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元の翻訳
Hello,

I checked the shipment's status as soon as I received your mail.
I have to apologize to you.
I just checked and the item has not been shipped yet.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I made up a mess because at the end of last year I stocked a large number of Beats, the same that you bought.
Since I have the item here with me, please don't worry.
I will ship it ASAP this evening.

After the shipment I will mail you again.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart.
There's really no excuse.

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Hello,

I checked the shipment's status as soon as I received your mail.
I have to apologize to you.
I just checked it and the item has not been shipped yet.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I mixed up because at the end of last year I stocked a large number of Beats, the same that you bought.
Since I have the item here with me, please don't worry.
I will ship it ASAP this evening.

After the shipment I will mail you again.
I made an unbelievable mistake.
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart.
There's really no excuse.

元の翻訳
Good day.
I received an e-mail from you, and checked the
status of the shipment.
I have to apologize to you.
I checked, and found that the item remains here.
I made a mistake that I have not done so far.
I have purchased several beats that are the same as the one
I gave to you this time since the end of last year, and I was confused.
I still have the item with me, and please do not worry.
I will send it to you this evening.

I will send you an e-mail again after sending it to you.
I apologize to you for having made a mistake
that I should not have done.
I apologize again.

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Good day.
I received an e-mail from you, and checked the
status of the shipment.
I have to apologize to you.
I checked it, and found out that the item remains here.
I made a mistake that I have not done so far.
I have purchased several beats that are the same as the one
I sold to you this time since the end of last year, and I was confused.
I still have the item with me, and please do not worry.
I will send it to you this evening immediately.

I will send you an e-mail again after sending it to you.
I apologize to you for having made an believable mistake
that I should not have done.
I apologize again.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I had your email and checked the shipment status immediately.
I must apologize to you.
I have confirmed it to find that there still sayed the article by us.
I have made an impossible mistake in serving you.
Because I bought a multiple number of Beats since the end of last year, I was being confused.
The article is by us, you do not need to worry about that at least.
I will send it out to you immediately in the evening.

I will email you again after the shipment.
I have made an impossible mistake.
Please accept my sincere apologies to you.
I am very sorry.↵
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Hello,
I had your email and checked the shipment status immediately.
I must apologize to you.
I checked it and found that there still stayed the article by us.
I have made an impossible mistake in serving you.
Because I bought a multiple number of Beats since the end of last year, I was being confused.
The article is by us, so you do not need to worry about that at least.
I will send it out to you immediately in the evening.

I will email you again after dispatching.
I have made an impossible mistake.
Please accept my sincere apologies to you.
I am very sorry.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I checked the status of shipment as soon as I received your email.
I really apologize you. I still have the item.
I had the worst mistake.
I was confused because from the end of the last year I stocked the same Beats as I handed over you.
For sure I have yours so please be assured.
I'll ship it in evening quickly.

I'll email you again after shipping.
I'd like to apologize you for my unbelievable mistake.
I make a sincere apology.

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Hello.
I checked the status of shipment as soon as I received your email.
I really apologize to you. I still have the item.
I made the worst mistake.
I was confused because from the end of the last year I stocked the same Beats as I handed over you.
For sure I have yours so please be assured.
I'll ship it in the late afternoon quickly.

I'll email you again after dispatching.
I'd like to apologize to you for my unbelievable mistake.
I make a sincere apology.

元の翻訳
We inquire the post office, and they said that it took more than 1 month to check the item.
Could you select 1 among the following 3?

1. We send the item to your new address.
However, in UK, you might be asked by the post office to pay 20 percent
VAT when you receive it.

2.We send it to your current address by EMS again. (You will receive it
in 5 days.)
If you do not receive it until the day you move, we will refund you in full amount.

3. We issue a refund to you immediately.

I recommend 2.

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We inquired the post office, and they said that it took more than 1 month to check the item.
Could you select 1 among the following 3?

1. We send the item to your new address.
However, in UK, you might be asked by the post office to pay 20 percent
VAT when you receive it.

