKAYAKU!NIHONREKODOTAISYO" will be released!

元の翻訳
40th single "SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Special Edition>

Commemorable 40th single is <AAA Party> special edition only a member of the fan club can get!!! But for this single, special edition is also sold with report special part (P36)!

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40th single "SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Special Edition>

Commemorable 40th single is <AAA Party> a special edition only a member of the fan club can get!!! But for this single, the special edition is also sold with a special edition fanzine(36 pages)!

元の翻訳
★First edition benefit: Trading card (random one from eight ★ AAA Party Original benefit ★ (CD only) ■ The Other jacket (member's solo cut)
* Please note that the reservation period of the product subject may be terminated earlier for certain reasons.
* Please note that the benefit/ specification of CD / DVD may be terrminated earlier for certain reasons. (permanent benefit / permanent specification are excluded).
"SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Limited Edition> sales was terminated, because it is sold out.

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★First edition benefit: Trading card (random one from eight ★ AAA Party Original benefit ★ (CD only) ■ The Other jacket (member's solo cut)
* Please note that the reservation period of the product subject may be terminated earlier for certain reasons.
* Please note that the benefit/ specification of CD / DVD may be terminated earlier for certain reasons. (permanent benefit / permanent specification are excluded).
"SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Limited Edition> sale was terminated, because it is sold out.