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Chiba International Convention Bureau has hold "2014 fiscal year member exchange meeting" at 2nd floor international conference room in Makuhari Messe International Conference Hall.

"Since established Jun 1989, due to a lot of corporation of such as Supporting Members, we have achieved a lot of things both the success of attracting and supporting a large number of international conferences, and the exchange businesses. And we could celebrate its 25th anniversary last year.
Tetsuo Takayanagi representative director reported.

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Chiba International Convention Bureau held "2014 fiscal year member exchange meeting" at 2nd floor international conference room in Makuhari Messe International Conference Hall.

"Since established Jun 1989, due to a lot of corporation of such as Supporting Members, we have achieved a lot of things both the success of attracting and supporting a large number of international conferences, and the exchange businesses. And we could celebrate its 25th anniversary last year.
Tetsuo Takayanagi representative director reported.

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I have been preparing the sale for three months.
As this kind of Internet business is my first experience, I registered at Amazon.com the other day consulting with many people.
Within the reason why my account was suspended, one reason was that you found the relation with a person whose account was deleted in the past. I think it is because the person introduced me the system of listing when I asked him an advice and then I tried it.
I am thinking to list and sell by myself from now on. So please reactivate my account.

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I have been preparing the sale for three months.
As this kind of Internet business is my first experience, I registered at Amazon.com the other day by consulting with many people.
Within the reasons why my account was suspended, one reason was that you found the relation with a person whose account was deleted in the past. I think it is because the person introduced me the system of listing when I asked him an advice and then I tried it.
I am thinking to list and sell by myself from now on. So please reactivate my account.

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Xxxxxx 10 people in charge nationwide
Nominate as the demonstration specialist of our company.
Make the system that can be demonstrated by 130 people of solution specialists (Pre-sales Engineers).
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② [expansion of demonstration machine]
Start from the preparation of the mobile router / Start from required quantity
③ [enhancement of learning environment]
Preparation of training videos and sales manual
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④ [improvement of business meeting process]
Increasing the number of business meetings and shortening of period.
Promoting an approach to the decision maker
Strengthening of top sales
Enhancement of user case studies
Arrange a network engineer in business meetings early

Specific activities to increase the number of business meetings

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10 people in charge of Xxxxxx nationwide
Nominate as the demonstration specialist of our company.
Make the system that can be demonstrated by 130 psolution specialists (Pre-sales Engineers).
-
② [expansion of demonstration machine]
Start from the preparation of the mobile router / Start from required quantity
③ [enhancement of learning environment]
Preparation of training videos and sales manual
-
④ [improvement of business meeting process]
Increasing the number of business meetings and shortening of period.
Promoting an approach to the decision maker
Strengthening of top sales
Enhancement of user case studies
Arrange a network engineer in business meetings early

Specific activities to increase the number of business meetings

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10 responsible persons of xxx across the nation
Select10 specialist for demonstration in main office
Establish a system where 130 solution specialists (presales engineers) across the nation can demonstrate.

2. Expansion of the demonstration machine
Prepare the mobile router: start from a few pieces

3. Full development of the learning environment
Prepare the moving picture of the training and the manual for sales

4. Improvement of the process of the business meeting
Increase the business meetings and reducing the interval between them
Promote approach for those who have a right to determine the introduction
Reinforce the top sales
Develop an example of introducing the users
Include the network engineers in the early stage of the business meetings

Detailed activity for increasing the number of the business meeting

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10 responsible persons of xxx across the nation
Select specialists for demonstration in main office
Establish a system where 130 solution specialists (presales engineers) across the nation can demonstrate.

2. Expansion of the demonstration machine
Prepare the mobile router: start from a few pieces

3. Full development of the learning environment
Prepare the moving picture of the training and the manual for sales

4. Improvement of the process of the business meeting
Increase the business meetings and reducing the period
Promote approach for those who have a right to determine the introduction
Reinforce the top sales
Develop an example of introducing the users
Include the network engineers in the early stage of the business meetings

Detailed activity for increasing the number of the business meeting

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Gap between October and now

1. The demonstration must be conducted in the process of receiving an order.
It was delayed as the sufficient number of the person who can demonstrate was not assigned.
2. There was no sufficient machine for the demonstration since the number of people who can demonstrate was increased.
3. The number of the business meeting was not increased in November and December (Lack of understanding for the sales and its ability).
Hard time in January and February.
4. The process of the business meeting was not simple.
Example: The business meeting where the verification was made under the environment of the customer was extended.