2.We send it to your current address by EMS again. (You will receive it
in 5 days.)
If you do not receive it until the day you move, we will refund you in full amount.

3. We issue a refund to you immediately.

I recommend 2.

元の翻訳
I contacted to the post office and was told that the investigation will take more than a month.

Please let me know of your preference from the choices below.

1. We send the item to your new address.
Please note that the post office in the UK might charge you the VAT (20%) at the time of arrival of the item.

2. We send you the item to your current address with EMS. (It takes only about 5 days to get to your address.)
If the item does not reach you before moving, we will pay you back a full amount.

3. We pay you back a full amount immediately.

I would recommend the 2nd choice.

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I contacted the post office and was told that the investigation would take more than a month.

Please let me know of your preference from the choices below.

1. We send the item to your new address.
Please note that the post office in the UK might charge you the VAT (20%) at the time of arrival of the item.

2. We send you the item to your current address with EMS. (It takes only about 5 days to get to your address.)
If the item does not reach you before moving, we will pay you back a full amount.

3. We pay you back a full amount immediately.

I would recommend the 2nd choice.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding the item that you purchased this time, we sold the last inventory and we could not
obtain the inventory.
We inquired the manufacturer and found that it is going to be manufactured again in May next time.
We hate to say, but we will sell it after May next time.
So we would like to cancel this order. May we ask you agree to it?

We found a store where this item is sold.
URL
We apologize that we could not satisfy your request this time.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding the item that you purchased this time, we sold the last inventory and we could not
obtain the inventory.
We inquired the manufacturer and found that it is going to be manufactured again in May next time.
We hate to say, but we will sell it after May next time.
So we would like to cancel this order. May we ask you to agree to it?

We found a store where this item is sold.
URL
We apologize that we could not satisfy your request this time.

元の翻訳
Hello World

* The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.

The second album "Hello World" will be released on Feb. 16th!!
It is the long-waited second album by BACK-ON who powerfully continue to release their single "TELL ME" on Jan. 19th, and another single "with you feat.Me" on Feb. 9th.

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Hello World

* The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.

The second album "Hello World" will be released on Feb. 16th!!
It is the long-awaited second album by BACK-ON who powerfully continue to release their single "TELL ME" on Jan. 19th, and another single "with you feat.Me" on Feb. 9th.

元の翻訳
"First-released Luxury Privilege Edition"
■ "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" compatible weapons download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley mobile phone wallpaper standby flash and ringtone download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley sticker enclosed

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"Luxury Limited Edition"
■ "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" compatible weapons download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley mobile phone wallpaper standby flash and ringtone download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley sticker enclosed

元の翻訳
with you feat.Me

New single "with you feat.Me" will be released on Feb. 9th!
And moreover, it will be used as the theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable!

* The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.

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with you feat.Me

New single "with you feat.Me" will be released on Feb. 9th!
Moreover, it will be used as the theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable!

* The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.

元の翻訳
May 1st (Friday) Nihon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishi-Kassai/Best Western Yokohama

May 2nd (Saturday) Nihon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishi-Kassai/Best Western Yokohama

May 23rd (Saturday) Nihon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya
May 24th (Sunday) Nihon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya

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May 1st (Friday) Nippon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishikasai/Best Western Yokohama

May 2nd (Saturday) Nippon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishikasai/Best Western Yokohama

May 23rd (Saturday) Nippon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya
May 24th (Sunday) Nippon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya

元の翻訳
We decided to sell the 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA on April 17th (Friday).
We decided to sell the 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA on April 17th (Friday).

By following the style book "CHIAKI TYPE A to Z" by AAA that has been highly popular, we decided to release the 2nd "made in C".

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The 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA will be on sale on April 17th (Friday)!
The 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA will be on sale on April 17th (Friday)!

By following the style book "CHIAKI TYPE A to Z" by AAA that has been highly popular, we decided to release the 2nd "made in C".

元の翻訳
FM NORTH WAVE"GROOVIN' MODE"

16:00～18:55 on March 12th (Thursday)
KUMI KODA is going to be in FM NORTH WAVE "GROOVIN' MODE" by telephone.

:The details of the program is subject to change. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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FM NORTH WAVE"GROOVIN' MODE"

16:00～18:55 on March 12th (Thursday)
KUMI KODA is going to appear in FM NORTH WAVE "GROOVIN' MODE" by telephone.

:The details of the program is subject to change. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
I'm glad the product arrived safely.
Please find the attached photograph on how to use the camera.
First, press the first battery check button, and check out if the second lump works. if not, it is out of the battery.
Next, pull out the dark slide. it is the safety for preventing the malfunction.
and Lastly, raise the knob on the crank and turn it until it won't move and press the fifth shutter button, adjusting it to the location of the white square.
No other things will be necessary unless the battery is out.

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I'm glad the product arrived safely.
Please find the attached photograph on how to use the camera.
First, press the No.1 battery check button, and check out if the No.2 lump works. if not, it is out of the battery.
Next, pull out the No.3 dark slide. it is the safety for preventing the malfunction.
and Lastly, raise the No.4 knob on the crank and turn it until it won't move and press the No.5 shutter button, adjusting it to the location of the white square.
No other things will be necessary unless the battery is out.

元の翻訳
Thank you for handing in a bid. We are very sorry but the item had already been sold at our physical store. Please let us refund to you to settle this issue. We will continue to make sales of items of the kind, keep updated.

Please be reminded that our items are sold in the store as well, and therefore they may be already sold out.

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Thank you for your winning bid. We are very sorry but the item had already been sold at our physical store. Please let us refund to you to settle this issue. We will continue to make sales of items of the kind, keep updated.

Please be reminded that our items are sold in the store as well, and therefore they may be already sold out.

元の翻訳
I'm engaged in ebay together with my family and am performing transactions wholeheartedly.
If there is anything you are bothered by, please always contact me before filing a report.
I will certainly react to it in a satisfactory manner.
In an effort to make no mistakes, I have requested help from professional translators.
My answers might be late, but please don't worry.

Moreover, our office also takes care of other seller's products.
We store a considerable amount.
We have cameras, camcorders, watches, brand products and others.
There also is a strong network in this business.
If there is anything on your mind, please contact me.

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I'm engaged in ebay together with my family and am performing transactions wholeheartedly.
If there is anything you are bothered by, please always contact me before filing a report.
I will certainly react to it in a satisfactory manner.
In an effort to make no mistakes, I have requested help from professional translators.
My answers might be late, but please don't worry.

Moreover, our office also takes care of other sellers' products.
We store a considerable amount.
We have cameras, camcorders, watches, brand products and others.
There also is a strong network in this business.
If there is anything on your mind, please contact me.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Thank you for your contact.
I tracked delivery and package had delivered to your home on 03 MAR ,about 19:45.

However, because of that a recipient was unknown, package was returned to me.

For more detailed reason, please contact local Post office.

Package did not reached you therefore I would like to repay.
I will repay shortly.
I apologize for inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.

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Hello,

Thank you for your contact.
I tracked the delivery and the package had delivered to your home on 03 MAR ,about 19:45.

However, because the recipient was unknown, the package was returned to me.

For more detailed reason, please contact your local Post office.

Package did not reached you, therefore I would like to refund.
I will refund shortly.
I apologize for inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Hello,
thank you for your inquire.
I checked the delivery status.

The item arrived at the guest house on 3rd March at 19:45 local time.

But since the consignee was unclear it was sent back to me.

For details, please contact your local post office.

Since you didn't receive the item this time I have decided to refund you.
Later we'll send you a refund.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Hello,
thank you for your inquire.
I checked the delivery status.

The item arrived at the guest house on March 3rd at 19:45 local time.

But since the consignee was unclear it was sent back to me.

For details, please contact your local post office.

Since you didn't receive the item this time, I have decided to refund you.
Later we'll send you a refund.

Thank you for your understanding.