Action to fill the gap

1. Reinforce the system

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Gap between October and now

1. The demonstration must be conducted in the process of receiving an order.
It was delayed as the sufficient number of the people who can demonstrate was not assigned.
2. There was no sufficient machine for the demonstration since the number of people who can demonstrate was increased.
3. The number of the business meeting was not increased in November and December (Lack of understanding for the sales and its ability).
Hard time in January and February.
4. The process of the business meeting was not simple.
Example: The business meeting where the verification was made under the environment of the customer was extended.

Action to fill the gap

1. Reinforce the system

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Thank you for purchasing with us and sorry to keep you waiting.
As mentioned in page, there's no tracking number for the shipping, so we couldn't check it out.
It normally takes around 2-3 weeks to reach, so please do wait for it.
If item still doesnt reach after one week, please contact us.
Thank you.

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Thank you for purchasing with us and sorry to keep you waiting for the product to arrive.
As mentioned in the product page, there's no tracking number for the shipping, so we couldn't check it out.
It normally takes around 2-3 weeks to reach, so please do wait for it.
If your item will not reach you after one more week, please contact us.
Thank you.

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There was a product defect found with A.
The front jib and end jib don't connect.
This is because the connecting piece for the front jib is deformed.
This was discovered after it was sold to the customer.
Many attempts were made unsuccessfully to connect and separate and it made a lot of scratches.
Please send 1 additional unit of A together with this order.
It's a little difficult to grasp from the picture, but I am attaching a photo just in case.


Is the product picture for this rug the size 5' x 8'?
If this rug is the size 7'6" x 9'6" will the pattern also increase?
Furthermore, will it enlarge the size of the pattern itself?

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There was a product defect found with A.
The front jib and end jib don't connect.
This is because the connecting piece for the front jib is deformed.
This was discovered after it was sold to the customer.
Many attempts were made unsuccessfully to connect and separate and it made a lot of scratches.
Please send 1 additional unit of A together with this order for free.
It's a little difficult to grasp from the picture, but I am attaching a photo just in case.


Is the product picture for this rug the size 5' x 8'?
If this rug is the size 7'6" x 9'6" will the pattern also increase?
Furthermore, will it enlarge the size of the pattern itself?

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Dear John,
How are you doing?

I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you.
I was trying to ask you to upload YouTube the promotion video about HLCRIO151. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilise this for the promotion purposes.
We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used.

Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping.
And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.
　

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Dear John,
How are you doing?

I am sorry that the contents of my previous email was not easy to understand for you.
I was trying to ask you to upload the promotion video about HLCRIO151 on YouTube. When such a video is on YouTube, our company can utilize this for the promotion purposes.
We could confirm the image video, but it will be even better if there is a video that explains about the product actually used.

Please inform to me when HLBKIO102 is ready for shipping.
And please ship to us the other products as soon as possible.
　

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I found bug.
A comment that I posted a few minutes ago is shown as "1 month ago".
I would like to request as follows.
1. I want to show the tab of the "list" at the most right.
It is shown next to the "Uploads", isn't it?
2. I want to show the comment by the order it arrives.

If it is difficult for you to fix it, you do not have to fix it.
Please use the above for the reference.
Finally I sent an e-mail that I wanted to list an advertisement before.
However, I solve it by myself.

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I found a bug.
A comment that I posted a few minutes ago is shown as "1 month ago".
I also have some requests as follows.
1. I want to show the tab of "list" at the most right.
It is shown next to the "Uploads" now, isn't it?
2. I want to show the comment by the order it arrives.

If it is difficult for you to fix it, you do not have to fix it.
Please use the above for the reference.
Finally I sent an e-mail that I wanted to list an advertisement before.
However, I solve it by myself.

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I have two questions please.

What is the deadline for us to remit the fund to your company's account?
Please tell us the essential information for this.

I will be staying at Paris on 19th and 20th March.
Is it possible for me to participate in the meeting held by A ?
According to the list i received previously, investors from D series could take part in the meeting scheduled on 20th March.
And also, if there's any meeting which i could possible join on 19th March, please let me know.

Thank you.

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I have two questions please.

What is the deadline for us to remit from our fund to your company's account?
Please tell us the essential information for this.

I will be staying in Paris on the 19th and the 20th of March.
Is it possible for me to participate in the board meeting held by A ?
According to the list i received previously, investors from D series could take part in the meeting scheduled on the 20th of March.
And also, if there are any meetings which i could possibly join on the 19th of March, please let me know.

Thank you.

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Please teach me below 2 points.

・By when I should transfer money from your company's fund to the bank account which A company designate?

・I'm planning to stay in Paris on March 19 and 20.
If possible I will to participate the board meeting of A company, is it possible?
Regarding the list I received the other day, I'm understanding that investor of series D is also possible to participate at the meeting on March 20.
And if there is also meeting which I can participate on March 19, I'm happy if you teach it to me.

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Please teach me 2 points below.

・By when should I transfer the money from your company's fund to the bank account which A company designate?

・I'm planning to stay in Paris on March 19 and 20.
If possible I would like to participate the board meeting of A company, is it possible?
Regarding the list I received the other day, I'm understanding that investor of series D is also possible to participate at the meeting on March 20.
And if there is also meeting which I can participate on March 19, I'm happy if you teach it to me.

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Please inform me of the following 2 things.

・Once their company finds a bank, when shall initiate the wire-transfer to the bank A company specifies?
Also, is it possible to obtain all of the necessary information?

・I plan to go to Paris for a business trip March 19th and 20th.
If possible I was thinking that I would like to attend the board meeting for A company, however, is this possible?
If we go by the list I received the other day, I am under the impression that I would be able to attend the the planned meeting for March 20th regarding the Series D investments.

Further, if you are able to inform me of any meetings I can attend on March 19th it would be a great help.

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Please inform me of the following 2 things.

・Once their company finds a bank, when shall initiate the wire-transfer to the bank A company specifies?
Also, is it possible to obtain all of the necessary information?

・I plan to go to Paris for a business trip on March 19th and 20th.
If possible I was thinking that I would like to attend the board meeting for A company, however, is this possible?
If we go by the list I received the other day, I am under the impression that I would be able to attend the planned meeting for March 20th regarding the Series D investments.

Further, if you are able to inform me of any meetings I can attend on March 19th it would be a great help.

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1) The total weight of the package was 1,000g. Would you issue refund the shipping fee balance?
In addition, I've ordered 10 pcs of A, but I only received 2 pcs. And I didn't also have 30 pcs total. Please send me the shortfall?

2) I'm relieved to have the package safely. I was surprised to the bad condition on outer appearance, but I was relieved the inside content was in a good shape. C item can be obtained elsewhere, but is will be a little expensive. The selling price for you will be $88. If that is acceptable, please let me know. I'll let you know if the price got much cheaper.

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1) The total weight of the package was 1,000g. Would you issue refund the shipping fee balance?
In addition, I've ordered 10 pcs of A, but I only received 2 pcs. And I didn't also have all 30 pcs of B. Please send me the shortfall?

2) I'm relieved to know that the package arrived safely. I was surprised to the bad condition on outer appearance, but I was relieved the inside content was in a good shape. C item can be obtained elsewhere, but will be a little expensive. The selling price for you will be $88. If that is acceptable, please let me know. I'll let you know if the price gets much cheaper.

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1. The weight of the package was 1,000g. Could you please refund the excess shipping fee that I paid? Also, I ordered 10 of the A, but there were only 2. I also ordered 30 of the B, but none were inside. Could you please ship again?

2. I am relieved that the products arrived safely. I was shocked at the state of the box, but the inside was just fine. As for item C, I can get it if you want but it's a little expensive. It would be $88 if I were to sell it to you. If that's okay with you, please let me know. I will inform you if I can get it at a cheaper price.

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1. The weight of the package was 1,000g. Could you please refund the excess shipping fee that I paid? Also, I ordered 10 of the A, but there were only 2. I also ordered 30 of the B, but none were inside. Could you please ship again?

2. I am relieved that the products arrived safely. I was shocked at the state of the box, but the inside was just fine. As for item C, I can get it if you want but it's a little expensive. It would be $88 if I were to sell it to you. If that's okay with you, please let me know. I will inform you if I can get it at a cheaper price.

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“Thank You” Party for Pastor John

6:30pm, March 7th
Fujisawa Rodo Kaikan 1-12-17 Honcho Fujisawa, Kanagawa

[Dress Code]
No morning dress. Participants are welcome to wear a showy dress, jeans, Hawaiian shirt, or rubber flip-flops.

[No Condolence]
It is a celebratory party for departed John. Participants need not to bring any condolence money or flower.

[Donations]
A donation is welcome. We humbly receive the donation of over 10 yen.

[Eligibility]
Everyone who wishes to congratulate John on his departure to Heaven, whether or not he/she is acquainted with him.

[Ceremony]
We will sing Gospel of which we share John with good memories. It is pleasure to sing a hymn together for him.

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“Thank You” Party for Pastor John

6:30pm, March 7th
Fujisawa Rodo Kaikan, 1-12-17 Honcho, Fujisawa, Kanagawa

[Dress Code]
No morning dress. Participants are welcome to wear a showy dress, jeans, Hawaiian shirt, or rubber flip-flops.

[No Condolence]
It is a celebratory party for departed John. Participants need not to bring any condolence money or flower.

[Donations]
A donation is welcome. We humbly receive the donation of over 10 yen.

[Eligibility]
Everyone who wishes to congratulate John on his departure to Heaven, whether or not he/she is acquainted with him.

[Ceremony]
We will sing Gospel of which we share John with good memories. It is pleasure to sing a hymn together for him.

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Hello, my name is Yamada, and I sell jackets for riding motorcycles in Japan. I am interested in the racing suits. If I order custom made ones, would it be possible to order different sizes like the attached file?
Also, is it possible to make suits with punching mesh process, or make it as one piece or two pieces?
Please tell me the price for each of the cases.

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Hello, my name is Yamada of Ragna Online, and I sell jackets for riding motorcycles in Japan. I am interested in the racing suits. If I order custom made ones, would it be possible to order different sizes like the attached file?
Also, is it possible to make suits with punching mesh process, or make it as one piece or two pieces?
Please tell me the price for each of the cases.

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Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

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Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management team.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

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【First run limited】「Initial D THE MOVIE」Trailer
Challenging on huge Jenga (2005/September OA)
AAA roads to the Budokan The latter half (2006/September OA)
AAA roads to the Budokan The first half (2006/September OA)
Romantica from the lips Daimaou, Showa Elect Roman MIX Rimixed by Kosaka Daimaou
Pre-debut teaser spot
【Special Bonus Movie】 AAA　Game Championship -Who will be the No.1?

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【Limited Edition】「Initial D THE MOVIE」Trailer
Challenging on huge Jenga (2005/September OA)
AAA Road to the Budokan The latter half (2006/September OA)
AAA Road to the Budokan The first half (2006/September OA)
Romantica from the lips Daimaou, Showa Elect Roman MIX Rimixed by Kosaka Daimaou
Pre-debut teaser spot
【Special Bonus Movie】 AAA　Game Championship -Who will be the No.1?

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Wake-up call [- second day -]
Member appearance - Toast [AAA Party]
Member appearance - Team announcement [- first day - Autumn big sports day]
Special lottery [AAA Party]
Seeing off [- second day -]
[Bonus picture] AAA Party: Look back on the big sports day!
[CD EXTRA] AAA "BUZZ COMMUNICATION" 2011 Tour member introduction picture.
"MUSIC to join together for the future and to connect with the world!!!" - kindergarten / nursery school chapter -
MITSUHIRO HIDAKA's No Stucking Story - soccer - (bonus picture)

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Wake-up call [- second day -]
Member appearance - Toast [AAA Party]
Member appearance - Team announcement [- first day - Autumn big sports day]
Special lottery [AAA Party]
Seeing off [- second day -]
[Bonus movie] AAA Party: Look back on the big sports day!
[CD EXTRA] AAA "BUZZ COMMUNICATION" 2011 Tour members introduction movie.
"MUSIC to join together for the future and to connect with the world!!!" - kindergarten / nursery school chapter -
MITSUHIRO HIDAKA's No Stucking Story - soccer - (bonus movie)

元の翻訳
[First board-limited] "Initial D, THE MOVIE" theater notice picture.
Challenge huge Jenga (September, 2005 OA)
AAA The way to Budokan (Martial Arts Stadium), second volume (September, 2006 OA)
AAA The way to Budokan, first volume (September, 2006 OA)
Romantika on the lips by KOSAKA DAIMAOU Showa Erect Roman MIX, Remixed by KOSAKA DAIMAOU
Pre-debut teaser spot
[Special Bonus Movie] AAA Decide No. 1 Game Championship!

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[Limited Edition] "Initial D, THE MOVIE" Preview Movie for Theaters
Challenge huge Jenga (September, 2005 OA)
AAA Road to Budokan (Martial Arts Stadium), second volume (September, 2006 OA)
AAA Road to Budokan, first volume (September, 2006 OA)
Romantika on the lips by KOSAKA DAIMAOU Showa Erect Roman MIX, Remixed by KOSAKA DAIMAOU
Pre-debut teaser spot
[Special Bonus Movie] AAA Decide No. 1 Game Championship!